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Hi! I'm BekahR (RuthR on Fanfiction.net) and Twilight has become my newest fixation. I'm making my first foray into college, so I'm hoping fanfiction will be a nice stress reliever. Kudos to SM for providing the world with the perfect escapist-lit series.


I have one Twilight fic, Voices, and several other non-Twi pieces; they all can be found on FF.net under the penname 'RuthR'. Hope you enjoy!


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Stage Fright by RebeccaKay Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

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After Christine's drunken mother's rage causes her exile from everything she's ever known, she is rescued by her best friend, Robert Pattinson. What happens when friendship turns quickly to an unrequited crush? Will a new relationship be able to survive the twists and turns of stardom?

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Categories: Other Characters: Other Character, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 40665
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2008 Updated: July 16, 2009


Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: The Fight, Fixes, & a Serenade

Hi, RebeccaKay -- thanks for leaving me such a sweet review! I started reading this story last night and couldn't stop; I'd never read a "real-life" fanfiction before, but I really enjoyed this one! I can identify with Christine - she's a very likeable character - and your Rob is totally sexy, of course. ; )

You left us on a bit of a cliffhanger, so please update soon!

-BekahR



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad you like my version of Rob! :)

 
Psycho by kfm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary:

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Being a teenage pariah is never easy, but for Edward Cullen it's especially difficult. Then again, anyone would find being a mind-reader at the age of seventeen a little more than challenging.

Once a simple high school burn-out, Edward had given up on love after a painful break up. He attempts to drown his pain in extensive drug use which eventually triggers his ability to hear the thoughts of others. Once Carlisle is made aware of Edward's hidden talent, he sends his son to a psyche ward where he is diagnosed with type 2 Bipolar disorder. During his stay, he befriends Alice Brandon and finds himself oddly drawn to her best friend Bella (who has a damaging secret of her own).

AU-Human/OOC/Canon Couples

Rated NC-17 for underage drinking, drug use, explicit language and sexual content.


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 56548
[Report This] Published: February 05, 2009 Updated: April 10, 2009


Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Some Things are Better Left in the Past

Hi, kfm! I remember reading the beginning of this story a while back, but I just recently found it again at the Review for Review board, and now I can finally get caught up with it.

I love the original premise of this story, and I especially adore your Edward. He's hard-edged, but there's just something really irresistible about him. (Your Alice absolutely cracks me up too.)

Can't wait for more!

 
Summary:

Edward's POV while Bella is in the hospital in Phoenix.  Song fic to Robert Pattinson's Never Think.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1673
[Report This] Published: March 09, 2009 Updated: March 15, 2009


Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi! I found your stories off the Review for Review thread -- I'm looking forward to starting on 'Fate is a Cruel Harpy' too.

Anyway, I usually don't care for song-fics, but this one was especially well-written. I like the way you put in some foreshadowing of the New Moon plot. I also liked the little interaction with Edward and Alice; I guess I'd never considered that he would have been angry at her for letting Bella escape. Nice touch!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  How over protective Edward gets, I figured he would be a raving banshee after Bella ended up in the hospital.  I'm glad you enjoyed this song fic.  I think a lot of people don't understand the concept of what they are suppose to be, using just the song as a starting point, not as the whole story. 

 
Half-Truth by loveisgolden Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Renesmee and Jacob were as happy as could be thirty four years after Nessie was born. Now she's grown up and making decisions that could affect the entire Olympic Coven.

by loveisgolden


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1025
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2009


Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hi! I found your stories off the Review for Review board. I hope you plan on continuing this, because there aren't nearly enough good Nessie/Jake fics out there. I've always wondered how Nessie would cope with the imprint and her own hybrid nature, and I'm looking forward to seeing your interpretation!

Eagerly waiting for more,

BekahR

 
What Lies Ahead by DreaC Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 354]
Summary:

 

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Thanks to Annamorphos for revamping the banner!  You truly are awesome!

The setting is ten years after Breaking Dawn.  Renesmee Cullen has been fully matured for three years.  She begins to get curious as she sees that Bella, Edward, and Jacob are keeping secrets about their past from her.  How will she feel when she finds out their secret? How will the family handle another threat from the Volturi? What will Renesmee do when there is suddenly a fate other than the one that has been decided for her? 

Thanks to Project Team Beta and my two betas, Robbsweetangel and Batgirl8968, for the amazing betaing!

***The rating has been changed for future  lemons***

 

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Benjamin, Billy, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Charlotte, Claire, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Garrett, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Nessie, Peter, Phil, Quil, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Senna, Seth, Stefan, Tanya, Tia, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: The Wolfpack Chronicles, Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 80071
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2009 Updated: January 24, 2011


Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Visions

Argh! The Volturi always mess things up. On the other hand, I can see where this might be an inevitable showdown. At the end of Breaking Dawn, it seems pretty clear that the Volturi are going to be keeping close tabs on the Cullens, just waiting for a chance to cut them down.

Of course you had to end on a cliffie. I hope Nessie doesn't get a hero-complex and try to take the Volturi on herself.

Thanks for another great chapter, DreaC!



Author's Response:

They Volturi are always messing things up.  Nessie is Bella's daughter, but that just means they have to be two steps ahead of Ness...and they will be.  Thanks for all the reviews :)

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Decision

Whoa. *fans herself* Nice and steamy, but still tastefully done. Good thing Edward's still in the dark . . . for now. Somehow I don't think he'd appreciate that scene as much as the readers do. ;)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the reviews :)  I'm glad that you enjoyed it, b/c I was definitely aiming for tastefully done as well!  Definitely if Edward found out, Jake would be dead! Or at least he would have some broken bones lol

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Anger

Well, I'm very curious to see how Nahuel will try to explain himself -- he does seem to put his foot in it quite a lot. Nema was right to be apprehensive.

It was nice to have all the Cullens in the picture again. This little line made me laugh: "Yes, he’s as dramatic as ever," Aunt Alice sighed. I think you've pinned down Edward's personality in one line. ;)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing :) I have to admit I love that line as well, and it could only be delivered by Alice. 

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Safe Haven

Poor Nessie! Talk about disturbing dreams. Nahuel is still obviously an issue, but I look forward to seeing how that problem is resolved. I also loved Jake's utter cluelessness; it's a nice window into his thoughts.

Great chapter!

 

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Confusion

Hey! I found this on the new Review for Review thread; there aren't nearly enough Jake/Nessie stories out there, so I'm looking forward to following this one.

Nice opening chapter -- I like Nessie, she seems like a normal teenager. I always thought that she'd end up as one of the most overprotected kids in the world, and so far your story reflects that! Poor Ness.

Off to read more!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)  I know, I hate writing Nessie being so overprotected, but let's be realistic(in a fictional world lol) she has to be overprotected, the cullens and the wolves wouldn't have it any other way.

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Imprinting

Way to overreact, Edward! Somebody needs a little work on his parenting skills. ; )

While I'm surprised that Ness wasn't a little more freaked out by the imprinting, I liked Jake's explanation. I'm assuming that something/someone is going to come between them soon, so I don't mind the quick pacing on the romance aspect.

Lovely chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks again for reviewing, and you're absolutely right!  There is a reason for the quick romance, but I'm not going to "spill the beans" on what that reason is lol.

Now I'm off to read your story :)

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Secrets

Now that I'm back from vacation, I've finally gotten a chance to catch up on this story. I love the way you're able to put little ominous hints in an otherwise mostly idyllic scene -- I'm guessing there's going to be trouble and lots of it soon.

Edward's become a bit of a task-master, and that's making me wonder what he knows that the other characters don't. Is there another reason he's not trusting Jake? I guess I'll have to wait and find out.

Off to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)  I hope you had a great vacation.  You're right there is going to be trouble and lots of it really soon and you're also right about Edward.  He has the advantage that other's don't, he's inside Jake's head all the time!  No matter how much Jacob thinks he's trying to mask his thoughts, he's still not a pro like Edward lol.

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Close Calls

Me again ; ) Jake's getting pretty good at dodging the issue at hand. I'm surprised Nessie hasn't caught a hint of what happened at her birth before this point; Rose would be happy to stir up trouble between them. Maybe Edward forebade her to talk about it?

Anyway, nice chapter, and I'm looking forward to more updates!



Author's Response:

I love your reviews.  You always have great questions!  To answer your question, no one in the family talks about what happened.  Even when Nessie asks none of them will give her a straight answer (Ex. When she asked Alice in a previous chapter).  But rest assured the truth will come and from an unlikely source.  Thanks again for the review :)

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Torn

It's good to see a new update on this! I suspect that things are going to trainwreck - maybe not too soon, but sometime in the future - and although it was neat to see a chapter from Jake's POV, I ended up wanting to smack him by the end of it. ;) Not tell Nessie the truth? Really not a good idea, Jake.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Actually things are about to trainwreck very soon!  Like next chapter soon lol

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Sneaky

Wow, Nessie's growing a bit of a backbone where Edward and Bella are concerned. Good for her. Edward is still acting like some sort of overlord; the man needs to get a clue before he drives his daughter off for good!

The little tidbit with Emmett at the end was cute.

Great chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Edward is trying, I'm sure he'll soften up a little more since he knows now that Nessi will leave  if he doesn't.

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: house guests

Hi, DreaC! I finally got a chance to get back to your lovely story, and . . . Wow! Talk about some major upsets in the wolf pack! I feel for Nessie; the shattered picture glass was very poignant.

Also, I'm so glad to see Nahuel make an appearance. I've always wanted someone to write him into a story, so thank you for that. ; ) I'll be interested to find out what exactly Nahuel is really up to.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!  I'm glad that you like Nahuel.  I haven't seen him much around in fan fictions and I decided to incorporate him into my story.

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Apologies

Hey, DreaC! Wow, the conflict with Seth just keeps getting juicier, but at least Jake's back . . . for now. I still think Nahuel has something tricky up his sleeve. His appearance at the Cullens' place was just a little too well-timed.

Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Feelings

Hmm, Nahuel, that was probably not the best way to show Ness your undying affection. Now you have the vampires and the werewolves pissed off at you.

This line made me laugh: Edward, Edward, Edward. Are you dating my dad or me? Sometimes it seems like Jake and Edward do argue like an old married couple. You may be on to something here. ;)

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for both of your reviews :)  Yes, I agree Edward and Jacob argue exactly like an old married couple lol.  Yes, Nahuel is definitely not very tactful, or patient lol.  But he has another trick up his sleeve that will be revealed in a couple of chapters.

 
Summary:

Shadows and Meadows, alternate banner

 

Within a moonlit meadow, the ultimate danger lurks.  Shadows in time, Edward and Bella face an unpleasant truth that may change their destinies forever.

An entire world shifts as lives change, over and over, in the unpredictable currents of time.

It all begins in Forks, under a typically cloudy sky, when Bella gets tired of waiting yet another day for Edward to show up for school, and decides to take matters into her own hands.

This is an alternate universe story.  Canon pairings are adhered to.

 

THANKS AND KUDOS TO THE SUPER TALENTED ANNAMORPHOS FOR THE BEAUTIFUL BANNER!!  YOU ROOOCCCKKK!!!!   =D

 


Categories: Twilight, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 11571
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: July 26, 2009


Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Memories

Hi! I found you on the new Review for Review thread.

So far I'm very intrigued with the premise; there aren't nearly enough post-Breaking Dawn stories out there, and I like the little touch of sci-fi. My only question was about Bella crying -- is this an AU story where vampires can cry?

Besides that, very lovely start! I especially liked this bit: Then he added that he was looking forward to reading all the parts where I kept falling down, so he could enjoy how he had to keep picking me up.

I'm off to read the rest!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments! 

Yes, this is an AU story, but even so, it does seem strange that Bella would cry, since she is indeed a vampire by this time.  Well, I think she slipped up, and started thinking like a human.  But you're right.  I think I'll insert a clarifying explanation, or perhaps write something like, "had I still been human, I would have been crying by now".  Good point!

Thanks for your positive observations!  I'm glad you liked Edward's comment about having to pick her up.  Lol.

Now, let me point out that, since Bella is dipping into the past, this is really a "Twilight" story.  Hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters!

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Ditching

Whoa! Definitely creepy. Do 'flashes' = 'running vampires?' Obviously something's up, or Edward wouldn't be out of the picture.

I like that you're able to put little flashes of humor in a more serious story, ie: "Jess just needed some lessons on how to handle men, from someone who was madly in love with a one-hundred-eight-year old male." Your Bella has a nice, dark sense of humor.

Great chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your consistently positive comments!  I'm glad this chapter affected you in a properly "creepy" way.  Lol.  You're on the right track when you write that "flashes=running vampires".  Or then, perhaps not!  (Hee, hee!)

I especially appreciate your comments about the elements of humor in this story!  The fact that you present actual quotes in your reviews, in order to make your point, is also a nice touch.  I like to do that myself, when reviewing other authors.

Thanks again!  Hope you continue to enjoy!

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: The Unthinkable

No! Charlie! How could you? ;)

Obviously there's something freaky going on in Forks. Groups of nomadic vampires? Or have the other Cullens gone wild? Carlisle seemed fairly normal, but you never know.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Yeah...poor Charlie!  I wonder how many Twilighters out there are mad at me.  Maybe that's why i'm not getting that many reviews for this story!  Yet, anyway.  Lol.

Your theories about what's going on are very imaginative, although I know they're tongue-in-cheek.  Still, you might have given me some ideas...Hm...

Thank you so much for the review!  =D

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Conundrum

Wow, this is getting stranger and stranger. Edward killed Charlie? I hope to God that's just Bella's crazy, overactive subconscious . . .

All the Cullens are here, and Edward's still in the picture, but the six vampires that Edward met must have something to do with the disappearing buildings and Charlie's death. Could the Cullens have some sort of evil counterparts? That would explain the pseudo-Edward attack -- maybe just a vampire that looked exactly like Edward? Ah, I'm probably way off; it's fun to speculate anyway. ;)

Lovely chapter!



Author's Response:

Well, if you take a closer look, you'll see that this was actually a nightmare Bella was having.  And yes, this is a very strange story!  Lol.  Actually, this dream could be looked at as foreshadowing.  And that's all I'm saying, at this point!

Thanks for the compliment, and for reading & reviewing!  Reviews do make my day (or night)!  =D

 
Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Journey

I've finally gotten a chance to get back to reading some stories; sorry it's taken me awhile to come back to this. That being said, where is Edward? I can't imagine that he'd just leave Bella behind if she's being pursued by someone/something?

Thanks for another intriguing chapter!



Author's Response:

Don't worry -- I have to do some catching up on reading stories myself.  There are so many good ones out there!  We need to get a T-shirt printed that reads; "SO MANY GOOD TWILIGHTED STORIES -- SO LITTLE TIME!'  Lol  I have to get back to YOUR story, as well!

As for where Edward is, keep reading -- he'll be showing up soon!

Thanks for sticking with the story, as well as reviewing!

 
Summary:

When Edward goes to dinner with his family, he never expected to meet the woman who would change his life forever. The only problem: she's broken. What happened to break her and can Edward put her back together and help her learn to forgive herself?

Rating for strong language and future lemons.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4514
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: July 12, 2009


Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Meet The Cullens

Hi! I found this on the Review for Review board. I love how the Cullens interact with each other, and your Alice is hilarious. "Both of you shut up before I go all Kung-Fu Panda on your asses." That made me laugh out loud.

Great job!

-BekahR



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

Oh, and I totally just read your Prologue (is that how you spell it?) and OHMYGOD! FANTASTIC!

 
Summary:

Emily is growing old and Sam is forever young. She wants children. She wants normalcy. She wants the 'old Sam' and more than anything, she wants to be safe. 

 

Jake and Nessie finally tie the knot. Jake is confronted with species adversity. He is confronted by the needs of the pack. He is confronted by his fears and more than anything else, he is confronted by his new wife. 

 

A pesky group of nomads won't leave the Olympic Peninsula alone. They love picking fights. They love small towns. They love human blood and more than anything, they love revenge. 

 

It's 10 years after Breaking Dawn and everyone's world has been turned upside down. Will stress tear everyone apart or will a solution be found?

 


 

My name is Emily Uley and there is nothing I want more in this world than for my life to come back to me.

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Billy, Claire, Embry, Emily, Jacob, Jared, Leah, Nessie, Other Character, Quil, Renesmee, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 6336
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2009 Updated: June 24, 2010


Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I found this on the Review for Review board, and I'm so glad I did. There are never enough stories about Sam/Emily or even Sam/Leah, and I think that triangle is one of the most interesting subplots in the series. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Great job!

 
Summary:

There are a few things I have never told my son, Edward Cullen. There are a few things he has refused to see. One of them is that I desire Bella Swan, the other is that tonight I will go to her and fufill that desire. What if it wasn't Laurent in the meadow?


C/B, Dark! AU New Moon. One-shot. Slightly Smutty.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2192
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: July 09, 2009


Reviewer: BekahR Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, Sophia! Glad to see you got this up here. Fabulous, as always, and I hope this will mean some Pyg at Twilighted in the future!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks hon! And Pyg is in the cue. :) 

 




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