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Penname: christylou [Contact]
Real name: christy
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Member Since: October 13, 2009
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Summary:

Not everything makes sense to us at first, but sometimes, the paradoxes in life are exactly what we never knew we needed. When Jasper and Edward and thrown together, into a dorm room no less, who are they to deny the twisted logic of fate?

Life is about to get a whole hell of a lot more interesting.

AH/Slash.

 

Thanks to Blueskyshymoon-olgameisterfunk for the banner, and S.Meadows for the blinkie!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 179659
[Report This] Published: October 03, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2011


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Jasper & the Motherfuckin' Chainsaw

oh get back to school already!



Author's Response:

lol. patience, patience... they're going ...

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Jasper & the Leftovers

you are cruel...



Author's Response:

in the best possible way?

That's what you meant to say, right? ;)

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Edward & the Eyebrow Scar

Glad to see them moving forward. They are a good couple. THe whole one gone to a concert- one person can't hear- very funny. love that stuff.



Author's Response:

lol. Glad you think so. ;) Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Edward & Jasperagon

*Need water now* :)  very thirsty here... :) 



Author's Response:

Now, don't get all dehydrated because of these boys... ;) Glad you liked it. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Jasper & RedRum

I'm totally confused...



Author's Response:

totally? hmm.... that's no good. ;)

 

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Edward & Christopher Reeves

Okay then!!



Author's Response:

*finger snaps* 

 

;) 

 

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Jasper & Betty Crocker

ahh.. cause we all know. Edward doesn't want to F*ck, does he, wants to make love- no?



Author's Response:

lol. I used to always giggle when my mom when talk about waiting when I was a teen -- so it wasn't sex, it was making love. :) It's true tho. <3

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Jasper & His Calming Mantra

okay now. Finally!!!



Author's Response:

lol. I know. :) Thanks!

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella alone in the woods after telling her he didn’t want her any more. As she is lying on the cold forest floor; Bella remembers three important things. Edward made a promise not to leave her, and Edward never broke a promise, and third it was her body, her heart, what right did he have to decide what was good for her? All in all Bella realizes that Edward was covering up his true feeling about her. Bella goes to bring Edward home.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 57466
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2009 Updated: September 14, 2011


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Even Ground

that's a pretty big promise.



Author's Response:

Yes, it is indeed a very big promise. After everyhing that has happen Edward know that it is a promise he can't afford to break.

Than you so much for takng the time to leave a reiview.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Eternal Damnation by zomniac Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 601]
Summary:

   

 

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(Banner courtesy of miki_hearts_edward_cullen. Thank you!)

His question brought Bella back down from cloud nine. She glowered at him. “Bite me.”

A slow, wicked grin etched itself on Edward’s face. “I don’t think you’d want me to,” he whispered darkly, laughing silently at the irony of her insult.

-

“I know I smelled an open wound, Bella,” Alice said sternly. Behind her, Carlisle and Edward exchanged a look.

Bella scoffed slightly. “Believe me, I felt it,” she told her as she tried to stand.

-

“You don’t understand,” Edward said in a deadly tone.

Bella stared at him for a moment, a bitter expression overcoming her features. “There’s something for me to understand?”

 

-

 

 

“Fuck her!” she heard one of them call.

 

“Oh, I will,” the man above her answered.

 

-

 

Her smile faded after a moment when she realized something. “Oh, great,” she started grumpily, “we match.”

 

Edward grinned lopsidedly. “Indeed, we do,” he replied.

 

-

 

“You’re funny,” Edward said dryly. “I bet you wouldn’t be saying the same thing if you were the one who turned up missing.”

 

 

“Are you trying to scare me, Mr. Cullen?” Bella asked as she snapped a picture.

-
  
"Bella, listen to me,” he tried coaxing her gently.

“No!” Bella shouted, pulling her arms out of his grip. “I never want to see you again. Stay away from me,” she said through clenched teeth, and no matter what she did, she couldn’t stop the tears from falling.

 

-

He cupped her face with both hands while looking into her eyes. “If you don’t find me, who’s killed before, whose diet consists of blood, repulsive, how can I look at you in that way?” he asked her softly.

-

"What kind of man are you?!” Bella pushed and slapped his chest as she raged. She was becoming unhinged.

-
  
“Bella, don’t come,” her mother said weakly. “Whatever he says, don’t come—” 

“No! That’s not what you’re supposed to say!” a voice exclaimed in the background.

A tear escaped Bella’s eye as she listened to her mother’s cries as he hit her.

-

 

Edward nodded. “You’re safe now, Bella,” he told her tenderly as he softly massaged her cheek.

 

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It's cranky vampire Edward against angry, no shit-taking, possibly mortal Bella in the ring. Who will be the winner? Or will they both lose? Watch their journey to life full of drama, mystery, romance, and mythical creatures.

Twilight told with a strong, angry Bella, and a more controlled, bad tempered Edward. B/E, AU, canon pairings, lots of OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, James, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renee, Riley, Rosalie, Sam, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 221838
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2011


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Civility

OH please- I need some answers now... 

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Regretted Confessions

 It was a good chapter- but why do I have the feeling that it was like a cliffy- like - now we're getting into the 'good' stuff...

and who is Dominic to her, really? Like she had a kid at what 13? I don't think so really...

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Deceived, Betrayed, and Broken

 oh boy...  so she's mad cause she took so long to figure it out.

 and Dominic is Renee's son.. man am I slow!  geez..

  okay- hope the next chapter isn't slow in coming.. :)

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Heart of a Fighter

oh finally- please tell me- the secret will be coming out!- ALL OF THEM?

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Beginnings of a Bond

Cool that the Cullens are going to keep an 'extra eye' out for/on Charlie.

Glad that she got to offically meet the rest of the family.

 

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Escapades

I knew he was her brother!

  Glad the two are getting closer!

 

 
Summary:

 

An unexpected event forces Bella to reflect upon the upcoming shift in her relationship with Mother Nature, and she teaches Carlisle an important lesson about responsibility.

 

“Do you think Mother Nature will try to launch another attack?” Jasper asked.

“Of course. I mean, wouldn’t you? All the Bambis in the world are shaking in their hooves in fear of the day when Newborn Bella hunts them down. They’re quickly running out of time to fight back.”  Bella nodded seriously.  “Yes, I think the attacks will only escalate.”

I looked over at Edward, who was looking at Bella with shock. “Bella,” he exclaimed, “do you really think that the entire Animal Kingdom is plotting ways to kill you before you become a vampire?”


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Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8387
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2009 Updated: October 29, 2009


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Most Dangerous Predator

What a beautiful story. I loved the insight. I really felt like this did capture Carlisle's pov.

And I always enjoy humor and 'human' moments.

 
The Window by cullen-gal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

Bella sees a strange figure outside her bedroom window late one night. Edward is on the hunt. What happens when they meet? AU, OOC, lemons in later chapters with a rather delicious Darkward!

WARNING! This story contains content, such as extreme mature language and rape themes, or abusive sexual activity that some readers may find offensive.  Please do not read if any of this subject matter bothers you. Thank you.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 26106
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Did enjoy.. Of course he wouldn't be prepared for company. Hope he feels guilty about that!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it, thanks for your review!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

             tough stuff.

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

yes- you have been soo bad about updating... please don't leave us hanging anymore... :) do so want to read this story.. please... *beggingnicely*

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

  agh! you stop THERE!!! you are CRUEL!!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

ohhh.. I'm just a waiting for the lemon... now.. but this is looking promising...

 
Marked by Whitlock-Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 325]
Summary: Feature

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Edward Masen is a self-sufficient, independently wealthy man with a PhD in Social Anthropology who spends his time exploring whatever catches his interest. When he meets a man named Jasper, he is shaken by the disappointment he feels when Jasper is apparently an impossibility.  Slash, OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 400482
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2009 Updated: May 01, 2011


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Glycerine

soooo messed up...

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: If My Heart Could Only Talk

sweet

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Take a Chance on Me

and he didn't even notice the pictures...

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: I'm No Angel

 perfect.

 




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