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Penname: its simply me n you [Contact]
Real name: Leanna Ertz
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Member Since: September 02, 2009
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Blood Lines by windchime Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2469]
Summary:

 

Edward reveals a secret from his human time which leaves Bella shocked and wondering just how well she knows the man she is about to marry.

This is very much an Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you angel-gidget for the banner!

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 256624
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009


Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: July 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Full Circle

What a beautiful story.  Really, really enjoyed it!  Interesting take on the "Lion & Lamb angle".  It does make sense though.  Bella holds most of the "power" in their relationship doesn't she?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews :)  I'm glad you've enjoyed the story, thanks for letting me know.

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: July 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: What Edward Heard

Started this story last night & am really enjoying it.  It's a very different story idea that Edward had a child from when he was human & I like it.

Am glad that Edward was able to meet George.  It's very interesting to hear what both George & Rebecca were thinking during the visit and how George seemed to realize that Edward could "hear" him.  

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: July 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Break and Enter

Great meeting with his son.  So glad that they got to know each other.  I had a feeling that Edward would help the music school that his son created.  Very sweet when Edward kissed him on the forehead before he left.  

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: July 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Surprise... baby on the way! Great writing of this birth

 
Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2242]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

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Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: July 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Playoff Hockey

He asked her to marry her!  Now we just have to get her to agree with him.  

 

The guy in the crazy suit, is kind of creepy.  Just by looking at him & his facial looks, I can tell that I wouldn't like to listen to him.  

Love your story.  Am learning some things about hockey too.

 
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Banner made by: Emerald_Rosalie! Thank you!!!!!

Madison Davis comes highly recommended as the entertainment industry's best Personal Assistant. Throughout the past three years, she's worked tirelessly to establish herself as a force to be reckoned with. However, when an opportunity presents itself to branch out into the Motion Picture industry, she never dreamt it would challenge her knowledge and abilities as a Personal Assistant. Ever since the release of Twilight, Robert Pattinson has become demanding, egotistical, and compeltely self-centered. His ridiculous demands and outright rude attitude makes Madison want to strangle him. Can Rob get over this blast of fame and remember what it's like to just enjoy life? Can Madison open Rob's eyes to what life is like outside of the Twilight craze?


Categories: Other Characters: Ashley Greene, Jackson Rathbone, Kellan Lutz, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 130208
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2009 Updated: September 30, 2010


Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Annoyance and Acceptance

Glad they talked and cleared up a few things

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5723]
Summary:

 

 

When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Excursions

I love the way that you describe Rob's gifts.  It's so true that he is a wonderful person inside!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

I really truly believe Rob takes his work seriously, and is an exceptional artist. I love that he is humble and self-deprecating. It's so nice to see that Hollywood hasn't corrupted him.

Thanks for the review!

be sure to review chapter 10, you get a reward if you do!

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57-Mum is here

So glad that Jen has Clare with her.  (At least Nick did something right for them).

 

 



Author's Response:

haha. Nick is coming around, yeah?

Jen needs Clare. she needs that motherly influence to see her thru till she gets home to Rob.

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Welcome Home

Finally they are back in each other's arms.  YEAH!!!

Loved the descriptions and welcome that Jen received from the whole family too.



Author's Response:

YAY! they are!

thanks! i love the family.. there will be more of that...but next is some ROBJEN time!

thanks my dear! sending you a tease of 27 for ya!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: July 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96-Life

So happy to see a new chapter!  Liked how you handled the jump in time.  

Sounds like a baby is on the way... YEAH.  Is one of the sisters the surrogate?  Can't wait to see what they have... maybe twins (we could have one of each).  

It's been fun reading your take on Rob's life & it's good to see a happy take on his life. Hopefully the circumstances in his real life will get better.  Feel bad for him.

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Realizations

Way to throw us for a curve at the beginning of the chapter.  I totally thought that it was Jen's viewpoint & was pleasantly surprised  when it was Rob.

It's wonderful to see them get to talk so they learn & understand more about each other too.



Author's Response:

Heehee! I love my surprise RPOV! it was a blast to write!

And yes, they are finally opening up!

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

I have sent you a little reward as thank you for reviewing Chapter 10! check you email. Contact me if you don't receive it.

thanks!

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Game Time

Wow. "Rug Rob" and "Guitar Rob" together.  

Read this this morning.  (I don't think I should have read this before work).

;-)



Author's Response:

LOL! yes... maybe not the best thing to read before work... but hopefully it put a smile on your face!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Alone

What a chapter!  I was crying for her & could feel the heartbreak that she's experiencing.  Thinking that Nick sent her the horrible text??

 

Also, am Hoping that the woman is Rob's sister or Mom???  

PLEASE update soon.  



Author's Response:

thanks my dear!

sad sad chappy i know...

nick? hmmmm....

Sis or mom? double hmmmmmm....

I am updating super quick... i hate leaving you all here...believe me... (my protective pattinson panties are starting to chafe...)

answers very soon! I promise!

xoxo

steph

 
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This banner was made by the amazing Angel and Lauren!

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Banner by mmp1953  Thanks, Margie, you're the best!

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What kinds of dreams and fantasies are "older" women allowed to have? Just because my body was older didn't mean that I wasn't young at heart and mind. A chance encounter with Kellan Lutz would re-enforce that fact. My life would change forever.

I am so humbled and thankful to those who nominated and voted for KMIYM in the Faithful Shipper Awards - Spring  2011. It came in Second place in the RPF - Actor/Other Character Catagory   Thank you, thank you, thank you! Love y'all! 


Categories: Other Characters: Kellan Lutz, Other Character
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Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 258790
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2011


Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: May 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 A Visit, An Out, and a Special Weekend

Loved the strip tease!

Glad that Ellen's friend approves, that should help her out a lot.

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: May 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 An Exciting Weekend Adventure

Kellen is Grampy.... I think that's so funny.  (and cute too)  It's hard to imagine him as a Grampy, but on the other hand, I can also see it as so Kellen. 

 

Am really enjoying your story.  I found it when I was looking at the winners of "The Faithful Shipper" awards. Congrats.

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Wedding

How beautiful! (You were right about the tissues) 

The love that you've been describing between the 2 of them is so beautiful & something that many of "older" readers enjoy reading & seeing.  Thanks!

It was so sweet that all of Ellen's "sisters" were brought out to the wedding.  What a special touch.  

I don't always review as I am anxious to see what the next chapter brings!  Look forward to continuing 

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Meeting the Twins

Tears & Laughter... perfect chapter!  Kellan's reaction to the diapers had me laughing. 

Just love meeting the new members of the family.

 

 
Polar by Witch Hazel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 287]
Summary:

Jackson Rathbone has turned his world upside down and is attracted to a woman who is his polar opposite in every way. Life and outside sources try to tear them down and pull them apart. Is magnetic attraction stronger than vice?

* Lemons ahead. *


Categories: AU-Human, Other Characters: Jackson Rathbone
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 96589
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: March 26, 2010


Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Loved this story & can't wait for the sequel.  

You did a great job showing how these two worked through so many challenges, but still were able to keep things together

 
Summary:

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Manwhoreward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 174756
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2010 Updated: September 16, 2010


Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great Chapter!

Shopping & singing with the girls; Easter with all the family;  and then the proposal! Edward planned everything out & Bella just kept interrupting him.  The custom crossword puzzle was perfect for the 2 of them!  

Thank you, thank you, thank you

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Carlisle's letter was beautiful. So glad that Edward realized that he was wanted & not a "mistake".  I so look forward to them meeting in the future and hopefully getting to know each other.  

Look forward to your next chapter!   

 
Finding Forever by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1350]
Summary:

On her way to London, a broken Sarah Anderson meets the one person who can save her from her darkened existence. Their age difference is the least of their worries.  What will they teach each other and do you really have a second chance at forever?

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Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes Word count: 268155
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: February 14, 2011


Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)

I'm enjoying this story so much. 

You're writing is great.  I can feel the emotion that the 2 of them are feeling with having to leave each other.  It's really emotional.

Look forward to continuing



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing and for your kind words.

I'm glad you are enjoying.

Cheers.

 
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Banner made by my amazing reviewer extraordianire and sweetest reader in the fandom, buhblack  Thank you so much <3

June is fresh to California from New York with her two quirky best friends (and fellow bandmates) by her side.  Soon she meets a devilishly handsome man - the first she's noticed in four years - and is instantly drawn to him.  Little does June know that this man is not only an actor rising to fame but a member of a well-known band as well.  Soon her life collides with this mysterious man, known as Jackson Rathbone.

Take an exit at band collaboration, a left at blind date rd., pass a few lemons, go straight through the drunken skinny dipping intersection, take a right when you get to loads of sexual tension and try to ignore the creepy hand fetish trying to give out directions and you just might be in the Land Of Rathbone.


Categories: Other Characters: Jackson Rathbone
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 155361
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2010 Updated: January 05, 2011


Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Gettin' Frisky

am enjoying your story. Really liked their meeting each other and then as she discovers who he is, not knowing that he's famous.

 

You could really feel all of their excitement at finally possbily getting discovered as a new band.

 
Behind the Lens by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1113]
Summary:

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"Once upon a time, there was a girl that wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. Not only did he sweep me off my feet, he managed to completely carry me away."

Where one story ends, another begins. Under a watchful eye, they live . . . Behind the Lens.

Sequel to Behind the Reel.

http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=1989

A fictional tale of Rob & Kristen.

 

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Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 199827
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2010 Updated: May 31, 2012


Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: December 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Who's Laughing now Sparky?   She sure got the last word in that time didn't she?  

This keeps me laughing! Thanks

 
London Rain by duders79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 990]
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London RainEvie Russo works hard and plays hard.  She also has a penchant for late night internet browsing, focussing her attentions on Robert Pattinson.  This story is about what happens when the object of her fantasies becomes a reality. 

How will the fantasy compare to the reality?  Whether she likes it or not, Evie Russo is about to find out...

(Big thanks to candykizzes24 for the awesome banner!)


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 275820
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2010 Updated: December 06, 2011


Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: September 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable

Dinner with the family went well.  It  was cute to see the family teasing Rob about his past.  

Of course, "bedroom time" later on was hot!  The boys cooking breakfast was very cute

 

New York, here we come!



Author's Response:

Oooh, you're catching up!  Yay!

I loved writing the Pattinson family - he had to get a little bit of a tease from them. ;)

Rob and Tom playing air guitar and cooking breakfast - every home should have one! 

Hope you enjoy NY!

Duders

 
Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed
Date: June 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - To See Her Smile

Great chapter!  What great birthday presents Evie gave to Rob.  It's nice to see the two of them getting back to some sort of "normal".  

Loved the visit to see Tai. She is definitely a beautiful creature. 

 




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