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Penname: MooChapman [Contact]
Real name: Moo Chapman
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Member Since: December 13, 2008
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Gifted by nofangsallowed Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 256]
Summary:

The Armando Voltarino School for the Gifted seems almost too good to be true.  All students receive full tuition, housing and meals free of charge.  Students are also allowed to drive a myriad of school cars and are given a limittless credit card.  This seems like every kid's dream come true--or is it really a nightmare?

Follow six students as they unravel the mysteries behind the school and discover a plot that could affect all mankind.


Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Corin, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Laurent, Marcus, Mike, Rosalie, Santiago, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 42072
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: February 06, 2009


Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Research

just a note to say that I am reading your fic and enjoying it, infact I read it today at work and got nothing done,

thanks for a fun day

Moo



Author's Response:

Thanks, Moo!  How kind of you.  I'm glad you are enjoying it, and I appreciate you reading it.  I have 2 other stories--Socially Awkward Vampires (which I'm ending, but planning on a sequel) and Cinderbella, if you are interested.  SAV is a roller coaster ride--angst, humor, dangerous cliffies. 

 
1918 by teamEdwardonly Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

What if Bella had lived in 1918? Would the story of Bella and Edward change or remain the same?

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 55339
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2008 Updated: March 28, 2009


Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: January 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Transformation

I loved this. I can't wait to read more. thatnk you for shearing

Moo

 
Summary:

When Bella moves to Forks to live with her father, Sheriff Charlie Swan, she finds herself intrigued by the town’s occupants and despite warnings, unwittingly becomes a pawn in the intense and explosive rivalry between the Cullen family and their neighbors the Blacks.

Set in the American West circa 1880. All Human/AU. Canon Pairings. Rated R for violence and gun play.

 


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 70936
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2010


Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I very much liked this and I hope to read more soon

Moo

 
Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: March 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thought maybe if I bugged you, you might post the next chapter quicker.

So this is me beging for an update. Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please.

Please update soon
Moo Chapman

 
Reviewer: MooChapman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 (v)

I have to say that it was worth the wait thank you so much, I really am enjoying this fic and I can't wait to read more from you.

Moo Chapman.

 
Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: April 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Good work I hope to read more soon

Moo Chapman

 
Summary:

Reclusive computer prodigy Edward Cullen needs a personal assistant and single mom Bella Swan needs a job. What happens when their worlds collide? Will Bella learn to trust the shy genius and will he be willing to open up to her as well?

Thank you to Shug for my beautiful banner!!!!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 17994
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: April 08, 2009


Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: March 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Just a quick note to tell you the i read this fic and that I am enjoying it, I hope to read more soon.

Moo Chapman



Author's Response:

thank you update is tomorrow

 
Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: April 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A fantastic update, I can't wait for more.
Really I could read this all day a not get sick of it, good work.

Moo Chapman



Author's Response:

thank you

 
Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: April 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh you have to send me one of those Greekward's when you get them.

I'm really enjoying this fic and hope to read more soon

Moo



Author's Response:

cloning is being done at rapid pace thank you for reading my madness

 
Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: April 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Jacob is such a sh!t.

Step one of operation 'Move Bella In' is underway can't wait for step two.

I read this at work when you updated it but didn't have a chance to review and I only now remembered so my apoligises for the lateness of my review.

Moo Chapman

 
Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: April 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward was so cute with Charlie, i can wait for more

 

Moo Chapman

 
On Our Way by Alverdine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary:

A long and tiresome journey and a wrongly booked ticket later, Bella Swan finds herself sitting next to renowned actor Edward Cullen and learns that whether flying coach or first class, karma gets her way.

Exerpt:

“Well… that’s embarrassing.” I looked up in the direction of the male voice that was responsible for the comment and nearly died. Nearly. Instead, I shrieked and flung my glass of champagne right in the lap of the owner. I was clearly hallucinating, because the man sitting next to me could not possibly be… I closed my eyes and opened them again. But he was still there a slightly uncomfortable look on his beautiful face as he retrieved my glass from his lap and inspected the damage to his trousers.

“This is a new reaction,” he mumbled all the while I gaped at him and glanced at the magazine checking whether he had jumped out of it. But Edward Cullen was still gazing at me from the page, his eyes hypnotising and in addition the exact - slightly displeased - replica (with perhaps a bit more facial hair, and clothes) was undeniably sitting in the chair next to me.

“I’m so sorry!” I finally managed to croak out when I remembered how to speak. Before I could thoroughly think it through I grabbed a napkin from my backpack and dove to dab his pants. He was not the only one who jumped up as my hand came into contact with his crotch.

“I got it,” he said louder than I had heard him speak so far. For a moment he cast me an exasperated look and I almost felt the need to ensure him I was not trying to feel him up. He held up his hand as a stop sign and snatched the napkin from my hand, still hovering over him. I wasn’t sure whether he was mad or embarrassed. I was too busy trying to sink through my chair in shame.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 82552
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: January 30, 2010


Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Down the Rabbit Hole

I hope to read more soon, good work really.

Moo Chapman



Author's Response:

Thank you :) more coming up

 
Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: April 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Out of Tune

Great chapter can't wait to read more.

Moo Chapman



Author's Response:

thanks! glad you enjoyed it

 
Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: April 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: A Bundle of Lilies

Another wonderful chapter.
 I hope you do well on your exam and when it done you better writer anorther chapter or I may get pouty.
And trust me there is nothing wrost then a pouty 28 year old Australian with way too much time on her hands.

Moo Chapman



Author's Response:

Goodness! A pouty 28 year old Aussie! Good thing it's called "Down Under" for a reason (funnily Down Under applies more to where I'm from than where you're from :P ) I could try hiding till you get here to flog my sorry bum. No worries...I shall pick up the metaphorical pen once I have that bloody exam out of the way. Glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for the adamant support!

Eva

 
Summary:

After surviving a traumatic event in Phoenix, Bella comes to the realization that she will never be normal again.  Bella feels that Phoenix holds too many reminders of what happened and decides to move to Forks to live with her father, Charlie.  Not long after starting at Forks High School, Bella meets the Cullen family and quickly realizes that they, too, are not quite normal, just like her.  She is intrigued by this.  Eventually, she falls in love with Edward.  Even after discovering their deepest secret, she is still not surprised by this extraordinary family.  But what happens when Bella's past tracks her down in Forks?


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2128
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: April 14, 2009


Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting, I hope to read more soon

 

Moo Chapman

 
Undercover Blue by alphadork Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary:

Copward and Officer Bella go undercover to solve a case.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 35183
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2009


Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting start I hope to see more from you soon.

Moo Chapman



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

 
Summary:

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Edward struggles to come to grips with his new life in Forks and a father he’s just met for the first time. He's unfamiliar with the easy going lifestyle he's been thrust into with the sudden death of his mom and step-father. Gone are the strict rules filled with harsh discipline and constant demands for perfection on the piano.

He finds a reason to fight his past demons when he meets a dark haired beauty that captures his heart. But then, his whole world is in jeopardy when a stalker threatens Bella and tries to destroy everything Edward now holds dear. LEMONS


"Our being is subject to all the chances of life." Katherine Anne Porter


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 54930
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2010 Updated: December 29, 2010


Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hi, just dorping a quick note to say that I am reading and enjoying your fic. Hopefully I will think of some thing more constructive to say next time.

 
Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Carlisle, he really didn't want to see the blindingly obvious.
Off to read the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: MooChapman Signed
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Still reading.





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