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Penname: christylou [Contact]
Real name: christy
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Member Since: October 13, 2009
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Hide and Drink by Savage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7576]
Summary:

Now Complete!

Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored.  In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side.  While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor.  EPOV.

Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.

Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.

Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!

Thank you Lace for the Banner!

“There was no other blood like this.  Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp.  But if I stopped now, she would heal.  Her body would make more.  The blood would replenish.  I could drink again.  The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Coax and Confess

UGH!!!!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Beg and Barter

dun dun dun

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Placate and Punish

so where to go? or what to drink?

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Choose and Lose

awww. but she's gotta come back, NO?

 



Author's Response:

Wait and see!  :) Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Desperation and Despair

Hmm.. I was wondering what carlisle IS thinking about all of this. I half hoped that it would be him that would come to him on the island. But this is good.

 



Author's Response:

Did you hear him talking/thinking to Edward? ;)  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Allay and Alarm

Can Edward go home?



Author's Response:

If he starts thinking straight, that might occur to him! ;)

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Give and Take

no, my computer is still upright...  patience is a virtue after all. (cough, hack)

okay- love that he doesn't get her jokes/sarcasm... totally cute. Can't wait for them to get home and the family to see that. :)

 



Author's Response:

LOL!!  Yeah, he really isn't much of a humoprist.  Not on purpose, anyway.

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Realize and Rationalize

but how can he go without her??



Author's Response:

Kicking and screaming?  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Confuse and Amuse

Okay- so maybe he's not totally crazy!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: June 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Burn and Churn

well of course they only planted that idea for Aro's benefit!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: June 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Found and Lost

OHHH this better have a HEA...

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: July 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Regain and Resign

erotic!

 
Mr. Cullen by Jenshu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Edward is a teacher. Bella is his student. Edward is a vampire. Bella is human. What happens when sexual tensions run high? Something will have to give.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1988
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2010


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Day

i like the plot- more please

 
Summary:

Bella wakes up one morning… to a crowd of Edwards.

Warning: A very stupid and pointless attempt at humor. So go ahead at your own risk. Also, beware of some sexual situations, minor violence, and complete insanity.

 


Categories: Crackfic Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 13255
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2010 Updated: March 29, 2010


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

but which Edward is here now?

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

more please!

 
Summary:

Bella is the police chief’s perfect daughter.  Edward is the troubled doctor’s son.  When Bella catches her boyfriend cheating on her, she gives in to impulse and hops on the back of Edward’s motorcycle and travels across the country learning about life, love, and how to change a flat tire.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 29559
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2010 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: To Those I've Left Behind

 I LOVE Carlisle's POV.. the sigh at the end- LOVE it... oh- let them be in on the whole thing... I mean- Bella IS a hazard... I was soo laughing through this... just imaging the whole dad/son conversation... too rich!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Oh My My

too cute! maybe the should get a map?

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Unwritten

Why not  just fess up?  That's what I don't get- "I was more upset about my comforter than the boyfriend loss?" Heck she was thinking that before the walk..



Author's Response:

I'm trying to keep these characters as true to character as possible, and one thing I've found about our two lovebirds is that they're often not the most logical of creatures.  Don't worry though, Bella will tell (and show) Edward that Mike was just a convenience soon enough.  She just needs a moment of irrationality before she grabs the bull by the horns.

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Won't Back Down

what a way to make friends!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Love Game

well.. that's progress.

 
Summary:

Edward doubts his worth, and Bella tries a silly method to cheer him up. Pure fluff. Oneshot.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3840
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2010 Updated: January 20, 2010


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Silly, Little Bear

I love stories like this.. need more of them..

 



Author's Response:

Me too. It's pretty much all I write, so there might be more like this in the future. haha.

 
Summary:

Did you read the Twilight series and wonder what it would be like if SM included more...passion?  Heat?  Lemons of ANY kind?  Ever wanted Bella and Edward to have a steamy meadow scene?  Smexin' in the shiny silver Volvo?  Wished that leg-hitching scene in Eclipse went where you wanted it to?  You're in luck...me, too!  Join me and my wonderfully pervy mind as we go through the books, sprinkling lemon drops along the way. 

AU, OOC, all canon pairings.  Rated for sexual situations and language.

Thank you to Readergoof for the awesome banner!


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 41173
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2010 Updated: November 02, 2010


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I was planning on nagging you in the review- about how their 1st time would NEVER be on a plane, blah blah... and then to see it was a dream!! GOOD one!!!

 



Author's Response:

Haha, the characters will be a bit OOC, it's unavoidable in a story like this.  But, it's actually such a depressing part of the book that the only way I felt I could pull it off was to go the dream route.  I'm so happy you liked it!  *MWAH!*

xoxo Sarah

 
Summary:

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"My life was an unending, unchanging midnight.  It must, by necessity, always be midnight for me.  So how was it possible that the sun was rising now, in the middle of my midnight?"

Many have tried to finish Stephenie Meyer's "Midnight Sun" (Twilight from Edward's point of view) and from what I've seen, none of them truly finished what she started.  This ending to "Midnight Sun" starting at Chapter 13 is not only picking up where she left off, but uncovering the Edward that she created, and blending the perspectives of many to hear the rest of his story. This first book is a unique turning point in the arc of his character.

 


Categories: Twilight Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 81011
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2010 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Confessions - Chapter 15

i really enjoyed the chapter- his pov- except- to be truthful- at times- like during the kiss- his feelings/descriptions of it- seemed cold or emotionless. or least to me.

sorry. otherwise- i liked the rest of it.



Author's Response:

In what way did you think they were cold?  It's hard for me to make something better if I don't understand... or perhaps if I had an example of him showing more emotion in a situation like that?  It is more detailed than those same places in Twilight from Bella's point of view because he notices more, so there's more detail than that, but I also felt a little weird writing those parts and perhaps they aren't done enough.  I've read some EPOV that were much more intense and steamy, but then there's always the balance of where he is at this moment in time.  Hmm...  an example would be great though if you have one for me to look at?   He'll be kissing her again in a few chapters so it would be nice to work on before I post that chapter.

 

Anyway, thanks for the review!  I really do listen to people when they have ideas of how to make it better.  :]

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mind over Matter - Chapter 16

thank you for the update for V day...

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Game - Chapter 19

always love edwards pov!

 




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