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Summary: Robert Pattinson and his sister Lizzy get into a car crash. After 3 weeks in a coma, Robert wakes up and has to relearn his simple daily routine and cope with the traumatic experience.
Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 56496
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2010
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed 
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Poor Rob. For him to think he's responsible for the accident and the death of two people, it's heartbreaking. But seeing him awake, and the fact that he recollected Samantha's name, well, that just made it better somehow.
Author's Response: Somehow, I felt it necessary for Rob to feel guilty, becasue a lot of people have that guilt and frustration after waking up. It was very heartbreaking for me to add in there, so don't hurt me!! *Hides in corner* lol. So, that it why I brought Samantha up in this chapter. It was going to be later in the story, but I figured I'd make you all a little happier! hehe.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Eeeeeeeeeep! Okay, seriously doing the happy dance right now. That is all I can really say, other than you've made me a happy girl. Lol Author's Response: Lmao. I'm glad you are happy! This chapter was very happy for me to write! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Wow, girly. You DID do your homework, and it certainly paid off. I enjoyed this chapter, and I'm so damn happy to see Rob awake, but sad that he can't remember what happened.
Good Job! Author's Response: Lol. yes, I did so much homework. And I'm glad you enjoyed it! I feel so much happier in my everyday life knowing that he is awake and I can finally write his POV. lol. Sounds silly, but it is definitely a weight lifted off my shoulders ;] And don't worry too much about him, things change over time. It's still early for him to be thinking straight. Thanks for the review!!!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: October 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Okay, sweetie pie. Seeing as you have been an amazing reviewer for my stories, I couldn't pass up the chance to read yours. I must say, it's damn good. I can't wait to see what happens next. Author's Response: Thanks so much! That really means a lot coming from you!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Well, love...I'm still here with you and still enjoying the story. Damn, this is rather heartbreaking. Gah! Poor Rob. Author's Response: Thanks for sticking around! And I know it's extremely sad, but trust me, nobody can kill off RPattz! Think happy thoughts!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: October 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Gah, bb. That was so heartbreaking. Poor Lizzy. She really thought Rob was waking. You captured the emotion so well. I'm loving this. Author's Response: I know that was so heartbreaking... and it was difficult for me to write. But I'm glad you still liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Gah! So damn heartbreaking. It just makes you wanna cry. WAKE UP, ROB!!!! Sorry it took so long to review, girly. I just started another RPF. Yeah, I know. I'm staying busy. Lol. Author's Response: It's very sad, I know, but have faith! And no problem- I need to go check that out! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
This is just wreaking havoc on my heart, bb, but I have faith in you. I know in the end it will all be okay. You're doing amazing with the story! Author's Response: That honeslty means a lot coming from you! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! (And for having faith in me. That always feels good, lol =] )
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Ohhhh, you are a writing machine lately, girly. Lol. I'm sorry it took so long to review this chapter too. I just put out two updates yesterday for my stories, so that kept me busy. My work is never done. lol.
I really liked the ending of this chapter...well, I enjoyed the whole chapter, but the ending left a promise of something good, so that was my fave part. Anyway, situations like this aren't supposed to be pretty, they aren't supposed to be easy, and I think you've done a wonderful job showing that. Keep it up, girly. I'll definitely keep reading. Author's Response: Lol. Actually, I have the first 15 chapters already written from a different site, so it's just a matter of posting them. But, I am writing. I'm working on a different RPF that I am thinking of posting. And don't worry- I know how very busy you are, and I am thankful you write, because you are my inspiration to write.
I'm glad you liked this chapter! It was one of my favorites to write, just because writing the others were making me so depressed, lol. Thanks so much for reviewing! Love you!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Awwww, that little girl was so damn sweet. Even though Rob is still in the coma, that chapter made my heart happy, seeing such sweet fans who would go out of their way to do something like that. I just loved it!!! Author's Response: That was a happy chapter for me to write, a nice break from the depressing ones. And I'm glad you enoyed it! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Awww, poor Lizzie. You just wanna grab her and give her big hugs. My heart aches for them all, but I know they'll get their wish soon. I can't wait for Rob to wake up.
By the way, thank you for the shout out, love. That was very sweet of you. Lots of hugs for you!!! Author's Response: I know things are really tough for Lizzy right now... and, well, for all the Pattinsons. But, things will get better next chapter.
And thanks for the hugs! lol. Thank you for the inspiration =]
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: December 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
LMFAO. Loved that you included the Stoli. Great chapter, girly. Author's Response: haha! That was my fave part to write!! I'm glad you loved it! Thanks for the review. New chapter should be up soon (and there is a special surprise in the next update) ;]
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: December 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 & 14
LMAO. Victoria cracks me up, her talking about her brother's manly bits, and I loved that the cast came to see him. Totally cracked up at Ashley asking what a catheter was. LOL. My heart kinda broke for Rob, him apologize for the accident and thinking he was to blame. But I have to say, I love the bond between him and Lizzy. It's too sweet. Great chapters, girly! Author's Response: Haha. I've been trying to keep Victoria's relationship with Rob more childish and playful while giving Lizzy more motherly instincts towards him. I'm glad you liked that!! Surprisingly, I had a really hard time writing about the cast because I wasn't really sure who would visit and what they would say. Thanks for everything!!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: January 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 15
Hey, sweetiepie. Sorry it's taken me so long to review. I've been down with my back, so I've not even written anything myself. I think this chapter was damn good and definitely needed. Don't sell yourself short. You're doing great. And thanks for the fic rec. I appreciate it, bb. Author's Response: No problem! I hope everything is going well with you! I'm glad you liked the chapter. I know filler chapters can get quite boring. And no problem with the rec. Glad to be of service. haha.
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: January 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 16
I absolutely love the relationship between Rob and Lizzy. I seriously awwwed when she sang to him. This just keeps getting better and better, girly! Author's Response: I love their relationship, too! I kinda hope it's like that with them in real life, how they will do anything to help eachother out. And I'm glad you liked the ending. I was a bit nervous about that part.
Thanks so much for reviewing! It means so much that you take the time to read and review! Love ya!!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: February 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 17
Oh, shit! What's wrong with him? Please tell me it's nothing serious! Don't worry, sweetie, I'm not planning to throw anything at you. Lol. But I am a bit nervous. *bites nails while waiting for the next chapter* Author's Response: Haha. Things will be explained in the next couple chapters, don't worry.
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: March 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 18
Poor Rob. I just wanna cuddle him and make this all better for him. I really do. But despite that fact that my heart aches for him, I'm still very much enjoying this story. It's so unique, and that's one of the many things I love about it. Keep up the great work, girly.
Mwah! Author's Response: I give you permission to cuddle Rob, haha. I'm glad you enjoy, and that you think it's unique. That's what I waa going for and to get your aproval means so much to me. Thank you for all the wonderful reviews!
Summary:
We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?
What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?
This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.
All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.
Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.
And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.
I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.
I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!
Maria
twilight gypsy
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes
Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Run For Your Life
I've finished what you have so far, and I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next. Author's Response: I love your stories so much! Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing! do you want to read the ch about tasting of the blood?
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: A Hard Day's Night
Okay, so here I am, reading and reviewing as you asked in a review you left me. LOL. I think you did a wonderful job. It definitely kept my attention and was very well written. You've got a good thing going here, and I shall be moving on to the next chapter. Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing! Thanks for the kind words, as a first time author it is great to get any kind of valadation at all. I enjoyed Tatum, and I think we all can relate to her prick of a boss. I will read all chapters and review each in turn. Offering to read and review for the same gets me reviews but even better it turns me on to fics I normally would have passed by for any number of reasons, most likely there are just so many to choose from. I amgoing to try out your other stories as well.
Again, thanks so much!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Brilliant Disguise
I can't really pinpoint a favorite line, considering I loved the whole chapter. I loved how Edward was willing to explain what happened that night in explicit detail, even knowing that it might not be something Bella wanted to hear, and I love that Bella realized how predominately different they are, and she's accepted that.
I think this chapter showed growth between the two, which is something they both needed. Edward's eyes are more open to how much he actually restrains himself around Bella, and I think Bella now understands how much of a danger Edward could be to her if he lost control, she sees he's not as perfect as she thought he was, but she also understands now that the struggle he faces is one she'll also deal with once she's changed.
You did a great job showing their confusion, their flaws and understanding of them, their struggles, and also the transition they seem to be making. Great job! Author's Response: Thank you so much for that great review. I appreciate that you continue to read and review! You covered many points that I usually ask readers to clarify for me, hoping to get an extra review out of them. Where would you like to see the story go?
Thanks,
Maria
Summary: Elsie Friedman has always lived the privileged life, until one day her father suddenly wants her to teach her a lesson. In order to have him continue financing her life, he forces her to take a job as a secretary at his studio, Summit Entertainment. Unfortunately for them both, she hates Twilight and tells anyone who will listen. Her first encounter with the star of the film, Robert Pattinson does not go well, nor do any of their subsequent meetings. Can Elsie let go of her deep-seated anger long enough to see past "Edward Cullen" and get to know the true Robert Pattinson?
Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 3142
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: November 12, 2009
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting start. I can't wait to see where you take this. Author's Response: Thanks! I LOVE your fics- I'm hugely jealous of your talent!
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I really like Elsie's personality. She's feisty, which is obviously one of my fave qualities. ;) By the way, I saw your response to my last review. Thanks, love. That was sweet of you, but you've got quite a bit of talent yourself. Keep up the good work, and I'll definitely keep reading.
Summary: Bella is put into a position that she didn't expect to be in
foryears to come. How will the two men she loves the most handle the news?
"Contest entry for "I love 80's music" Contest"
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7081
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2009 Updated: November 03, 2009
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Papa Don't Preach (One-Shot)
It was very well written. I really enjoyed it!
Summary: Bella's parents have comissioned a painting to be done of her by one Edward Cullen. Edward, though, is too suave for his own good and its not long before he's trying to talk Bella right out of her own clothes.
“You did really well,” Edward said, beginning to pack up his things.
I blushed. "Thank you."
“You ever thought about posing nude?”
My head went up in shock and I half expected to see one of those gotcha smiles plastered on his face. There wasn’t though. No, instead he looked deadly serious, like he was already taking my clothes off with his eyes. I felt the sudden need to cover up.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 117988
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2010
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: December 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I absolutely LOVE this. Gawd! Paintward is so damn hot. By the way, Soph rec'd this to me. I'll definitely keep reading.
Summary: Dr. Alexandria Scott-Wyatt is a therapist for celebrities and government officials. She’s the top in her field and in high demand. She thought she was teaching him to be comfortable with his fame and the mass hysteria that followed him everywhere, but Robert Pattinson has other plans for the good doctor. What happens when the one you’re trying to save is the one that saves you?
Banner by: JMCullen (Thanks, girly!)
"What will it take for you to be comfortable in your own skin?"
Categories: Other Characters: Ashley Greene, Jackson Rathbone, Kellan Lutz, Kristen Stewart, Peter Facinelli, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 24632
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010
Reviewer: JMCullen Signed
Date: November 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Alexandria Meets Alex
Okay, totally loved this, girly! Absolutely loved this line..
That hair with a voice of its own that screams, ‘I’ve had sex recently and it was anything but docile’
Completely loved the flirting with Bobby. And of course, the man with the beanie was none other that Mr. Roblicious. Lol.
This was truly great! I can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Okay...I'm like totally having a fan girl moment!!! It is an honor that not only did you read my stuff, but that you liked it. I may pass out. Yeah, the hair gets me everytime. I would like to run my hands... Sorry lost there for a moment.
Yeah, the conversation with Bobby I enjoyed writing. For one I wanted to show her playful side after half the chapter as the therapist and two well...that my dear is part of the plot that will come out in the next chapter. Any idea?? So...the beanie belonged to Rob? Why was he there I wonder? Hmm???
Giggles,
Stacy : )
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