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I love to read. I read everyday, because I love to escape to a different world. That purpose also applies to listening to music and writing. I love to go into different worlds and lose myself for a while.


I am an 21 year old student and I love the Twilight books  as well as the movies. I also love many other books, such as the classics.


I hope that you enjoy my stories, as I enjoy writing them.


**For those who read my story Prophecy, please know that it has not been abandoned. My previous beta, Elizabeth, had to step down and I've been looking for a replacement. I promise that once the chapters are beta'ed, I will update! I will not abandon this story!


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Summary:

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Bella and her best friend Jasper are nomadic vampires. What happens when on their travels, they run into a family of vampires by the name of Cullen? Is it possible for them to settle down and finally find true happiness, or will someone from their past show up and take them away? OOC. Earns its rating for later lemons and strong language.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 30429
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: And The Floodgates Open

Poor Bella.

Hopefully no one will judge her for her past. I have a feeling that if someone feels that way toward Bella, Jasper will attack them.

I'm really looking forward to your next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I'm really looking forward to getting Bella's story out there. I hope it's as interesting as it is in my mind.

And thanks for reviewing :]

~Mia

 
Summary: Feature

 

Bella had the perfect life.  She was married to her longtime best friend, had a great job and a beautiful son…until a careless driver stole her happiness.

Edward was fulfilling his dreams.  His residency was almost over, he had a gorgeous fiancé, and he was ready to move forward, starting a family…until a devastating break-up and a health scare in his family shake his foundation.

See, sometimes, life doesn’t go the way you want.  Sometimes, things can happen that change the course you choose.  And most of the time, it takes courage to walk down the new path.

What if that new path started with a tee ball team?

 

Big thanks to sigh-for-sigh for the banner!!

 

Play with me on the forum.  I now have a thread in the Alternate Human thread.  

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 116372
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Take Me Out to the Ball Game

This was a great chapter! I love seeing Edward being a dad toward Seth.

I don't think that Seth will forget this adventure. :) I must admit, it was pretty awesome. (Aside from getting hurt, that is.)

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Edward wants Bella and Seth to be his family.  He can see it clearly now.  :D

Seth has made some amazing memories!  He will get over the injury quickly!

 

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 A Family

Excellent chapter! I loved everything about it!

It ws cute when Seth said, 'can we marry Edward?' XD

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Excellent work!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Seth had to be a part of the proposal.  He was so important to their relationship starting.  :D

 

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Holiday Plans

I knew Tanya would show up somewhere! Grrr...

Please, please, please update soon? I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Yeah...it was bound to happen.  Grrr is right.

The next chapter should be up tomorrow...I hope!

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 The Truth

I'm glad that Edward talked to Tanya...He needed to go through that so later he would know how Tanya really is.

Marcus showing up was excellent. Tanya needs to live with what she's done.

I can't wait for the next chapter! Excellent job!



Author's Response:

Edward needed closure!  He can move on without guilt now.  He knows the truth.

Marcus will keep a short leash on Tanya now. 

Thank you so much!!

 

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Art on the Town

I just found this story and it is awesome! I love everything about it and I can't wait to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you found it!!  Thank you so much!!  I really enjoy writing it - and I love feedback from the people who read!

I try to update once a week.  Working on chapter 13 right now!  :D

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 A Slight Change of Plans

Poor Edward. I feel so bad for him. At least he has Bella to help him. :)

This was a great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Nothing like kicking a guy when he's down...sorry.  Bella will be there for him!  That is a good thing!

 

Thank you so much!!  Writing away!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Comfort

Yay! They are in a relationship and took chances!

Hopefully things will be good for these two. They both need it. :)

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes - they finally took the leap to be in a relationship!!  They still have a little way to go, but isn't that part of the fun?  ;)

Working on chapter 15.

 

Thank you!!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Time Together

This was a good chapter.

Tanya has some nerve texting Edward. What's next? Is she going to show up at his house or something?

They finally got the cabin! Yay! Hopefully they will have nothing but fun times. ^_^

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Tanya...she's just not good at thinking of other people's feelings.  sigh  She's still lurking out there.

Yes, they did get to the cabin!!  Yay!  Some more fun coming up before they go back to real life.

Writing at every opportunity!  My muse is back!!  *dances*

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Running Home

I swear...I know that billy is upset, but he has no right making Bella feel guilty. I'm sure that Jacob would want Bella to be happy.

I think you should make Seth over hear Billy telling her that and have Seth tell him off.

I'm glad that Esme pointed out what went wrong. She's awesome.

I found it so sweet that Seth called Edward to come back for Bella. He is just adorable.

Please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 A Time for Everything

This was a great chapter!

I'm glad that Billy realized that Edward makes both Bella and Seth happy. :)

Alice is having her baby! Yay!

Why do I have a feeling that these twists will have something to do with Tanya?

Please update soon?

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Billy always knew it...he just didn't want to accept it.  He will now.  :D

Yes, there will be a baby in chapter 18!! 

Tanya is certainly twisty material, isn't she?  ;)

Working on 18 right now.  I hope you'll like it!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 New

This was a great chapter!

I loved Edward's confession! So sweet!!

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Edward felt safe revealing his feeligs.  Finally.

Working on the next chapter!!  Yay!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Family

Great chapter!

It's so sad about Esme, but at least she has Carlisle now. ^_^

Edward and Bella finally said those 'ILY's' *sigh*. It was so sweet.

Boy, Tanya does not give up. >_> I have a feeling the next thing she'll do is show up at his door.

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Esme's point was exactly that.  She knew tragedy, and yet she is very happy with Carlisle.  She really helped Bella.

Finally!!  The ILY's have been a long time coming!  Glad you liked it!

Tanya is still out there.  Interesting thought...maybe they will see her...

Working on the update tonight!!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Home

Great chapter!

I'm glad that everyone was supportive of Edward moving in. It's a good decision. :)

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

It's time for all of them to move on.  They have overcome the obstacles and they deserve to be happy!

Next chapter should be up this weekend.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Epilogue: Life Goes On

This was a great ending! I loved the family feel when everyone was gathered with Emily. =)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I really wanted to allow them to move forward with their family, and Emily needed to be there.  So happy you liked it!

 
Summary:

One-shot. Entry for the Age of Edward Contest.

Regency Era Edward

England 1818 - Bella stumbles upon a badly beaten bronze-haired stranger and nurses him back to health. When he awakes, he has no recollection of who he is or what happened. Can their blossoming love survive when his memory returns? And what of James Masen, the "Devil" Duke of Forkshire?

Kiss to Remember banner


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10851
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2009


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Kiss to Remember

This was really good!

 
Summary:

First comes love. Then comes marriage. Then comes...a baby carriage? Isn't that what everyone wants? Bella and Edward cherished their love, their freedom, and their mobility; neither felt the need to be encumbered with children for years to come. Suddenly one of them has a change of heart and is ready for some baby-making. Will the other go along with the idea, just for the sake of their marriage? Or will they truly find that what they wanted all along had been right in front of them? This is a story about deciding what is most important in your life, and doing whatever necessary to get it.
ExB,AH,OOCish, rated NC-17 for adult themes and of course some juicy lemons.

 

come a little closer baby


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 45920
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2009 Updated: March 05, 2010


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Testing, testing 1, 2, 3

This sounds like a great story! I can't wait to see where you take it!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Perfezione

Great chapter!

Bella's kitchen is going to need cleaning again...lol.

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much...Yes, she is definitely going to need to clean that bad boy again...lol. Next chap is done, should be posted soon!

 

Okay, so I'm including a teaser for next chapter :) Enjoy!

“I'm married,” I quickly returned, holding up my left hand, as I wiggled my ring finger.

He glanced vaguely at it, before returning his piercing blue eyes to mine.

“I'm sorry to hear that,” he grinned.


There is a different teaser that I just posted on the thread, along with 3 picture teases. Go check it out:

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5872&start=20

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Breaking down the walls

Awesome chapter!

I'm glad that Alice got Bella out of the house. She needed to get out and away from her memories.

Rob was....ok. He's no Edward ;) lol. I have a bad feeling about him using Bella's phone...but I could be paranoid. XD

I think that Bella might consider having a baby now, since she understands that having a baby is important to Edward. She should at least talk with him more, that is.

Please, please update soon?



Author's Response:

Thank you sweety! :) Yeh ALice came to the rescue she has been like a sister to Bella. As far as Rob...I doooont know. lol Bella's mind may or may not be changing on the baby sunject, and yes she should talk to Edward about it more.

TEASE:“So, what does it say?” I asked anxiously waiting. My teeth sinking down into my bottom lip yet again.

 

Alice stood there calmly, silently staring down at the plastic stick.

 

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Explosions, Discoveries & Revelations

Awesome chapter!

I really hope that Edward and Bella sit down and talk. I think understand why Bella doesn't want to be a mother, but I think that she's wrong. I think that she'll be a great mother.

I also hope that Bella doesn't do anything stupid, like cheat on Edward. I know you promised a HEA, but still....

Please update soon? I can't wait for the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Babies, boys and blondes

I don't think Edward would cheat, so I'm going to go with that thought until the next chapter.

I'm glad that Bella deleted that number....Yay!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Summary:

**Banner made by: Oceanwaters2006**

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella's had enough of Edward holding back from her.  She enlists some unexpected help in her pursuit to get Edward to let go of his Victorian views on love and sex.  When unexpected events occur that change the plan for Bella's transformation, what course will their lives take?

Lots of lemons/humor.  Canon couples.  I took the story OOC because I wanted to let them be a little less uptight.  I wanted them to have a lot more fun and a lot less fighting.

THANKS TO OCEANWATERS2006 FOR THE AMAZING BANNER!!!


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 173485
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2009 Updated: April 25, 2010


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Going to the Chapel

Yay! They are finally married!

Excellent chapter! I loved everything about it!

I can't wait to see what happens next! Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever

Excellent chapter!

I'm looking forward to what is going to happen next! I have a few guesses on what might happen, but I'm not quite sure....

This entire chapter was excellent! Great job!

Looking forward to your next chapter!!!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Car Games and Ball Games

Everything about this chapter was great! I loved it!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - No Good Deed Goes Unpunished and the Other Shoe

Great chapter!

It was sad, but good. =)

I'm sad this is ending, but I can't wait for the next chapter!

 




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