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Penname: Rhian0000 [Contact]
Real name: Rhian
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Summary:

 

Haunted by her past, Bella is broken and alone. Starting over in a new city, can she let go of the guilt that consumes her when she meets a beautiful tattoo artist, or will his own personal demons destroy them first?  AH/OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 20367
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010


Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: March 03, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

So much going on in this chapter, showing the depth of their love and how it endures through the rough as well as the smooth (although they don't get much smooth do they? Poor guys).

Bella has grown so much to be able to attempt to help Edward with his issues.  It is a shame he's not at the point he can share yet, but I've no doubt it will come...

Thank you for this consuming story

Rhian

 
Endless Pain by maired75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

Edward left Bella after she was almost attacked by Jasper at her birthday party. A few months later a tragic accident leave Bella all on her own. Will the return of the Cullen's be a good thing or will it just turn her world even more upside down?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 34059
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2010


Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Visions

Very intriguing. If very sad. C'mon Edward she needs you!

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Surprising Arrivals

Oh oh not the reconciliation Edward would have been hoping for. So mcuh pain for poor Bella.

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Being Human

I think the vampires and werewolf must be on a go slow if Bella can beat them lol. So sad for her. Nothing to live for and wanting the abyss. she has people who love her.

 
Beyond Time by tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1733]
Summary:

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 286468
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: June 05, 2011


Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down

He's here! What the hell is she going to say? A tricky one that's for sure!

Rhian

xx

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan

She has an address! yay!

I like the relationship that's developing with Carlisle, there wasn't much of that in canon.

Thanks

Rhian

xx

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces

Ah so now she's met Carlisle, it would be very interesing if they were to strike up that friendship.

 

Rhian

xx

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Of Corsets and Confusion

Oh Edward's time in Edward's city, how exciting!

Rhian

xx

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s

So here we go, yay - onto next chapter.

 

Rhian

xx



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - hope you like where the story goes from here. :-)

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking

How very intriguing, I've always been interested in a timetravel plot, how things might have been if Edward and Bella had met under different circumstances - I'm excited to find out!

 

Thanks

Rhian

xx

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations

He is a bit of a frustratingward I'd say, let Bella sort him out - change his world-view just like she did in her time :)

Rhian

xx

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties

And so it begins, how exciting....

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends

Now that was a sizzling kiss with a hot-blooded sexual Edward, and then happy carefree Edward too... I like them both!

Thanks

Rhian

xx



Author's Response:

I like them both too - how can you go wrong? Lol! Glad you're enjoying the story - thanks for reading! :-)

 
Summary:

After the Cullens leave Bella behind she must find a way to survive her pregnancy. Betrayed by the Denali, where is she left to go and what will she become?

Is it a price Bella is willing to pay?

Every choice bears consequences, positive or negative, and results of the consequences will change the course of their lives drastically. What will their consequences be?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Effects and Consequences
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 96247
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2010 Updated: July 09, 2012


Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

I've really enjoyed this. I like the new twist. The long tortured Edward and the Volturi guard Bella saving the Cullens. I am very intrgued to see where this goes and the first meeting where Edward realises it's Bella - now that will be fireworks! Can't wait.

Rhian

xx



Author's Response:

more is coming soon :)  glad you like the twists :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: November 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Edward

Yes, you are evil. Finally Edward knows it's her. I would love to see some of Edward's awe at being Nessie's father and Bella to sort herself out of course ;)



Author's Response:

i've written the whole Edward realizing who Nessie is scene.... it's really good if I do say so myself ;) I'm working my tail off whenever I get a chance to get his version of events to y'all... but he's wordy. His version of the story has already surpassed the length of consequences at this point and althought I'm nearing the end, we aren't there yet.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: October 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Charlie

Aw at least Charlie gets to know the truth.



Author's Response:

exactly... I couldn't let him go forever without knowing what happened to his daughter...

thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: November 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Pain and Happiness

So heartbreaking to think that she has pulled away from Ness in her grief too. Nice that Ness is meeting the rest of her family though.

I am so excited for them to meet and Edward know who she is! Dun dun dun moment exraordinaire!



Author's Response:

Bella has pent up a lot of things for a very long time... she's trying to deal with them but she's not perfect and doesn't always handle things exactly right...

the next chapter is going to be exciting... i can't wait to get it to y'all.. trust me ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Not Quite Human by jackie79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 89]
Summary:

 


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In New Moon, Alice never sees Bella jump because the wolves arrived too late to save Bella in the meadow. Instead, Bella meets Laurent face to face, and what she becomes is something far removed from the Bella Edward knows and loves. He finds her again years later, but can he remind her who he is, but more importantly, who she is?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 24738
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2010 Updated: December 07, 2010


Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: November 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh this is quite intriguing. You have me wondering about the life that Bella has led - it seems such a sad existence, I'm glad that she broke free.

She's already remembering things - I'm interested to see how this pans out.

Rhian

xx



Author's Response:

Thanks Rhian for the review - I'm really pleased you're finding it intriguing. The next chapter should be ready to post in a day or too. xx

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: December 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh are things about to get steamy? Lovely little interaction in the meadow. So sad to learn of Isabella's past. Gutted he can't call her Bella anymore. I love the line from Eclipse "You'll always be my Bella" I guess it's just a name. I'll hate Victoria for that though.



Author's Response:

Yes, Victoria is an evil evil character - I love it!!

And yes, I really do hope we'll see something steamy, but you never quite know where a story or its characters are going to take you, even for the writer!

Thanks for the review. Happy Christmas xx

 
Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: December 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Smell is the best trigger of memory. I can't help but think of the effect that that same strawberry shampoo has on Edward.



Author's Response:

It really is!!! Smell gets me everytime, and I thought that this would be such a sweet chapter about the strawberry shampoo.

Thanks for the review, I hope you're enjoying. Happy Christmas xx

 
From Afar by ange de l aube Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:


Edward is a reclusive College freshman. He holds back from making contact with the girl he believes could be his one true love because he doesn't think he's worthy of her affections. Fate intervenes, and they become friends during a biology class. Will he have the courage to tell her how he really feels or will he be stuck with admiring her from afar?


 


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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 12867
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2010 Updated: December 29, 2010


Reviewer: Rhian0000 Signed
Date: December 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Love was right before my eyes (One-shot)

Ange, my dear! I am so proud to be your  first Twilighted reviewer, even if you hadn't told me that you'd submitted *pouts* Time to get all of your stories on here I think.

I have already reviewed this on Fan Fic so you know that I enjoyed it. But I would like to say how well you're doing writing. You are absolutely right about your improvement in grammar - which is frankly amazing when English is not your first language! But especially with your character development. There is so much here in only a one-shot. Two fully dimensional characters with pasts and layers and insecurities coming together to find not only each other, but their own worth.

Well done.

Rhian

xx



Author's Response:

yay! you popped my reviewer cherry :) no one better than you my friend!

Like I said, I just didn't want to disappoint anyone if by any chance I didn't get accepted so I was going to keep this under wraps until it was a sure thing... it just happened so fast I didn't even had a chance to change my mind :)

Thank you so much... I think that apart from grammar one of the aspects I struggled the most was character development ... I just seemed to want to borrow from SM and not realize that for my story to work I had to make the characters my own... I went back and forth with these two... I wanted to make B frail but not the kind of frail we have grown accustomed  in FF... more like she's a steel Magnolia (seen the movie?).. tough and frail-a balanced mix...

Not too tough to come across as a bitch, not too frail to look like damsel in distress... I also didn't want my Edward possessive or too violent...or too creepy (since he was technically stalking her lol) it was a lot of 'in between' with these two...

I created their whole life stories in my head (even though I didn't write everything down) just so that I knew where they were coming from... I don't usually invent whole life stories but I'm starting to think I should and not just wing things so much ...lol

 

Anyways... thanks for all your support bb... and for taking my Twilighted reviewer cherry :)





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