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Penname: EmoryB123 [ Contact]
Real name: Emory
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Member Since: November 26, 2009
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45 year old woman
I live near Charlotte, NC.
Twilight fan fiction is FASCINATING to me!
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Summary: “What have you done Carlisle?” The acid in my voice was palatable. I couldn’t hide my disgust after seeing him hovering over the blonde woman, his teeth scrupulously sunk into her bruised neck. What was he thinking? What really happened when Carlisle made Rosalie, for Edward? Were Rosalie and Edward entirely truthful when telling Bella that they had been nothing more than siblings from the start? This is their story.... 
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 66345
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2010
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Mendacity
Action! Hate! Fights! What a heated chapter! Edward is rarely THIS violent!
Good job. Please update again soon.
Author's Response: LOL - I love it! Reminds me of "Adventure, Danger, Romance..." ,which I guess is sorta true too!
Yes, Edward was violent. But are his actions really that surprising after everything she's done to him (in his mind)? We can't forget that this isn't the Edward of the books - he's more immature, more raw and intense with his emotions, and given no choice regarding his future with Rosalie (or at least, that's how he sees it). I'm not excusing his behavior....but in his mind, his actions are completely justified, and at the moment, the only choice for him.....
Thanks for the review - working on the next chapter now! :)
Summary:
I stepped back to the table, and grasped her prone hand. It was already measurably cooler, defeating the swirling heat of her dying heart. The coolness subsumed the scar on her hand. I cringed inwardly. Ironically, where James had failed, I would succeed, leeching all heat from her bones...
What she'd begged me for, what I'd refused, was nevertheless happening.
Edward's point of view, beginning on page 351 of Breaking Dawn, from Renesmee's birth, currently up to Bella's arrival home from her first hunt.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Word count: 38506
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2008 Updated: August 01, 2009
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Snip
YES!!!! I have wanted to find the birth from Edward's POV for ages! Thanks so much! Great job, so full of our beloved Edward Angst!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Upwards
Deep! And neat to see that Bella's change is reflected on her skin:"Under the lamp, a faint luminescence crept up her arm, passed the crook of her elbow: the shore of her crossing." Good job!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Expected
I missed which mother Carlise is referring to; will you clarify? : "With her mother in recovery, I thought I might look into donor milk."
Good progress! I never thought about the diapers and such! I guess she won't need them long, though, as fast as she grows per Stephenie!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: An Introduction
Classic; PRICELESS!!----> "You're positively Byronic."
KEEP WRITING, PLEASE!!!! even if it has been a while!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: From the Dream
LOVE this!!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Falling to Fly
LOVING Edward's POV!! THANKS so much!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Smallest Problem
Great addition to the saga! one of the moments Bella did not experience! Love these "behind the scenes" moments!
Summary: A Breaking Dawn Missing Moment - At the wedding reception, Bella and Jacob discussed her honeymoon plans. At the same time, Edward dances with Tanya...and the same subject arises. Rated R for Tanya's...experience. This one-shot parallels pages 61-66 in Breaking Dawn. In Edward's voice.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2314
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: December 01, 2008
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: With Great Restraint
WOW! Great work! LOVE the E POV!!!!
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: December 09, 2008
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: TO BELLA, FROM SANTA
Great story! Thanks!
Summary: 
A Breaking Dawn alternative story. Edward and Bella marry and go on a very romantic honeymoon. Complications interrupt and they return to Forks. Decisions must be made and the family has to move quickly. This story is an A/U from BD. There is no pregnancy and no more love triangle. It is about how Edward and Bella were meant to be together and then must stand together against all odds.
Canon Pairings. Lots of romantic lemons. AU because some story lines from Breaking Dawn were completely abandoned in place of ones that I like better! Rated NC-17 for the lemons and for possible future violence and occasional language when the characters get really stressed out and stuff!
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193651
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Wedding
Such a great wedding! Nice switch from rice to birdseed as they left the reception!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Keeps Gettin' Better
Awesome chapter! I never dreamed of Bella being able to be invisible! What a cool idea! Loving this story! I just hope those bad old Volturi don't cause TOO many problems!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Purchases and Preparation
So lovely thus far!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Gifts
Oh wow!! The same inscription! I just LOVE that!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - First Night
Awesome job! THANKS!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Honeymoon BPOV
I am loving the story, but sorry to see the Volturi rearing their UGLY heads! They are just not my favorites!
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reading my story and reviewing each chapter! I've just read your reviews and appreciate them all so much! I'm really happy to hear that you're enjoying Ascension and hope you continue to enjoy it on through to the end! I look forward to hearing from you again!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Flight
Yep, I am anxious for them to get to Paris, too! The less the Volturi, the BETTER, as far as I am concerned!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Paris
How neat for Edward to say a prayer! I loved that!
I am glad that they are still in Paris! Great couple to be in the most romantic city!
If the Volturi are not around for very long, I will be very happy!
I do/will miss Renesmee, though, I must admit. :-(
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Louvre
Loving it! You are doing a great job! Hope you don't have to Volturi popping up too often, though. I DON"T LIKE THEM! Unlike Edward, who I ADORE!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Dessert
Whoa, and wow! Great cliff hanger! Maybe she will get turned right away???!!! good chapter.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Club de Haut de Mille
Great kpb! I didn't know planes like that existed! I hope the Voluri don't show up again ANY time soon!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Transformation
I loved jacob's name for the Cullens as he watched Edward bite Bella. Great job!
Wow!!! Love Edward's POV. I noticed you did not do the stilletos on Bella that Stephenie did. Good call!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Bella's Gift
Good job!! I must admit, though, that I miss Renesmee!
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