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Penname: BeautifulComplication [ Contact]
Real name: Heidi
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Member Since: October 17, 2009
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Summary: 
AU Post-New Moon.
Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?
Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.
Bella Swan is slipping under...
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: A Meeting
An absolutely wonderful story.. even though I hate having E/B be apart.. I love how Bella is being very grown up about this.. she is, after all, an adult. Fantastic writing.. and anxiously awaiting the next chapter.. I don't want it to end!!
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: July 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: A Beginning
I just finished reading your story and I must say.. thank you so much for writing it and finishing it! I know it took you quite a while.. but I truly loved reading it as you wrote. Thanks again!
Summary:  Seven years have passed since Edward and Bella last saw each other. They grew up as children and even became good friends. Once they entered high school, Edward became distant and eventually severed all ties with her. Confused and hurt, Bella moved on with her life in Seattle.Through it all, Bella had her older brother Emmett to get past the estrangement. Now, with Edward's imminent return to Seattle to help out with his sister Alice's wedding, Bella can't help wondering what drove away her brother's best friend all those years ago.

Nominated for Best Novel-Incomplete at the Eddie and Bellie Awards.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 247400
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2010
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: March 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue: Every Time
WOW.. amazing story!! I absolutely loved it! You did such a great job with everything and I love the playlists. I don't know what else to say except I can't wait to read it again! Very well written. Again, great job and I hope all is going well for you in RL. :-)
Summary: Edward is no stranger to new towns and new schools. In his seventeen years, he's been dragged all across the country by his parents, Peter and Liz Masen. With no siblings, no real friends, and no place to truly call "home," Edward gets used to living life as a solitary teenager--until he moves to Washington. There he meets the Cullens and their friends—a beautiful, brilliant group of people who are both rejected and revered by their classmates. Edward reluctantly finds himself growing to like these people more and more...and finds himself having friends and, for the first time, feeling like he belongs. But just when everything settles down, his world is torn apart by a long-kept secret and an ongoing betrayal that will leave him questioning everything he's ever known.
Drama/Humor/Mystery/Angst-lite Rated R/M (for language and sexual innduendo)
This is not an Edward/Emmett slash story however, there is a lot of Edward & Emmett togetherness.

If you like Legacy, check out Legacy: Extra's & Outtakes for an extra Legacy fix.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 218730
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2010
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: September 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Panic
you are a sneaky little one.. I did recognize the Twi-cast.. were Peter and Liz Masen named after cast as well?
Summary: 
If you loved someone, how much would you be willing to sacrifice? Bella makes the most difficult decision of her life; now she has to live with the consequences. A Bella/Edward story.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 68203
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2009 Updated: November 24, 2009
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: July 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Story of a Life
Your story was just beautiful. You had me crying several times. I don't know what else to say but thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I truly loved reading it. :-)
Summary: After twenty blissful years of marriage and happiness as a vampire, Bella and the rest of the Cullens embark on yet another college experience-Yale will most certainly, never be the same. A dark figure from Bella's past pops up-suddenly human, throwing the Cullens for a loop. As they struggle to keep their secret, Bella's past becomes fixated on her, desperate to claim her. How can they protect themselves when the enemy is human?

Twilighted Supervisory Beta: qjmom
Twilighted Validation Beta: Anne
A special thanks to Porche911turbo for the banner =]
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 63993
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2009 Updated: July 30, 2010
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: March 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: One. As Thick as Thieves [Edward]
Amazing story! So glad to see you update again! I am lingering between Esme and Rosalie.. I kind of really think it's Rosalie. Anyways, so well written, and as heartbreaking as it is to read, very well done on Edward's POV. I really hope you can get your computer situation resolved.. and hope everything else in RL is going well for you. Can't wait to finish the story!
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: May 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Twenty-Eight. Heartbreak Warfare [Edward]
I just wanted to let you know that I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and as much as I dislike the long gaps in updates, I understand that RL happens. I hope you get better and that everything else is going well for you. I am very much looking forward to the end of the story and I hope Edward can forgive Bella. Thank you for writing this story!
Summary:  
*Takes place during New Moon in an alternate universe.
On March 16, 2006, the World changed, and everything and anything that the Cullens ever cared about was lost. They had to find their own way in this New World. Edward never wished to exist in a world where Bella didn't. Unfortunately, his family desperately needed him, so he'd stay to help them. And by doing so, he hoped to redeem himself for his failure to save the one creature he couldn't protect.
With rumours in the South of humans feeding off the living and stealing people from their beds, the Cullens have a responsibility to protect the ones they can from those monsters in the night. This was Edward's last chance to fight for his soul and his salvation. He would finally be ready to face Judgement day and be deemed worthy enough to be with Bella once again. Or would something or someone change the path he was destined to go down? Faith, hope and love are powerful things, and Edward is about to find out just how powerful they are.
Yes... this is the story that is set during a post-apocalyptic nuclear war. Just try the Prologue to get a feel for it before passing judgment. You might be surprised. Warning: There is violence and disturbing images the further the story goes along.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes
Word count: 315697
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2012
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: October 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Enough is Enough
omg!!! wow.. I don't know what to say.. Glad you were able to update again.. I have loved this story!
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: August 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
wow.. that was pretty powerful.. I especially enjoyed the end of the last paragraph. I took me till he mentioned his "172 years on this earth" before I realised I was reading Jasper's POV. Well, on with the story....
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: August 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: To Travel Hopefully is a Better Thing Than to Arrive
omg.. Emmett on the radio is freaking hilarious!! love it!
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: August 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Fools Rush in Where Angels Fear to Tread
So much emotion.. I loved Alice's little alternate world in her mind.. I am so loving this story.. I just hope you finish it quickly so I won't have to wait so long. :)
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: August 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: To Understand All is to Forgive All
OMG!! Ok, I knew Bella was still in the picture.. But that was intense! I feel bad for Edward.. I hope everything gets resolved soon.. next chapter....
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: August 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Laugh and the World Laughs With You; Weep and You Weep Alone
omg.. you really left me hangin there.. gah!! I know.. you've got more coming.. when you've finished. So hurry up! I can't wait for much longer!! :-) Absolutely loving it so far! Author's Response: THank you so much for taking a chance and reading this!
Man... I can't believe how long I've been writing this sucker. I'm hoping to have a new chapter up tonight. I'd say I was sorry for not being able to post quicker, but I suppose it is what it is! Phew... so many words. I wish I wasn't such a wordy MF, but unfortunately I am! hahahaha!
Thank you for reading! I hope I don't disappoint with how I round it out.
OCD
Summary:
“It’s all real. They did this, but I’m still here. Always, Bella. Find me.”
Those cryptic words, whispered in a last breath, continue to haunt Bella Swan five years after the supposed death of her love, Edward Masen.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 95630
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2009 Updated: November 08, 2010
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: March 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Lost Time
I just had to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed this story! It is not easy to write such a complicated story with all the twists and turns and keep it from being overly confusing. That is definitely something I will never be able to do.. but you did a great job. Thank you for sharing your story with us and hope things are going quite well for you. :-)
Summary: 
Bella is left in a world of darkness after Edward leaves her. But just when things start to look bright again, weird things begin to happen. She wonders who could be the cause, knowing only one person could-Edward. But why after he promised to leave forever? An AU version of New Moon starting during her "blank page" period.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Word count: 73511
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2010
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: March 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Nothing to Lose
An amazing AU story.. love it! I hope you are able to finish it and that everything in RL is going well for you. Again, well done!!
Summary:  Make your own banner at MyBannerMaker.com!

Awesome banner by cheryy09
Single mom Bella is frustrated with how her life has turned out. She finally gets the nerve to quit her job and open her own restaurant, taking with her some of her insane boss's best employees.
Can she deal with the stress? What about her noisy upstairs neighbor?
As she struggles to be successful, raise her daughter, and deal with the pressures of daily life, can she finally find happiness and love for herself?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, James, Laurent, Mike, Nessie, Phil, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 110605
[Report This] Published: April 23, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: October 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue Just Desserts
Wow.. that was one amazing story.. and the recipes? I haven't tried any yet, but I'm definitely writing them down. I have so enjoyed reading this story.. one of the best AU's I've read. I'm so sad that it's over now.. Thank you for sharing with us! :-) Author's Response: I'm so glad you've enjoyed reading Tapas. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I hope you like the recipes!
Summary: 
THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HIATUS. At least until september-october 2010. I am getting married in august and it's hard to plan a wedding and write at the same time. I applaud those who can do that. I am NOT giving up on this story and I WILL finish it. Eventually. Thanks for understanding.
After Edward left in New Moon, Bella changed. She changed everything about herself in hopes of forgetting him. She graduated and moved down to California. The one place she knew she would never see the Cullens. 4 years later, she is now known as Elle Swan, a successful interior designer. What happens when she is sent somewhere else for her job?
Thank you to heatherdawnc for the banner!
Favorite review so far:
Ahh... so good!! A perfect mix with fluff and reality, you're soo good at writing that I gets envious *envious sigh*.
Have I told you how good this story and idea really is. There are many different stories where Bella changes her personality drastically after Edward left. And of all those stories I have been reading I think you are the one that has captured Bella's personalty best. Many of the stories have changed Bella that much that if she wasn't namned Bella you shouldn't know it was her, but you, even if you see the big changes, you can find the Bella how she was shy, sweet and madly in love with Edward four years ago. With another words - I think you are the one that have captured Bellas character best.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 69614
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: September 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I am totally loving this story so far.. And I was really intrigued by your plot for Bella being an assassin in Twilight. I don't believe I would be able to write anything that would be of use to you.. but I hope you can find or have found someone to assist you in writing that story. Hope your wedding was fabulous! Looking forward to the rest of the story :-)
Summary: 
Bella wants to discover the name of the beautiful stranger she keeps running into at the club every weekend who makes her heart flutter, her mind delirious, and her body sweat on the dance floor. Some characters are OOC.
Warning: This story contains sudden movements such as swaying hips and gyrating butts, as well as tons of sequins and lots of body heat and perspiration. There will be Bachata, Ballet, Ballroom, Capoeira, Disco, the Electric Slide, Foxtrot, Hip-Hop, House, Jitterbug, Jive, Merengue, Poppin' and Lockin', Quickstep, Rumba, Salsa, Samba, Swing, Tango, and Waltz.
All under the hot Miami sun! All from Edward!
Swoon!
Is it too much for you to handle?
If you're too sensitive to the thought of Edward swaying his hips, holding you close, consuming you everywhere...on the dance floor, than this story might not be for you.
You have been warned!
Otherwise...enjoy girls! (And guys...there's action for you, too!)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 35383
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2010
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: March 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Baby Steps
Just wanted to let you know I am loving this story!! Sad that there has not been any recent updates and I can only hope that you will return to the story soon. I am looking forward to reading about how well Edward moves... hehe. Hope things are going well for you.
Summary:  

Bella had the perfect life. She was married to her longtime best friend, had a great job and a beautiful son…until a careless driver stole her happiness.
Edward was fulfilling his dreams. His residency was almost over, he had a gorgeous fiancé, and he was ready to move forward, starting a family…until a devastating break-up and a health scare in his family shake his foundation.
See, sometimes, life doesn’t go the way you want. Sometimes, things can happen that change the course you choose. And most of the time, it takes courage to walk down the new path.
What if that new path started with a tee ball team?
Big thanks to sigh-for-sigh for the banner!!
Play with me on the forum. I now have a thread in the Alternate Human thread.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 116372
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: April 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Epilogue: Life Goes On
Wow.. I just finished this amazing story and I thought I would tell you about it! So well written and I loved the path you took them all on. Great job and thank you for sharing it with us!! Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story tell me you enjoyed it! I can't tell you how it brightens my day.
I'm very happy that you liked it!
Summary: 
Lord Edward is an Honorable Knight on a secret mission, Bella is offered to him as a gift from the Evil Duke Aro.
“Age of Edward” contest entry.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Felix, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 14789
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: March 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Epilogue
Loved it!! I think all punishments were well deserved. Knight Edward.. I'm liking this one. hehe thanks for another great story! Author's Response: LOL...I do wonder how long ARO survived in the dungeon, even WITH food!!!
Thanks for reading, BC!
Kathie
Summary:
After a series of mistakes and heartbreaks, Edward long ago committed himself to a secluded double life - by day a Customer Service Rep at a questionable corporate organization, and by night a God of the Open Mic stage. Coworker Bella is quirky and observant, and her curiosity about Edward may eclipse his need to keep his life private.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, James, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 41646
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2009 Updated: July 03, 2010
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: March 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six - Waiting for the Wind
Just wanted to take a moment to let you know that I am loving your story and I hope you continue it.. but as I am not yet finished.. I shall continue. Thanks for sharing :-)
Summary: 
Edward and his dragon companion, Volterra, believe that Volterra's mate is lost...gone either in death or time.
Bella, a servant in the castle, discovers and makes a connection with Kathea, a long dead dragon.
She is asked to help with Kathea's daughter. She and the young dragon, ShayTan, become Bond-Mates.
Thank you all so much...
DRAGON STONES is the THIRD PLACE WINNER!

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 59844
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2009 Updated: July 07, 2011
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: March 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Alice's POV
I would have reviewed after every chapter.. but I was reading this on my ipod and it wouldn't allow me to stay logged in. So now I'm reviewing on my computer. I truly enjoyed reading your "Guarding Edward" story. Very well written. But then I find this? I absolutely adore fantasy stories such as this! I have loved reading every chapter of this and I can't wait for more! I can only hope that you'll make it as long as Guarding Edward. I always hate when stories end. But I trust you to write a wonderful story and I am looking forward to continuing the rest of this one. Thank you for sharing and I hope things are going well for you. Author's Response: Oh...thank you for this lovely review, BeautifulComplication!
There will be more of this...although I'm pretty sure that it won't go 50 chapters like GE!!!
Kathie
Summary:

Banner compliments of CrimsonIceGoddess - YOU ROCK my dear!
   
It is amazing how quickly life can resume normalcy after a traumatic event. It's not that the inhabitants of the scenario don't know they are rebounding, but the force of the universe pulls them back into its patterns without their consent. Everything will not be the same, but the normal routine is enhanced, flavored by the bittersweet taste of change or loss in any form.
Bella told me she had once envisioned our lives as the complex pattern of a rug, the colors and textures intermingling, each individual but, when placed together, producing a beautiful creation. If challenged, I would have most likely used a musical analogy. I would have compared our lives to experiencing a musical performance by one of the masters.
Beethoven...Bach...or if you wanted a little strife, Wagner. Most at one time or another had performed their masterpieces within European chapels. I could envision the rise and fall of the notes, as they would weave their spell. The light in the building as it filtered through stained glass, creating a dizzying array of colors. The smell from beeswax candles permeating the room. Modern musical halls lacked this perfect simplicity. Yes...this would have been my analogy.
Little was I to know that Fate had much in store for me. Before she was through with me, I would barely resemble the boy I'd been...
What happens to the Cullens after the Volturi left. Edward and Bella begin life together and face both heartbreak after their lives are irrevocably changed by losses of family and friends, and immeasurable joy as the events of their lives unfold.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 80 Completed: Yes
Word count: 388303
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2011
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: September 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 65: Wistful
I do so appreciate you sharing this story with us. It has been absolutely amazing! Thank you so much! This chapter was the perfect ending, especially the quote from Carlisle. Again thank you for sharing it with us!
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: July 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 59: Unanswerable Questions
OME!! What was that?!?!? That was like the cliffhanger of all cliffhangers!!! I expect another update soon!!! You can't leave me hanging!!
On another note.. I have so truly enjoyed reading this story.. I have been reading along since.. I think around chapter 15. Amazing story.. I love reading Edward's POV. So well done.. Can't wait to finish it.. and yet.. a little sad that it is almost over.. Thank you for sharing your story with us!! Author's Response: Hope the following chapters help to eliminate the OMG. :) It was his plan all along. Also - thank you so much for staying with me during the story! I hope it has been fun. Just a few more chapters left.
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication Signed
Date: September 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 66: Beyond
I love it!! Seth and Stefanie.. and Jacob! It's perfect! I have so truly adored this story from the first moment I found it so long ago. Thank you thank you thank you for taking that bet and writing it. It was amazing. Well done! Good luck with all your future writings and such! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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