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I love to read. I read everyday, because I love to escape to a different world. That purpose also applies to listening to music and writing. I love to go into different worlds and lose myself for a while.


I am an 21 year old student and I love the Twilight books  as well as the movies. I also love many other books, such as the classics.


I hope that you enjoy my stories, as I enjoy writing them.


**For those who read my story Prophecy, please know that it has not been abandoned. My previous beta, Elizabeth, had to step down and I've been looking for a replacement. I promise that once the chapters are beta'ed, I will update! I will not abandon this story!


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Summary:

Edward & Bella's Second Chance at Love

 

What if Fate gave you a second chance at love?  What if you had the opportunity to start over? Would you take it?  When an attacker leaves Bella close to death and with no memory, can Edward save her from himself and the assassin before it's too late?  All  Human.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 242564
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: June 07, 2011


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: March 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Day My World Stood Still

Nice twist! please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: March 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - There's Something I've Forgotten - ME!!

Ah trouble. It's not a good without some sort of trouble, and with story, it is GOOD.

Please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: March 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Good Things Come In Small Packages

What did she remember? Please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: April 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Burn My Security Blanket, Why Don't You?

I wonder what's going to happen.

Good chapter, but what did Bella remember?

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Hi There

Bella briefly remembered when Alice received the call that her mother had taken ill.  She made the travel arrangements for her to travel to Africa to be with her.

Thanks for the review and your continued support.  Please keep reading.

 

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: April 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Transitions Pt 1 - When One Door Closes

Poor Bella. I wonder when Edward is going to tell her that they were married. If she finds out later, it's only going to make it worse for Edward and Bella.

Please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Home

Great chapter. It's sad that Bella doesn't remember her family. They are obviously upset.

Was it James that was following them?

I'm looking forward to the update!!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: May 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Bring Me To Life

This was a good chapter. I agree with Emmett. Edward needs to tell Bella the truth because when she learns the truth from someone else or from her memories, it's going to make things worse.

Please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Between A Rock - Part 1

Awesome chapter. I think that Edward just needs to come clean. It's going to be worse later if she figures it out on her own.

Looking forward to the update!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Some Things Remain The Same

Great chapter!

I loved Alice with Jasper. She is awesome!

Looking forward to the update!!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Murphy Who?

I don't think leaving will sit well with Edward....I wonder if he'll tell her the truth after everything that has happened.

Please update soon?

Great chapter, btw.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Storm Warning

Great chapter!

Whoever was watching Bella is creepy..Just sayin'.

I feel for Bella. It must be hard to relive through something so terrible again. I hope that it doesn't get any worse and Alice does actually tell Edward. He needs to know so he can be there to comfort her. And to stop Jacob from hurting her again.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

I hope you have a speedy recovery! =)



Author's Response:

Thanks a million for the awesome review and the well wishes.  Yes, I have to agree that Bella's memory of her attack was painful.  Even though it happened months ago, to her it was just yesterday.  Talk about a delayed reaction.  Once again, thank you for your continued support.  Readers like you make the creative process worthwhile.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - What A Tangled Web We Weave

Edward can't be upset that she's moved on because he told her that he didn't think of her that way, if I remember correctly. He needs to make up his mind!

I wonder what Liam is up to...I don't trust him.

Excellent work on this chapter!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Goodbyes & Revelations

Awesome chapter!

I'm glad that Edward and Bella are going to talk. I think it will be good for them. Hopefully everything will come out and in the open now.

I can't wait for your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks a million for the review.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter and yes, it is about time they made a step towards each other.  I'll try not to keep you waiting too long and I'll update as soon as I can.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Lessons

This was an awesome chapter! I loved it!

Alice is right...If he doesn't want Bella then he needs to step aside. Although, I have a feeling that he won't.

Edward needs to get his head on straight and take a pill to help him with his issues...It *might* help. XD

Looking forward to your next chapter!!!

Thanks for mentioning my name!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - The Things We Do....

I'm trying not to be hard on Edward. It's difficult. Hopefully someone will smack some sense into him. Hey! Maybe Alice could do it...XD

This chapter was excellent! Great job!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
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Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Return To Me

Yes! *squeals and jumps up and down*

Bella got some answers and some Edward...hehe *blushes*

Hopefully this will mean only good things for them?

Excellent job on this chapter!!! You are a great writer and I love seeing updates for this story!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
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Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Beginning of the End

Wow....I hate James. So much. I think Bella should tell Edward about James. He would believe her.

It seems that the bathtub made Edward a little more carefree. =) Yay! But I think Bella's dream will bring him back to where he was before. Hopefully he and Bella can talk about it and not bury it.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - The Domino Effect

Great chapter!

Geesh, first James and now Jacob? Perhaps they'll kill each other. -drums fingers together thinking-

I am so glad that Carlisle and Tessa showed Edward how is actions have affected others. It's about time. Now, he can make amends hopefully.

Bella and Edward's ILY's were sweet. Yes, they were done over the phone, but these two don't seem like the traditional type, so this was perfect. Plus, I have a bad feeling about Edward being out of town and James in the same town with Bella....Now with Jacob on the loose as well it makes me nervous.

I'm looking forward to your next chapter!!

I hope you feel better soon! My thoughts are with you. =)

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Gambit

Great chapter!

I was surprised that James was the one to show up. So, I guess he's not all bad. He's just creepy...But I guess that ok.

I hope that Bella is going to be ok.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Adjudication

I am so glad that Bella is ok. Plus, it seems that Bella and Edward are going to stay together...Finally. Yay! =D

I wonder who is watching them. My guess is it's that guy that she dated for a short while.

Looking forward to your next update!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Family

This was a very interesting chapter!

I loved the Christmas scene with the Cullens and the new puppy. =) I hope nothing happens to Chester.

I wonder who this person is. I want to say James, but I have a feeling I am wrong. I can't wait to see this person revealed!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Here Comes Goodbye

This was a good chapter...very sad, but good.

Well, I see James is back to his old self again. For a moment, I thought he changed, but he proved me wrong. If he keeps acting the way he does, Edward is going to attack him.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Looking forward to your next update! =D

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Please Remember Me

Great chapter!

It was sad but good.

I knew James was no good! I wonder what Edward will do to him...I can imagine it won't be pretty!

Looking forward to your next update!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Judge...

Amazing chapter!

I hope that Bella is found soon before anything worse can happen to her.

I think that once Edward finds them (hopefully he will) James isn't going to get out alive.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

 
Persistence Pays Off by Twitch Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 446]
Summary:

Bella's having a bad day. Edward's the telemarketer who so happens to cross her path on that day. How does Edward react when Bella gives him a piece of her mind?

 

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AU/AH, all canon couples. Varying POV between Edward and Bella.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 48348
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2009 Updated: June 16, 2009


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: April 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Didn't See That One Coming

At least Bella explained why she was acting so wierd. At first I thought she was trying to freak him out. That crap with James?  Freaky.

Please update soon?

 




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