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Penname: sapphire_light [Contact]
Real name: knykia callender
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Member Since: October 23, 2009
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Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: September 4 - December 23, 2008

um, can you please come back???

 
Dying By Degrees by Reamhar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 664]
Summary:

Banner for Dying By Degrees

 

What if Bella’s thoughts on the plane flying back to Seattle from Italy take her in a different direction from the plot in New Moon? Just where could a little twist of fate take the characters? An indepth look at Bella's thoughts and feeling at the end of New Moon and into an AU Eclipse.

Canon couples, and rated NC17 just to be safe. I am Bella and Edward all the way, so if you like Bella and Jacob, then I am afraid this is not the story for you.

Dying By Degrees on discussion forum.  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=19&t=9136

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 106997
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2010


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

whoo hoo. thank you for the update and the mending. i love all of the relationships and i love how they've all encorporated bella into their family, and how she is accepting them.  i feel like "ha ha friggin lauren, hows that feel you shallow good for nothing such and such" :)

 
Transformation by LeJisemika Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

I was not a big fan of the transformation of Bella, so here's another cute and short alternative to the one Stephanie Meyer gave us. It's involves the newly married couple and the Cullens in Alaska, and Bella prepping, going through, and shortly after the transformation.


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 9719
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2009 Updated: March 11, 2010


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Hunting and Scars

why??

 
Everchanging Destiny by Ameroo Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 136]
Summary:

What if Breaking Dawn was only a dream? 

Edward and Bella continue their relationship as vamp and human.  They still plan on marrying but as always there are many obstacles in their way.  Will they make it to the alter or will the new trio of college vampires stand in there way?

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 109539
[Report This] Published: March 06, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2012


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 (shabby)

*suffering withdrawal symptoms*

 
Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 (shabby)

yeah so, still suffering withdrawal sypmtoms. please please please update soon!!!

 
Elysium by gothicfictionfan Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 608]
Summary:

This story begins almost six years after Bella became a vampire. Renesmee is almost an adult and has begun to attend an all-girls private school while the rest of her family begins classes at the nearby public school. She is unaware of Jacob's past feelings for her mother. On the first day of class, Edward and Bella encounter an unusual individual who begins to suspect something is wrong with the mysterious Cullen family. The story has shifting point-of-view.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 92540
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: August 13, 2010


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Flux - Renesmee

wow...what a cliff hanger....

 
Broken Dawn by thejamster Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

What if Bella had an epiphany before the newborn army came to Forks and decided to take matters into her own hands?  What will protecting her family cost?  This story begins during Eclipse and chronicles a very different ending to a phenomenal saga.

Broken Dawn


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1805
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2009


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Epiphany

please continue. i'm already looking forward to more. :)

 
Summary:

A few weeks before Bella and Edward's wedding, something terrible happens in the state of Washington.  Can the Cullens protect Bella and her father from the living dead?

Rated NC-17 for Graphic violence and language.

Carlisle, zombies


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 54019
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: June 11, 2011


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

um ok wow. please keep it coming and btw this is a really excellent idea

 
Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

i was all like, whoo hoo an update (which i am happy for btw) but poor bella. i think it was awesome the way rosalie let her "cope" if you will and i think being able to touch a wolf really did help her, even a little...and poor sue. to feel it eating away at her. is she even more sensitive that charlie to it i wonder because of her heritage? and then poor seth he's going to have to face that, too. i really hope what ever sue decides to do doesn't put the humans in danger. what do you mean  by "big things?"

 
Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: July 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

whoa... i thought they were safe and clear and...just whoa. i'm glad rose is back to herself, but jeesh they just can't seem to catch a break. i mean sue did decide not become zombie last chapter, but i didn't think it would play out like that. and now emmet and ang are...what?

 
Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

umm, are they all going to be ok?

 
Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

ok wait, so rose is werevamp and sue and charlie uh...were "together" and now they're both infected?  wow. that's just...wow.  this was short :( but it was a catcher :) so i forgive you. i think...lol keep it coming



Author's Response:

I apologize for the shortness of the chapter.  The next one will be longer, I promise.

 
Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

not going to rip you apart, not all the way anyway cause i need you to keep this story going.  that being said *clears throat* WHAT THE FREAK?!?!? charle's dead and bella, poor bella and what the freak??

 
Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

well, i certainly didn't see that coming. but i for seth's sake i'm glad emmett didn't kill her, per se. i wonder how/when they actually will change bella. and is the east coast going to be a safe place for them? and will they make it without anymore mishaps?

 
Beautifully Broken by TheVolvo Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

A secret wedding, a broken treaty, a looming threat,
and an unforeseen tragedy.

Bella never realized just how hard
her life would become.

“Edward,” I cry. The sound is lighter than a whisper, hoarse, dry. As if I’m combusting, burning like paper from the inside out. But there’s still a hand there to accept me. To try and sooth me. It’s so hot now that his cool touch can’t help. He feels warm. It feels wrong.

I writhe away from him. I hear a sob, and issue one in return.

Hell. I’m in Hell? I didn’t remember dying.

Unless I died of love. The reverse of a broken heart. I had too much, so it was taken away. That would make sense. I wouldn’t even be angry. I would understand. I would understand, because it wasn’t fair. I was too blessed.
It only fit that I be punished.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 14541
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2009


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Inexorable

umm...more please

 
Summary:

As Edward and Bella celebrate their 100th anniversary, Bella looks back over everything that she, the Cullens, the wolves, and the vampire world have been through.  A Finalist in the TwiCon Fan Fiction Contest.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, TWICON 2009 FINALISTS Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Maggie, Marcus, Renesmee, Rosalie, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3005
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2009 Updated: August 16, 2009


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Our Forever

that was great

 
Summary: Edward returns to Forks with Bella after she saves him in Volterra. However, he is not pleased with the family vote to change her and leaves again immediately. This time Rosalie leaves with him because Emmett agrees that Bella should be changed. Their friendship will evolve from their mutual pain. But what will happen when their mates return?
Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 6655
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2009 Updated: September 02, 2009


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Dorothy and Toto

dorothy and toto. nicely named...

 
The Deluded by FantasyMother Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 648]
Summary:

Edward lowered his eyes to his lap, obviously uncomfortable with my question.  But there was nothing odd about it.  It shouldn't cause tension, or reveal hidden secrets, or cause the amount of angst currently contorting his features.

I had simply asked him why he lived in the woods.

He grabbed a grape off the table, popped it in his mouth, and raised his head while he slowly chewed  - scanning the trees ringing my office, as if he was searching for an answer to give me.  I could see a faint blush to his cheek, and a hint of unshed tears in his crystalline green eyes.  I could almost hear his heartbeat pick up speed as he finally turned to me.  Closing his eyes for a moment he took a deep breath, willing himself to calm.  Then his eyes snapped to my face and with renewed determination took another deep breath.

"Bella, I live there because I'm a vampire."


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 119614
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Richard Cory

you just concern yourself with healing. finish at your own pace. i hope the surgery has the desired results for you



Author's Response:

Thank you and, me too!  It was a shock about 6 weeks ago, to find I couldn't focus when reading...

 
Summary:

Amazing banner by Anne Cullen - thank you so much Anne!

After the first disastrous camping trip Bella and the Cullens are ready to put it behind them and move toward the upcoming wedding, until Charlie's 'thank you' present sends the household back into a panic - and back to the woods. Uh oh.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 76970
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2009 Updated: March 07, 2011


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

yay!! more please

 
Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

whoo hoo!!  loving this story

 
Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

aww, they are so cute! i think your emmet and rose balance each other perfectly, and i love how protective and attentive edward is toward bella

 
Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

who would've known emmet was such an animal lover :) love the family dynamic. and glad e/b got at least one moment together.

 
Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

well, at least emmett's creative. now that they're alone, if you will, i'm almost afraid of what rosalie will say to him. but, self aware rosalie  with a feral cat in her perfect hair was pretty awesome. :)

 
Tangled Web by m7707 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 643]
Summary:

 

Edward, Jacob, Demetri, and Felix are members of the Volturi Elite Guard. Their team tracks beings that have either violated the Volturi Code Of Silence or have knowledge of the existence of mythical beings. When the team is assigned to investigate the human Isabella Swan, Edward's unalterable world is altered.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 110683
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: January 26, 2010


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Evil Counsellor

absolutely wonderful!



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know you liked it!

 
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?

 

What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?

 

This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.

 

All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.

 

Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.

 

And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.

 

I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.

 

I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!

 

Maria

twilight gypsy

 

  


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: sapphire_light Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Love Has Brought Me Around

ya, so no i didn't see that coming. of course bella would be allergic to vamire venom. lol. wow. i'm glad she wasnt allergic to alice's--i can't imagine what would have happened if jasper had been the one to have to do that. not out of the woods yet? as if i wasnt already curious to see how the change affects her now i'm curious about the actual transformation itself, so bring it on. =-) oh, on a side note, i've never heard the ending to "there once was a man from nantuckett," either...(hint, hint)



Author's Response:

hope I didn't gross you out with that limrick! haha

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Yeah, only Bella would be allergic to vampire venom, right? my daugher has an anaphylaxis allergy to peanuts, so I know alot about that particular allergy!

Maria

 




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