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Penname: miata4hope [Contact]
Real name: Hope
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Member Since: November 09, 2009
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Summary: Feature

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EPOV. Edward is having trouble balancing his urges for Bella's blood and Bella's body before the wedding. What started out as a simple "Practice Fic" has become a retelling of BD from EPOV that lets us see just how much he struggles for control at every turn.

Warning: Edward's got issues. Some dark images and angst, but nothing too bad and quickly giving way to steamy goodness.

Golden Lemon


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 132400
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: miata4hope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue: Possession

I am not great at leaving reviews, but how could I pass up your desperate plea for a final one?!?  I absolutely loved this story.  Your Edward was portrayed so wonderfully and I have to say that this was 21 chapters of awesomeness :-)

Thanks for a great ride and I'll be looking forward to your next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed the story. Thank you!

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5723]
Summary:

 

 

When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: miata4hope Signed
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23-Rescue Me

Thank God!!!  What a great chapter though, seriously.  I love your writing of Lizzy - very sweet.  Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thanks my dear! Phew! 

So glad you like Lizzy- i adore her!

thanks for reviewing! I am sending you a lengthy lemony bit of Rob goodness for your review...to tide us over till they are reunited!

thanks again!

 
Reviewer: miata4hope Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Introductions

I love it!  I had to smile each time your character had her internal dialogue - it's exactly what I'd be thinking in this situation! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! and Welcome to NTE!

I love her inner dialogue... she's got quite the devil/angel thing going on in her head!

Thanks for reading and reveiwing!

hope you continue to enjoy!

xoxoxo

steph

 
Reviewer: miata4hope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35-All You Need Is Love

I felt like I was squealing just as much as Jen in this chapter!  You wrote something that has been a dream of mine and it was so much fun to read.  If only I could actually live it out with Mr. Pattinson...sigh.  Thanks for the incredible fantasy.  This story has definitely climbed to the top of my list!!



Author's Response:

AW that is so cool! i am dying to go to Liverpool...  The museum looks awesome online.. I can only imagine... and the hotel looks great too! I want to stay in Paul's room!

and with Rob?! oh my... that would be the end of me!

thanks for review and rate! more Liverpool in the next chapter!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: miata4hope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight

Ok, where to begin?  I guess I should preface this by saying that I'm not really into the whole are they/aren't they thing.  I honestly feel very badly for both Rob and Kristen since I imagine that all the speculation gets very old very fast.  The reality is that we just don't know. 

You have a vested interest in Jen, as do we as your readers!  I loved this chapter.  I think you portrayed two vulnerable characters who handled a tough situation differently.  In the end, however, they came to an understanding which is the most important thing.  I can't imagine you losing readers.  Regardless of our stance on the Robsten thing, this is just damn good fanfic!  As for me, I'm Team Steph :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks my dear!

the next couple of chapters we get to see more on Kris and the pressures they must feel, all from Jen's perspective. Wonder what she will think of it all....

thanks for your inspiring words. I am a huge RobJen fan, in that i hope RL Rob finds something incredible in his life. Whether with Kristen or someone else, i am sure he will. he's still young. He'll find it. I don't think he'll let hollywood destroy that opportunity. i think he cares too much. 

but then again. don't know him... so there ya go.

awww. Team Steph. now i'm blushing :) thanks my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: miata4hope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49- Suck It Up

Love this chapter!  I always imagined that Rob would need a strong woman in his life to manage all the craziness.  I love Jen for that...she's the best!  Oh, and your chapters could never be too long :-)

Hope



Author's Response:

thanks so much Hope. 

I am glad it wasn't too long! haha! i do worry about it! they just won't stop talking!!!! 

Rob needs a strong woman for so many reasons. His life is just too crazy for anyone weaker than a super hero...not that Jen is a superhero, but maybe she has a cape somewhere she can put on... she'll need it.

But i think the more they talk and open up, the more they will see that they are a good match.

thanks my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph 

 
Summary:

A Twilight/Labyrinth Crossover

A prophecy must be fulfilled or everything in the Underground will come undone.

 

When Sarah Williams defeated Jareth, the Goblin King, and left the Underground in ruin, everything looked bleak.

Edward has left Bella; however, he forgot to take the birthday gift he had given her.  One stormy night Bella decides to read the book and calls upon the Goblin King.

Will Jareth be able to save his kingdom by fulfilling the prophecy?  Will Edward be reunited with his soul mate?  Must one lose it all for the other to gain everything?

 

Rated for later chapters.

 

 


Categories: AU, Crossover Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 15312
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2010 Updated: June 14, 2010


Reviewer: miata4hope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - There is Another

Twilight + Labrynth = GENIUS!!  I am so excited to find your story.  I tend to read fan fics on the go and I'm not able to review from my phone, but I will definitely hop on the computer for you!  What a great first two chapters.  I can't wait to see how you blend two of my favorite things!!

-Hope



Author's Response:

This just made me squee...thank you!  I love both Labyrinth and Twilight.  Unfortunately, I haven't been able to find vary many "good" crossover fics involving both of my loves, so I decided to write my own.  I am so glad that you were able to find this, and I hope that I don't let you down with this story.

 
Reviewer: miata4hope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Replacement

She must become my Queen or I will drop you head first into the Bog of Eternal Stench myself before you are sent to my inescapable oubliette.  Do we understand each other, Hockle?”

Squee!  Poor Hoggle...he just can't catch a break!  Your Jareth is PERFFECT...love it!  I actually just joined Project Team Beta so if you ever need another set of eyes, I'd love to help out.  Keep it up, girl!

Hope



Author's Response:

You're right, poor Hoggle!  He is such an intricate character - I hope I did him justice.  As for another set of eyes, I don't know how PTB is (Can you request to work on a certain fic?)...I'd love to see how you'd beta it.  I was lucky enough to find one person so far on PTB who also loves Labyrinth & Twilight, so that would be great if you get a chance to beta it.

Check your e-mail for a snippet of Ch 4. I just sent out... 

 
Rm w/a Vu by AngelGoddess1981 New! Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1376]
Summary:

 

Bella, a struggling student at Arizona State, returns to her dorm room one afternoon to find her boyfriend in bed with her roommate. Unable to look at either of them, she moves out of her dorm, seeking refuge at her parents' place until she can find another room to move to.

 

Since it’s halfway through the semester, there are no other rooms available, so she takes to the classifieds. Just how good is the view being advertised? 

 

AH - Bella/Edward

Romance/Humor

 

Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and later, lemons . . . because this is fanfiction after all.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 220617
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2012 Updated: May 19, 2013


Reviewer: miata4hope Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Just My Luck

Just started reading your story! I was laughing out loud :) Love your Bella - going to breeze through the rest of your chapters now!

 
Reviewer: miata4hope Signed
Date: March 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3. Truth in Advertising

Ok the inner 14 year-old girl in me is making some kind of "squee!" noise after reading that chapter! Love your sense of humor :)

 
Reviewer: miata4hope Signed
Date: March 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7. Let the Interrogation Commence

I actually adore the fact that Edward charmed Charlie relatively quickly. Oh and that "inhaled and swallowed at the same time" line had me laughing so loud I nearly woke my sleeping baby!

 
Reviewer: miata4hope Signed
Date: March 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9. Overnight Company

He's going to ravish her on top of the dryer?!? Lol - another great chapter!

 
Mount Olympus by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 211]
Summary: Feature

MO

 

Falling for your best friend is never easy. Asking your best friend to be in an unconventional relationship while fighting your feelings is something entirely different.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 85891
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2012 Updated: November 14, 2012


Reviewer: miata4hope Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Deity Dalliance

Lovin' this story!! These two are definitely not going to be able to stay in the friend zone :) BTW, if you ever want beta help please hit me up. I'm an English teacher and can't help but find joy in correcting other people's writing! Nice work so far!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it! Yeah, they may not be able to stay friend for much longer, will they? I will definitely let you know; thank you for the offer! Xo 

 
The Loving Kind by thimbles Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 119]
Summary:

 

 

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There were nine words on the square of paper.

Nine simple words that I have waited over a year to hear: "I was wrong. I miss you. I love you."

 

My biggest mistake was falling in love with Bella. My second was telling her.

 

Please be advised: this story contains language, sex and will deal with themes of severe depression and suicide.

 

My stunning banner was made by the amazing Frozen Soldier!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 76253
[Report This] Published: March 27, 2012 Updated: September 03, 2012


Reviewer: miata4hope Signed
Date: March 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Very intriguing! I'm looking forward to watching what happens in your story.

Author's Response:

Thank you x





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