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I love to read. I read everyday, because I love to escape to a different world. That purpose also applies to listening to music and writing. I love to go into different worlds and lose myself for a while.


I am an 21 year old student and I love the Twilight books  as well as the movies. I also love many other books, such as the classics.


I hope that you enjoy my stories, as I enjoy writing them.


**For those who read my story Prophecy, please know that it has not been abandoned. My previous beta, Elizabeth, had to step down and I've been looking for a replacement. I promise that once the chapters are beta'ed, I will update! I will not abandon this story!


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Summary:

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella's had enough of Edward holding back from her.  She enlists some unexpected help in her pursuit to get Edward to let go of his Victorian views on love and sex.  When unexpected events occur that change the plan for Bella's transformation, what course will their lives take?

Lots of lemons/humor.  Canon couples.  I took the story OOC because I wanted to let them be a little less uptight.  I wanted them to have a lot more fun and a lot less fighting.

THANKS TO OCEANWATERS2006 FOR THE AMAZING BANNER!!!


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 173485
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2009 Updated: April 25, 2010


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Where Else But Chez Cullen?

Everything about this chapter was excellent!

I can understand why the pack would want them to leave. It would suck if your wife or husband aged and you didn't. It would be painful.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Esme's Advice

This sounds like an interesting story! I can't wait to see where this goes! Please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Desperate Times and Desperate Measures

This chapter was hilarious! Emmett and Jasper are something else....

Please update soon? I wonder what Edward will do now that he got her 'gift'.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - How to Remove One's Foot From One's Mouth

Great chapter!

Edward made up for his comment...He's getting better! :)

Looking forward to the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 -- Girls Night Out

Great chapter!

Esme planned this girls night out? Go Esme! I wonder what is going to happen later...

Please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Firsts...

Great chapter!

I can't believe that Edward did what he did! Wow. He certainly is loosening up!

I wonder what is going to happen with Jacob.

Please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7--A Day at the Springs and an Unexpected Request

Great chapter!

Esme and Carlisle are good together. So are Edward and Bella...well, everyone is good together. XD

I loved the interaction between Jasper, Bella and Edward. Hilarious. You hardly never see Jasper getting near Bella and I loved that you put him there, showing that he is a part of the family.

Please update soon? I can't wait to see what will happen in Seattle!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - A Night on the Town...and a Major Glitch in the Plans

Great chapter!

Bella blowing up like that was great. I don't really blame her for getting angry though.

I hope everything goes well with Edward.

Please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)

Great chapter!

I think Edward is going to learn a lot from Bella's wrath.

Jacob imprinting is cool. I'm glad I don't have to worry about him messing things up for Bella and Edward.

Please update soon?

 
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Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 -- Crime and Punishment (Part II)

Great chapter!

Edward's punishment was great. I can't think of anything better than having Edward do anything at human speed. That has to be annoying if you are used to do something in a millisecond.

Enjoy your vacation! Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea

Great chapter!

I think that they enjoyed Jasper's plan, lol. XD

Yeah, I think hunting will be difficult for Edward.

I wonder what Charlie's surprise is...Hmm...

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Charlie's Surprise

This was an awesome chapter! Everything about it was great!

Please update soon? I can't wait for the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Loss of Short Term Memory

This was great!

Poor Edward. :( He's down when Bella's not around. I think that if Emmett finds out about this, then he'll torment Edward.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Peeping Tom and "The Talk"

Excellent chapter!

Edward getting caught peeping into Bella's window was hilarious!

I wonder what will happen at the cabin...You have me guessing. :)

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Let's Get the Show on the Road

This chapter shocked me, but it was good. :)

Excellent job.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!

This chapter was great! And to answer your question, no the blood didn't freak me out. You wrote that scene very well. It wasn't too descriptive and it wasn't non-descriptive Good job. :)

I thought for a moment that Edward wasn't going to go to Charlie's. But, he did and it was all good.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Thwarted at Every Turn

My guess is the guest is Tanya...but I could be wrong.

Even though Edward is having trouble catching a break right now, soon he'll be married and then he won't have anymore problems. =)

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Company's Coming...Not in That Way

I'm glad Tanya was taken care of. Hopefully she (or Mike Newton) won't cause anymore problems.

I can't wait to see the wedding!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Torture at 40,000 Feet

I don't think Edward minded the torture too much, lol.

I can't wait to see what their honeymoon is like!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Paradise Found

Their honeymoon is very cool so far! xD

I can't wait to see what else happens!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Afterglow...and Aftermath

Wow...What a list. Yeah, they had some fun, lol.

I loved the comment Edward threw out about Esme and Carlisle. Priceless. =)

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - School Daze

Great chapter!

Their married life is awesome so far! =)

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Happy Hour

Great chapter!

I'm glad everything went ok with Bella's friends. =)

I hope Edward comes to his senses soon...I don't want Bella to leave him or hate him if he won't change her. He should listen to his brothers and Alice.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods

Great chapter!

I loved everything about it!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Christmas Sexcapades

Great chapter! Their gifts were great! =)

There was a couple of times I thought that Edward was in trouble...Good thing that things worked out.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 




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