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Penname: Truefan [Contact]
Real name: Kelsie
Status: Member
Member Since: January 04, 2009
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I'm a 20 year old college student who works part-time on the weekends. I have A LOT of spare time on my hands. Due to all this spare time I came up with a story that I have punlished here on twilighted.net


The story is called Real Women Have Curves and centers around an overweight and insecure Bella who comes to Forks because of a rocky past. She meets the athletic and too good to be true Edward who also has a little skeleton in his closet.


My muse is my cat, Kiki, my own experiences in life, my family and friends and of course my wonderful readers and reviewers!


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Summary:

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What if in the beginning Edward lied to everyone about being in love with Bella? What if originally it actually was all about Bella's scent? And what would happen then if accidentally, much against his will, Edward kind of sort of fell head over heels in love with this not-so-dull human girl?

This is an AU of the Twilight Saga using an entirely different plot as to how, why, and when Edward and Bella fell in love. It offers a different explanation for what was so special about Bella Swan, why Edward vigilantly enforced those physical boundaries, why there's tension between the Cullens and the wolves, and why Edward behaved the way he did not only with Bella but with his family. Expect romance, mystery, angst, and humor. Dark Edward.

Canon Pairings, No BxExJ, OOC.

This story is rated NC-17 because of occasional naughty language, violence (or implied violence) against humans, vampires, werewolves, animals, insects, minding-their-own-business-pajamas, entities, books, coffee tables, leather recliners, bridges, sword ferns, shrubs, rocks, and worst of all....trees. It is also rated NC-17 due to excessive snarkiness by Edward, references to underage drinking, practical jokes and/or enthusiastic tormenting of secondary characters particularly Mike Newton, Jacob Black, and Charles Swan. It also is rated NC-17 due to sexual content.

 Thanks to Mizra for the banners.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Lauren, Leah, Other Character, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 74 Completed: Yes Word count: 1085631
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: May 31, 2011


Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 8: Heart of Darkness Part Six - Bonkers

All I can say is, Edward is beginning to sound like Gollum from Lord of the Rings. I'm half expecting him to start calling her "my precious". When he starts referring to her as "ours" and says "when we will marry her" it just cracks me up. I can just imagine his little iner dialogue as the scene in The Two Towers, which my dad was watching as I was reading that chapter, where Gollum is having the conversation with himself and rids himself of the bad alter ego. haha.



Author's Response:

Hi there Truefan!

Thanks so much! Edward certainly has gone around the bend in this chapter. He feels so guilty abou the ahem unfortunate incident that he thinks if he improves Bella's life then he can't be all that bad. Right? And you are good to pay attention to the phrases he uses to describe Bella. You will be able to track him falling in love by his use and the change in them. :)

His inner dialogue is a parody of Freud. Starched Shirt Edward is a parody of the superego, and the Predator is a parody of the Id.

Thanks for making me laugh. :)

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Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 8: Heart of Darkness - Part Eight: Something Fetid This Way Blows

This is an amazing story. thank you for writing it.



Author's Response:

Hi there Truefan!

Thanks so much for reading it! And letting me know what you think. It's my first fiction. :)

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The Cutting of Cords by lofi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 404]
Summary:

 

I stepped back to the table, and grasped her prone hand. It was already measurably cooler, defeating the swirling heat of her dying heart. The coolness subsumed the scar on her hand. I cringed inwardly. Ironically, where James had failed, I would succeed, leeching all heat from her bones...

What she'd begged me for, what I'd refused, was nevertheless happening.

Edward's point of view, beginning on page 351 of Breaking Dawn, from Renesmee's birth, currently up to Bella's arrival home from her first hunt.

 

the cutting of cords

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 38506
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2008 Updated: August 01, 2009


Reviewer: Truefan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Snip

Very impressive, I think this is the best Edward POV I have seen yet, the word choice and context would be exactly what I would picture him using. The Old English words with the modern twist made it perfect. I can't wait to finish reading the rest.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Edward fancies himself a bit formal, but he spends all day in others' heads, so I was imagining it would have an effect. What a bizarre thing it woud be, though, to be able to live so long that you see the language change into another...!

 
Sugar and Spice by alaskangirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 534]
Summary:

banner for sugar and spiceWith Bella's love of cooking and Alice's flair for parties their dream comes true of owning their own business. Both Bella and Edward have pasts to deal with. Will love help them and can they help each other?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 65 Completed: Yes Word count: 271821
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: December 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I have been to Nob Hill, there are houses that you describe perfectly. My gay uncles live there...so that chapter made m bust up lauging thinking about my Uncle showing the house. Although he would react more like Bella, he went to culinary school as well. Le Cordon Bleu I believe... Anyway, Good job! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: December 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just found this fic. Awesome job so far. I like the background between Bella and Alice, it's different from others I've read. Onto the next chapter!

 
Rescue me by venomousgal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2836]
Summary:

 

 Bella Swan is accident prone and always in need of rescuing. Sexy neighbour Edward Masen is an EMT and more than willing to handle the job.

 

THANKS TO FALCONCRANELOVE FOR THE WONDERFUL BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 100511
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2009


Reviewer: Truefan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I'll be honest this is my first review. I started reading twilighted.net a while back but lost track of it and I remembered reading this story when it was only updated to like chapter 15. I can honestly say this has to be my favorite fanfic on here. There's always something going on and its the perfect balance of lemons, love and drama. The only thing I'm really jonesing for is a fist fight to break out and Edward and Bella to do some different sex positions. Doggie or girl on top would def pice it up, but if you wanted to make it kinkier, that'd be great too. Oh and I LOOOOOVE the whole James situation coming up and I'm hoping edwards omitted crime isn't too bad but it's not somethign little thats played over dramatic. I read one fanfic that was all about Bella keeping the side effects of morphine a secret from edward and how he was so upset about it and she felt so guilty, the overdramatics piss me off more then anything else in stories. So, thanks for hearing me out and I can't WAIT to read more, keep it coming!

 
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EPOV. Edward is having trouble balancing his urges for Bella's blood and Bella's body before the wedding. What started out as a simple "Practice Fic" has become a retelling of BD from EPOV that lets us see just how much he struggles for control at every turn.

Warning: Edward's got issues. Some dark images and angst, but nothing too bad and quickly giving way to steamy goodness.

Golden Lemon


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 132400
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Purgatory

WOW...that is all I can say...I don't think there's any other story on here like this one...in a good way. It totally shows Edward in another light and I have to say that Edward is SEX ON A STICK! I'm impressed and it's only the 2nd chapter...can't wait to see the rest.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving my little fic a chance! I adore getting reviews from new readers. I hope that you stick with it. It follows the plotline of BD, but adds those scenes that I think we REALLY needed. Let me know what you think!

 
Summary:

Bella is trapped in a loveless marriage with Edward Cullen - a man she hardly knows. When his father dies, Edward uproots them from their life in New York City and moves into his father's now-empty house in the heart of Colorado. Amidst the desolate, beautiful landscape Bella begins to realize that perhaps there is more to her cold, apathetic husband  than she thought.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 41782
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 31, 2010


Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Office

WOW! This is definitely different then anything I have read on twilighted. I LIKE IT!

 
Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Train

OK! I'm an Edward fan. This is different yes and I still do like it, but I'm hoping she'll connect with Edward more and they'll find love in their marriage, or at least amicability.

 
Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The Funeral

i like that theyre speaking to each other now. hopefully all this pent up hostility will turn into some awesome makeup sex between the two of them.

 
Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: The Car

I have to say I like this, definitely. It's the opposite kind of relationship I've seen of Edward and Bella and it's intriguing. I can't wait to see the history there and what exactly happened for them to be in the kind of relationship theyre in now.

 
Summary:

 

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

Thank you Monamour for the lovely banner:Banner by Monamour

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 115917
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2011


Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: July 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Of All The Airports In The World...

I fiured Bella would be pissed! Or bitter! But I like the direction you've gone!



Author's Response:

When it comes to Bella, remember we are seeing her through Edward's perspective AND I think she has had some practice over the last four years at better hiding her emotions.  I'm glad you like the direction it's going. I hope you continue to enjoy.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  BTW, I hear that Chapter 3 should be up VERY soon...

 
Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Edward Meets Julian

Ooooo and the plot thickens! I like Julian, nice name, for some reason Carlisle popped into my head at the description of his looks. I'm loving the jealous Edward, he plays dirty. Can't wait to see what happens next!

 
Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Incapacitate... Don't Decapitate

OMG! THATS AWESOME! They were roleplaying werent thay?!? holy crap! jaw om floor.

 
Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-WTF?

oh poor clueless, prude edward...someone needs to educate him...can i volunteer?

 
Blood Play by kissyfur Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 287]
Summary:

Waking up naked in a strange bed is bad enough. Waking up naked and tied up in a strange bed is worse. Even worse than that? Waking up naked and tied up in the bed of the vampire who wants to eat you.  WARNING: DARK SEXUAL THEMES, VIOLENCE, GORE.

1st Place Readers' Choice winner in the "There Will Be Blood" contest.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 80475
[Report This] Published: July 01, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2012


Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: January 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Please please please, don't sacrifice the amazingness of your ability to write, the beauty and elegance of your diction, the amazing similes and descriptions that you as a writer are able to capture and convey in such a perfect way, for more or faster updates. I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed reading this story. At first I thought it would be too dark for me, but somehow I managed to push through the gore and dark themes and have finally reached the heart of this story. You have captured the essence of every aspect of what being a vampire entails and I can't get enough. Thank you, thank you, thank you for being real about this. For not making it a fricking rainbow gumdrop happy trail of simplicity. I can't get enough of your Bella and her vivacity for life, or your Edward and his mercurial mood swings. I love that he seems to accept who he is but at the same time is allowing Bella to figure out who she is. I am going to contune reading this as you update and not bug you for faster or more updates. I'm truly enjoying this ride. Thank you!

!Truefan

 
Summary:

*NOW COMPLETE*


Bella wanted Mr. Perfect, but he didn’t want her. When Mr. Imperfect comes along, can she look close enough to see just who is more perfect for her?

A story about falling in love with the imperfections.

 

Blinkie by the uber talented RoseArcadia


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 153293
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2010 Updated: May 12, 2011


Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: January 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: He Vied for Me: Part Two

Okay- so I during the last couple chapters I was screaming at Bella to choose Edward, and I'm sooo glad she did. However, the thought that if this story were flipped and the characters changed..my decision might be different only because of my vast love for Edward. Let's say that Edward were Jasper's character and Jacob were Edward's character...I'd be cheering for Edward still, even though he broke her worse and is now trying to win her from the guy she's truly in love with. In the end, I'm simply an Edward fan, but I can see how Bella would have issues making the decision between Edward and Jasper.

 
Reviewer: Truefan Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: He Bailed on Me

Okay first of all...love the story. Just discovered it today, read it all the way through...well almost...I'll be reading the next chapter after I'm done leaving you a review.

Secondly, yes I was sort of stood up on a date. There was a guy in my drama class who I thought was cute. So i put an "I Saw You" ad in the paper to him. Well, he saw it, asked me out and we made plans. The night we are scheduled to meet at a bar, he texts me an hour before and tells me "Sorry, something came up with my ex. Can't make it." So I decided fuck him, I'm going out anyway. So then, half an hour later, he texts me again, this time he sends "Hey change of plans. I'm headed here, want to meet me?" So I stupidly agree because I'm already dressed up anyway and who wastes a killer outfit. So I go to meet him and as I'm pulling into the parking lot he texts me "Cool, I'm meeting a buddy of mine here." So now...he's invited his friend along on what I thought was going to be a date. I sit between them and awkwardly carry on stupid conversations about all their glory days in high school. He then proceeds to gay bash (even tho his mom is a lesbian) and talk about his ex girlfriend all night. Then drinks my beer without asking. Needless to say, I hauled ass out of there. As if that wasn't bad enough though, he then proceeds to ask me if we can compare answers on our test for class. I agree, so he takes my test. I find him half an hour later, sitting outside of our class, trading my mulitple choice answers for some other guys discussion questions. When I approach him and ask him if that was the only reason he asked me out on that awful date, was to chear off me he says, "Well, it wasn't really a date and I thought you were my friend?" To which I responded, "You have to be a friend to have a friend, and you are being a mooch and a user. Two qualities I don't like in friendships." He knew better than to talk to me ever again and I'm pretty sure he failed all of his classes.

As for this Edward, I'm sure there's a reason he's not there. Although I do think the waitress has something to do with it, I don't think it's like "OMG, he's totally fucking around without telling Bella!" type of shit. I'm excited to read the next chapter and am anticipating Tuesday's update.

~Tru





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