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Member Since: December 16, 2008
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I love to read. I read everyday, because I love to escape to a different world. That purpose also applies to listening to music and writing. I love to go into different worlds and lose myself for a while.


I am an 21 year old student and I love the Twilight books  as well as the movies. I also love many other books, such as the classics.


I hope that you enjoy my stories, as I enjoy writing them.


**For those who read my story Prophecy, please know that it has not been abandoned. My previous beta, Elizabeth, had to step down and I've been looking for a replacement. I promise that once the chapters are beta'ed, I will update! I will not abandon this story!


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Reviews by Bella_Cullen884
 
Summary:

Bella's elevator ride with a gorgeous stranger becomes charged when the lift breaks down.  Things become more complicated when she discovers the stranger is her to-be boss, Edward Cullen.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 73337
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: June 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter!

James is a total creep! I was surprised that Edward didn't beat him up right then.

I think that James has more up his sleeve....

I hope that Edward and Bella can continue their relationship..

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yes, James is super creepy isn't he?  I'm sure Edward wanted to punch him!

Thanks for the review, an update should be coming soon.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awesome chapter!

Poor Bella. :( I think Rose and Alice were right. He was going to tell her he cares for her and wants to continue their relationship. Maybe he loves her!!!

I wish she hadn't gotten drunk though. Now, he'll have to get up the courage to talk to her again. Although, I think he knows how she feels now.

And she told him she loves him! I think she means it!

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Yes, I will update soon...I've sent off chp 10 to my beta.

Thanks so much for the review!  I'm so glad you like the story!

 
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Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm sad this is over but this was a great ending. :) Excellent job.

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This was excellent!

Everything about this chapter was great!

I'm sad this is ending, but I am looking forward to the epilogue. :)

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter!

I loved Edward's mom calling Bella and Edward and Bella's first date! It was really sweet!

James is so creepy!! I hope Bella tells Edward about him calling her.

Please, please, please update soon? (I know, shameless begging. But, if it works then it's not bad.....right? *nervous face...runs away and hides*)



Author's Response:

No need to hide!  I know I'm terrible at updating!  I think I did it in under a month this time...ouch, that's not saying much is it?

The next chapter is done and I'll be submitting it tomorrow so it should be up shortly thereafter!

Thanks for the great review!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter!

I loved the interaction with Edward's parents. It was so sweet!

I knew that these two wouldn't be able to resist for long.

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Hi!  Thanks so much for the review!  I'm glad you enjoyed reading about Edward's parents, I had a good time writing it!

An update shall be coming soon...that's why I'm replying to reviews now.  :)

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter!

No!!! I can't believe that Bella was taken by James! Grr....

I hope that Lauren goes to Edward and tells him what happened. She should, considering it was her fault. And boy, Edward is going to flip!

I'm glad that Edward and Charlie got along. :)

Please, please update soon? *sad face*

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This was great!

I hope that Edward finds Bella soon.

I think that Lauren should have been smacked around a little bit. Make it appear to be an accident. XD

Please update soon? I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks I'm glad you're enjoying it! 

Hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapter...and I'll get a higher rating.  :)

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Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yay! I'm glad that Edward found Bella!

My guess is that Bella wants to find another job and if that's the case, then Edward will let her because he loves her.

I'm sad that this is coming to an end, but I can't wait for the next chapter!

Please update soon?

 
Summary:

 

Bella is soul-searching at a quiet lodge in Forks and she meets the secretive, tormented Edward Masen. Just as their relationship transcends friendship, Edward’s past comes back to haunt him in the most brutal way. B&E are human, but oh…there will be vampires. AU.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 291742
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2011


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Crabby Dinner, Goodnights, and Jupiter

Great chapter!

I loved Bella's slip about Lauren! Hilarious!

I hope that Edward and Bella get together soon...

Looking forward to the next chapter!

 
Summary: Feature

AU AH OOC Canon pairings.

"One choice is sometimes all people can see about you, all they define you as.

This is why I don't cover my wrists. They always provide a way out of surface conversation. When people know you've contemplated your mortality in a real way that is evident on your skin they are less likely to make filler conversation."

Bella was left in Forks to be raised by Charlie. After surviving an eighteen month prior suicide attempt, Bella has a new outlook on life and begins to take hold of the power of her personal choices to shape who she is becoming.

 

In the midst of this paradigm shift, she meets Edward Cullen, who offers her a whole new life path to consider.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 33874
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2009 Updated: November 06, 2009


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: April 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue : Quiet as a Hurricane

This is an interesting story. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon?



Author's Response:

I'm glad I caught your attention!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Lucky as a Gypsy Curse

Great chapter. Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I'm working on the chapter 3 for FF.net and Chapter 2 should be submitted to the que here later today. My goal is to update at least once a week. 

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: June 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Envy of the Bees

Great story. I think that Jasper just kissed her to make her happy. If that's the case, he's a good friend.

Edward needs to learn to talk to people instead of glaring. It just pisses people off, like Bella demonstrated.

Please update soon?

I came upon this story by seeing it when it first came on Twilighted. It's awesome!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: The Lion and the Teacup

Great chapter!

It would be funny for Bella to say that Mike used her as a human shield.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Unsaid Things & a Houdini Escape

I think this is one birthday party Emmett won't forget.

Bella escaped with Edward. Awesome. :)

Please update soon?

 
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Summary:

She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, until he becomes abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she fakes her own death, escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future lemons, some scenes of violence, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)

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Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Jacob, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 167140
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2009 Updated: November 04, 2011


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Complete Disclosure

This was a excellent chapter!

I loved the gifts, the dinner the 'ILY' exchange. I would say that Bella's birthday was the best ever!

Looking forward to your next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

I happen to agree with your statements! It definitely was the best birthday ever! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: April 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Loss

This is a really good story. I can't wait to read more! Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Update is waiting to be edited! Thanks for the review! Glad you like the story!

~~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: May 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: A Way Out

Great chapter. That plan was genius. I can't believe how James acted. I mean, I would've thought that he would be a little upset. That jerk.

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Bella_Cullen884, for you, anything! An update to come soon! Thanks for the compliment. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: A New Friend

Awesome chapter! Carlisle and Esme are the sweetest people, helping her out like that. Getting her the documents she needs and she can still teach. They're giving her a new life with some of the old. The good parts, anyway.

Please update soon? I can not wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

They are incredibly sweet, and a joy to create. An update will come sometime next week. Stay tuned, and thanks for sticking with this story! It means A LOT to me!!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Talking About The Past

Poor Bella. Edward is right. She's a strong person to stay and put up with James.

Edward is such a sweet guy, promising to take care of her like that. :)

I know I've said this before, but I still think that Carlisle and Esme are his parents. XD

I can't wait for your next chapter! Please update soon?



Author's Response:

hmmm...your speculations may just be right, but we're a few chapters away from finding out once and for all about that...

The next chapter should be done pretty soon...the words are flowing!! :)

Thanks for reading, reviewing, and enjoying (as it is quite obvious that you are!! ^_^)

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: A Cross Country Trip

Awesome chapter.

It was great that Esme and Carlisle gave her all of that. Now, she can start over...I wonder who she has to call to teach at Forks Elementary....hmmm

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

I love how everyone is guessing who will be at the school to help her! (tents hands like Mr. Burns) **Excellent**...

Thanks for reviewing and reading the story thus far! More to come very soon!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Welcome to Forks

Awesome chapter....I wonder why Esme giggled when Bella told her where her new house was....Hmm Could it be that Edward lives in the neighborhood?

I love Alice and I loved it when Bella thought her and Alice would be friends.

I think it was a bad idea to call her parents and tell them her new name. That was really bad. But, she needed to talk to them and I understand that. We don't think clearly sometimes when it comes to those we love.

Who was it that said, "There you are"? I hope it's not James. But, her jaw dropping to the floor could be in a good way, such as, "Wow. He's hot." Or in a  bad way like, "I'm dead." Which one is it?? I can't stand the suspense!

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

hmmm...interesting theory...chapters 6 and 7 are already written, so you'll just have to wait a little bit to find out...

Sorry about keeping you in suspense, though...it is necessary! I love your insights. Keep 'em up!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Anxiety

Awesome chapter. I And it looks like Edward likes her....Bella shouldn't feel bad about her behavior. She went through something terrible and it will take time to trust someone like that. Edward will forgive her. I know he will.

 I hope that she trusts him soon, though.

Please update soon?

 



Author's Response:

Me thinks you are a mind-reader, madam...

;)

Thanks for the review, and for reading thus far. It means so much to know that people are enjoying this story!!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The 4th of July BBQ

Great chapter!

Edward is so sweet, wishing her a Happy Canada Day!

I'm glad that she told him what was going on. Now, he can understand why she acts the way she does.

Please, please update soon?



Author's Response:

so sorryfor the delay in replying to your review!!! hahaha at least I know that you've reviewed after this, so I know you're still reading!! Thanks for that!!

And yes, I will update soon, just for you!! :)

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday Surprises

It's Carlisle and Esme! I know it!

This was an excellent chapter! Edward is sweet, being gentle and patient. :)

Please, please update soon? Please? I can't wait for the next chapter! :D



Author's Response:

well, since you asked three times for an update soon, how can I deny you anything??? :)

And thanks for the compliment. I am pretty happy with the way this chapter turned out, too!

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

 




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