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I love to read. I read everyday, because I love to escape to a different world. That purpose also applies to listening to music and writing. I love to go into different worlds and lose myself for a while.


I am an 21 year old student and I love the Twilight books  as well as the movies. I also love many other books, such as the classics.


I hope that you enjoy my stories, as I enjoy writing them.


**For those who read my story Prophecy, please know that it has not been abandoned. My previous beta, Elizabeth, had to step down and I've been looking for a replacement. I promise that once the chapters are beta'ed, I will update! I will not abandon this story!


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Reviews by Bella_Cullen884
 
Summary:

Edward Cullen has hunted the darkest minds since he became a vampire.  He's grown weary of the dregs of society and longs to taste the blood of a true innocent.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take them both?  Language, lemons & some violence.  All EPOV.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 194210
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: January 28, 2011


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter!

Poor Edward...he had to upchuck that food. I feel for him.

I sort of expected Edward to go out and kill someone. Hopefully no one will call the police on him though. If they did, it wouldn't be a smart decision...Just a question: Tanya isn't going to come back is she? Edward made sure she was dead, right? If he didn't, I can see her coming after him and Bella protecting him.

I'm glad that he told Bella the truth about the date and that they reached an agreement about how they each live. I think it will help their relationship.

Looking forward to your next chapter!!



Author's Response:

I promise, there will be no return of Tanya.  Yes, eventually another vamp or two may make their way into our lovers little world but Tanya is dead.  Jake dead.  When Smugward kills, he kills for real, hehe.

I agree, they needed to have a talk where he kinda got irritated with her and told her that she had to give a little too.  He's changing rapidly and she needs to acknowledge that and do some changing of her own.  I think it will help as well.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  I'm having a blast writing this story and the response to this crazy twosome amazes me.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter!

Well...they reached a compromise. That's good. Although I have a feeling that Edward will hoping that Bella's plan doesn't work.

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Haha Yeah, he's definitely counting on it not working.  Failure is her only option, in his mind! :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I don't think Edward will admit he loves her for a while...He might even deny it a couple of times in his head at first.

For a second I thought Bella was going to attack that guy. But, she resisted. Edward did a good job not killing that guy. Although, I'm glad that he hurt him the way he did. Now, he won't be able to hurt other girls.

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Hehe I am sure you're right.  He's not planning on that "L" word coming from his lips anytime soon.  We'll have to see how it all goes down!

I'm glad you liked the dick crushing! hehe  It was very inventive.  I think if Smugward was in charge of punishments the world would likely be a little less crime ridden.  Too bad there's that whole "cruel & unusual punishment" thing :)

Thanks for reviewing, I'll get you a new chapter ASAP :)

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter!

I think Edward's plan to act indifferent might work...I hope it does because these two need to get together, lol.

I'm glad Edward admitted his feelings. =) (Well at least part of them to her.)

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hee, I'm glad you liked it.  They are getting there and he was so close to getting what he wanted, he just didn't know it.  Indifference can sometimes spur someone into action.  We'll have to see if he's able to do that.  Might be more of a challenge than he can handle!

 

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter!

I'm glad that Edward encouraged her to try again after the deer. I know she'll appreciate that.

I think the time has come for these two...I know Edward is hoping it is, lol.

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

She's definitely seeing the changes in him and making some changes herself.  Things are definitely progressing :)

Edward may not want her to succeed but he also won't stand in her way.  He's putting her happiness first, sweet vamp!

Thanks so much for the review!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I loved everything about this chapter! =D

I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

From Smugward:

What wasn't to love, my sweet?  So glad to hear that my performance worked for you!  Next chapter I promise will be even hotter *smirks*

From Nole:

Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked it!  Next should be more lemony fun!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter! I loved everything about it!

I think that Innerward (my crazy name for the Edward inside Edward's head) is getting to him....I think he'll be popping out the ILY sometime soon. Hopefully.

I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you :)  I just have the best time with these two and I love letting them take over and see where they go!  Those words are definitely coming in the near future.  He's come a long way in a short time and he's getting there!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Bella's Past Outtake

This was so great!

I loved what Edward did to Mike and the others. The deserve it...as well as a little more. Hopefully one day Edward will get to meet them face to face. Or maybe Bella. She has a wicked temper now...

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Haha I think another outtake may be in order, in which Smugs takes some personal revenge and Bella rubs her hotness and new life in to them.  We'll see ;)  Glad you liked it!  We both had fun with that one!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter!

I'm glad that Edward is finally going to admit his feelings for Bella. I hope this other vampire doesn't get in the way though. I would hate for that to happen. Both of them would be heart broken if they weren't together.

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Oh he'll be in the way of the love sharing for a moment or two but I'd never break up my B&E.  You know me better than that by now, don't ya? :) 

Glad that you're liking it!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved this chapter!

Victoria better watch out if she comes around Edward....Boxer Bella is looking for a fight. xD

I can't believe that he finally told her he loved her! Yay! I know that she'll be shocked at first, but once that wears off, she'll tell him that she loves him too.

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

I was so excited to get this chapter posted, to give you all the words finally.  And of course he told her in pure Smugs style!

I think it's safe to say if Victoria does happen upon our vampy twosome, she'll get a lot more than she bargained for!

You never know what Bella may see or do!  I can't wait to find out myself, she surprises me as much as she does Smugs! hee

So happy you liked it, thank you :)

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue #1

Great chapter!

I think their date went well, despite the intteruption. I know that Edward won't give up until that ring is on her finger. =)

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Their date did go well and Bella certainly had no problem with it.  She had no idea what she was missing ;)  He definitely is not going to give up!  So glad you liked it :)

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue #2

I loved this chapter!

While the proposal wasn't romantic like Edward wanted, I think it was perfect for the both of them. =)

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

I could not agree more!  Romance is great and all but it's not who they really are :) hehe Or he is at least.  This worked for me...I'm just glad he tried the romance first, hehe.  A definite sign of change.

Thanks for the review, one more to go :)

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue #3

This was great!

The payback Mike and the others got was hilarious!

I'm sad this is ending. =( I'll have to go re-read it now...



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  I had a blast torturing those boys along with Smugs! hehe I'll have some outtakes for you in the near future and if I ever come up with a sequel I'll definitely write it!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Cowtake

This was great! It made me laugh...The things he does for Bella...doesn't he know by now that he should just do what she wants? He never wins. But, he loves her, so it's worth it. =)

Excellent job!



Author's Response:

He knows and he will!  He just isn't about to do it without a lot of bitching and moaning.  And we wouldn't have it any other way right? :)  So glad you liked it!

 
Nineteen Canvasses by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 994]
Summary:

Bella thinks she finally has it all together after a life altering accident, but when she meets Edward, a once successful artist who has lost his inspiration, everything she thought she knew changes.  Rated NC-17 for a very good reason.

Many thanks to my amazing and talented beta xrxdanixrx for the wonderful banner!!!

Nineteen Canvasses Blinkie

Many thanks to the incredible MizzezPattinson for the amazing new blinkie!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 148145
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: November 24, 2010


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14(shabbyapple)

Great chapter!

Edward was a bit of a jerk, trying to make her jealous, but she was doing the same thing.

I'm glad that Edward saved Bella. Now, I wonder why Edward was freaking out over James...

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  They both are so stubborn!  You may remember James was introduced a couple of chapters ago and owns the art supply store that Edward buys his supplies from and that James also been *ahem* fooling around with Jane...Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  Update is coming.  Cheers, Leslie

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33(Shabbyapple)

This was wonderful. Truly wonderful. Thank you for sharing this amazing story. =)



Author's Response:

Hi there,

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

So glad that you are enjoyed these two!

XO

Leslie

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19(shabbyapple)

This was a great chapter!

I'd say their first date was something neither Bella or Edward will forget. It was wonderful. =)

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Oh, and their date isn't over...yet :)  Lots more on the way.  Cheers!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18(shabbyapple)

I loved everything about this chapter! (well, except for Jane, lol)

I know that Bella will probably love the paintings. =)

I can't wait to see what happens next!

 



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  Yes...Jane...she's something else isn't she?  Update is on the way.  Cheers, Leslie

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)

Great chapter!

I thought that the Edward/James encounter was going to end bloody...Good thing it didn't.

I'm glad that Bella wasn't too upset that he was late. At least it didn't appear so. I think she mostly thought he was blowing off.

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  Yeah---James...hmmmm-kind of creepy, isn't he?  Her view of him being late is coming up...Cheers!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Great chapter!

I hope that Bella doesn't find out about what he did...She'll never go out with him then. =(

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi there,  Thanks so much for the review!  Oh dear...Edward, what were you thinking?  Hmmm, and will she find out? We'll have to wait and see :)  Update is coming.  Cheers, Leslie.   

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13(shabbyapple)

Great chapter!

This is not good...First with that woman and now with drunk Bella alone with a weirdo.

Please update soon? I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Drunkella...not in a good place right now is she?  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  Glad you're enjoying it!  Update is coming.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)

Great chapter!

I knew it had to be Jane. She was the only one to be that jealous.

I was scared for Bella and Edward for a moment...I'm glad that they are okay.

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Hi there,

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

More on the way.

XO

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15(shabbyapple)

Great chapter!

I loved everything about it!

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey there!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  Glad you're enjoying it.  Lots more on the way.  Cheers, Leslie

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter!

I loved everything about it. =)

I can't wait to see Bella and Edward on their date. =)

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter!

I loved everything about it. =)

I can't wait to see Bella and Edward on their date. =)



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for your review.  I'm glad you loved it!  Ah, yes, the date at Edwards...hmmmm what will they do there?  *evil laugh*  Update is on the way.  Cheers!

 




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