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Penname: EmoryB123 [Contact]
Real name: Emory
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Member Since: November 26, 2009
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45 year old woman


I live near Charlotte, NC.


Twilight fan fiction is FASCINATING to me!


 


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Reviews by EmoryB123
 
Summary:

Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So sweet! I don't especially like Josh, but he could be a lot worse!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So sweet! I don't especially like Josh, but he could be a lot worse!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Trains. TOOOOOO sweet!

I usually don't like characters who are not canon, but I love Chris!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start!!! I had wondered if the boy's dad would be jacob, but I see that he is not. i hope you continue to update this story -- looks SO good!!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow! What passion! Bella calling out to him in the night - too much, an AWESOME!!!!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Whoa!!! This is too awesome! I can't wait to see what Edward means by he never really left Bella! GREAT!! Please update!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What a beautiful angst-filled Edward!!! "I just told you I resented your marriage and your happiness. You're supposed to be happy when those you love have found happiness. How can you stand to look at me?" He was livid.

Great story!!! PLEASE CONTINUE TO UPDATE!!! PLEEEEEEEEASE!!!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

LOVE E with Chris! I can't wait to see what happens!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So neat! I am eager to see if you explain HOW Chris is able to read Edward's thoughts!! Great job!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Beautiful!!! I can't wait for things to be "back to normal" between B & E! As much as I miss Renesmee, I really like Chris, too!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So sweet!! I am loving this story!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh!!! This story is SOOOOO precious!! It is the VERY sweetest Fan Fiction I have read!! I will be checking out other pieces that you have done!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

YES!!! Great chapter! I am glad to see everyone together again! Keep up the good work!

 
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Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Tulips are MY favorite flower, too! Does that mean Edward will bring ME some?? Great pictures!

Loved this chapter. I Really, REALLY hope that you are going to continue to update this story! It has SO VERY MUCH potential to be SO VERY WONDERFUL! GREAT so far!!!!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This reminds me of a picture from Breaking Dawn (that did not make it to the film, by the way.) I am not sure when this chapter was written, but you didn't have that picuter, I am thinking!---- "I watched him work quietly for a moment. He was so beautiful and commanding as he stood in my kitchen, making me breakfast and throwing the most adorable smiles in my direction every once in a while. "

I am SO THRILLED that you have updated again!!!! Please keep up the good work. I have waited impatienly for more of this story. it is unique!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The tulips were perfect! They are my favorite flowers, too!

 
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Date: November 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Beautiful! I can't wait for Alice to arrive and be her uncontrolable self! THen the rest of the Cullens will have to come to town!

Great job! Keep up the good work! I hope you will update again soon!

 
Summary:

A question from Renesmee leads Bella to reminisce about other times her daughter has asked difficult questions.  About her unique nature, about children... about Jacob.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2965
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a great idea! You could do many more stories like this. Keep up the good work!

 
Music Lessons by locqua Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 497]
Summary:

Music can be quite the aphrodisiac, even for vampires. When Edward shares his passion for classical music with Bella, they discover a whole new world together just weeks before their nuptials. Set at the beginning of Breaking Dawn.

Winner of "Best use of Music as Inspiration - Complete" at the Twilight Indie Awards!

 

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 78097
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: April 14, 2009


Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Ravel

BOTH movies are great! I can't wait for New Moon on DVD!!!

Your story is so great! I love it, and you are doing a great job!

Author's Response:

Thanks again - and I'm glad you liked both movies.  I did too. :)  Though I need to go see New Moon again!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Schumann Pt 3

Good job! So romantic!

Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Schumann Pt 2

Excellent so far! So neat you could tie your musicianship into a Twilight fan fic!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Offenbach

I loved Esme! Who knew she didn't know how to cook??

LOVED the fluff! Too cute!

Author's Response:

I'm sure she was an excellent cook when she was human, but.....it served its purpose in the story. :)

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Bernstein

I liked this chapter! i must say, though, that I was surprised that Charlie agreed so quickly to letting B take another trip with Edward!! BUt you are the author, and what you say, GOES!

Author's Response:

My reasoning was that it was right before the wedding, and it got the wedding planning out of Charlie's house (and allowed him to fish 24/7 guilt-free!) 

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Debussy Pt. 2

Great chapter! I know that those islands are beautiful. I can't wait to see what B & E do on the boat!

Author's Response:

Never actually been to the islands, but everyone who has has raved about them - hopefully someday I can visit them too. Glad you liked the chapter!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Brahms & Liszt

Love E & B on the boat! What will you do to them next, I wonder/??? I can't wait to see!

Author's Response:

Oh, they'll find plenty of things to keep them busy!  ;)

 




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