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Summary:

Honeymoon Suite

NOW COMPLETE!  We all wailed a collective 'ugh!' on the fade to black scenes during Edward and Bella's honeymoon, not to mention the frustratingly limited Jacob POV.  This canon story fills in all the holes that were left by SM -- mostly from Edward's detailed POV.

Enjoy a captivating look at the romance, emotions, music and imagery of Bella & Edward's honeymoon, the struggles of the pregnancy, the bliss over Edward hearing the unborn child's mind, the harrowing birth, and finally Edward's joy as he bonds with Nessie during Bella's transformation. 

 Banner by the talented m81170 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 96645
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: December 30, 2011


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Forever

lovely



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

 
A Life Lived by labrattus Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 186]
Summary:

AU - As Bella waits for Jacob to make her cliff dive, Victoria takes advantage of this opportunity.  The story deviates from New Moon at this point.


Categories: AU, New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 46123
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 08, 2012


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: January 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Exit strategy

Just found this one.  Very nice.  Hoping that Bella can somehow get a miracle and get a happy ever after with Jake.  I'm not usually a big fan of her and Jake, but I like it here.  Edward is a bit (or more than a bit) creepy.



Author's Response:

Thanks for finding me!  Creepy...hmm, I didn't really mean to make him creepy.  I just wondered if this is the way he would have responded.  As I have said many times, I try to keep my characters IN character as much as I can manage without being SM.  So far I've managed to walk the line between B/J and B/E fans, hoping to keep it up (for a while at least)

 

 
Summary:

Bella never jumped, Edward never returned - but Victoria did. Not even the intervention of the wolf-pack can stop her from attacking Bella. Now entering her first year of college, Bella has some major decisions to make about her life.

 

The Ugly Ducking


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Edward, Jane
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 43094
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2009 Updated: October 29, 2013


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: October 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Visitors

I hope that leaving really will be as easy as Bella thinks it will.  Alice is probably right that Aro wants Bella (especially since we know that Jane would have gone right to him), and he surely won't let Bella go willingly.

 
Summary:

BITLBanner.jpgThe sequel to A Light in the Darkness. Basking follows Carlisle and Bella as they begin their lives as husband and wife. What awaits them in their new life?

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: No Word count: 189280
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2010 Updated: January 05, 2011


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Oh My God

I knew it.

 
Summary:

What if Twilight were twisted around a bit? What if Edward already had Bella? What if Carlisle was the odd-man-out?

Esme Allen is an Architecture Instructor at Forks High School. When Emmett Cullen and Rosalie Hale chronically ignore the school's PDA policy, she decides that it's time for a parent-teacher conference.

Carlisle Cullen is the father, for all intents and purposes, of six perpetual teenagers: Edward and Bella, Emmett and Rosalie, Alice and Jasper. His children have found love, but Carlisle in 350+ years is still without a mate. He has no idea what Emmett and Rosalie could possibly have done to merit a meeting with their teacher. Little does he know, fate works in weird ways.

Added side note: I will not end this story until I've created a happily ever after for them all!

Rated R for violence.

Added 10-29-15: After a horribly long hiatus, I am back to writing this story.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Carlisle, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 65203
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2010 Updated: July 30, 2012


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Take Me Out to the Ball Game

Just found this story.  I'm liking it.  Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you! I look forward to more reviews from you!

 
Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: January 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Accidental Alpha

Like the little canon hints.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I try to find a few of those to toss here and there!

 
Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: June 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Decisions, Decisions

Well, at least this time all the vampires are on the same page, so hopefully they can come up with a good plan.



Author's Response:

Yep. I imagined Alice's vision and Huilen's story figuratively lighting a fire under their butts because the one in danger is their mother for all intents and purposes.

 
Summary:

When Bella has a tragic accident, it turns her entire world upsidedown and forces Edward to come to terms with her change sooner than he'd hoped.  As Bella says goodbye to friends and family, the Cullens are faced with coming up with a plan to get Bella out of the hospital without drawing unwanted suspicion on their family. Not to mention they have to talk the Quileutes into allowing an exception to the decades old treaty. On top of everything else, Victoria threatens to turn the hospital in Seattle into a killing ground. Can the vampires and the wolves come to an agreement before the Volturi descend on the Olympic pennisula?


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 60739
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2010 Updated: October 21, 2010


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Interlude: Charlie's Determination

Don't think I've reviewed yet, but I've been enjoying the story.  I'd say to write in whatever POV best helps you to tell the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you. For both the review and the trust. :)

 
Immortal by cakes4547 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary:

What do all of our favorite characters have in common?  They were once human. They were normal people with lives of their own that were somehow interrupted by a change.  A change that would make them immortal.  This is a story that looks at what the circumstances were surrounding each ‘changed’ character from The Twilight Saga.  Life has presented them with a different way to live, whether it is after waking up, phasing, or being born.  Some chose the way of life, but most did not.  They are changed forever. 

 

Includes appearances by: Carlisle. Jasper. Edward. Esme. Rosalie. Emmett. Alice.  Sam. Jared. Paul. Embry. Jacob. Quil. Leah. Seth. Colin. Brady. Renesmee. Bella.

My awesome, wonderful, kickass banner was unfortunately NOT done by me.  It was made by the lovely ReachingAsIFall, and you can find her blog here: http://reachingasifall.blogspot.com/


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Collin, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Paul, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 117631
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: September 12, 2010


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Embry - January 2006

Great chapter!  Love seeing all the behind the scenes bits.

 
Repercussions by SNikkiP Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 342]
Summary:

On their honeymoon, Edward refuses to have sex with Bella. So she leaves him and runs into the waiting arms of her sun. They have what they think at the time is just a one-night-stand.  But something happens, which forces Bella to reevaluate the choice she has made for her forever.

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 46228
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2010 Updated: January 22, 2011


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: November 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - You're a dumb ass. And a jerk.

Nice.  Good luck on your novel.

Can't wait to see what Alice said in her letter.  Will happily enjoy as many future chapters to this story as you care to write.

 
Summary:

After the Cullens leave Bella behind she must find a way to survive her pregnancy. Betrayed by the Denali, where is she left to go and what will she become?

Is it a price Bella is willing to pay?

Every choice bears consequences, positive or negative, and results of the consequences will change the course of their lives drastically. What will their consequences be?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Effects and Consequences
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 96247
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2010 Updated: July 09, 2012


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: June 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Say Goodbye

Still reading.

I've had lots of changes too (nothing like yours, though), and I've left readers of some of my fics hanging for a few months now.  Glad things are looking up for both of us.



Author's Response:

Yah, I understand how that can go ;) I feel bad that I just haven't had time for updating but real life has been kicking my butt. I'm hoping to finally get this one finished and then get posting on Cause and Effect... Edward's side of this one (which personally, I think turned out better than this one!) Thanks for hanging in there!

 
Serenity by Twivamp Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 147]
Summary:

There have been many stories about Alice and Jasper's journey to the Cullens from 1948 to 1950, but not one quite like this one. This is Jasper's dark journey about learning to trust and love and that war is not how vampires have to live life. Told in both Alice and Jasper's POV's. Kept as cannon as possible.

Banner made by FrozenSoldier

Paula's Banner for her series

Banner made by the AMAZING FrozenSoldier.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Charlotte, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Other Character, Peter, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 32735
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2010 Updated: September 24, 2010


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Back to the Past

Yippee.  Found at last.



Author's Response:

Yep. I hope I don't ruin the meeting, though!

 

~Twivamp :)

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Forks and Bella behind after the incident with Tyler's van. Now, five years later, he finally returns to his family and the Pacific Northwest. While picking up his latest Swedish automobile, he is confronted by a very familiar scent. Will Edward be able to fight the pull his singer has on him a second time? Or will he stick around long enough to find out What Drives Her?

AU after Chapter 4 of Twilight, Original Characterizations, Canon couples.  

Banner by Jen!

BAnner

Banner by TAmmyAZ!

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Embry
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 260728
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: October 09, 2018


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: December 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: In The Sun

Please, Edward, be older and wiser and don't overreact.



Author's Response:

I'll be sure to pass him the message!  Thank you for the review, Ginnie :)

 
Amends by edwards_girl_4_ever Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 268]
Summary:

A look at the time SM skipped over in between New Moon and Eclipse.  How did Bella get back to her pre-zombie normal?

 

Bella tells Edward how much he hurt her; the only problem is she tells him this in her sleep. What will Edward do to regain her trust and make this right? How did they overcome the hurt and pain he caused? What effect does this have on the Cullen family?  This is a strong Bella, who does eventually get angry with Edward and put him in his place. 

 

A big thank you goes out to FrozenSoldier who made this awesome banner!!!!!!!

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 34210
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2010 Updated: December 10, 2010


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: November 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Sunday: Take One

love it that Bella's telling him to put up or shut up.



Author's Response:

Hey twifantasyfan,

So happy u loved it!

Here is the teaser, it’s Bella’s POV:

 

“Morning, Edward. Why are you over there? Did Charlie leave? I’m going to take a human moment, okay?” I asked, in one breath.

 

He didn’t answer me.

 

This was never good a good sign. The last time he shut me out, he left me, I shuddered at the thought.

 

Well, I am not playing silent Bella this time; that didn’t do me any favors. This time I was demanding answers. According to the vote and his ‘compromise’, I was going to be changed and I need to start setting a precedent now if things would ever be equal in this relationship.

 

 

Thank you for reviewing. Also, I apologize for the long wait this was in the queue two weeks ago but I mislabeled the ch and my beta could not find it. We got it all resolved today.

 

Cheers,

~E

 
Summary:

Edward never came back. But that's okay, because Bella Swan is doing fine. Her life has been vampire free for four years and, while it was rough at first, she's content with her new life. That is, until a certain vampire casually walks back into her life. Can Bella accept the lessons that life is trying to teach her? Or is her future doomed to be dictated by her past?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 74546
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2010 Updated: January 03, 2011


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: October 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great.  More please.

 
Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: December 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That was a little mean, cutting off there.  Please don't make us wait long.

 
Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: December 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good chapter.  But, what happened to chapter 16?  It doesn't show in the drop down menu, and the screen was blank when i went forward from chapter 15.

 
Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: December 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

nice.

 
Dark Moon by Ren68 Rated: G starstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

darkmoon5.jpg picture by Ren681

Bella told you the story of our life together, which according to her human memories was correct, she told the story, as she believed it to be. The problem with human memories is that they fade and become blurry over time. Vampire memories are stronger and more reliable. Not to say that Bella didn't tell the story as she remembered it, but I remember it a bit different than she did.

There was quite a bit she had no knowledge of. A lot of things that happened with my family that she couldn't know about and I never revealed to her. This is the story she wouldn't have known to tell. My hope is that it will clear up a few misconceptions...

 

Edward Cullen


Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 116035
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2010 Updated: April 10, 2011


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: March 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18-The Truth

Looking forward to Edward's reality check next chapter.

 
Summary:

"Hello, Bella," he said politely, but not warmly. I wasn't surprised, as Jasper and I had never been particularly close.

"Hi Ja. . . Jasper," I managed to stammer out. "What are you doing here? I thought the whole family left?" I was starting to feel more relaxed, but I knew it was just Jasper manipulating my emotions.

"We did leave," he confirmed, "but I couldn't stay with the others. I needed some...space."

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After Edward leaves Bella in New Moon, she puts up a brave front instead of crashing, and for closure she goes to the Cullen house only to find Jasper, who no longer can take Alice, and is deeply depressed, but together the broken souls heal and fall in love.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2615
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2010 Updated: October 21, 2010


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: October 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Gone

nice.  more soon please.

 
Summary:

Semi-sequel/companion piece to Serenity. YOU DON'T HAVE TO READ THAT TO UNDERSTAND THIS! Basically Jasper's point of view of Twilight. Go behind the scenes through this empath's eyes and sympathize with Jasper at how hard it is to be a vampire.

Banner made by the fantastic FrozenSoldier


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Afton, Alec, Alice, Alistair, Amun, Angela, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Ben, Benjamin, Billy, Brady, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charles, Charlie, Charlotte, Chelsea, Claire, Collin, Corin, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Gianna, Harry, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, James, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Kachiri, Kate, Kebi, Kim, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Liam, Maggie, Makenna, Marcus, Mary, Mike, Nessie, Other Character, Paul, Peter, Phil, Quil, Randall, Renata, Renee, Renesmee, Riley, Rosalie, Sam, Santiago, Sasha, Senna, Seth, Siobhan, Stefan, Sulpicia, Tanya, Tia, Tyler, Vera, Victoria, Visilii, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 29617
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2010 Updated: February 06, 2011


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: October 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Thirst

nice



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

 

~Twivamp :)

 
Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: January 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Arizona

Good.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!!

 

~Twivamp :)

 
Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: November 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Exposure

nice



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!

 

~Twivamp :)

 
The Alpha's Imprint by dorme99 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]
Summary:

From the first moment Bella and Jacob came in contact with each other there was never a choice. They were destined to be together forever. But is Bella really strong enough to fight in a battle between vampire and werewolf?

 

Banner Made by Soapy Mayhem

 

Banner Made By Soapy Mayhem


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 142468
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2010 Updated: May 26, 2011


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: April 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 You Should Have Stayed Dead Part One

Very glad Jacob didn't put up with Bella not answering.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think Bella is glad he pushed her to answer also.

 
Leaves of Grass by nautical Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 579]
Summary: Feature

 

When Bella and Edward return home from Volterra in New Moon, she isn't sure if she can still love him after everything that has happened.  Their problems extend far beyond the vampire/human power imbalance, as she realizes that Edward will never allow them to be equal partners in the relationship.

The next morning, Bella awakens in a time and place she would have never imagined: Houston, 1862. Far from home, her family, and everything she has ever known, Bella must decide how far she is willing to go to follow her heart. (B/J)

(Thank you to Ms_Ambrosia, Starnosy, and So_Unseelie for the fabulous banners.)

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 89659
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011


Reviewer: twifantasyfan Signed
Date: January 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting first couple chapters.  Will be interested to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. The next chapter will be up in a few days.

 




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