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Penname: Bella_Cullen884 [ Contact]
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Member Since: December 16, 2008
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I love to read. I read everyday, because I love to escape to a different world. That purpose also applies to listening to music and writing. I love to go into different worlds and lose myself for a while.
I am an 21 year old student and I love the Twilight books as well as the movies. I also love many other books, such as the classics.
I hope that you enjoy my stories, as I enjoy writing them.
**For those who read my story Prophecy, please know that it has not been abandoned. My previous beta, Elizabeth, had to step down and I've been looking for a replacement. I promise that once the chapters are beta'ed, I will update! I will not abandon this story!
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Summary:
Competitive figure skater Bella Swan meets NHL hockey player Edward Cullen. Bella's Olympic dreams are crushed by injury. Can he help her find the strength to take the ice again? Will they find love and friendship in the meantime? A/H, M for language and future lemons, Canon Pairings
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 294652
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2010 Updated: April 25, 2011
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed 
Date: June 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Put Your Head on My Shoulder
This was a great chapter! I loved everything about it!
I think that Bella should have let Edward punch Jacob. He deserved it.
Bella and Edward working together to find music for her routine was awesome! Also, the ILY was perfect. I wonder when Bella will say it back. Although I have a feeling that might have been what she said when she was falling asleep, but I could be wrong.
Looking forward to your next update!
btw, thank you for the extra long chapter!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: July 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: More Than Words
I loved this chapter! Everything about it was great!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: July 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: With No Trace of Fear
I loved everything about this chapter! =D
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: December 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Find Your Way Back
I loved everything about this chapter! Excellent job!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: December 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Days Go By
I loved everything about this chapter! Excellent job!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: April 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Welcome the Distraction
Excellent chapter!
Summary: 
Bella has the gift of second sight. After a tragic accident her world collides with Edward's. She is expecting him, but he is not ready for her.
An exploration of Edward's growing feelings for the woman he is, at first, salivating to consume.
*** A/U Mostly Canon pairings. Vampire/Human/Wolfpack *Will contain Lemons in later chapters*
**Indie Twific Nominee**
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Word count: 202250
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: November 19, 2012
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: March 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
This sounds like a very interesting story! I can't wait to see what happens! Author's Response: Thank you! I have 23 chapters already written and I hope to get them out fairly quickly. Thanks for reading! :-)
Summary: 
Edward Cullen has hunted the darkest minds since he became a vampire. He's grown weary of the dregs of society and longs to taste the blood of a true innocent. Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take them both? Language, lemons & some violence. All EPOV.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 194210
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: January 28, 2011
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: October 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
This was a wonderful chapter! I loved everything about it!
I'm so glad that Bella finally said 'ILY' back. =D
I can't wait to see what happens next! Author's Response: Thank you! So happy you liked it! Bella definitely had to say it back, she just had to work around to it in true Bella style :)
I'll get a new chapter to you soon. Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Great chapter!
I think that Edward is living up to his promise....=D
I hope that Edward admits his feelings for Bella (verbally) soon. I think she feels the same way and she would love it if it was said.
I'm very curious about Bella's past. I can't wait to see it (and your outtakes)!
Looking forward to your next update! Author's Response: Haha yes, he's proving himself quite well I think :) Bella will probably watch what she challenges him to in the future. Then again, maybe not!
The "I love you" is coming in the near future. He just needs some time to work up to it. He's never said those words aloud and it's a bit scary for him (he'd be pissed if he saw me use that word!)
I think I've decided Bella's past is so important that I will post it within the main story as well, probably the chapter after the next so it won't be out of place. So not too long to wait. It's with the betas now :)
Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: October 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I loved everything about this chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Author's Response: :) Thank you! It was a fun one ot be sure! New chapter ASAP!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: April 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I hope that Edward doesn't do anything with Angela. It's nothing against her, I just want Edward and Bella together and him sleeping with Angela would be terrible.
I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon? Author's Response: :) I think Edward is incapable of doing anything with another girl. Remember, when he threatened to walk out and bang a girl he commented that he didn't like the way it made him feel but he was willing to do it to teach her a lesson. Personally, I don't think he could have done it, though he does surprise me now and then!
I'll update as quickly as possible, I'm trying to finish up my other story so I can give this one even more attention. So glad you want it faster, thank you!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: November 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
This was a great chapter! I knew Edward would give in when Bella made her demand. =)
It seems like there will be a Bella/Victoria showdown. Should be interesting..
Looking forward to your next update! Author's Response: Sex is a powerful motivator, especially for this Edward :) I like that they both gave on the food issue though. I thought it was important and to much a part of him to make him give that up permanently. I think this is a solution they can both live with!
So happy you liked it! Yeah, we'll see how things go with Victoria :) Should be fun!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: November 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I loved this chapter!
The fight between Bella and Victoria was excellent! I knew that Bella would take care of her.
Poor Edward...he was mentally violated. At least he has Bella to make it better, lol.
Looking forward to your next update! Author's Response: Hahah he's used to being mentally violated but he's had it so quiet and easy with Bella that it was a bit overwhelming! But yes, she can make it better :)
So glad you liked it! It was a lot of fun to write and let her loose! First epi soon :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: May 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I have a feeling that whatever he's planning will not be good. My guess is that he'll that either make it look like he did more with Angela than he did or he'll kill someone.
I can't wait to see what Bella says after he comes back!
Please update soon? Author's Response: I'll update as soon as humanly possible! He has to be talking to me in order for me to get the chapter out, I can't fake it! Edward won't do anything truly heinous, I promise! Bella's going to be pretty ticked without him making things that much worse!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: January 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 The Hellmoutake
This was great!
I'd say the Volturi visit was worth it to Edward, lol.
I can't wait to see what other outtakes you come up with! Author's Response: Thank you! hehe Yeah he was definitely okay with it after they left. hehe She always makes it worth his while :) Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: April 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
This is a great story! I can't to see what happens next! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm about halfway through with chapter 7 so hopefully I'll have an update for you fairly soon. So glad you're enjoying it and thank you for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: May 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Great chapter!
I can't believe Rose. I know that she's hurt about Bella disappearing, but she didn't need to say the things she did.
I hope that Edward doesn't go out and kill her...He was pretty ticked off at her.
Looking forward to your next chapter! Author's Response: Yes, Rose was definitely out of line. I don't think E is going to really kill her but he constantly surprises me. I know that probably doesn't make sense since I write him but it feels like his words just fall onto the screen and I'm really not having a lot to do with it. It's fun! They constantly surprise me! So glad you liked it and thank you for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: May 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Great chapter!
Poor Edward...he had to upchuck that food. I feel for him.
I sort of expected Edward to go out and kill someone. Hopefully no one will call the police on him though. If they did, it wouldn't be a smart decision...Just a question: Tanya isn't going to come back is she? Edward made sure she was dead, right? If he didn't, I can see her coming after him and Bella protecting him.
I'm glad that he told Bella the truth about the date and that they reached an agreement about how they each live. I think it will help their relationship.
Looking forward to your next chapter!! Author's Response: I promise, there will be no return of Tanya. Yes, eventually another vamp or two may make their way into our lovers little world but Tanya is dead. Jake dead. When Smugward kills, he kills for real, hehe.
I agree, they needed to have a talk where he kinda got irritated with her and told her that she had to give a little too. He's changing rapidly and she needs to acknowledge that and do some changing of her own. I think it will help as well.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm having a blast writing this story and the response to this crazy twosome amazes me.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: June 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Great chapter!
Well...they reached a compromise. That's good. Although I have a feeling that Edward will hoping that Bella's plan doesn't work.
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Haha Yeah, he's definitely counting on it not working. Failure is her only option, in his mind! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: June 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I don't think Edward will admit he loves her for a while...He might even deny it a couple of times in his head at first.
For a second I thought Bella was going to attack that guy. But, she resisted. Edward did a good job not killing that guy. Although, I'm glad that he hurt him the way he did. Now, he won't be able to hurt other girls.
Looking forward to your next update! Author's Response: Hehe I am sure you're right. He's not planning on that "L" word coming from his lips anytime soon. We'll have to see how it all goes down!
I'm glad you liked the dick crushing! hehe It was very inventive. I think if Smugward was in charge of punishments the world would likely be a little less crime ridden. Too bad there's that whole "cruel & unusual punishment" thing :)
Thanks for reviewing, I'll get you a new chapter ASAP :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Great chapter!
I think Edward's plan to act indifferent might work...I hope it does because these two need to get together, lol.
I'm glad Edward admitted his feelings. =) (Well at least part of them to her.)
Looking forward to your next chapter! Author's Response: Hee, I'm glad you liked it. They are getting there and he was so close to getting what he wanted, he just didn't know it. Indifference can sometimes spur someone into action. We'll have to see if he's able to do that. Might be more of a challenge than he can handle!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: July 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Great chapter!
I'm glad that Edward encouraged her to try again after the deer. I know she'll appreciate that.
I think the time has come for these two...I know Edward is hoping it is, lol.
Looking forward to your next update! Author's Response: She's definitely seeing the changes in him and making some changes herself. Things are definitely progressing :)
Edward may not want her to succeed but he also won't stand in her way. He's putting her happiness first, sweet vamp!
Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: July 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I loved everything about this chapter! =D
I can't wait to see what happens next! Author's Response: From Smugward:
What wasn't to love, my sweet? So glad to hear that my performance worked for you! Next chapter I promise will be even hotter *smirks*
From Nole:
Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked it! Next should be more lemony fun!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Great chapter! I loved everything about it!
I think that Innerward (my crazy name for the Edward inside Edward's head) is getting to him....I think he'll be popping out the ILY sometime soon. Hopefully.
I can't wait to see what happens next! Author's Response: Aww thank you :) I just have the best time with these two and I love letting them take over and see where they go! Those words are definitely coming in the near future. He's come a long way in a short time and he's getting there!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Bella's Past Outtake
This was so great!
I loved what Edward did to Mike and the others. The deserve it...as well as a little more. Hopefully one day Edward will get to meet them face to face. Or maybe Bella. She has a wicked temper now...
Looking forward to your next update! Author's Response: Haha I think another outtake may be in order, in which Smugs takes some personal revenge and Bella rubs her hotness and new life in to them. We'll see ;) Glad you liked it! We both had fun with that one!
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