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Penname: Kirbs [ Contact]
Real name: Kirsty
Status: Member
Member Since: December 29, 2008
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Beta-reader: Yes
29 year old from England, only recently discovered the Twilight world, but am hooked.
I don't actually write fics, but will gladly be a beta reader!
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Summary: It's been three years since the day Edward left Bella in the woods...she is moving on but is still plagued by nightmares from time to time. Will someone from her past help her get through her difficult times? What danger lies ahead for her? Will her dreams eventually come true? Please read and review!
Dream sequences based on the hit song by Heart.
Thanks to the fabulous Mrs.C for the banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 70891
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: February 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Oh goody, all is well in Jalice world, cant wait for more, looking forward to Edward running himself ragged for Bella.
Summary: Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed 
Date: June 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Still here, great to see a new chapter, and wow - what a chapter. Will Edward and Bella be a bit more open about their feelings? How long will it take Alice to work out something is up? can't wait for more.
Summary: Set during New Moon. Bella didn't jump. But a vision from Alice sends the Cullens running back to Forks. What if Bella wasn't the only one who fell apart when she lost the love of her life? What if Edward couldn't handle being apart? What if he fell? How far could he fall? Who committed the murders at the Swan residence and what happened to Charlie? Just how bad can it get?
Read and find out!
Thanks to the amazingly talented Anne Cullen for the Banner.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Kim, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 77631
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2008 Updated: March 03, 2010
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Battle
That was gruesome but awesome, and i loved it (blood and all). An amazingly written fight scene - that was fast paced, highly descriptive and tense. Well done.
Glad that Charlie was able to still be Charlie, and that there is still some hope for Bella that she hasn't lost him completely.
Can't wait for the next update. Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad that the blood I gave the newborns didn't make people mad at me :)
Thanks too for taking the time out to review, I do appreciate that.
Summary: Edward seeks out the counsel of his father and brothers after agreeing to be with Bella after their wedding. What will Edward do with that advise and how will he and Bella prepare for their upcoming wedding night.
Thanks to Anne Cullen for this beautiful banner.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes
Word count: 132792
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2008 Updated: March 17, 2010
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: March 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
I have just started / finished this story and i have loved it, this is a rare fic in that it stayed so true to the books. Look forward to the outtakes, and hope you write more in the future.
Summary: Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
squee - how cool. So the little man is "gifted" too huh! Love it, can't wait for more. especially to see Alice, will she arrive with half of toys r us in tow?
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I don't leave many reviews, but this has brought a few tears to my eyes, so just had to congratulate you on a wonderful chapter.
The families interactions with Chris are lovely, and i can't wait for more
Beautiful pictures too.
Summary: It took them thirty years to be together again. Now they just have to live happily ever after, right?
Right. When the love your life is a god who holds grudges like no one you've ever met and is eyeballs deep in mythological intrigue, a fairytale ending is just a little bit difficult to reach.
This is a multi-chapter sequel to Aengus. I think this will make more sense if you've read that story first.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 81810
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2010
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: March 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I have just discovered this story (where have i been)? I love it, and am seriously loving all the mythology. I love the dynamic between Renee and Esme - this is the only fic i have discovered where these 2 characters are explored.
Will Bella's amazingly perceptive family pick up on any of the other world? Cant wait for more of this fantasic fic. Author's Response: Glad to have you on board! I've often felt like Renee and Esme are given too little attention in fics, so I'm trying to give them their due in this story.
Who knows! Mayber her lovely and perceptive relatives will pick up on the strangeness. :D
Thank you muchly for taking the time to read and to review!
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: June 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Hey, good to see another chapter and to have a nice fluffy humerous interlude after the drama of last chapter. I love how Alice and Edward instantly click and the teasing and hilarity that ensued. And Renee nearly remembered Bella's "special friend".
And seriously - how can you only have 68 reviews - i love this storey with all the complexity. Know that i cannot wait for each update and seriously love these characters you have created.
Summary: Bella Swan is now a teacher at Forks High school. She's been gone for six years, and now she's back. What old and new friends will she find? What happens when she is reunited with an old crush? A realistic look of life, love, and the pursuit of happiness. Is true love only found in fairytales? Find out! Special thanks to Manyafandom for the Banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No
Word count: 216661
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2008 Updated: September 19, 2009
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: August 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Thick and Thin
Yay, good to see you back. Great update - lots revealed here & once again some quality, heartfelt and inspiring communication between our 2 favourite people!. can't wait for more
Summary: 
Edward and the gang are college age and heading to Key West for summer jobs. Excitement, laughs and romance abound. Rated NC-17 for adult situations/lemonade. AH, some OOC moments, canon pairing. Give it a chance and enjoy!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No
Word count: 122278
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2008 Updated: March 13, 2010
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Great fun, love Bella's revenge! can just imagine Emmett's gaping fish impression! Can't wait for more.
Summary: When 23 year old Alice loses her husband, she thinks her life too has come to an end. So when the mysterious and sometimes infuriating Jasper Hale enters her life, will she push him away like she has so many others or will she be able to love again? OOC/AH
Tremendous thankyou to not_done_baking for the amazing banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Word count: 71845
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2008 Updated: September 19, 2009
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Stay With Me
Beautiful chapter, made me cry - so well done!!. x
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: July 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
So great to see you back, and wow - what an update. That was so worth the wait, everything you give us is as hot as all hell, even the teeth - we need more of that!! Can't wait for more.
Summary: Edward couldn't bear to watch his beloved Bella being torn apart from the inside by his baby… so how might things have turned out for our favourite couple if he had taken the steps to ensure Bella’s survival, rather than let his spawn kill her. Very dark, Angsty little 'what if' story.
A HUGE thankyou to Emerald-Rosalie for the amazing banner. I love it!
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 85602
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2009
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: June 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Endure
Amazing chapter. Glad Jasper saved the day (i love Jazzy, so am loving the fact that he is going to be centre stage {almost} for a while)!.
But, can he really be there 24/7? I take it steroids that they give a human baby to develop lungs and so on isn't an option?
Love this fic, it is so heart warming and heart wrenching, i love and can't wait for every update.
Summary: Edward is a lonely vampire who has been waiting for over eighty years to find his soul mate. His sister Alice has never been able to see his true love, but for good reason--she hadn't been born yet. When Alice finally sees her, plans are made to finally make Edward's dream come true.
This is a different version of Twilight, and it's told from Edward's point of view.
A little lemony, but not too graphic. Rated NC-17 for mature themes and language, and possibly for violence in later chapters.
Thanks to Evilangel6714 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 157222
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: February 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Glimpses
That was sweet, yet quite steamy, i love it. I love this more happy go with the flow Edward. Cant wait for more, sounds like you already have lots of chapters in the bag. Hang in there with the new BETA, sure the chapters will be whizzing back to you in no time.
Summary: 
Bella is an aspiring writer, who doesn't have time to date. In an act of desperation, Bella tells her mom, she has a boyfriend. Now Bella must hire a boyfriend for the holidays. Will Bella find that she likes her pretend world better than her reality?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 64982
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2009 Updated: February 25, 2010
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: June 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- It's Over-
That was probably the only way they coukd come clean without looking really silly to their families. I don't suppose anyone would easily be able to understand what lead these 2 to such strange decisions.
Can't wait for more to see how this progresses once they get back home
lovely storey. x
Summary: 
Edward reveals a secret from his human time which leaves Bella shocked and wondering just how well she knows the man she is about to marry.
This is very much an Edward and Bella love story.
Thank you angel-gidget for the banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 256624
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: December 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Edward's Epilogue Part 2
Wow, this was amazing and i loved it. It has taken me 4 days to read from start to finish, although was so tempted to call in sick at work so i could continue reading.
I dare say everyone asks - but will there be more? can't wait to find out
Summary:  
Alice and Jasper awake in the same hospital, scarred, broken, and searching for meaning. She gives him peace; he gives her joy. They are each other's hope.
AH/AU/OOC. Rated for graphic descriptions of wounds, language, and eventual sexual content.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges: Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 151997
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2009 Updated: January 20, 2010
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Waging War
That was amazing, haunting and truly truly beautiful. well done I simply cannot wait for more (well maybe a few days whilst i digest this fully and replace my now empty box of tissues)... lol
Where is 11 on the rating tool at the bottom???
Summary:
Alice Cullen has been having visions involving her brother, Edward, and his soul mate for the last five years and yet he refuses to believe her. Her last vision brings the Cullen's to Forks, Washington and Alice knows that the girl in her vision is there.
Bella Swan has been plagued with strange dreams and nightmares for the last five years, causing her to develop a small case of insomnia. She has grown tired of her friends and her boyfriend. She views her life as boring. Then the Cullen's arrive.
Edward wants Bella more than life itself. At first it was just her blood but now it is so much more. He knows he should leave but his family won't allow it. He wants to believe Alice when she tells him he won't hurt Bella, but the monster inside him says differently.
A HUGE thanks to psvtiger for the banner...You're freaking amazing and I mean it when I say that I'm your biggest fan for life, girl!! :HUGS:
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 108753
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2009
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: February 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
When will Edward realise you cannot fight fate?. Love this story, and the struggle from Edward's perspective. Am also loving the new Rosalie - you go girl. All the other Cullen's are as we know and love them.
Cant wait for more, where hopefully Edward decides to sweep Bella off her feet? here hoping........ Author's Response: Edward is just so silly! I had to make him this way because, well, where would the fun be if he just jumped on ship? :D lol...Besides, I like all the Alice and Edward interactions...she's my favorite evil pixie ;) lol
I had to make Rosalie more accepting because she really isn't in most stories. I thought it was time for a bit of a change. She's a biotch, no doubt, but not so much to my Bella ;)
I promise you that you won't have to wait forever for Edward to cave....I just won't tell you when ;) (evil laugh)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Summary: What if Bella hadn't moved her junior year with her father. Instead she moved with her mother to Florida. Upon visting her father before leaving for college she encounters two members of the Cullen Family. Alice's vision tells her that Bella would change their lives forever.
Edward's first encounter with Bella is 30,000 feet in the air on the way to Darthmouth. With no means of escape will he be able to resist the temptation of her blood? Or will he bring the whole plane down for a taste?
~Edward's POV: Chapter 2
I closed my eyes to listen to the tones of voices around me. I heard at least one hundred passengers. It would be a massacre. Could I really justify destroying all the lives of everyone on this plane just to taste her blood?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 71150
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2009 Updated: May 15, 2010
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: February 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Another
Edward IS the help she needs, great fic, am loving it so far. and fear it won't be long at all before we see James again! Author's Response: Yes Edward is what she needs but she also needs...something else. You'll see. Thank you and yes we'll see James again but it will be a while before that happens. But I will tell you this the wolves will be paying a visit.
erica
Summary: Slash: Edward is an unabashed pleasure-seeker, one of the club kings of the Seattle gay community. One night at his favorite club, he meets an enigmatic man who rocks the world he has created.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 168349
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: May 11, 2010
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Trojan Horse
oh, give the man a hug. I hope that this meeting goes well - Edward needs the acceptance and love of his dad to give him the push to get Jasper back where he belongs. great chapter. can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - According to Carlisle
yep, one of those lurkers. just wanted to say that this chapter was truly beautiful, and i am typing with tears rolling down my face. Everybody deserves love like Edward wants, and i hope his journey there gives him peace after 10 lonely years. God bless Carlisle & Esme - amazing chapter. can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: July 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Visitors Expected and Unexpected
Beautiful chapter, Edward has come such a long way. Love this story and how completely transfixed i am by every word.
Summary: 
Bella is devastated by the loss of her mother and is forced to go live with Charlie, her Mom's best friend, when there is no one else to take her in. She gives up on living, too lost in her own anger to let anyone close to her. Enter Edward, the handsome teenage vampire, and the beginning of a complicated love-hate relationship. Neither can deny the connection between them, but can their love survive the fear that rules her and the secret he hides from her? AU and OOC, Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 292396
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: May 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Connection
ow wow, that was amazing! so loving, devoted, sensuous and intimate.. i could go on but you get the idea. Can't wait for more of Edwards 'convincing' plans. Author's Response: Thank you :o) You can go on LOL. I love reading how it all affects people! Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: March 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Metamorphosis
love the snarky banter, can't wait for more & to see what lengths edward will go to to prove himself to bella. Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing their banter. Edward is very determined to show Bella his loyalty, trustworthiness and love. Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: Kirbs Signed
Date: May 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Indulgence
Great lemony chapter, great suspensful ending, can't wait to see how Bella reacts - will Edward get to tell her, or will she run screaming? This Bella seems slightly less observant than in the books - or is that all part of your plan? Author's Response: Actually this Bella is more or less the same amount of observant as canon Bella. I think the difference in her comes from two things - she doesn't question things like canon Bella. She just accepts them. She doesn't like to feel judged so she she tries not to judge other people. It's not that she doesn't have her own set of theories on things, but she sees the big picture better in regard to what is important and what isn't. The little details don't get to her. And secondly, she spends a lot of her time blocking things out. It's all a part of her coping mechanism. For instance, Edward showed her his speed a few chapters ago. She noticed it, realized it had something to do with the secret, and refused to acknowledge it further.
Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter and that you're looking forward to Bella's reaction. The reveal will take me several chapters to complete. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the comment!
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