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Summary:

 

 

The day Bella went to the Cullens’ home for the first time.  Starting at Chapter 15 of Twilight from various Cullen perspectives.  This story is the behind the scenes look at the day Bella met the Cullens.  What did they think and what went on where Bella could not see them?  

 

 

Carlisle’s POV, Esme’s POV, Jasper’s POV and Emmett's.

 

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 17689
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Preparations - Carlisle's POV

Hello!

Just wanted to leave you a quick review...I think this is a marvelous idea for a story! I was tickled to death to find it!  Your characterization is done very well, and I look forward to the rest of the story. 

This was one of the scenes I was most curious about as well - it's my favorite scene in the movie and I LOVE thinking about what happened behind the scenes.  Can't wait to see what is next! Keep writing : )

 
Summary:

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She got what she wanted. My venom flows through her bloodstream, changing her, reshaping her from a human to a vampire. Soon, that transformation will be complete. And I'll be able to keep her forever.

I am the most selfish creature that has ever walked this earth.

Edward's point of view in "Breaking Dawn", beginning with Book Three.

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 250382
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2009 Updated: November 29, 2009


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Favor

Love the story! Very well written; I am really enjoying it!

 
Summary:

Rosalie is content to live her vampire life to its fullest, regardless of her resentment of her immortal situation. One day while hunting she comes across a dying man with an innocent face that she cannot resist. In an act of strength, she brings him home to change him into one of them.

How does the vain and selfish Rosalie deal with an irrational newborn vampire who can’t see past his lust for blood to even notice her? Will she be able to swallow her pride and have the patience to stand by him? Will Emmett be the man who can change her life for the better?

All Chapters are Rosalie's POV

Warning: Rated NC-17 for a reason. Some chapters may contain adult language, violence, assault, and sexual content. Lemons in future chapters.

Thank you to my super-efficient Twilighted Beta, Texbelle!

Got Twitter? Follow Me! @achelle131

V&P Awards and Recognition:

  • Mentioned on The Lazy Yet Discerning Ficster Blog
  • Indie Twific Award Finalist Best Canon (WIP) 
  • Sparkle Awards Alice Award Best PreTwilight Second Place
  • Golden Chocolate Awards Best Rosalie and Emmett Runner Up
  • Rec'd and Reviewed on the Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs Blog

Part of:


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles, The Vanity and Patience Series
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 192931
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2011


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Grief

I'm soooo glad you updated this story! I have loved it for almost 2 months now and I check back almost every day for an update because I love reading it.  Emmett and Rosalie are my favorites, and it's refreshing to read a story like this that I think explains their story so well. 

Now i'm heading over to read chapter 2 of S&R, I can't wait!

Would you ever consider writing a same sort of story for Alice and Jasper?  I think you would do a great job, and I have had a horrible time finding a story/author that would capture them and their story for me.  Just a thought!  : )

 

Keep writing!  I'll be checking back for updates every day til then, lol.



Author's Response:

thanks so much! i'm glad that you find my story good enough that explains Rose and Em well! I probably won't do an Alice/Jasper story jsut because multichapter fics are a big responsibility and i dont know if i can handle another! however, I have heard great things about the fic called "You've Kept Me Waiting" by Mandi1 at: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5069284/1/Youve_Kept_Me_Waiting, it's on my "To Read" list of fics.

if you'd like some updates on my chapters and their status you can always follow me on twitter @achelle131 or visit my thread at: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=3584

thank you so much! i'm working on chapter 24 but i dont know if it will be up before the new year. Be sure to check me out on twitter or the thread to find out!

love,

Mari

 
Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Changed

Okay, okay, you caught me.  I'm reading this story for the 2nd time I love it so much.  I can't wait to see what happens! Oh and I can't wait for the next update on the Emmett POV story as well.  I'm waiting with baited breath! lol....can't wait to see where this story goes.  I love reading all the little details about their lives, thoughts, even clothes.  well done!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much! just to let you know, i have been and will be revisiting the earlier chapters to make some improvements and lengthen it. Also, i'll be writing a few additional earlier chapters before i end the story. Thanks so much for going back and reading! i'm very flattered and indebted to you! 

 

Love,

Achelle

 
Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Firsts

Can I just say that I absolutely ADORE this story?!

lol but I really do think it's great so far. I was sick in bed today and I did nothing but sit here and read it - please update soooon!

Ever since reading Twilight I have been curious about Emmett and Rosalie's story, and I really think you did a great job of capturing their struggles and growning love in his first year.  I agree and think that it couldn't have all been sunshine and rainbows - there had to be some real problems and struggles, especially with a character like Rosalie.  I think you did a great job of capturing her. 

I look forward to reading the rest! I can't wait!   loves it.



Author's Response:

thanks so much! Cn i just say that I really appreciate this review?! I'm so glad that my Em and Rose entertained you on your sick day. Thank you for agreeing with the way i captured their struggles and the way i portrayed Rosalie's thoughts and actions. That really does mean a lot, and I write for readers like yourself I've got chapter 22 up now! anway, I hope you feel better! 

Thanks again!

Sincerely,

Mariecel

 
Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Broken Walls

wow what a great chapter! thanks for updating, I can't wait to see what happens next!  love it so far. 



Author's Response:

thank you so much! glad you love it so far!

 
Summary:

In Vanity and Patience, Rosalie's patience and pride are tested, as she is forced to endure Emmett's struggle for control as a blood-thirsty newborn and wait for him to notice her. Emmett enjoys his newborn strength and abilities, but is faced with the first-time feeling of remorse for his uncontrollable acts of violence and cold indifference while blinded by bloodlust. Can he control his thirst enough to recognize his soulmate in his beautiful angel before it's too late? 

This is a collection of V&P's side-shots, from Emmett's point of view.

Updates will be slow, as V&P is my priority to complete. They will not be posted in sequential order at all times, as my writing will be based on how I feel.

Warning: Lemons in future chapters. Rated NC-17 for a reason. Violence, adult language, drugs, assault, and sexual content.

 Part of:


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles, The Vanity and Patience Series
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 28410
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: God, Just Shoot Me.

Love it! Can't wait to see Rosalie! Keep those updates coming, I love both of these stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you Cakes! im glad you love the stories! They love you right back! oh, and chapter 3 is up too!

 
Waning Moon by YborJen Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 420]
Summary: Feature

 

The epic story of Carlisle Cullen began in 17th century England. Since the fateful night he was transformed into a vampire Carlisle has searched for two things: redemption in the eyes of God, and unconditional familial love. Follow Carlisle through the old and the new world as he meets friends and enemies on his journey toward his destiny as an inspiration to vampires everywhere. Carlisle and his family will discover, however, that love is eternal, but life is not.

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Alistair, Amun, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charles, Charlie, Charlotte, Chelsea, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Eleazar, Elizabeth Masen, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Irina, Jacob, James, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Kachiri, Kate, Kebi, Laurent, Leah, Liam, Maggie, Makenna, Marcus, Quil, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Siobhan, Stefan, Tanya, Tia, Victoria, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 152115
[Report This] Published: August 16, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ 1661

Hi! Great story so far, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of it!  Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review cakes4547 -- I'm really glad you have enjoyed the story so far!  Let me know what you think of the rest!

 
Summary:

Rob and Kristen RosesTwilight from Edward's POV.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 85402
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2009


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hello!  I thought I would leave you a review - if it makes your day, then I'll make your day today! lol

Anyways, I'm up to chapter 13 and I think the story is just delightful.  You write Edward very well, and I'm really enjoying it.  One of the things that bugs me the most is that SM didn't finish Midnight Sun, and your story is replacing it nicely.  Not sure if that's what your goal was, and I'm not trying to suggest that really, but it has been a nice alternative that I've really enjoyed.  Anyway, I look forward to reading the rest, and I will be sure to read anything else you post!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that is an awesome review!!  *grins happily*  I really appreciate the kind support and I'm thrilled you like it so far. Please keep your thoughts coming, I'd love to know what you think as it continues!! THanks again!!!!!!!!  :-)

 
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This is Breaking Dawn from Edward's POV, using the same scenes and dialogue but with new scenes added as well -- the latter of which are entirely the product of my over-active imagination. New scenes include the lemons sorely lacking from the original.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 194511
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2010


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Threat

Hello,

Just thought I would drop you a line...I'm afraid to admit I have ready twelve chapters and haven't left a review, so shame on me : ( 

But I couldn't wait any longer - Well done! This is one of the best fics I have read so far, and I can't wait to see what else happens. 

I have to admit, I am really hoping that you include what happens while Bella is changing - How does Edward bond with Ness?  How does he react to her gift?  These places in the book were huge holes for me personally. 

Anyway, wonderful job so far, I look forward to reading more! Well done!

 

 

 
Summary:

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"My life was an unending, unchanging midnight.  It must, by necessity, always be midnight for me.  So how was it possible that the sun was rising now, in the middle of my midnight?"

Many have tried to finish Stephenie Meyer's "Midnight Sun" (Twilight from Edward's point of view) and from what I've seen, none of them truly finished what she started.  This ending to "Midnight Sun" starting at Chapter 13 is not only picking up where she left off, but uncovering the Edward that she created, and blending the perspectives of many to hear the rest of his story. This first book is a unique turning point in the arc of his character.

 


Categories: Twilight Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 81011
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2010 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Revelations - Chapter 13

Okay so, can I just say that I am absolutely in *LOVE* with this story?  When I saw it last night I jumped on it and read and read and finally finished this chapter this morning.  I think it's great!

The fact that SM has not yet finished Midnight Sun is one of my major disapointments in life - okay not really but it's a major bummer that it's not completed.  This story is a great alternative!  I'm so excited to see what you post next, so please update soon! : ) 

You have a great writing style and I'm absolutely chomping at the bit to see how you write the meadow scene!  Keep writing, it's fabulous so far!

-C-



Author's Response:

The meadow scene is coming soon!  I just need to add a few details to it to make it fabulous.  ;]  It's such a great chapter too because emotionally (in the meadow chapter) he gets to a really joyful excited point that we really don't get to see any other time.  He's still anxious, but the first bang of that feeling of flying in true love is there.... it was really great to experience him at that point in writing his point of view.  So, yes... SOON!  :]

 
Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Confessions - Chapter 15

Hello : )

I've reviewed before but after reading your author's note I decided that I would give my two cents again for you.

First, I just wanted to say that I agree with you on the fact that SM's writing can get a little repetitive, but I don't think it's all bad.  We really get an idea of how much he beats himself up in his head, and how he tortures himself.  That being said, I think you're doing a great job of mirroring her writing. 

Your writing and ability to write a good Edward are the reasons I'm reading in the first place - many people have tried to write MS, but quite a few unfortunately fall short, so well done.  I'll keep checking back! Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Oh good!  I did have to ask because I wanted to make sure I was mirroring the things that I *should* be imitating... like word choices and pacing and all of that.  I don't know much about writing, but I've noticed with singing (my dad gave voice lessons from our home when I was a kid) and untrained voices will try to imitate a singer and sometimes what they are imitating is the quirky sound that a person has (usually over-doing it) and missing out on the good-singing that they should be imitating that is ALSO in the persons style.  The other MS's that I've read seem to either copy too much of those things that shouldn't be copied or they deviate from Stephanie Meyer's work too much to make it seem like a real second half to the book.  It IS really difficult to do though so I appreciate the encouragment!  And I'm always willing to tweak if it needs tweaking.  :]

My validation beta said that she'd try her darndest to get the next chapter up before Valentine's day, so.. it's coming soon!  And.. you are totally going to love it.  ;]

 
Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Carlisle - Chapter 18

Hello : )

I've reviewed before, but just wanted to say again how much I am enjoying the story!  I check for updates every few days, lol, so keep writing!  Really lovely so far, can't wait to read the game.

 
LOVING EDWARD by SammiCat15 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
Summary:

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A Breaking Dawn story, this is a tale about Edward & Bella’s voyage of sexual discovery and their introduction to parenthood.

The timeline runs from September, when they first go to their cottage in the woods, after Bella wakes up as a vampire, until the arrival of the Volturi at the end of December.

Bella & Edward have to balance their sexual desires with the challenges of new parenthood and Bella's adjustment to being a newborn vampire.

The story is told almost entirely from Bella's point of view.

Twilighted Jr Validation Beta:  Content1

Banner:  Huge thanks to FrozenSoldier for her wonderful banner-making talents.  Thank you so much, hun!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 95786
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: December 18, 2011


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - SHOWERING WITH LOVE

I thought it was hot.  ; )



Author's Response:

thank you, Cakes, for taking the time to review.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the ride - it gets bumpy and rampant and but also has many tender moments.

 
Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - GENTLY DOES IT

Wonderful first chapter, I really enjoyed this : )

 
Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - CARPET BURN

I thought this was fitting.  I think at this point he would have been mad with desire for her, and so I think a cuss word or two would be allowed.  Very well done and HOT HOT HOT! : )

 
Summary:

  After a long day, Jacob's tense, but Nessie's knows exactly how to take care of her alpha.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2550
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2010 Updated: April 06, 2010


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: July 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Nessie's Alpha

I loved this!  Hot and sweet, and you write a great Jake/Ness.  I really really enjoyed this little fic! : )



Author's Response:

sorry i'm so late in replying, but I'm glad you liked it.  hope u get a chance to check out the rest of my stuff.

 
Summary:


 

Upon meeting what she thinks at first will be humans, Amy Genitiempo finds that not everyone is what they may seem, including her newly acquired friend, Sam Uley and his pack of unforgiving shapeshifting werewolves.


Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, AU, Crossover Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 8610
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2010 Updated: July 10, 2010


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I Can't Believe I'm Seeing This

First of all, you write his agony extremely well.  I could really feel how miserable and dejected he felt while I was reading this.  I hate to see a sad Jacob, but it made for a great prologue!  Wonderful way to start the story!  Kudos to you for that. 

Also, I've never read a Jacob story that covered this part of his life - gettign Bella's wedding invitation.  It was very cool to see that you covered that, as I haven't seen it done before.  Very interesting!

 
Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A Sudden Change in my Plans

Very interesting so far.  Okay, so I get that she isn't mortal, but she has blue eyes and has visions...what is she!  She is obviously powerful/magical...This story is so creative and I can't wait to find out more about Amy.  You've built a really good/interesting foundation for her.  I already like her character, which is a definite plus.  Very nice! 

 
Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Learning to Turn with the Wheel of the World

Great chapter!  I really like the Twilight throwback, "Just ignore her, I do." lol!  That made me happy to read.  I also read on your profile a little more about Amy - I missed that the first time- and that cleared up a whole lot for me.  This is a very interesting fic so far because you have set up the characters very nicely.  Aeon reminded me a lot of Jane, which I love because she is a great character as well that I have always wanted to read more about.  I also like that you have clearly made Amy a little unaware of traditional 'human' things like time, places, etc.  That also is an interesting twist.  Very well done so far!

 
Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: I'm Not Sure if I'm Really Ready for This

Loved her internet experience!  The fanfic thing made me laugh.  I just love that you have made Amy so unaware of human things, despite being alive for so long.  I really thought that was an interesting twist to have her be so sheltered from the rest of the world.  Very excited to read your next chapter!  Update soon! : )

 
Summary:

Ever since since Bella told me she had made up her mind in a decision to marry Edward Cullen, things went from bad to worse.

So, to get things off my chest, I started writing how I really felt down, attempting to find a place in my life where things weren't so awful, I litterally would want to end my miserable life.

We'll see how things go, but as of right now, they aren't looking so great.


Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2113
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2010 Updated: June 24, 2010


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Entry One: The Last Few Days

Wow!  What a beautifully written chapter...I almost felt a little depressed after I ready it - I had to remind myself that it was just fiction and I didn't have to actually be sad haha! 

But really, you did an excellent job describing the pain he felt and was going through, especially when he got the wedding invitation!  I almost cried that was so sad for poor Jacob.  What a horrible horrible time for him, the poor guy.  Love it so far, off to the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Entry Two: I'm Not Giving Up

Great Chapter!  I loved how you really looked at Jacob's feelings about wolves and vampires mixing together, and how he thinks it will never happen.  And we seem him transition from hating her to actually thinking that he might come aroudn years later when she's had a chance to calm down and get over her newborn stage.  And I loved that he compared Bella to what Edward is to him, and his thougths about them being the same kind...very well done!

 
Summary:

The Kings were exactly what she thought she wanted, but I knew my best friend more than what she knew herself sometimes. She may have thought Royce was her fairytale prince, but I knew, deep down, she wanted something more, someone who would love her as my William loved me. 

 

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Vera's thoughts on the last night she saw her best friend, Rosalie Hale.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Rosalie, Vera
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1227
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2010 Updated: December 09, 2010


Reviewer: cakes4547 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Even though this made me sad, I really enjoyed it.  I'm getting into AU/AH (slowly) but a canon fic like this always makes me smile : )  Very well done! 

 

twilightcakes



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

It is kind of sad to know that Rosalie just disappears, and Vera won't know what happened to her :(

Paula x





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