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Real name: Clare
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Member Since: November 24, 2009
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Mature (43) twilight fan, desperately in love with Edward/Rob xx


I have a story I'm writing under another penname cullenscougar, called Lifts and Thongs. Please read and let me know what you think.


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Finding Forever by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1348]
Summary:

On her way to London, a broken Sarah Anderson meets the one person who can save her from her darkened existence. Their age difference is the least of their worries.  What will they teach each other and do you really have a second chance at forever?

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Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes Word count: 268155
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: February 14, 2011


Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10(shabbyapple)

wow am loving this story so much, sorry I've not reviewed the other chapters but I was so intent on reading more I couldn't wait that long. Will try to review more..... Keep going its fab. Hugs clare aka cullenscougar xx

Author's Response:

Hi there Clare!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  So glad you are enjoying! Cheers!

 
Resolutions by bebe86 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

New Year's Eve.

Four best friends.

Four New Year's resolutions.

What lengths will each of them go to, to make them become reality.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 16422
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2010 Updated: September 13, 2010


Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: March 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Night it Began

yeah def worth continuing.... love it. What did Alice say?? I think she's pregnant. Who knows. But Edward's Tanya girlfriend?? Not sure about that. Can't wait to read more.  



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad that you think that it is worth continuing.  Sometimes what seems like a good idea to you, can be entirely boring to others so I'm happy that some people like it so far.

Most seem to think that Alice is pregnant..next chapter with the answer should be up soon.

ANd so far, no one is happy about the Tanya/Edward pairing.  Just keep in mind that this fic will be canon pairings...eventually.

Thank you for taking the time to review.

 
Nineteen Canvasses by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 990]
Summary:

Bella thinks she finally has it all together after a life altering accident, but when she meets Edward, a once successful artist who has lost his inspiration, everything she thought she knew changes.  Rated NC-17 for a very good reason.

Many thanks to my amazing and talented beta xrxdanixrx for the wonderful banner!!!

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Many thanks to the incredible MizzezPattinson for the amazing new blinkie!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 148145
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: November 23, 2010


Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14(shabbyapple)

noooooooo you can't just leave it there. Bugger. No I'm frustrated. I love this story, there's so much angst here. Poor Bella and Edward both have issues to deal with but I hope they sort things out and finally get together. I've not reviewed before now as I didn't want to stop reading long enough. Sorry, I'll go back and review each chapter. You're very talented. Please post more soon..... Hugs Clare aka cullenscougar

Author's Response:

Hi there Clare!  They both do have a lot of issues to deal with!  Thanks so much for reading and revieiwng I'm glad you are enjoying it!...update has been with Twilighted for a bit now...should be posted shortly.  Cheers, Leslie

 
Summary:

This is the Companion story for Need To Escape, told in Robert's point of view.

This story will make better sense if you read at least the first ten chapters of Need To Escape before starting this one.

The chapters of On the Threshold will parallel NTE. 

What was Rob thinking? Now we'll know.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Completed: No Word count: 416857
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2010 Updated: March 25, 2014


Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Broken

Hi Steph, WOW another hottie. Mmmm wet Rob in the shower, yum. Lucky Jen. He was so nice to her at the start of the chapter, I'm sure he's like that in RL. (I'm getting a sense of dejavu here, have I already reviewed this chapter?) Love hearing Rob's POV for the story. It's great. Keep up the good work. hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

HAHAH! it does feel alittle like deja vu yeah?

oh Rob... i truly hope he is that compassionate in real life. and the shower time... always a plus...

thanks so much my dear !

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Dweller On the Threshold

Ah so Rob's admitted to himself he's in love. Cute. I can't wait to see that in RL. I hope he really does find his own happiness, whether it's with Kristen or someone else. And mmm. Rob in the yoga room, yummy



Author's Response:

yes, he's in love. one can only hope he finds it in RL. sigh. 

heehee... Yoga room... oh prelude to a bad boy Rob... 

glad you liked it my dear! 

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: March 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Help!

wow just loving this story all over again from RPOV. Poor Jen, agreeing to date Leroy to help our Rob. Yuk! Still at least she could close her eyes and think of England, or Rob to be precise! Can't wait to read more. And big hugs for pimping my story. Glad you like it... Hugs Clare x

Author's Response:

LOL! i think the call it double baggers in the UK? that leroy needs a triple baggy... poor Jen in deed!

Love your story dearest! Here's to many more chapters and leaving the housework for another day!

Cheers!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Hunted

hi Steph, congrats, you've done it again..... You've drawn me in and I'm hooked. Been looking forward to reading this so I pounced as soon as I got your alert. Fab beginning, great tension buildup, poor Rob. Can't wait to read more, hope you post soon.....

I'm hoping my story will get validated soon. I've got about 6 chapters written so far. Its called lifts and thongs and I'm using the penname cullenscougar. I'm gonna mention your new story on my blog created to go with my story, NTE is already posted on there.

Good luck with your writing, looking forward to reading more soon, hugs clare X

Author's Response:

Thanks so much Clare!

You must email me when your story posts! i can't wait to read it! 

I'll pimp you out as soon as it's online my dearest!

thanks so much for all your support!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Sail Away

OMG that was so hot. Rob is lush. In whatever he's doing. Lucky jen. Poor Leroy the caveman. Can't help but feel a little sorry for him... Cannot wait for the next chapter when rob finally gets jen alone, Yum x

Author's Response:

mmmm. definitely LUSH! oh Jen... you don't know how lucky you are... 

Poor Leroy... never gets his chance...

next chapter.... arriving at Orcas... hehehe well after an update from NTE that is! 

thanks my dear! 

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: April 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Show Me a Garden

Hi Steph, yet again another hottie. Wow, insatiable Rob?? Yum. I loved them playing together and especially love him singing Snow Patrol's Chasing Cars. Excellent song. I just love how you write your characters. Your Rob is gorgeous (but then we know that real Rob is also gorgeous don't we?) I love how Jen completes him. His soulmate. Excellent. Can't wait for more. hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

that boy is.....voracious...isn't he? so sweet though...

Rob is a wonderful person, on so many levels, I can only hope to scratch at that beauty a bit here. I am glad you like him in the story...

oh and Chasing Cars... it's always been a theme song of sorts for this entire story... my fall back song to listen to when writing... beautiful song.

so glad you liked the music room from his angle... he got to see a very intimate side of her. sigh.

thanks my dear. more soon!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Obsession

Mmmm I like your description of Rob walking towards you.... yum. He really does walk like that doesn't he, unconsciously of course. Yum red carpet Rob, all embarrassed but dead sexy with it. (Sorry, off in fantasy land again!)

Again, another excellent chapter. So the tables have turned,he's obsessed with Elli, love it. Love the kitchen sex. Yum. Lucky Jen.

Just love this story. hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

HAHA! Rob walking period...sexy...LOL! glad you liked it!

he is a little obsessed, isn't he...hehehehe

more soon !

thanks my dear! 

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Wrapped Up In You

OMG balloon elephant with big trunk? PMSL. Rob in a wingback chair, with quirk & smirk? Are u trying to kill me???? Heart attack on a Tuesday morning... Seriously Steph, you've done it again. Yum, Rob sex without the raincoat? Mmmmm nice! Very intense, but then I think he has a right to be. Poor bloke. Nice to hear his thoughts about how he feels for Jen already. Keep up the good work, hugs Clare xx

Author's Response:

yes...Rob in a wingback... hehehe

Poor bloke has so much to think about, rather than enjoy the moment... but it seems like he did.

he's head over heels isn't he? how will he tell her? oh the suspense! LOL!

thanks my dear! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: May 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12-You Mean the World

Yum. As ever Steph that was great. He's so deep and intense. Love him. Can't wait to see Jen's reaction from Rob's POV. Looking forward to more and especially to a long thick one in ch15, hehehe inner perve coming out there.... hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

thanks hun! there really is a little more about the awkward boy, yeah?

hehe. long and think coming soon!

hehehe

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-Love Is

Wow Steph, hot and steamy!! Yum. So intense. How can he doubt how beautiful he is?? Not just in looks but as a person with a beautiful heart. Wonderful.

Wet Rome Rob? Holy sh**!! Hot and sweaty Rob in a torn tshirt with riding crop. OMFG kill me now!! hugs Clare



Author's Response:

Thanks Clare!

glad you liked the lemony goodness. He really is quite modest, at least in here. Who knows in real life, but i have a feeling he is a bit clueless to it in RL as well. 

heehee. Wet Rome Rob would kill me for sure. And Circus Lion Tamer Rob...well that's just cruel of me isn't it? 

Thanks my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Can't Get Enough

OMG Steph, that was awesome. Let me just say that Rob can come in my kitchen any day he likes. I'd eat his muffin!! LOL.

Mmm, Dom Rob spanking Jen, yum. Forceful Rob is definitely something I'd like to see. That was so beautifully done. I love his inner dialogue while he fights his inner animal. So hot.

You've surpassed yourself again. Can't wait for more. I have to say I'm not sure I can cope with the separation again, especially from RPOV. But I'm sure it will be done brilliantly. hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

thanks Clare!

ah Rob and muffins... good times... good.times.... LOL!

Seriously forceful Rob.... need more of that! he really is in a pitched battle with himself isn't he?

so glad you liked it my dear! ah the separation. just remember.... they get through...  but i really can't wait to bring you his side! 

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Breaking the Girl

Oh God. Poor Rob. Poor Jen. Asshole Nick. Not sure I'm gonna be able to cope with Details. I really hated those pics. It wasn't Rob there, he was vacant, off elsewhere, searching in Washington for Jen.



Author's Response:

I am so glad to see so many agree about the Details shoot !I really thought i was in the minority! 

so glad you liked it (is that really the right word when i cause you pain?) 

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Home

yeah yeah yeah, gimme gimme gimme, you know what I want??? Of course you do, you're just a tease!!! LOL

Loved it. So much to take in. Steph being on his side, Mike being a good friend, Nick well, we all know what we think of him.... And the anticipation of being back together was just too much. Poor Rob & Jen, being delayed by snow. But you described everything so well, as usual.

Can't wait for more, please update soon.

hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

Yay! for figuring a way around the silliness! 

hahaha, so.... you want twin bed action? hehehehe

so glad you liked his side. oh the agony of travelling!

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30-She's Got a Way

Hi Steph. Wow the Christmas tree farm. Another fave of mine. So good seeing it from RPOV. Naughty Jen and naughty Rob doing those things in public... Can you imagine the tabloid headlines if they'd got caught? Oh dear!

As you know, I love this and NTE. You have a way of writing that makes it all so real. Looking forward to 'nap' time and also at the club when they go out with Liz & Victoria.

Hope life isn't too stressful for you. hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

a the farm. it was fun to "experience"! it would be quite the story if it hit the news papers! 

thanks so much my dear! I can't wait to get to the rest! 

MWAH!

steph

 
Taking Control by KrisB Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary:

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Tina DeLuca is a problem-solver.  She's decided that Robert Pattinson's problem is he needs a personal assistant.  He agrees, but he's got a slightly different idea of the type of assistance he'd like.  Suzie Dienstag is Tina's little sister, so having her around is bound to keep Tina within reach, right?  The first real question is: can he stand to have Suzie around?  The next one, though, is how did he ever survive without her.

Taking Control is an outtake from Loss of Control.  Reading the first 10 chapters of LOC will certainly help a great deal.  It's not required, but the characters are more fully developed over there.  They just jump right in the deep end together over here.  They're bold and adventurous that way.

Disclaimer:  Fake, fake, fake.  Robert Pattinson is a real person and this is a fictionalized version of him.  Even worse, this is a spinoff of a fictionalized version of him.  Rob's management team is real, and these are fake versions of them (noticing a theme on the fake thing?) Tina and Suzie and Frannie and all their family and friends are figments of my imagination.  It doesn't mean I love them any less.

This story is dedicated to my fabulous and wonderful beta, LightStarDusting.  She's my Suzie and I'm her Tina, and I do love her so!  Originally written as a birthday gift for her, this story is heavy on snark and light on lemons.  She puts up with my NC-17 nonsense because she loves me, but at heart she's a PG-13 girl.  As you can see, we met in the middle on this one!


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Control Series - LOC, TC, and Outtakes
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 33573
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2010 Updated: May 21, 2010


Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Good Morning and Welcome to Your Life

wow, love it... Bossy women rule. Glad to see Suzie sorting Rob out. He really does need someone like her in RL. Love her view of Tina too. Nice to get another perspective on their story. Will be adding to faves.

Author's Response:

Hi, Clare!  Welcome to TC - I'm so glad you came!  I'm in love with this POV because we can see what both of them are thinking.  Bossy Tina is a rock star, in my opinion.  She is so different from me and I love channeling her.  I also love seeing how much Rob has grown from the "cork floating on the ocean" that he is here (in January) to the decisive and determined man he is in August.  Suzie has quite an effect on him, simply by getting things in order so he can decide what matters.  Who said highlighters weren't the greatest invention in history?

I honestly wish he had someone like her in RL.  I don't know how he survives, honestly.  And I'm glad you like the alternative viewpoint on Tina, as well.  Her POV in LOC is great to have, but she really is quite hard on herself and her view of others is slightly skewed as well (don't we all do that?).  So this POV lets us see that people aren't quite as Tina sees them, and to see Rob's early fixation with her and why it develops as it does.  It also (hopefully) shows how he and Suzie reach their odd level of camaraderie and disrespectful respect in LOC.  It's really a great fit.  I can't wait for you to see her first interactions with Nick and Stephanie!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for favoriting.  This won't be super-long, but I thought it would be a fun and fluffy companion for LOC.

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Suzie Needs to Be Committed

Love this view of the story. it's fab. keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Clare!  I'm with you... it's a different perspective.  I adore Suzie in all her Cursed-ness, and Rob is so vulnerable.  It's amazing to see how much he's changed between this story and the Hobson premiere.  Having someone help him get his priorities straight seems to have really focused him, don't you think?

Of course, it's nice to have an emotional bodyguard to go with the physical ones.  Too bad the real Rob doesn't seem to have that in real life (at least in my opinion).  I really wish he did.

I really appreciate you reading and reviewing, Clare!  Thanks again.  Hopefully see you Monday over at LOC!  All KINDS of interesting stuff going on over there, too.  It's like having a time machine!

 
Summary:

 

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Bella Swan has spent a lifetime putting everyone else's needs before her own. Could a chance encounter with a mysterious stranger begin to change all of that?

Warning: Some dark scenes and subject matter at times, will try to post warnings on each necessary chapter.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 172047
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2010 Updated: March 16, 2011


Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sick of Myself

OMFG. I didn't think you could get any better than the last chapter. I was so wrong. Bloody hell, hearing them talk about using a toy was sexy enough. Actually reading about them using it was .... well words fail me. But please keep up the good work. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I haven't even got enough imagination to wonder what they'll get up to next.... hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I didn't know what the reaction would be for this one, but apparently the general consensus is that toys = good! ;-)

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Awake

Wow, intense. I'm assuming Tanya was his girlfriend/wife who committed suicide? Nasty. I can't pretend to understand how or why people do that, but can only assume they think there is no other way. What a waste. Sorry. Rant over. I love this story and hope that Edward and Bella do get together soon. They need each other. hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Yes, I agree with you about suicide. It can be a very selfish act, without thought to how it will affect those around you.

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Let Go

nooo she can't marry Jacob. Is she going to take the key back and see the mysterious stranger again? hope so



Author's Response:

Just you wait!!! You might like the next chapter update very much! ;-)

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Caramel

Holy sh** it was certainly steamy in here when I read that!! Bloody hell. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it!

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Snuff

Wow. that was very intense but very sensitively done. I never understand how people commit suicide. To end your own life you have to be seriously at the end of your tether to harm yourself that badly. Although it's cowardly to leave everyone else behind to cope with it, it's also seriously brave to be able to carry it out. I've been in a situation once where things got really bad but never ever considered that. Poor Edward, being left behind with all that guilt. That's awful.

But I think Bella is his salvation. OMG he's smitten already....



Author's Response:

Yes, he is already VERY smitten, but he doesn't realize it yet. He thinks she's just a sexual distraction.

 
Reviewer: biddyswife Signed
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Just One Fix

W O W. Jacob sounds like a real nice guy!! NOT! I just loved Bella leaving a reminder of what he'd missed for Edward. That was so HOT. OMG. It got suddenly very warm in here when I read both parts!! Phew please write more soon. Can't wait too long. Am like Bella, can't keep away!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked their little self lovin sessions!! ;-)

 




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