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Penname: belled_70 [Contact]
Real name: Nicole
Status: Member
Member Since: November 16, 2009
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Beta-reader: No

40 something mother of 3 living in Sydney Australia. My girlfriends convinced me to read Twilight (just as New Moon was being released) and let's just say that I haven't looked back since.


Love finding likeminded Twihards, and of course love reading other people's BxE fics.


Team Edward all the way (however I do find Carlisle very easy on the eyes....lol)


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Summary:

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What happens when the honeymoon is over? Marriage isn't hearts and roses all the time, nor is it always vanilla and boring. A story in however many acts, utilizing daily WitFit prompts.

Situational humor and fun lemons. BxE AH Rated M

Thanks to TKegl for the amazing banner!

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 11075
[Report This] Published: July 11, 2011 Updated: November 18, 2013


Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: August 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Mixed Signals

Too funny, sounds like something that would happen to me - Ha ha :0)



Author's Response:

lol--it's totally something that would happen to me too. ;)  thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: July 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Dishes From Hell

I can so relate to Edward and Bella (not so much the dirty dishes, because we have the one cooks and the other cleans rule), but all the other stuff I have read and am actaully getting a laugh out of it. Can't wait for the next update :0)

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: July 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Pantsed!

Hmmmm, that's why I make my husband pack his own bag, then I can't be blamed for not packing things ....lol. I love the way you are writing this story, I think we can all relate to little bits and pieces of it and it makes me laugh. looking forward to the next update :0)

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: July 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Bossy Breeches

Too funny !!!!! :0)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

After a business arrangement leads to marriage, Bella is shocked to find her husband wishes for her to give him an heir. Will Bella consent in hopes that he will return the love she has for him or will she leave before her heart is beyond repair?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 65991
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2011 Updated: September 21, 2012


Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I completely understand why Bella is feeling insecure in her relationship with Edward - things have only just started to move forward. Edward is struggling within himself as he has confessed before that he hasn't been in a relationship and is unsure of how to act - I am guessing that he hasn't had to ring Bella before when he has gone away on business and because it ran late he would of thought that it would be worse to disturb her than to ring her adn wake her - Bella just needs to realise that their was no malice behind it. Anyway looking forward to the next chapter :0)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!  I agree - it's all so new to both of them, they are sure to have more issues like this before they can get it right :-)

 
Summary:

Happiness, Love, Joy. What more do you need in life? 

This was my entry in The Lemonade Stand's Lyrics & Lemons contest.  

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2008
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2011 Updated: August 21, 2011


Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: August 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 One-shot

Cute story and after reading it, I then you tubed the song and the story is very fitting to the song :0)

 
Summary:

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Incredible Banner by readergoof...she even found a white bikini!!  Thank you!!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

 

 

 

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 57554
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2011 Updated: October 20, 2011


Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: October 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Loved it !!!! :0)

 
Summary:

Bella and Mike wed four years ago and their marriage hasn't exactly been the picture of bliss. A carefully guarded secret surfaces, destroying an already fragile Bella. Everything she knew was a lie, everything she wanted for her life, wiped out with the click of a mouse. An E x B story.

Warning:
There is mention of past sexual assault, crappy childhoods, an even crappier marriage, and some very prevalent social issues (that I’m not going to mention here, because it would defeat the purpose of reading the story).

 

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Excerpt: I looked at the clock again, 5:44.  Jesus Christ, did time stand still? Those fourteen minutes felt like fourteen hours.  As the moments ticked by, my palms began to sweat and a nervous pressure mounted in my chest. It's not the end of the world Bella; just the end of your marriage...and everything you knew. God, how was I going to do this? People up and left their spouses on a daily basis and never looked back. Of course, how many of them were under these same circumstances, I wondered.  How many women were faced with leaving the man they loved because he'd woven a lie so hurtful? When it finally surfaced, did it kill them?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 171435
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2011 Updated: November 27, 2012


Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: May 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: A Small Town Hate

I understand why this had to happen in your story and it's good to see you weren't afraid to go there. People in general can be awful when a friend of theirs comes out of the cupboard (yes it happened to a friend of mine when he came out and I am in Aus. where you think this thing might be acceptable but it all depends on where you live). However, I am looking forward to their little bit of sunshine that you are promising :0)



Author's Response:

Yeah, this Aveenue is a little darker, but I'm all about forward movement, so no worries my dear Belled, HEA is a comin'. 

~Gropes and Kisses~

MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: June 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Painted House

Loved this chapter it was all warm and fuzzy....lol



Author's Response:

I like warm and fuzzy too! There's more fuzzy, and more warm on its way.Thanks oodles for reading.

~Jen

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: February 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Outtake: Naked Lunch

Great insight into the boys minds. My fav cartoon as a child would have to have been  a toss up between He-Man and Scooby Doo...lol, Nic :0)



Author's Response:

Scooby doo most certainly rocked my socks too. Shh, don't tell, but I totally have a leather Scooby -doo back pack. Thanks for the review hun! 

~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: August 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Bricks and Mortar

Loved it  - the centre sounds amazing - and the lemon was pretty hot too!!!! :0)



Author's Response:

Edward is amazing, so it stands to reason that the centre would be too. And they have amazing support. Glad you liked the lemon... my beta gets all jazzed when I write lemons. Thanks for reading. 

~Jen

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: November 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Shut up and Drive

Ha Ha too funny. Loved the meeting between ExB and obviously can't wait for more, Nicole :0)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter, Nicole. Thanks for reading.

~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: October 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Dear Aunt Emmy

Hi, I just started to read your little Fic and must say I am enjoying what I've read so far - can't wait to read more. Thanks Nicole :0)

BTW, I live in Sydney Australia



Author's Response:

Hello belled from Sydney, always glad to have a new reader. Hope you stick with us. ~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: April 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Swing Life Away

Yay, Bella's finally in her new house. Damn Emm and his powers of perception - fingerblocking ExB - poor thing must be so frustrated by now. Looking forward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Emmy sucks! Okay... I take that back, I love Emmy-Lou Who, so I'll forgive him. I know, I know a little UST is good though. Don't you fear, the bases WILL be rounded... home runs are in the future. PROMISE.

 

Thanks for reading, MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: November 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37:Epilogue

Loved the story Jen, and I am glad that it has helped you heal from what was a life changing experience. I am also positive that you will find your Mr Right when you aren't even looking for him......



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoued the story and stuck around to see it to its end. I can't wait to share more stories with you guys, cause fic love is addicting!

Sloppy kisses,

~Jen

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: January 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Past Nevers, Future Firsts

Hi Jen, It always makes me angry (on behalf of the writers) when you feel the need to defend your story - the whole point of these sites are for the writers to tell a story the way you have imagined it, and for someone to come along and start to criticise, it is so not fair. I also agree that a lot of the times the reviews help you to become a better writer, but I am sorry that you felt you needed to defend the way things have developed in your story.

On a much brighter note I happen to love your story and almost feel giddy every time I see an update from you. The chapter was fantastic I can't wait for Bella to experience her firsts with Edward, Nicole :0)

PS I'll play along - Eternally Yours by Neon Trees?????



Author's Response:

Miss Nicole,

I've only had the displeasure of having to deal one person who didn't like the choices my characters were making. And normally one person would never have been enough for me to say anything, but I felt like that person (and hopefully she's read that little ditty) needed be reminded of exactly why, as you said, sites like this exsist. I do believe that the feedback you guys give me, good or bad, makes me better at what I do, but theres a difference between feed back and crude behaviour. Way I figure, if you don't like the flavour, move on the another dish. That being said 99% of you are loving this and that makes me tons of happy!!

The first that are on the way were a lot of fun to write, so I hope you'll enjoy them. As for the game, you get have points. You've got the band but not the song. So check your inbox, I've sent half the teaser :)

~Jen

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: August 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Confessions...

Hi MJ, loved the chapter - I am thinking the RL experience was in relation to Rose and the one piece lacey thing..... :0)



Author's Response:

You'd be correct, it was indeed the one piece devil's trap. LOL. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Here's your teaser, butplease keep in mind that it has yet to be beta'ed and it subject to my fucking with it, possibly numerous times before posting it. 

~MissJanuary

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BPOV

The smell of French toast and sausages wafted into the room and my mouth watered. “I smell yummy stuff,” I murmured, untangling my body from the mess of sheets.

“You smell yummy.” Edward nuzzled his face to the crook of my neck.

“I smell like sex.”

“Like I said, yummy.”

I pushed myself up. I gathered my clothes, got dressed, and kissed Edward on the forehead before heading to the bathroom. I had planned on heading down to the kitchen to steak my claim on the meaty goodness that was cooking before the boys had the chance to devour it, but I didn’t make it past the bathroom’s threshold.

I giggled when Edward closed the bathroom door behind me and pinned me to it. “Isabella Marie Cullen…fuck that sounds so good, kitten. So good.” His voice was low and his head was buried between my boobs, but there was little about the act that was sexual. He was listening to my heart. Ear pressed to the gentle valley between my not so mountainous breasts.

I pulled my fingers through his hair and sighed. I could practically feel the happy coming off him in waves. My soft smile grew. When Edward had proposed last night, initially I’d froze. My blood had run cold, and I wanted so very much to run from the room. Then I took a deep breath and listened to the sound of his heart beating. Feeling it beating under my palm, the ice began to melt, and my own heart worked faster. The thought that he really wanted me, wanted me forever made me warm and all girly-fuzzy kind of happy.  But I’d been there and done that, and I knew it wasn’t about the production, it was about forever. It was about finding that one person to love for the rest of your life and giving them everything you are.

I wanted Edward to have all of me. I wanted him to take away my name and history and rewrite it all. I suddenly felt guilty for putting limits on it. Edward never got his wedding; his fairytale night never happened. “Baby, if you want a big wedding, I…I can do that for you if that’s what you want. I’m sorry I got all weird last night. You surprised me…and scared me.” I cupped his beautiful face and brought him to my eye level. “What do you want?”  

“You,” he said, his eyes intense and a little on the glassy side.

I smiled and kissed his nose. “You have me. But what do you want? I’ve done this before, but you haven’t. It was selfish of me to try to take that away from you.”

His arms snaked around my waist and pulled me. “You, Bella. I want you. I want simple and easy and relaxed. But I have one request…”

“Anything.”

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: November 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: A Thin Line

Great way to end the story - this has been one of my favs for a long time and am sad to see it end :0)



Author's Response:

I'm glad I could entertain you for a little while. Thanks so much for stucking through it with me. Loads of LOVE!~JEN

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: November 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Rear View Mirror

I loved this chapter, hearing how Edward is so drawn to Bella, and Bella to Edward. And then how sweet he was during her melt down, hmmmmm I am loving your Edward and def. can't wait to read more, Nicole :0)



Author's Response:

Thank you darlin', I like my Edward too ;) Glad you enjoyed it and thanks bunches for the review. ~Jen

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: December 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Bella Bear and Tom Petty

Wow - lust filled hangovers, hallways, coffee, games rooms and karaoke - can't wait for the dancing. Loved the chapter btw, Nicole :0)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the read Nicole. We're working on the 12th chapter now. It's in the midest of a big time overhaul, so I'm a little anxious about it beingposted. It's looks a little different from the chapters. Thanks for the review!

 

~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: December 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11:Seattle Play by Play: Part One

Edward is so sweet (even if his mind is running a porno all the time), but everything he said to Bella is to help her gain her confidence, and that is pretty cool - can't wait to read more, Merry Christmas, Nicole :0)



Author's Response:

Sweet, cocky, Pornoward is what I want for Christmas... Thanks for reading and thank you for the review. Enjoy your holidays.

~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: December 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Seattle Play by Play part 2

I was so excited to find the update when I logged on today, loved the chapter (lemon drop included) and am really looking forward to read more, Nicole :0)



Author's Response:

Glad I could sprinkle a little excitement into your day.  Thanks bunches for the review!

2012 ~Happy New Year! Jen

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: March 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Shades of Blue

Hi MJ, loved this chapter - the date was really sweet and the dessert was HOT, I can only imagine how much they will sizzle when things finally happen. Can't wait to read more, Nic :0)



Author's Response:

Hola Nicole!

That Vanilla ice cream thing popped into my head long before I'd written this chapter, and I wanted it somewhere becasue I liked the image way too much. So in the 2nd re-write it ended up in here, glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review my dear, catch you in the next chapter.

~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: July 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Static Heat

Hey MJ, it was totally worth the wait, and I loved the end of the chapter too. Really sweet.... :0)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I took my time with those words and my beta bounced revisions and re-do's back and forth with me about 3 times before it felt right. Thanks for reading.

~Jen

 
Stolen Dreams by Shasta53 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 434]
Summary:

Bella and Edward were ready to become parents as seniors in high school, but tragedy ended their dreams and pulled them apart. Ten years later, they reunite, but all is not what it seems. ExB


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 169508
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2011 Updated: November 11, 2012


Reviewer: belled_70 Signed
Date: January 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awwww that was a really sweet chapter - I am so happy that Ryan has decided he is able to call exb Ma and Dad, I think it would be a hard thing for a 10 yr old to get his head around. I am loving your story and am looking forward to the next chapter, Nic :0)

 




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