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Penname: EmoryB123 [ Contact]
Real name: Emory
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Member Since: November 26, 2009
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45 year old woman
I live near Charlotte, NC.
Twilight fan fiction is FASCINATING to me!
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Summary:  
This is Edward's side of the bedroom reunion scene in eclipse (Chapter 8: Temper, pages 185-195). Many thanks to psymom and MarcyJ for very thorough and extremely helpful betas - they're amazing! As usual, all the regular disclaimers apply: Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight; no money is being made from this work; and absolutely no copyright infringement is intended. The dialog from eclipse here is copied only for clarity. Thanks to Stephenie for creating such wonderful characters! One other note: I am a member of team Switzerland - I do not dislike Jacob, so don't be upset with me. Edward, on the other hand, has his own opinions... In Edward's words...
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Totality
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7339
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2008 Updated: April 18, 2008
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
Great job!!!! You should (if you have not) write the proposal from Edward's POV, too!!
Author's Response: I'm loving all the reviews - thank you! Now go check out my story Seduction - I think that's what're hankering for next.
8-)
blondie
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Bella's Apology
Jacob deserved it and MORE!! You were none too hard on him. TEAM EDWARD forever!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Teasing
Getting better and better! Go Edward!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming
Awesome job!!! Love Edward's POV in this setting! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming
Great chapter! I LOVE E's POV -- always!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Teasing
How Beautiful!! ----> Her touch immediately changed me; it filled me with the completeness I felt only when we were together. The loss I carried when we were apart vanished – I was whole again.
Yummy Edward! Good job!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
SUCH a great story!
Summary: 
This story is a Midnight Sun-type one-shot, that is, Edward's POV of Twilight. It takes place at between TW14 (Mind over Matter) and TW15 (The Cullens) while Bella sleeps – a peek into Edward’s infatuation, and how he reacts to hearing Bella say 'I love you" for the first time.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: White Night
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 13616
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2008 Updated: May 23, 2008
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: As Bella Sleeps
EXCELLENT!!! Loved this. I LOVE E's pov!!!!
Summary: Ten years ago, circumstance interrupted their destiny. Now it's time for everyone to go back to Forks for their 10 year high school reunion to face their past with hesitation, hope and maybe even regret. Can they reclaim what was lost? All human.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 166805
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2010
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: You Could Be Happy
Bella happy to see Edward? Hmmmmm, I wonder... NOT!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Explosions
What is Bella doing?? Edward TELLS HER they can make out and she RUNS???? WHat's up with that?!dear Bella, please get a grip!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Stop and Stare
Cute!!! I am glad everyone is back together! But I am really wondering what you are going to do with everybody.....?
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Last Goodbye
Sadward! He couldn't help having to leave, but still SO sad!! Thanks for not ending the chapter that way! E & B FOREVER!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Whatever Lola Wants
Too good!! Keep up the good work. Merry Christmas!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Un-Break My Heart - Part 2
Great chapter! AWESOME compromise!! Keep on writing!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Waiting for You
Awwww, that was the nicest chapter! I loved when Edward surprised Bella at the gas station with his new car, and their ride together!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Glitter in the Air
A CAT named Felix! That is just too good! And he is owned by Demetri - what a riot!
Good chapter! Loved when Bella fell into the tub!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Better Man
"The Naked Chapter" -- never saw that before!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Real Love
I was thankful that I’d listened to Rosalie earlier in the day when she insisted that we make the bed. ----> My dad ALWAYS insists that is the first thing to do on moving day - make up the bed so you can go to bed even when you are beat that night!
Good chapter! Both B & E are the worse for wear due to James, but they will recover! GO BELLA! It was great that she could still move into the new place even after the James drama!
I am sad that this story is almost over. You have done an excellent job! Please update again soon!
Twilight is my brand of heroin.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: She Sells Sanctuary
Good chapter! The Middle schoolers were great!! I was a little suprised by Emmett and Alice cursing in the presence of the kids, but I guess none of them heard......
Go Rose!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Closer
Good job! I guess you will share the morning after with us? B & E, that is.
Please update again SOON!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Secrets
Good chapter! I am glad that Bella is finally ready to talk! Let's get them in their new place, too!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Your Guardian Angel
Thank you. E's point of view is always appreciated!
Please update again soon and let's see the end of the moving!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Versions of Violence
I hate James! I hope Edward finds Bella QUICKLY!! I hope there will be another update REALLY soon!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: My Hero
I am THRILLED to have B & E back together and in the bed! Great chapter! I am sure neither E nor Emm will be in trouble with the law. I hope James ends up in jail for YEARS! Please update again soon!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Marry Me
I think several epi's are the least we could ask for! PLEASE??
Good chapter! I am so glad Bella was still able to move into the house even though James had been there.
I loved that Bella did the proposing! Great twist!
I am sure that they will have their HEA. I just hope you will share several chapters of it! Epi's are great!
I have ot red this story; i love it!
Title: "The Moment of My Dreams" by dlpash. On FanFiction.net
Story URL: http://www(dot)fanfiction(dot)net/s/5728066/
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