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Penname: nitrogirl313 [ Contact]
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Summary: 
Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist. Why did Edward leave Bella? And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?
Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?
THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes
Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed 
Date: December 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Wow! I am new to the site and just came across this fic. I am in awe. I love this story. I have read all of it straight through. I am tired and red eyed but still couldn't stop reading. You're writing is amazing. Can't wait for the next part. Author's Response: Wow! What an amazing compliment!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: January 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
I so love this story, you do a fantastic job. Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: February 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 55: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
This chapter was great. I love Alice/Jasper. Would you maybe do a chapter about them getting together. That would be a great back story. Anyway, love it as usual. Author's Response: Alas, there aren't many chapters left and they are all going forward from here. I wish I could write everything I ever thought of in regard to these characters, but that would probably take the rest of my life!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Summary: Edward is dared to do something stupid by his older cousin, Emmett. Jasper and Emmett stand back and watch.
"Yeah, but do you think we should've told him that she's the police chief's daughter?"
One dare, one purse and two unsuspecting vicitms lead to a series of pranks and events that will change their lives.
 banner created by heatherdawnc
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 87422
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2009 Updated: May 16, 2012
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: October 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Touch
So freakin funny! I laughed out loud and now people are looking at me funny. Love this story though! LOL!
Summary: 
Edward leaves more then just Bella behind during New Moon. Unbeknownst to Edward, he leaves Bella pregnant and in more danger then he could have ever dreamed possible. Now three years later a reunion is possible, will they finally be a family or will a new danger stop that from ever happening.
Story banner by Pixiefanpire
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 42905
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2010 Updated: October 20, 2011
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: August 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I was so excited when I saw another chapter up for this story. You are very talented. I was afraid you weren't going to keep going. Please finish it, this is one of the best and most origional stories I have read lately, keep up the great work.
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: September 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Yay! Can't wait to see what happens next...I can only imagine uncle Emmet and uncle Jasper...heh! Great story so far, one of my favs.
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: November 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Yay! Love this story. I am always checking for the next chapter. Can't wait to see the family's interactions with the kiddos. Hope Bella takes it ok?!? Can't wait for next chapter!?!
Summary: 
High school softball star Bella Swan’s life is immediately halted and turned upside-down when her father dies. In a blink of an eye, Bella is forced to leave the comfort of her hometown of Phoenix and everything else she has known to live with her estranged mother of six years and her new family in the small town of Forks, Washington. Though still in mourning over the death of her father, Bella decides to get back on her feet and find some sense of normality by going back to doing something her and her father had the best memories enjoying together--playing softball. But, Bella soon realizes that along with moving to small towns from big cities, there are consequences: No softball team.
When Bella decides not to take this news lying down, she soon finds herself in a world where she’s never been before.
The boys’ baseball team.
Oh, what green-eyed adventures wait for her there…
Many thanks to my best friend babymonsta for making my banner and who is also my Alpha before I turn in my chapters to the Beta. You are the Hayley Williams to my Paramore, love.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 53196
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2010 Updated: May 11, 2011
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: November 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Tumbles & Near-Rumbles
Hmmmm...good chapter. I am dying to know what Jasper did to Alice. Can't wait to find out how that works out. He obviously cares about her. Great story, keep up the good work.
Summary:
It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon. There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend. Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life. But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle. This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back. There are some laughs along the way. The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content.
Thank you Monamour for the lovely banner:
Twilighted Validation Beta: myimm0rtal
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 115917
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2011
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: November 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Hanging On
I see bad things happening. Can't wait to find out what happens next. This story just keeps getting better.
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: November 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - And It All Comes Tumbling Down
Ugh! Poor Edward. He deserves it, but he is trying. Hopefully it gets better soon. Keep up the great work.
Summary: 
Edward left Bella four years ago; two years ago, he dealt with Victoria and has been moping around ever since. He is a mere shadow of his former self, and the Cullens are at a loss for how to fix him, since he won’t go back to Bella. Bella’s life is a paradox; she both fell apart and flourished after Edward left her. She is estranged from Charlie and Jacob, is lead singer of an all-girl rock band called Hamartia (literary term meaning fatal flaw), and is living in Brooklyn, NY. She is now all about sex, drugs, alcohol, and Rock n’ Roll. Along with her new lifestyle came a new outlook and personality; she has a quick temper and sharp tongue and finally puts herself first. Long gone is the selfless, long-suffering Bella that Edward left behind. What happens when Alice has had enough and brings all the Cullen “Kids” to one of Bella shows? Will the “old Bella” ever come back? Will she and Edward reunite? Can he accept who she is now and what she has done? Does she want to be changed, if everything works out? Will he be willing to do it? Read and find out.
A big thank you goes out to FrozenSoldier who made this awesome banner!!!!!!!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: No
Word count: 326044
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2010 Updated: February 15, 2013
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: November 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Saturday's Performance
Love it so far. I can't wait for them to find out what happened either!!! Bet they won't be as eager then... Author's Response: Nitrogirl313,
Thanks I'm happy u love it, that means so much to me.
You are right and wrong, not the next ch but the one after we heard about her time away from the Cullens.
Here’s the teaser:
“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”
Thanks always for reading and reviewing.
Cheers,
~E
Summary:
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 146076
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2010 Updated: February 03, 2011
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: December 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
Another great chapter! Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely. I'll try and get this into the queue here as soon as possible, but between the holidays and school, BD (our validation beta here) has had her hands full! So, please have a little patience with us for the next couple of weeks! The next chapter will be up on Friday on FFnet if you don't feel like waiting.
Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!
Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.
♥ Shel ♥
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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."
"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."
Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.
The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "
What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.
"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.
Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.
"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."
Summary: 
With many thanks to FrozenSoldier for my beautiful banner. You are amazing.
Bella is about to leave for college and pursue her dream of becoming a teacher, but an unexpected complication leaves her plans in ashes as she struggles to pick up the pieces of her broken life.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 41947
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2010 Updated: September 30, 2010
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: September 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Epilogue
Great story! I loved it. I wonder if Alice and Jasper will ever get around to a family too. Heh! Author's Response: It's funny - when I think of those two, I never see children. I get the impression that their love is incredibly exclusive. I think she makes a great Auntie though!!!
Summary: 
Jasper has been waiting 60 years for Alice's vision of his vampire soul-mate. What happens when she knocks on the Cullen door escorted by the Volturi Guard. Vamp Story /AU
Chapter 7: Bella's Outfit
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 40262
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2010 Updated: January 23, 2011
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: October 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oooooohhh! There is just something about a man with cowboy boots and an accent. YUM! Keep up the good work. Author's Response: IKR?! Sad I can't put him in a uniform... then the fantasy would be complete! LOL! Thank you for reading & reviewing.
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: September 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Love this story so far. Can't wait to see how Bella interacts with the family. Great job! Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: Instead of James, Victoria & Laurent finding Bella & The Cullens in the field, The Bringers do.
Categories: Twilight, Crossover Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 39075
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2010 Updated: December 29, 2010
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: September 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: I Don't Want This For You
Lovin' this story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next. Wonder what Edward is gonna make of Spike??? Can't wait to find out. Author's Response: Edward will never be the same...:)
Summary: Edward never came back. But that's okay, because Bella Swan is doing fine. Her life has been vampire free for four years and, while it was rough at first, she's content with her new life. That is, until a certain vampire casually walks back into her life. Can Bella accept the lessons that life is trying to teach her? Or is her future doomed to be dictated by her past?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 74546
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2010 Updated: January 02, 2011
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: September 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Oh wow, just...wow! I have a feeling that *someone* is going to have some explaining to do... Author's Response: Haha, yes, but do you think he actually will?
Thank you for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:
That’s when she saw him. She knew him. Jasper. His ruby red eyes met hers in a silent staring contest and she knew, without looking, that her own eyes were just as red.
He had done this to her.
Rage suffused her limbs and she lunged.
He caught her easily, probably expecting an attack, and with a speed that defied all logic he had her pinned to the floor beneath him.
“Bella! Bella stop! It’s me! It’s Jasper!” he said forcefully.
“I KNOW WHO YOU ARE!” she screamed, her teeth snapping mere millimetres from his nose, “WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME!?”
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: December 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Aaaaaaahhhhh! More soon please!
Summary: Graduate students Edward and Jasper feel the connection, but is it enough to overcome their differences? EdwardxJasper slash, human/vampire love.
(Thanks to Vampthenewblack for the fabulous banner!)
(Thanks to Beautiful Figment for the wicked awesome banner!)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 100233
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2010 Updated: January 30, 2011
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: December 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: If at first you don't succeed
Soooooo love this story...and the author's notes :)
Summary: 
When Edward & Bella's son, Nathan, goes missing it turns their lives upside down. This is the journey they take to find him, & in the process realize everything isn't what it seems. M for language, themes, & future lemons EPOV E/B Eventually NO CHEATING!
Banners by ange_de_l'aube
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 152943
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2010 Updated: April 12, 2011
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: November 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Love this story so far. Hard to read Esme being such a ...well, anyway I hope she comes to her senses or something. Hard to get my head around the Cullens seing Bella that way. At least some are seing the truth. Keep up the great work. Author's Response: Thank you SO much for reading and review! I love seeing what everyone has to say each update!
Blind Intentions is currently up for a Rare Gem Award for Best Angst! Go check it out and vote! http://thesparkleteerawards.blogspot.com/p/voting.html
Here is the promised letter:
Edward~
First let me start by saying I miss you. Being apart from you is making my
heart break everyday, but I have to stay away, at least until the truth is
out. I know the cops came looking for
me, but I swear to you I didn't do this. I don't know who has set me up, but I
swear it wasn't me. Honestly, if I had to guess, I'd say Bella is behind all
of this. She's so starved for attention she'd kill her own child to get it,
maybe you could refer to someone for that. You shouldn't listen to anything
Garrett has to say, first he confesses and now says it's my fault. It wasn't
me!
I've been away getting more evidence together and once I can prove my
innocence we can be together again. We can start that family you always wanted
to have together.
I love you Edward and I hope you're missing me as much as I'm missing you!
Yours forever, until death do us part, wait for me Edward,
Tanya
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 Signed
Date: November 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Wow! Esme's family is a real piece of work. Whoa! Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Wow! You all are truly amazing! I’ve never had such an immediate response to a chapter before, so thank you for that! Even though my review replies may seem standard I swear I read every single word and answer or clarify anything I can at the time. When I first started writing BI I thought 100 reviews would be cool and I’m now over 1,400 which is absolutely amazing!
I won’t bore you with announcements so I’ll make this quick! Blind Intentions is being votes on in the Rare Gem Awards and Avant Garde Awards. Links to both are in the bottom a/n of the update. Also, there is a link for a contest I’m co-hosting. Voting opens up Wednesday, so please take a peak and vote! Lots of amazing wintery stories to choose from!
A piece near and dear to my heart that I actually love more than BI---I know gasp, is Breaking Faith. Public voting begins Dec 5th for the Cherry Exchange so check it out and vote!
Enough of that, onto what you really want! The teaser for Chapter 15:
“McDonalds?” He looked so angelic and innocent, I just wanted to save the image in my head forever. I nodded and the cutest grin played on his lips.
“Now it may be a little cold,” I warned as I pushed the bed’s tray table over him as he sat up to eat.
“Don’t care...” he took a bite. “Must eat....” and another. “So...so good.” He devoured french fry after french fry while alternating with his cheeseburger.
The doctor in me screamed to tell him to slow down, but the dad told the doctor to shut the hell up.
Bella started picking at her salad while I made work of my own meal.
I’d hoped this would be the first of many family meals to come in the future.
Love to you all!
Kelly (SLM)
PS. You can find me on twitter at @SammieLynnsMom or hop into the BI Twilighted Thread to share your thoughts, opinions, theories...etc. Remember, in the month of December I’ll be selecting 2 people at random, via the thread, to star in a one-shot I’m writing where Esme gets hit by a train! http://www(dot)twilighted(dot)net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=12545
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