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Penname: mari cullen [ Contact]
Real name: Mari
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Member Since: December 30, 2008
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Summary: It's been three years since the day Edward left Bella in the woods...she is moving on but is still plagued by nightmares from time to time. Will someone from her past help her get through her difficult times? What danger lies ahead for her? Will her dreams eventually come true? Please read and review!
Dream sequences based on the hit song by Heart.
Thanks to the fabulous Mrs.C for the banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 70891
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed 
Date: December 31, 2008
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter. You are an excellent writer! J
Happy New Year!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment and the review! Next chapter up soon.
Summary: Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Thanks for the update! I hope you are feeling better. Great chapter! I love this wonderful story. I’m anxious to see what is going to happen to Edward and Bella relationship. I can’t wait to read more!
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: June 3 - June 6, 2008
This chapter was amazing! The entire wait was all worth it!
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: December 14, 2008
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: You Look So Fine
Beautiful chapter!
Summary: 
Edward Cullen is a painfully shy intellectual desperately in love with his quiet, beautiful classmate. What happens when they have a mid-term project together? The Battle of Normandy changes everything. Slight Twilight Parody. Originally written for The Sexy Edward Contest. Expanded from one-shot to novella. RATED M. AU/AH/OOC. EPOV/BPOV.
Originally for FanFiction's Jayeliwood's Sexy Edward Contest. Rated M for Adult Sexual Themes. EPOV.
Chapters 1-8 are also available here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4509917/1/
Thank you to December for the banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Geekward and Nerdella
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes
Word count: 53910
[Report This] Published: October 08, 2008 Updated: January 14, 2009
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: His Unrequited Love
Wow! I love geeky Edward! He is so cute and charming.
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: His Morning
This chapter was hilarious! Poor Edward!
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Her Revenge
Fabulous! I enjoyed every chapter of this hilarious and sweet story. You are a terrific writer! BRAVO!!!! Author's Response: Thank you! I have a current story, Black and White. Check it out if you're interested. :)
Summary: Takes place several years after New Moon. AU. Bella never went cliff diving, Edward never went to the Volturi. For years Edward has been forced to live with the pain of Bella’s absence in his life, knowing that it is no one’s fault but his own. How will Edward and his family react when Isabella Swan turns up as one of Carlisle’s intensive care patients and has no where to go? Will the mystery of her condition and the events that she has overcome in Edward’s absence be revealed?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 55312
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2008 Updated: January 17, 2009
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
This is a sweet and beautiful story. I read all the chapters back to back. You did an amazing job. I’m looking forward to read your next story. Author's Response: thanks for the rating and the review!
<3!
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Humiliation
Awesome chapter! I love the spontaneity of Edward. I want to read more, please update soon.
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Twister
Great chapter! Please keep writing. I'm really in love with the story.
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Lights Out
Great chapter! Please update soon!
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Burning
Oh my God! This is my favorite chapter so far. It's beautiful and HOTTTTT! Thanks for writing this story I love it. Please keep writing and update soon.
Congratulations you deserve to be on the top 10. You're an AWESOME, INCREDIBLE, FABULOUS, AMAZING writer!
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Coming Clean
Great chapter! I love how Edward is so romantic and caring. Definitely a keeper! ;)
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Bella's Turn Part I
Wow! This chapter was so freaking hot!
Edward + strawberries + whipped cream= Mmmm....perfect combination
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Bella's Turn Part II
WOW! This chapter was mind blowing. I can't wait to read the next one!
Summary: 
Jasper cannot handle Edward and Bella's overpowering emotions anymore. When Edward and Alice go hunting, Jasper decides to teach Bella how to satisfy her needs. But what will he learn in the process? Nominated for two Eddie/Bellie Awards. Winner of the Twi-Fi Award for Best Non Canon Couple.
Categories: AU, Other Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 59555
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Alt Chapter 17: New Beginnings
Love it! I can't wait for the sequel. I want to see what is going to happen with Bella and Edward. I'm betting on Edward 100%. They are meant to be!
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: January 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Alt Chapter 18: Releasing Bella
Perfect ending! You did a beautiful job with this story. I can't wait for the sequel.
Summary: 
A Breaking Dawn alternative story. Edward and Bella marry and go on a very romantic honeymoon. Complications interrupt and they return to Forks. Decisions must be made and the family has to move quickly. This story is an A/U from BD. There is no pregnancy and no more love triangle. It is about how Edward and Bella were meant to be together and then must stand together against all odds.
Canon Pairings. Lots of romantic lemons. AU because some story lines from Breaking Dawn were completely abandoned in place of ones that I like better! Rated NC-17 for the lemons and for possible future violence and occasional language when the characters get really stressed out and stuff!
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193651
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: February 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Nightmares
Good chapter! I’m looking forward to read your version of Breaking Down. There were some things from the original story that I wanted to be different too. Author's Response: Hey mari! Great to see that you are reading! Thank you! I hope you like it! And for Heaven's Sake, keep the reviews coming! I have goals to meet, or Edward is going to punish us all! LOL TTYL... and I'll see you in the Forums too!
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: February 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Purchases and Preparation
Great chapter! I enjoyed the fact that Bella’s shopping experience was pleasant. I loved the gift choice and Bella’s picture. I must say that I’m a little intrigued about the old pictures in the locket. I bet that there’s a secret behind those pictures. Author's Response: oh, you're right! There IS a secret! I'll never tell...
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: February 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Gifts
This chapter was full of fluff. I loved it! I’m a hopelessly romantic. The inscriptions on the lockets were beautiful. It was a lovely touch that they wrote the same message, confirming that they’re truly soulmates. Also love how adorable and charming is your Edward. He seems more passionate and relaxed around Bella. Author's Response: Awwww, thanks Mari! I'm glad you like my Edward so far. If you like him now, wait until you meet European Edward. He made Lillie and me both fall in love with Edward all over again!
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: February 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Last Day
Another great chapter! It was utterly beautiful. I loved Edward’s conversation with Charlie; the way they talked so openhearted was fascinating. I was glad to see Bella being proactive asking Alice for advice, but my favorite part was Edward’s sweet words: “I will stand there and wait for you for all eternity until I turn to dust and blow away." You did an awesome job with this chapter! Author's Response: Awwww...thank you. I'm so glad you liked the way this chapter went! I really thought that this was the way a young man from 1918 would have asked for his girl's hand, so I'm glad you enjoyed the conversation between Edward and Charlie.
Thanks again, love!
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: February 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Wedding
Lovely chapter! The wedding was simply remarkable, fairy tale style. Everything was perfect and romantic. It was a pleasure to see both families sharing Bella and Edward’s happiness. I can’t wait to read the honeymoon chapter. Author's Response: Thanks, mari! I'm so glad you liked my version of the wedding. I hope you like the honeymoon. Things get a bit more... NC-17 from here on out. LOL
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: March 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - First Night
Wow! You outdid yourself with this chapter. It’s the perfect and idealistic honeymoon I wanted for them in BD. I love that you took the time to walk us through their body explorations and emotions, something that was missed in the original story. It was fascinating! This chapter encloses the ideal combination of romance, lust, passion and love. It’s my favorite so far! I want to add that Edward blew my mind in this chapter. Starting with the wedding gift Chateu de Bella, he was so sweet and thoughtful. Then followed by the entire romantic bedroom setting with the fireplace, candles, music and a balcony with a fantastic view to the Mediterranean ocean. Finally, to complete the breath taking fantasy, he showed to be very skilful in the arts to thoroughly please a woman, a big accomplishment for an inexperience man. *swoon* Author's Response: Thanks so much mari! I'm glad that you didn't think the first night together was "too much". It was something I felt passionate about writing because I wanted so much to know what Bella and Edward were feeling their first time.
As far as Edward, well, that's European Edward for you. My Edward actually put some time and attention into planning their honeymoon. He did not take her off to a deserted island where she had no place to go if she got scared, for example. He also wanted a place for them to have later, and the chateau seemed like a logical choice. Edward also got some advice from his sister Alice about making the place romantic and comfortable for Bella. Of course, the view of the ocean didn't hurt anything either. He also did some "research" in the "arts" of pleasure. Edward likes to read. lol He's also seen a LOT in his mind that he would NEVER confess to seeing, but hey, whatever helps, right?
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: March 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Honeymoon BPOV
Awww, I loved this chapter so much! European Edward ROCKS! He’s so romantic and full of breathtaking surprises. I like your writing style and how you’re portraying the characters. I love so much your version of BD! It was a pleasure to see them enjoying themselves without inhibitions, only pure love and desire. I hated Jacob’s guts, calling them during the honeymoon. He’s insane! The house is so beautiful and surreal. I’m sad they didn’t have the chance to enjoy more time in there. I’m intrigued and looking forward to know the reasons for Edward’s sudden change. P.S. Sorry it took me so long to come back and review your awesome chapters, but I had a rough week in RL. Let’s see how many chapters I can read today. I’m so behind! Author's Response: Hi Mari! I'm sorry that RL has been rough on you this week! Maybe you can spend the day in fantasy land with European Edward and that will make it all better! I've been traveling for work this week, so, alas, I haven't had enough time to spend with my beloved Edward either! Thanks so much for reviewing, love! I look forward to hearing from you some more today! And try to have a better week this week! :) Much love, Julie
Reviewer: mari cullen Signed
Date: March 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Flight
Great chapter! I’m so glad that finally Bella stood up and fight for her rights in their relationship. Edward can be sometimes selfish and overprotective. I was surprised with Bella’s suddenly maturity and assertiveness, her lecture about marriage was perfect. Also loved this line: "Now, Edward, please apologize to me for saying that you do not deserve to live. Saying that to me is like saying that I don't deserve to have you, and I question that enough already without you saying things like that." I hated Edward’s self-pitying in this chapter, but thankfully Bella brought him back to his senses. I understand that he thinks his primary responsibility is Bella’s safety, but now they’re a couple and he needs to include her in the decision making process. I’m looking forward to read about the cottage in Paris. I bet their time in there is going to be fascinating and romantic! Author's Response: I was so tired of whiny Bella and Edward walking all over her. I wanted to see their relationship grow into a true marriage in BD but it never came. I hope that I can develop them into adults over the course of this story.
Edward is, as always, angsty, but Bella is desperately trying to break him of that. Although she will never fully get the job done, I fear, he will come a long ways in the next few chapters! I can't wait to hear what you have to say about Paris!
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