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Penname: pirategirlashley [Contact]
Real name: ashley reed
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Member Since: September 06, 2009
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22 years old.


loves to read and listen to music. also loves to dance.


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Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5438]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 65: Unexpected: Bella's POV

dude. i just started reading this and it is amazing. but seriously....wow...great cliff hanger there...you had me going when charlie asked if she expecting someone.....my heart was racing and still is. you should really think about publishing. just not this story...lol...your good...really really good.



Author's Response:

thank you so much.  to be honest, i'm not really interested anymore in writing professionally.  deadlines and agents and editors and publishers take all the fun out of it.  and i'm absolutely doing this because it's fun.  if i were 5 years old, this would be my version of recess :)

 
Human Pet by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 673]
Summary:

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Edward doesn't make it in time to the ballet studio.  James has a far worse fate in store for Bella than death.  One that she had never imagined in her worst nightmares.

** This story is graphic and contains sexual assault. If you are sensitive to that topic, please don't read any further. **


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 47514
[Report This] Published: March 28, 2009 Updated: December 11, 2009


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

this is so good. i really enjoy the way you have james and bella sorta linked together. and i think your dead on with the cullens. espacially Alice and Edward. they love bella somuch. its so great.

 
The Hybrid by Vee Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

Fifty years after the birth of Renesmee, the Cullens are blissfully going through life, completely unaware of what is in store for their future.

But how could the discovery of Renesmee not lead the Volturi to some scientific research of their own?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Other Character, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 28677
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2009 Updated: September 09, 2009


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

please please tell me your going to continue with this story. i really love it and im dieing to know who it ends.  i really do like your style of writing. its like i can see it in my minds eye, very much so like the Twilight books. please keep going with this one.

 
Elysium by gothicfictionfan Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 608]
Summary:

This story begins almost six years after Bella became a vampire. Renesmee is almost an adult and has begun to attend an all-girls private school while the rest of her family begins classes at the nearby public school. She is unaware of Jacob's past feelings for her mother. On the first day of class, Edward and Bella encounter an unusual individual who begins to suspect something is wrong with the mysterious Cullen family. The story has shifting point-of-view.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 92540
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: August 13, 2010


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Unraveling - Jacob

please please please tell me that you are continuing this story. i really really love it. its so well written

 

 
Summary:

 

THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HIATUS. At least until september-october 2010. I am getting married in august and it's hard to plan a wedding and write at the same time. I applaud those who can do that. I am NOT giving up on this story and I WILL finish it. Eventually. Thanks for understanding.

After Edward left in New Moon, Bella changed. She changed everything about herself in hopes of forgetting him. She graduated and moved down to California. The one place she knew she would never see the Cullens. 4 years later, she is now known as Elle Swan, a successful interior designer. What happens when she is sent somewhere else for her job?

 

Thank you to heatherdawnc for the banner!

Favorite review so far:

Ahh... so good!! A perfect mix with fluff and reality, you're soo good at writing that I gets envious *envious sigh*.

Have I told you how good this story and idea really is. There are many different stories where Bella changes her personality drastically after Edward left. And of all those stories I have been reading I think you are the one that has captured Bella's personalty best. Many of the stories have changed Bella that much that if she wasn't namned Bella you shouldn't know it was her, but you, even if you see the big changes, you can find the Bella how she was shy, sweet and madly in love with Edward four years ago. With another words - I think you are the one that have captured Bellas character best.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 69614
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

i like this story. its good so far. real good.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summary:

Forget Denmark- Something's rotten in Scotland, and things are about to get a whole lot worse when a certain sneeky, future-seeing vampire decides it's time for the Cullen family- the whole Cullen family- to take a trip. But, something's missing from Alice's visions, something that's going to, well, mess up all her plans. And once things get started, there's really not much anyone can do to stop a certain vengeful vamp from getting what she wants, one way or another.

Edward has been running for too long, and he's about to realize:

Blood On Hand

 

 

WARNING: This is NOT a happy, fun story. People die in brutal ways. People are tortured, maimed, and mentally abused in even more brutal ways. If you're sensitive to such things, please do not read this story. I understand it is not for everyone.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2853
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: September 28, 2009


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1-Bella

its good so far. really good. keep going. i like it.

 
Make-up Sex: One Shot by Vee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

This is a one shot accompanying "The Hybrid", but even if you haven't read "The Hybrid" I urge you to read this - it's full of lemony goodness! 

 

 

WARNING: This one shot is full of smut and lemons and is intended only for those over the age of 18. If you are younger than 18 or if you find things of a graphic/sexual nature offensive, please do not read. 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Nessie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2430
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2009 Updated: August 08, 2009


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Be Quiet, Nessie

that was so hot.....i loved it....god i cant wait till new moon comes out. i so want to see more a jacob without his shirt.  damn girl.....your makeing me think about him....again.

 
Lovegame by moneybeet Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Every night she goes about her business ignorant to the man who watches her from her window. She doesn't understand what is coming. She couldn't know the horrors he would subject her to in the name of fascination. E/B, DARK.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 15979
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2009 Updated: February 09, 2010


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Watching

i liked it alot. good job.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I hope you continue to enjoy reading this!

 
Summary:

AU set after the events of New Moon. Instead of staying in Forks, Bella and the Cullens left following the confrontation with Jacob in the woods. Then, ten years later, still human, and with the Volturi seeking to kill her, Bella returns to Forks, seeking the help of the one person she knows will never turn her away. Jacob/Bella, though there will be no Edward bashing.

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Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Charlie, Embry, Jacob, Sam, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 61569
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2010 Updated: January 10, 2013


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Back to Where It All Began

keep writing its so good. i love it so far.

 
Surrender by goldenmeadow Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

‘And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom.’ Edward left. Bella changed. He came back. Who will surrender? Bitterly cold, achingly ardent. AU/M. OOC.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 20021
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2010 Updated: May 15, 2010


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Surrender

i liked it. it was a bit confusing to me. but yeah it was good.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  If you read more of my stuff, you might get a handle on my style.

Cheers for reading and reviewing,

Rie~

 
Summary:

Addictions are never easy to cope with and Bella is all too familiar with their destructive power as she struggles with the nightmares from her past. It isn't until the Cullens arrive in Forks that Bella realizes if she doesn't get out now, her addictions will stick with her for life.

 

Thank you to Maddux for the fantastic banner! It is genius and I love it! :)


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 118539
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2010 Updated: January 23, 2013


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Because of You

i really really like so far...its a lot darker...i kinda saw bella doing something like this in new moon when edward left...very well written also.

 
Summary:

Would you keep a promise to the one you love, even after they left? When all you want to do is die, would you stay alive? In a dark cemetery, a man with too many regrets reads the effects of the biggest regret of his life.

 

Oh, and, I don't own Twilight!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1874
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2010 Updated: May 22, 2010


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i loved it. it was so great and touching and yes you did make me cry. i want those cookies now please. jk. but very well written and very great visually. at least i could see it in my minds eye anyway.



Author's Response:

Sorry, I ran out of chocolate chip cookies. What? I was hungry! :) And thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Realize by loyalluv Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 124]
Summary:

Edward and Bella have always been best friends. While Bella spends her time sleeping around, Edward searches for a serious relationship. He soon finds it in Tanya. Several events, life altering changes, and serious eye openers make Edward and Bella realize that what they've been looking for is each other. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 40112
[Report This] Published: August 01, 2010 Updated: February 20, 2012


Reviewer: pirategirlashley Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Guilt and change

omg. u are so not putting her with jacob. lol.  i love this story so far and i have been following you on twitter, my name on there is pirategirlash  so yeah. omg your good. love it though. hate tanya by the way. when u getting rid of her? lol



Author's Response:

I planned Jacob to be in this story from the beginning, so he isn't going anywhere lol sorry. Thanks for following me on twitter! I'll post a teaser for chapter six soon :) Everyone hates Tanya, but that's what I was going for lol. Thanks you for the review!





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