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Real name: christy
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Summary:

Not everything makes sense to us at first, but sometimes, the paradoxes in life are exactly what we never knew we needed. When Jasper and Edward and thrown together, into a dorm room no less, who are they to deny the twisted logic of fate?

Life is about to get a whole hell of a lot more interesting.

AH/Slash.

 

Thanks to Blueskyshymoon-olgameisterfunk for the banner, and S.Meadows for the blinkie!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 179659
[Report This] Published: October 03, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2011


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Jasper & the Motherfuckin' Chainsaw

oh get back to school already!



Author's Response:

lol. patience, patience... they're going ...

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Jasper & the Leftovers

you are cruel...



Author's Response:

in the best possible way?

That's what you meant to say, right? ;)

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Edward & the Eyebrow Scar

Glad to see them moving forward. They are a good couple. THe whole one gone to a concert- one person can't hear- very funny. love that stuff.



Author's Response:

lol. Glad you think so. ;) Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Edward & Jasperagon

*Need water now* :)  very thirsty here... :) 



Author's Response:

Now, don't get all dehydrated because of these boys... ;) Glad you liked it. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Jasper & RedRum

I'm totally confused...



Author's Response:

totally? hmm.... that's no good. ;)

 

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Edward & Christopher Reeves

Okay then!!



Author's Response:

*finger snaps* 

 

;) 

 

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Jasper & Betty Crocker

ahh.. cause we all know. Edward doesn't want to F*ck, does he, wants to make love- no?



Author's Response:

lol. I used to always giggle when my mom when talk about waiting when I was a teen -- so it wasn't sex, it was making love. :) It's true tho. <3

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Jasper & His Calming Mantra

okay now. Finally!!!



Author's Response:

lol. I know. :) Thanks!

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella alone in the woods after telling her he didn’t want her any more. As she is lying on the cold forest floor; Bella remembers three important things. Edward made a promise not to leave her, and Edward never broke a promise, and third it was her body, her heart, what right did he have to decide what was good for her? All in all Bella realizes that Edward was covering up his true feeling about her. Bella goes to bring Edward home.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 57466
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2009 Updated: September 14, 2011


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Even Ground

that's a pretty big promise.



Author's Response:

Yes, it is indeed a very big promise. After everyhing that has happen Edward know that it is a promise he can't afford to break.

Than you so much for takng the time to leave a reiview.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
That Girl by u2shay Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1078]
Summary:

That Girl

 

Summary: Bella told Edward in Eclipse that she wasn't that girl...but what if she was? 

It has been four and a half months since Edward Cullen left Bella Swan.  Abandoned by friends and family, she has been left to pick up the pieces of her life alone.  Desperate and with no other options, she seeks out the one man she believes can help her: Carlisle Cullen.

Set in New Moon and beyond.  Characters may be a little OOC.  Rated M/R for Language, Adult Concepts, and Lemons.  Romance with some Angst & Humor. Canon Pairings.  Edward/Bella 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 158902
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2009 Updated: August 01, 2011


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: September 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42--Game Set Match

Happy to see an update! What's next??  :) Poor charlie!! 

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12--I'm Back

DUDE- you are killing me with the cliff hangers!!!



Author's Response:

ChristyLou,

:) Thank you for your review and for reading!

I know the cliffhanger was mean!  But I couldn't help myself...they have so much to talk about!  New chapter is up!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11--Tracking

Awww.. come on... where's the B&E reunion... I can't take this!!! PLEASE!!!



Author's Response:

ChristyLou,

:) Thank you for the review!

Cruel, I know.  But if I interrupted E & B time for Jake...well that would be deadly to my health! LOL!

Edward and Bella will be together in the next chapter!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9--Adrift

ohh.. the getting is good- please don't keep us in suspense much longer! Need the BxE reunion!

I do like the positive aspects of pregnancy in this story- "hormones" being mentioned, clothes shopping. Those are things I've not seen in other stories. I would like to see/read more about that.

 



Author's Response:

ChristyLou,

Thank you for your review!

I won't make you all wait too long for the reunion! :)  We will see Edward and Bella together in Chapter 12.  The Cullen's reaction to Bella's pregnancy is up next!

Bella's pregnancy is definitely different from what you read in BD and a much more positive experience!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: December 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14--Vow

wonderful chapter. You are right. Much to discuss.

I am happy Jacob hasn't bothered them... yet..



Author's Response:

ChristyLou,

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Glad you liked the chapter.  The discussions are no where near over, but hopefully, I throw some romance in there too! :)

Rest assured, Jacob will make a reappearance...(chapter 20), but after that we won't hear from him for a long while!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24--Almost Home

oh my ..



Author's Response:

christylou,

:) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Fun times ahead!

Shay



Author's Response:

christylou,

:) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Fun times ahead!

Shay

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29--So It Begins

ohhhhh can't wait!!!

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30--Labor Day

and where is the family



Author's Response:

Hey ChristyLou,

:) Thank you for your review!

The family is out.  Edward conveyed his and Bella's wishes to them to have privacy for the birth.  Carlisle is in the house....and I expect that the women folk are nearby, because they just can't help it! :)

Thank you for reading,

Shay

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32--Unknown Factor

AGH!!



Author's Response:

Christylou,

:) Thank you for your review!

It will be alright....I promise!

Shay

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33--Choices

 Will all of ch. 34 be in BPOV?? If so - hope that we will see some of what the transformation period was like from EPOV.

 This chapter- thanks for not dragging it out any longer. Very touching- and kinda brutal- and truthful- in what it must be like to do the whole needle in the heart thing- dang.



Author's Response:

Christylou,

:) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Yes, all of 34 is in BPOV.  But hopefully, it is written in such a way to give the reader some insight into Edward's suffering as well.

You are welcome.  I wanted it to be somewhat realistic...not sure about the needle to the heart, but I have to admit I had "Pulp Fiction" running through my mind! :)

Shay

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35--Going Vampy

  Time together- that's what we like! 

 



Author's Response:

ChristyLou,

:) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Me too!  Me too!

Shay

 
Eternal Damnation by zomniac Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 601]
Summary:

   

 

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(Banner courtesy of miki_hearts_edward_cullen. Thank you!)

His question brought Bella back down from cloud nine. She glowered at him. “Bite me.”

A slow, wicked grin etched itself on Edward’s face. “I don’t think you’d want me to,” he whispered darkly, laughing silently at the irony of her insult.

-

“I know I smelled an open wound, Bella,” Alice said sternly. Behind her, Carlisle and Edward exchanged a look.

Bella scoffed slightly. “Believe me, I felt it,” she told her as she tried to stand.

-

“You don’t understand,” Edward said in a deadly tone.

Bella stared at him for a moment, a bitter expression overcoming her features. “There’s something for me to understand?”

 

-

 

 

“Fuck her!” she heard one of them call.

 

“Oh, I will,” the man above her answered.

 

-

 

Her smile faded after a moment when she realized something. “Oh, great,” she started grumpily, “we match.”

 

Edward grinned lopsidedly. “Indeed, we do,” he replied.

 

-

 

“You’re funny,” Edward said dryly. “I bet you wouldn’t be saying the same thing if you were the one who turned up missing.”

 

 

“Are you trying to scare me, Mr. Cullen?” Bella asked as she snapped a picture.

-
  
"Bella, listen to me,” he tried coaxing her gently.

“No!” Bella shouted, pulling her arms out of his grip. “I never want to see you again. Stay away from me,” she said through clenched teeth, and no matter what she did, she couldn’t stop the tears from falling.

 

-

He cupped her face with both hands while looking into her eyes. “If you don’t find me, who’s killed before, whose diet consists of blood, repulsive, how can I look at you in that way?” he asked her softly.

-

"What kind of man are you?!” Bella pushed and slapped his chest as she raged. She was becoming unhinged.

-
  
“Bella, don’t come,” her mother said weakly. “Whatever he says, don’t come—” 

“No! That’s not what you’re supposed to say!” a voice exclaimed in the background.

A tear escaped Bella’s eye as she listened to her mother’s cries as he hit her.

-

 

Edward nodded. “You’re safe now, Bella,” he told her tenderly as he softly massaged her cheek.

 

 --

It's cranky vampire Edward against angry, no shit-taking, possibly mortal Bella in the ring. Who will be the winner? Or will they both lose? Watch their journey to life full of drama, mystery, romance, and mythical creatures.

Twilight told with a strong, angry Bella, and a more controlled, bad tempered Edward. B/E, AU, canon pairings, lots of OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, James, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renee, Riley, Rosalie, Sam, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 221838
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2011


Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Civility

OH please- I need some answers now... 

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Regretted Confessions

 It was a good chapter- but why do I have the feeling that it was like a cliffy- like - now we're getting into the 'good' stuff...

and who is Dominic to her, really? Like she had a kid at what 13? I don't think so really...

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Deceived, Betrayed, and Broken

 oh boy...  so she's mad cause she took so long to figure it out.

 and Dominic is Renee's son.. man am I slow!  geez..

  okay- hope the next chapter isn't slow in coming.. :)

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Heart of a Fighter

oh finally- please tell me- the secret will be coming out!- ALL OF THEM?

 
Reviewer: christylou Signed
Date: March 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Beginnings of a Bond

Cool that the Cullens are going to keep an 'extra eye' out for/on Charlie.

Glad that she got to offically meet the rest of the family.

 

 




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