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Burned by LeesaM Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

This is a one-shot about the day Alec and Jane were changed. What made them become so bitter? This is my version of what happened to them to make them who they are as vampires. It's a story about how one mistake changed everything for these twins.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alec, Aro, Jane
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6669
[Report This] Published: March 17, 2009 Updated: March 18, 2009


Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

please tell me this is not a quick shot. u can do soooo much with this story..i love it!

 
Summary:

Before Jane became a part of the Volturi’s guard, the village she lived in loathed her, as well as her brother, Alec. Eventually, the village’s fury grew and they decided to finally dispose of the demon twins. But what Jane and Alec knew not, was that someone was watching them. And he had no intention of allowing them to die.

A/N: I'm continuing to include Jane's time with the Volturi, all before Twilight.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alec, Aro, Caius, Chelsea, Felix, Heidi, Jane, Marcus
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 8006
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009


Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Stroking the Fire

i too love jane, her character fascinates me. i am a volturi fan! i cant wait to see her played out on screen in the next few twilight fliks, i likeit so far :)



Author's Response:

Jane fascinates me too! Thankyou for reviewing! :D

 

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Second Chance

FINAL? how can u end jane & alec in a few short chapters?



Author's Response:

don't worry, i'm continuing their 'adventures' to include the romanian war. :D

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Past Relinquished

oh my..bad luck..all the stories i like are dreadfully short :(

 
Summary:

Aurora Banner

 

Carlisle Cullen's world had been drastically changed. He had hunted monsters in place of his Anglican preacher father, and now he was one of the creatures he hunted. Slowly coming to terms with his lot in life, Carlisle stumbled upon a group of mostly civilized vampires, the Volturi. Within a few weeks of his stay with them, he begins to learn that all things are not always what they seem. Within every civilized society, there is a darker side... Canon couples and creatures eventually.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Aro, Caius, Carlisle, Marcus
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: No Word count: 165842
[Report This] Published: April 27, 2009 Updated: June 22, 2011


Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapel

Have u posted this elsewhere? 



Author's Response:

The first 26 chapters are on FF.  However, I was getting more readers and reviewers here so I haven't bothered to update it over there in a very long time. 

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Questions and Immortal Children

hmmm......so, cat was sired by the "bum" from the sewers carlisle was? the vamp that sired carlisle was older, thirsty & "clumsy". he lived in a tunnel sysytem or sewer i believe....interesting....great tale thus far :)

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Laura

part of ,e wanted carlisle to turn her but it was not meant to be..

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Laura

part of ,e wanted carlisle to turn her but it was not meant to be..



Author's Response:

No, I'm keeping it with Edward being the first person for Carlisle to turn.  Carlisle still has a bit of an issue with blood.  He can be around humans, easily, but human blood is still a bit hard to be around. 

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Watch how I hunt

tis it? more! more! more!



Author's Response:

The new chapter is just waiting to be approved.  Don't worry, there is a lot more to come.  :-)

 
Summary:

Jane, protégée of the Volturi, has spent centuries basking in the power of being part of the vampire world’s most powerful family but what happens when that family is under threat? When a stranger arrives at Volterra in search of revenge? Will she side with the Volturi or will this stranger capture her heart?

Post-Breaking Dawn.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Afton, Alec, Aro, Caius, Chelsea, Demetri, Felix, Heidi, Jane, Marcus, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 6985
[Report This] Published: June 28, 2009 Updated: September 25, 2009


Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Reasons behind the mask

please dont tell me u update 1x a month or god forbid longer?i have been searching for great jane/alec fic & this story rocks! please write more :) fast. please?

 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you like this story! Thank you! Those chapters were actually ones i had already written and the next chapter is only half done so far. I'll try and update soon but i've just moved to Uni and i'm trying to get the balance between work and play figured out...Thanks so much. :D

 
Summary:

Since the fall of the Romanian Empire over 2,500 years ago, the Volturi have ruled the vampire world with next to no opposition.  During this time their power has swelled and the three brothers who lead the Volturi have become consumed by greed, increasingly digressing from their professed mission to keep vampires and the secret of their existence safe.  Some among the vampire community have become tired of the Volturi and wish to return the world to the way it was… the balance of power is about to permanently shift.

Canon pairings | R | Original characters featured

Think Twilight, Eclipse, and Breaking Dawn with a twist. I've taken key plot elements from those books, strung them together with some minor changes, and added a threat against the Volturi to lurk behind the scenes. All of that twists and turns its way to the introduction of my original characters and a showdown with the Volturi.

Look out for: a totally creepy James, a delve into Edward's rebellious phase, a revelation about Alice's past, and a tiny dip into the subconscious of Esme the battered wife.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 51756
[Report This] Published: July 01, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2010


Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Leader of the Pack

thats it?! i like it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much. more pkease :)



Author's Response:

There should be a teaser for the next chapter coming out in the Fictionators Teaser Monday post. I'll upload the next chapter soon after that. Glad you're enjoying the story!

 
Summary:

This is the story of the long, historic journeys that Alice and Jasper took in their lives separately before finding each other and, eventually, the Cullens. It starts with Alice in the asylum, and the chapters alternate between Alice and Jaspers' POV with each chapter. I have taken great pains to remain faithful to canon and to be as true to the characters created by SM as possible, and also to be as historically accurate as possible. I hope you enjoy their journey, thanks for stopping by to read!


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 205180
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2009 Updated: April 07, 2010


Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Crossroads

wow! i began reading & did not look away until this ending..amazing..



Author's Response:

I am very glad you liked it! Did you read all 4 chapters I have up right now? It's pretty long, sorry, I tend to be a bit...wordy, LOL. Also, I have another chapter awaiting validation right now. Please continue following, I appreciate you taking the time to read, and thank you for the review!!

 
Waning Moon by YborJen Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 420]
Summary: Feature

 

The epic story of Carlisle Cullen began in 17th century England. Since the fateful night he was transformed into a vampire Carlisle has searched for two things: redemption in the eyes of God, and unconditional familial love. Follow Carlisle through the old and the new world as he meets friends and enemies on his journey toward his destiny as an inspiration to vampires everywhere. Carlisle and his family will discover, however, that love is eternal, but life is not.

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Alistair, Amun, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charles, Charlie, Charlotte, Chelsea, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Eleazar, Elizabeth Masen, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Irina, Jacob, James, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Kachiri, Kate, Kebi, Laurent, Leah, Liam, Maggie, Makenna, Marcus, Quil, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Siobhan, Stefan, Tanya, Tia, Victoria, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 152115
[Report This] Published: August 16, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ 1661

i created my acct here to find an awesum carlisle story & here it is! u r my new friend :)

i wish it were longer :(

 

i read freakishly fast (and remember what i read..lol..) & get sad when i find fan fic that is short...i know u will continue it & i shall be patient *sigh*

 

thanx for the story..hope to hear much more from u!

 

 

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ 1661

MORE! PLEASE!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the first chapter, and yes, indeed there is a COMPLETE book behind it.  The book spans Carlisle's entire life, including the SMeyer books.

It is all done and I am going through the process of getting it approved chapter by chapter with the Twilighted Beta readers.  My guess is it will be a couple of weeks between chapters because they naturally have a LOT to do.

Stay tuned, and encourage your friends to read and review!  ;)

All the best,

YborJen

 
Summary:

Jane has been the Volturi's loyal servant for centuries. She is feared by vampires throughout the world for her ability to inflict unbearable pain with a thought.  Jane was only ever concerned with maintaining her position as Aro's favorite among the Guard--until she saw a human who stole her heart at first sight. David Cain is a hardened soldier who knows the horrors of war.  He copes by never looking back and never planning ahead.

Jane and David meet under extraordinary circumstances, and their souls are irrevocably intertwined.  Can two lost souls find redemption, or will their collective pasts destroy them both?

Rated NC-17 for language, graphic violence, references to torture and some sexual content.

by *Beautiful Liar*

Big thanks to *Beautiful Liar* for my awsome new banner!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Volturi Series
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 107454
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2012


Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Reveille

I actually went back to see where I missed Jane telling Dave about her life. I got confused so I was grateful for your AN. 

I am truly enjoying this story! Very cool storyline & idea's. 

Are all of the Military Things happening true to form? Like the sayings & the description of how the school is run, etc.? 

 



Author's Response:

All the descriptions of Norwich are accurate, or at least its how the Corps was run when I went there. Descriptions on the Army are accurate to the best of my ability, but having never served I can't say that they are 100% accurate.

Thanks for your feedback, and I'm glad you like it so far!

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed
Date: November 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Confusion and Conference

ARGH!!!! I am soo unhappy..lol..I was looking forward to seeing how The Denali clan reacted to Janie..BTW I watched that show about Sarah Palin the lady who wanted to be Vice prez to the USA & she went hiking in the Denali National State Park on her show and it was GAWGEOUS. i wanted to move there! 



Author's Response:

The Denali's are going to be showing up soon, and there definitely be a little tension in the air.

One of the things on my bucket list is to go big mountain skiing in Alaska. I've seen videos of it, and it looks amazing. 

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Making a House a Home

Its about 1230 am & I am determined to fight sleep to keep reading..



Author's Response:

Always happy to be causing some light insomnia. Do you still like it?

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The OTHER Hills

I am sooo very excited to read a Jane FF that is longer than a 1 shot & does NOT make Jane a vapid, annoying teeny bopper because it is the 21st century- it stays true to her. 

You threw me off with the Army Ranger..I am very happy & interested to read on..



Author's Response:

Jane is a little more complicated than a whiney pre-teen. And so is David.

Glade you like my story so far, and I hope you keep up with it.

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed
Date: November 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Debriefing

WHHHHOOOAAAAAA!!!!!! Dave become a Vamp? A Cullen to boot?! PLEASE tell me 19 is NOT the LAST chappy & I have been reading this story for a few days now & have not seen a new one *ahem* I EXPECT a new one DAILY! lolz..Seriously, I don't. It would be niiice but not realistic..

Thanx for sharing thiss tory with me/us..It's awesome, TRULY AWESUM! 



Author's Response:

Chapter 19 is online right right, and chapter 20 is waiting to be validated.

As for wether or not the Cullens are going to be getting two new additions... you'll just have to keep reading.

Thank you for reading my story, and thanks for leaving so many great reviews.

 
Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed
Date: November 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Where Do Crazy, Evil, Sadistic Vampire Witches Come From? (Part 2)

I'm confused..I thought Alec's "power" was to "ease pain" or to make ppl "black out" which I guess eases pain too.  It would seem both twins had a similar but diff in small ways power. I think I answered my own question..Alec could make ppl black out completely, he held them "hostage" while their fates were decided where as Jane could only ease pain and they were still aware of their surroundings. Am I on the right track? 

I simply ADORE this story so far..Is it finished after the last chappy? I hope not! 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Yes, Alec's power was to cut off his victims senses completely, whereas Jane would just ease the sensation of pain.

I am no where near done with this story yet. I'm having a lot of fun writing David and Jane's story, so I'm in no hurry to wrap it up.

Thanks again for reviewing.

 
Fallen Princess by Bforqueen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
Summary:

Banner by Leanne Golightly

Banner made by TaintedDarkInuShemeeko.

She was born to evil, meant to lead.But all she wanted was to be
loved.When her life slides downhill fast,can she get it together in time to
save herself and the rest of the world?

 

- A story of growing up, choices and consequences -

Rated NC-17 for a reason: Beware of dark themes and hot sex.

Check out the amazing fanvideo made Leanne Golightly

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VAMPIE AWARD WINNER!!!

Winner of Best Volturi/Nomads fic in the second round of the Vampie Awards. Thank you to all that nominated and voted for me!!

 

 

Winner of the Underdog Award (best new author) in the 2010 summer edition of the Shimmer Awards.

WINNER OF THE RUBY ROUND OF THE GEM AWARDS FOR:

BEST WIP

BEST LEMON

BEST ORIGINAL PLOT

BEST ALL VAMPIRE

BEST O/S FOR 'CAUGHT' (not up here yet but available on MVF and FFn)

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Aro, Caius, Demetri, Felix, Jane, Marcus, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: The Volturi Series
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 81350
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2010 Updated: November 14, 2010


Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Happily Ever After

Awww...in the beginning u were worried cuz this was new & u seemed uncertain but I saw ur confidence grow w/ur story..U won honors & were asked to judge other stories! Awesome...I adored this story..TYVM 4 sharing it :0)

 
Wrapped by Maria Bello Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

The Cullens need help, and Alice has seen the strange vampire who will save their family. This story is told from the point of view of Mia, a vampire with a strange and terrifying power. This power could save the Cullen clan, but if Bella drops her shield even for a moment, there may be nothing left to save...


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 13777
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2010 Updated: November 26, 2010


Reviewer: twilight_gurl_76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Tempted

WHOA DUDE! I wondered briefly about how this power to make men obsessed with her was anything special but yeah I can see NOW at the very end of this chappy the ramifications a power such as this can have. I am siked! I hope this will be updates soooon :)





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