Wonderful as I have come to expect when reading any of your stories. Your quite talented at writing and even more talented at writing from Edward's pov. I almost envy the way you can get into his head, lol. Terrific, loved it!

I knew it was coming but I still hated the end of this chapter just as much as I hated it in NM. It actually makes better sense to me now though reading your version of it. Poor Jasper....like Edward, he not only has to contend with his thirst but also the thirst of all those around him. Kind of like Bella I never really blamed Edward for leaving either (even though I hated it and mourned with Bella for all those pages) cause I knew he truly felt he was doing the right thing. But still it's horrible to read!   On a lighter note, I love Emmett and especially from your story. It is hilarious when he has the urge to pet Bella on the head....I could just see him doing that (gently of course!) Another part of the chapter that I really enjoyed was when Carlisle was so impressed that Bella already realized she didn't have to shout for Emmett to hear her. Not sure why I enjoyed that part but I really liked it. All in all another great chapter!

***sob**** Yeah, definitely glad I got that box of tissues and I have a feeling that it's just going to get worse. Rose was quite a bitch in this chapter. Even though I came to understand and accept her a little more in Eclipse and Breaking Dawn, she still remains the one Cullen I really could live without and I can't imagine what Emmett sees in her, ugh! I really hated the whole fight between Edward and Jasper. At first I thought that it was wrong, that Edward wouldn't act like that towards Jasper, but then I thought more about his protectiveness of Bella and I realized that you did get it right. I think he would be able to kill anybody that truly tried to harm his Bella. Another good one here!

I really hope you do continue with this. Even though it has made me cry several times now, it is great. You really have a great feel for keeping the characters true to canon, but embellishing it just enough. I find myself wishing the whole story was posted now so I could read all of it. Great job!

Loved the story! It was hilarious and the small bit of plot actually made it much better.

Hi! I just got started reading your story and I've caught up in the past two days to this point. Just wanted to let you know that I think it's amazing and you're an extremely talented writer! I'm so very eager to see the conclusion of this story now. It's been an absolute pleasure (even with all the angst :) to read so far!

This scene was one of my favorites from the book as well. I can't get enough of the Cullen family. As always, your representations are so right-on. Alice's enthusiasm, Carlisle's compassion, Esme's mothering, Rose's stubbornness....all exactly right. It's exactly as I would picture it after reading the books. Great job!

Please write another chapter from Emmett's POV! I love this story so much! Since reading Twilight, I've wondered what Jasper was thinking and feeling during that last part of that scene there and your explanation is brilliant! The amazement he feels at Edward's love and Bella's trust in Edward is terrific. I also love the sibling teasing and the protectiveness Alice has for her little sister. Please continue the story!

This was great. I think you really got the characters spot on and added just enough humor to make it wonderful. Terrific job!

That was definitely an interesting chapter. It so easy to think that Alice never had any doubts or frustrations concerning Edward getting involved with Bella....but your take on it definitely works and really deepens Alice's character. There were just a ton a of little things in this chapter that I loved.

First of all, even though I'm not sure why the idea appealed to me I liked that Edward didn't want to talk to Alice at the beginning because he wanted to make his own decision about asking Bella out without being influenced by Alice's thoughts or visions. It was a nice touch. It was also cute how Emmett tried to comfort Alice in the car. And later Alice and Jasper's conversation in the car when they were skipping class was nice. Jasper's reluctance to join the Cullens...again while not something you automatically think about works on so many levels.

Alice's feelings of jealousy and guily are also really intriguing and definitely fit. After all in every way that matters, Edward is her brother and I'm sure most of us can relate to feeling a little jealous when a favorite sibling or friend finds someone else who is really important to them. You don't mean to feel like you're being replaced or that your relationship with them will suffer, but it's hard to not feel that way and then usually you feel guilty for feeling that way....add in the the other factors, Jasper, them not actually being related, and all of their gifts....and it is easy to see why Alice is so conflicted.

There were several other small things I enjoyed...the little insight into Rose...the interaction with Tyler and Alice's and Edward's reactions about it. It was also interesting how you shoved temptation into Alice's face with the biology incident. That's another one of the those things that you would assume that Alice foresaw it beforehand...but your explanation works extremely well and adds another little facet to the story and to the character of Alice. You're definitely great at taking things and putting a spin on them but keeping things in canon. Sometimes canon retellings from other povs can be kinda dull, but you do a great job of keeping it true, but interesting. Thanks for another great chapter!

I just read all 19 chapters of your story and it is amazing! I love it, love it, love it! PLEASE update again soon! This chapter was especially great- of course though Emmett always brightens up the story. I'm so eager for all the couples to be reunited as they should be. Terrific story, terrific chapter. I'll definitely be adding this story to my favorites list so I'll know when you add a new chapter!

I can't tell you how excited I get when I see an update to this story! Awesome chapter. I'm so proud of Emmett telling Edward off for still keeping things from Bella. And Jasper...how can you not love Jasper! He was so sweet promising to not leave Bella. I'm really glad she's making Edward squirm a little, he really did deserve it. I'm totally hooked on this story and can't wait for the next chapter!

Awwww! I loved it....so happy our favorite couples are getting back together now, even though Bella and Edward didn't get all their issues sorted out quite yet. I can't to see what kind of ending this story has. Love it totally!