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Penname: cynthia [Contact]
Real name: cindy griffin
Status: Member
Member Since: November 03, 2009

i love twilight and anything to do with vampires

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After the Cullens leave Bella behind she must find a way to survive her pregnancy. Betrayed by the Denali, where is she left to go and what will she become?

Is it a price Bella is willing to pay?

Every choice bears consequences, positive or negative, and results of the consequences will change the course of their lives drastically. What will their consequences be?

Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: Effects and Consequences
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 96247
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2010 Updated: July 09, 2012

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: November 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Pain and Happiness

that was short :/

Author's Response:

i know... hehehe... it was intentional ;)

thanks for reading and reviewing!




Edroar the Angry Lion, frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?   AH/AU OOC 

Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 104784
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2010 Updated: July 07, 2012

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Plan A

yes please continue :D

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. I just submitted chapter 2 and I'm dying to hear what you think of it. Huge thanks for the review. It made me giddy. I really appreciate it.



Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: May 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 It's Electric

lol i knew 5 point sounded familiar . great chapter !


Broken Promises is an alternate ending to New Moon.  Edward comes back the day Bella goes cliff diving.  He plans to just check up on her, but he can't stay away.  Then Jacob phases and hurts Bella, and Bella must decide what she's going to do with all of the broken promises (both Edward's and Jacob's).  The story is told from Edward's POV.

Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5032
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2010 Updated: July 20, 2010

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: December 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Conflict

update!!! pretty please?


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You know how Edward offered to let Bella and Jacob make puppies? And we all secretly wondered how that would go? Yeah. It's one of those. (J/B with some necessary E/B. Set post-Eclipse.)

Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 54587
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2010 Updated: August 19, 2010

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

awesome . funny and dramatic :)

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 674]

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 149789
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2011

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One

awww edward is soo sweet !

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling

this chapter was short :(

Author's Response:

I work, go to school and have RL. I'm sorry but I just can't write really long chapters :( 

I try to post regularly, I hope you like the next chapter 

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Flying High

noooooooooooooooooooooooo a clifie . meanie!!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1967]


After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 146076
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2010 Updated: February 04, 2011

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

how the heck did he get her number !?

Author's Response:


Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog ( as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    


Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

omg! yay!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥


Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.


Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.


After Bella imagines what her life could be like with Jacob, she begins second-guessing her decision to marry Edward. Something clicked during that second kiss with Jacob. Where will this lead for her and Edward? What lies ahead when Bella Swan chooses Fire over Ice?


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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Sam
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 25778
[Report This] Published: July 10, 2010 Updated: July 08, 2011

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: February 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Decision

too short!! update :) pwetty pwease?


Bella comes to Forks as the overweight, excessively pale, book worm. No guy wants anything to do with her. Edward Cullen is the popular, smart, athletic, honor student who all the girls swoon over, despite the fact that he's never expressed interest in any of them.

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What if Bella really had a reason to have self-esteem issues? What if Edward had a secret that no one else knew?


Oh," Jacob hesitates. "I just figured the way he acted around you the other night and how you were going to his party that maybe you guys were..." He trails off.

"Well, no." I clarify. "We are only biology partners."

"OH! I get," he nearly shouts. "Like benefriends."

"WHAT?!" I yell, "NO!" I pull the phone away from my ear and press the TALK button to end the call.

The phone rings again.

"No Jacob! That is NOT what is going on between Edward and I, AT ALL, you perv!"

"Bella?" Edward's voice asks.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 128763
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2010 Updated: March 22, 2011

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Arrival

yes! i have some junk in the trunk lol. cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Acquaintances

edward pov please!

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Interrupted

lmao this ic one of the funniest chapters :D

Unloved Unwanted by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 706]

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Nominated at the Emerging Swan Awards - Best Drama/Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Complete

Nominated at the Tomato Soup Awards - Juciest Peach (story that makes your panites wet), The Bloody Mary Award (Best Vampire Story), and the Tomato Juice Award (Best Vampire feeding scene).

Abandoned by Edward and Jake, Bella runs away, right into the arms of danger and the Volturi. Can her new family help her heal? When the Cullens come back for her, which side will she choose, and who will win her heart in the end?

Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie, Sulpicia
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 234759
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2010 Updated: September 06, 2011

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: August 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Consequences

 thank god ! i was worried she would be a push-over! great chapter keep it up! :)

Author's Response:

Nope not here!  Edward will have some making up to do.

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Awakenings

team felix!!

Author's Response:

:)  On my other story - I ran a quick t-shirt idea list.  My fav:   Team Felix   Because size does matter


Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: September 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Goodbye

aww marcus needs sum1 :)


Edward never came back. But that's okay, because Bella Swan is doing fine. Her life has been vampire free for four years and, while it was rough at first, she's content with her new life. That is, until a certain vampire casually walks back into her life. Can Bella accept the lessons that life is trying to teach her? Or is her future doomed to be dictated by her past?

Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 74546
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2010 Updated: January 03, 2011

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: October 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

*stones!!!* update please!!!

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

awwwwwwww :)


A dash of racier smut to start the weekend off right. 

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Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, Post-Breaking Dawn, AU, AU-Human Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 110770
[Report This] Published: August 27, 2010 Updated: April 15, 2011

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Grind by PurdueLiz

something about a girl named nikie

Sweet Tooth by BellaFlan, mac Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 68]

Sweet Tooth


Sweet Tooth is the sweet but warped love story of Edward Cullen, a lonely baker of erotic pastry, and Bella Swan, a curious woman with a curious philia. King Schlong introduced them... will buttercream frosting be enough to bring them together?


Rec'd by Jessypt on the Perv Pack Smut Shack!

Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 12768
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2010 Updated: November 04, 2010

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

omfg this is epic 0.o cant wait for the next chapter lmao

Author's Response:

Thanks! I just uploaded the next chapter so it should be up in a day.

47 Days by netracullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 465]

Bella and Edward had never met until they spent 47 days in hell together. They can trust no one, except for each other. Now they're home, and trying to heal as they fight for the normality they always took for granted. Lang/Lemons

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 102229
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2010 Updated: March 13, 2012

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: November 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

this is such a good story! how does it only have 68 reviews? 

Author's Response:

it has over 300 on if that makes you feel better? hahaha feel free to rec it to people and get my review count up!

love netra

The Alpha's Imprint by dorme99 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]

From the first moment Bella and Jacob came in contact with each other there was never a choice. They were destined to be together forever. But is Bella really strong enough to fight in a battle between vampire and werewolf?


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Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 142468
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2010 Updated: May 26, 2011

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Renee

wow that was like too short to even be a chapter :(

Author's Response:

The chapters will start to get longer I promise

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: January 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Eye Candy

oh no... this IS a jake and bella story right ? or is the pairing up in the air?? great chapter

Author's Response:

Sorry I missed this review, yes this is a Jacob/Bella pairing.

Reviewer: cynthia Signed
Date: January 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Goin Wolf

go jacob!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading



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