You are incredible.  I wish I had the writing prowess that you do... but alas, no dice.  So three chapters left... good god, don't let Bella's reunion be last.  although, I have a feeling that the build-up is going to have to start from Rosalie or Alice (I haven't decided if Jasper will go with Edward or not), then then Rosalie will do something to help Bella realize that she needs to talk to Edward.  After all, Edward is not perfect.  The holidays are approaching, so i have my fingers crossed for you to post at least one chapter before the holidays... please???? :-(

Oh, and obviously I'm standing and applauding your awesomeness for this chapter.

I am not going to read a tale of two edwards until you update more frequently!  I love this story, and every single time it's updated I immediatly drop everything I do to read.  PLEASE try to update more often.  I hate reading stories that aren't completed because I don't like to wait to hear happiness... it really leaves an uneasy feeling in my stomach.  And Edward and Bella parting on this note, I can't explain how upset I get over these fictional characters.  I'm 23 for christ sake!  But I take it personally!  So... please... soon?

I LOVE this story.  Very creative.  I can't wait to see what happens between your guily Edward and Innocent Bella. 

Will he turn to the Cullen's when he realizes that he loves Bella?  And that he needs to cleanse himself of his past before he can be with Bella?  Or will he finally succomb to Bella's scent, take her, stop before he ends her life, and then pray that when she wakes up after burning that she does not hate him.  And this singular event will cause him to stop the path of destruction that he is on?

Will Bella and Alice become best friends?  Will Alice be the artist who reshapes Edwards life?  Showing him reason, giving him the tools he needs to come clean?  Show him the futures that are possible if he relented his lonely brooding. 

Will is be Esme's love that finally shows him that there is more to life than what he has summed it up to be?

My hope is that he goes to Bella, finally letting his HUMAN subconscious/soul overwhelm his desire for her blood, explains everything, and instead of her running from him, she see's that there's something more to him.  And she is the catalyst for the redemption of his soul.

Please update soon?

I have always loved a spunky Alice... keep her coming.

Hey... what the hell happened between her and Edward!!!  And THANK YOU for keeping Jake out of the picture, early.  I really can't stand him... meddlesome twerp.

My stomach feels like it's going to wretch.  The feelings that are going through her mind are completely believable.  Great job as a writer... keep it coming.  I really want to here Edward's point of view though... I know he wasn't happy about seeing Jacob.  he must have heard that Bella used him as a pick-me-up-lay.  Perhaps he came back one dark night after he had broken Bella, with the idea in mind to beg for Bella's forgiveness, only to peek through a window or hear through a door, that Bella had shacken up with a (stupid, annoying and anything but attractive) native american guy.  I really want to hear what was going through his mind as he and Bella exchanged their first words after those years apart... or how he felt after seeing her for the first time.

But really, all I want is another chapter that will at least give me some cheek caressing and hushed whispers of Bella's name on Edwards lips... keep it comin girl. 

I can't wait to hear this on the ific broadcast!

Umm... continuation please?  It has a LOT of potential. 

Please write more... please?  Soon?  An early christmas gift??  Please?

Please, for the love of God, stop the agony.  It's coming off the two of them in droves.  I'm begging, please... let Bella give a little.  I know he doesn't deserve it, but its hard reading about how tormented both of them are.  Two souls shouldn't exist when they are that tormented, shredded and broken.

Give them some life.  Give them a brief moment of happiness.  Give them something to cling on to so that they may work through this mess that Edward has created.

Granted, Bella should have stood up and been the woman she is now, and told him when she had the chance, that he needed to understand that their lives are now infinitly intertwined, and that his decisions will irrevocably effect both of their lives.  For better and for worse.  How could he not see the shell of a human she would become?  How come alice didn't forsee Edward being such a complete ass?  Eeek.

Happiness... even just a glimmer... I beg you.

I fucking love you.

Seriously, if I was gay, i'd be your stalker.

But for now, i'll settle for some more Edward and Bella.  Please?  Oh please, oh please, oh please???  With Bella's cherry on top???

:-D

Please update sooner... I wanted to know more!  Please!

I love a powerful, spunky, flirty Bella and a hardass, sexy, prince charming Edward.  My favorite types of AU characters. 

Although, this story has a lot of potential and I will be following it veryyyy closely.  So hurry up and update soon.  I want to know what happens when Edward looks into the eyes of guilty Bella when he walks into her office tomorrow morning... eeek.  Can't wait. 

Update soon!  I want to hear my email go 'Mail Motha Fucka' on my iPhone.  It makes me giggle whenever I get an email letting me know a favorite story is update.

So hurry, I need to giggle.

I loveeee the angle that you've taken with the story line!  VERY VERY cool idea.

After all, it makes sense doesn't it?  Alice is gifted with precognition, so why would she be able to see Edward being infinitly happy if it was the thing that he was searching for so adamently in his life. 

Can't wait to see you update, do you have a schedule that you'll follow??