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Member Since: December 16, 2008
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I love to read. I read everyday, because I love to escape to a different world. That purpose also applies to listening to music and writing. I love to go into different worlds and lose myself for a while.


I am an 21 year old student and I love the Twilight books  as well as the movies. I also love many other books, such as the classics.


I hope that you enjoy my stories, as I enjoy writing them.


**For those who read my story Prophecy, please know that it has not been abandoned. My previous beta, Elizabeth, had to step down and I've been looking for a replacement. I promise that once the chapters are beta'ed, I will update! I will not abandon this story!


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A Rough Start by itzmegan73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 877]
Summary:

Overnight, irresponsible Edward goes from bachelor to father of a 5 yr old boy. Meanwhile responsible, prepared Bella begins her first job as Kindergarten teacher at Forks Elementary. When irresponsible meets the epitome of responsible, sparks will fly!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 250550
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2011


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Our House

Excellent chapter!

I'm glad that the 'mom' issue is worked out between Bella and Anthony.

I think that Edward and his family will reconnect. It'll just take some time.

I'm looking forward to your next update!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Love is a Battlefield

Such an amazing story and excellent chapter.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue

This was the perfect ending for this wonderful story.

I'm going back to re-read!

 
Summary:

One night I awoke to find his side of the bed empty. I can only describe what happened next to be one of the best nights of my life.

 

Smut, pure and simple. Features a lot of dirty talk.

 

AU-AH, OOC, NC-17 for explicit adult sexual situations and language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4510
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2010 Updated: February 16, 2010


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Just Thinking - One Shot

Please continue this! This was very good!



Author's Response: I might! I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

Edward is back in Forks, but something is very wrong. He's not the same as he used to be. "I feel like a savage, Bella. I'm trapped inside a body I can't control." ExB: lemons. dark/mature themes. vampires. OOC. "That's right, sweetheart. Scream my name."


Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2699
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2010 Updated: February 25, 2010


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Forever

This is very different and I can't wait to see what happens!

Great work with this!

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward are best friends who discover a strong sexual attraction to each other. When Bella suggests spending just one night together, Edward can't say no.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5767
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: February 25, 2010


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really good! You should consider expanding it!



Author's Response:

Sorry, no plans to expand. Thanks for reading! 

 
Summary:

What if the vampire family that embraced Bella was not the Cullen's but the Denali's. After a series of tragic events, Bella is led to Denali. Despite the unpleasantness that leads to her joining their family, she eagerly accepts all the love and sense of sisterhood the Denali's offer her. Bella finds herself happier than she's ever been. But how long will that happiness last? What happens when the Cullen's come to meet the newest addition to the Denali coven?

 This story has been beta'ed by the lovely and wonderful Mommakat!!!

 

Big thanks to vampireyouth for my awesome banner!

 

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

And thanks to jkane180 for my second awesome banner!

AU/ OOC

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 94495
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: June 27, 2010


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is a great story! I love how it's going!

I can't wait to see what happens! Please update soon?

(Just a quick question: Will this be a EdwardxBella story?)



Author's Response:

I will neither confirm nor deny that this is an ExB story but the next update is coming soon. I have a lot of time on my hands right now and I plan to take full advantage of it with writing. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really hope that Edward and Bella get together. Right now, it doesn't seem that way. =(

I know that Bella gave Edward a cold welcome, but I'm still hoping that they talk about what happened and that they get together. Please tell me that will happen!

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

All that I am willing to say is that like SM's Bella, my Bella has excellent control. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope that Edward tells Bella how he feels soon.

I'm glad that he set the record straight with Tanya, though. =) It wasn't good for him to string her along.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

*I like shorter chapters and quicker updates, but that's just me. You should do what you feel comfortable doing. =) That way there won't be strain on you.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Great chapter!

I hope that Bella (and the wolf) will be ok!

I can't wait to see what happens next in your awesome story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I hope nothing happens to the Cullens! Hopefully John will be able to convince that no one is at fault.

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Next chpater is in the works!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Great chapter! I'm glad that they didn't fight. Hopefully they can move on now.

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

This was a great chapter!

Hopefully Rose and Emmett will return to the family soon. I don't want to see Esme hurt.

Looking forward to your next update!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

This was a great ending! Excellent work!

 
Summary:

 

These are a series of outtakes for the story, After All.  

Summary for After All - Bella is in a car crash that kills her mother and Phil, leaving her with many physical and emotional injuries. She returns to Washington to be closer to her father and best friends, trying to find a way to put her life back together.  

Story is AU-Human.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 22124
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2010 Updated: July 19, 2011


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Alternate Chapter 25

This was very good. :) Sad, but good.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Alternate Chapter 26

Let's just say, I'm glad this was just the alternate  chapter. =) It was really good though. =)

Thank you for putting how it would have ended!



Author's Response:

Freaking angsty as hell, wasn't it?? :) LOL I couldn't keep up with that kind of pace!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

 
Summary:

Addictions are never easy to cope with and Bella is all too familiar with their destructive power as she struggles with the nightmares from her past. It isn't until the Cullens arrive in Forks that Bella realizes if she doesn't get out now, her addictions will stick with her for life.

 

Thank you to Maddux for the fantastic banner! It is genius and I love it! :)


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 118539
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2010 Updated: January 23, 2013


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: New Moon

I just found this story and it's wonderfully written. I enjoy reading this story and I can't wait to read more!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Take the Ice by bellamarie117 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 509]
Summary:

 

TTIBanner.png picture by noraholic7103

 

Competitive figure skater Bella Swan meets NHL hockey player Edward Cullen. Bella's Olympic dreams are crushed by injury. Can he help her find the strength to take the ice again? Will they find love and friendship in the meantime? A/H, M for language and future lemons, Canon Pairings


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 294652
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2010 Updated: April 25, 2011


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Who Says You Can't Go Home?

Great chapter! I loved everything about it!

I'm glad that things are progressing between these two. =) I can't wait to see them together!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Be My Refuge

I loved this chapter!

I'm glad that Bella finally told Edward what happened with Phil. It's a good thing that Phil and Edward are far apart...

It's a good thing that Bella isn't going to let this thing with her mother bother her.

Looking forward to your next update!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Minnesota Nice

This sounds like a great story! I can't wait to see what happens!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Minnesota Nice

This sounds like a great story! I can't wait to see what happens!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Unexpected Connections

Another great chapter!

I love the relationships between everyone and how they are going. =)

I'm glad the truth came out and everything is ok between Alice and Rose. I can't wait until Bella meets Edward!

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Chapter 3 is well on its way and will hopefully be posting this weekend or the early part of next week at the latest.

 

Make sure you check out the forum for teasers and to chat with other readers! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=8976

 

Here’s a little teaser to keep you going:

 

"That man is like sex on a stick at the State Fair," Rose said, heading back towards the kitchen.

"Rose!" I exclaimed, blushing to my hairline.

"Just admit it, Bella. Dr. Cullen is drool-worthy."

"Yeah, he was good looking, but isn't he practically your future father in law?"

"Exactly," she said, pointing at me with the glass bottle she'd picked up and uncapped. "Gives me a glimpse into my future, and my future's looking damn good twenty-five years down the road."

"I'm sure Alice doesn't appreciate you associating sex and her father in the same sentence," I stammered, trying to wrap my head around the conversation.

"Stop being such a nun Bella. I know my dad's a DILF," Alice said with an accepting shrug.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Is There Life Without Ice?

Great chapter!

I can't believe Renee..Wow.

I loved everything about this chapter! I was hoping that Bella would see Edward again. =( Hopefully next chapter?

I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! The next chapter is in the queue and should be posted shortly so no teaser this time around.

Bella has a ways to go before seeing Renee for who she really is. She's making baby steps, though.


A reunion is in the works. That's all I'm saying.

If you haven't already, check out the thread on the AH forums. I try to post teasers and tidbits there. I also try to participate in The Fictionators Teaser Mondays.

Thanks again!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Time to Drop the Puck

Great chapter!

I am so glad that Edward and finally met (again)! The way they were in this chapter was so sweet! I can't wait to see them together more! =)

Looking forward to your next chapter. =)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Chapter 5 will post on Wednesday.

 

So glad you enjoyed their little reunion.

 

Here’s a little teaser to tide you over:

 

I tugged open the string on my bag and dropped it into my lap when I saw what Alice pulled out of hers. They were figure skates. I think. They were also hot pink with silver glittery laces and rhinestones outlining her initials. She didn't catch my look of amusement, but when I felt a nudge at my side, I realized that Edward did. I looked over at him to see him make the universal crazy sign of circling his finger at his temple with an affectionate grin on his face, making me giggle. Alice glanced up then, spotting us with our heads close together as she finished lacing up her skates. She wiggled her eyebrows at me as I tried to wipe the giddy expression from my face.

 

Chapter 5 was also teased on both The Fictionators and PicTease today. The teaser is different than this one. Links to both are on the TTI Thread over on the forums.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Baby, It's Cold Outside

Great chapter!

They kissed! =D It was awesome!

I'll have faith in you to get these two together in a relationship.

I can't wait to see what happens next! I have a feeling that Edward will help Bella open up so she won't shut people out.

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to review!

 

Next chapter has been submitted for validation and will be up soon!

 

Here’s your teaser for Chapter 6:

 

The next text had come the following morning after they’d departed on their road trip. He'd sent me a picture message of a cornfield with a note that read, Greetings from picturesque Iowa.

 

He continued to send me updates throughout their trip of road signs and small monuments as they journeyed to Tennessee where they'd be playing the Nashville Predators that night before heading north to Ohio before returning late Thursday. Apparently the guys caught on because Edward's notes became interspersed with self-portraits of Emmett making funny faces and suggestive comments; he even managed to send me a shot he'd snapped of Edward, an adorable scowl on his face and his arm stretched out like he was trying to swipe his phone back. I set it to come up every time I'd receive an incoming call from him.

 

Another was posted on The Fictionators Teaser Monday and make sure to check out the Twilighted thread if you haven’t already!

 




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