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Penname: GoSpikey [ Contact]
Real name: Wendy
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Member Since: August 28, 2009
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Summary:  Seven years have passed since Edward and Bella last saw each other. They grew up as children and even became good friends. Once they entered high school, Edward became distant and eventually severed all ties with her. Confused and hurt, Bella moved on with her life in Seattle.Through it all, Bella had her older brother Emmett to get past the estrangement. Now, with Edward's imminent return to Seattle to help out with his sister Alice's wedding, Bella can't help wondering what drove away her brother's best friend all those years ago.
Nominated for Best Novel-Incomplete at the Eddie and Bellie Awards.
http://www.thecatt.net/tw/Vote/aspx
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 247400
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2010
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: August 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2
Emmett needs to die. Urgently.
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: August 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
He knew that she would find someone someday, and he knew he couldn't stay to watch it happen.
Selfish motherfucking bastard.
I really, really hope your Bella grows a pair and calls him out on all that shit, because seriously... people aren't this submissive in life, right?
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: August 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Worth Fighting For
I kissed Edward Cullen.
Her friend Angela had never seen her re-shelve books in such a happy
Previous
I'm going to assume there's a word or a few words missing at the end of the chapter?
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: August 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
Before she knew what was happening, her fist connected with his jaw. Edward was unprepared for the blow and fell back, holding his face.
There was venom in her voice. "You coward."
Ah, FINALLY! And she even punches him without breaking something, PRICELESS.
Now, let's ask him from WHEN he loved her, and since he was thinking of her always, if it was also during fucking Gianna... Sonofabitch, he can fuck someone, but he couldn't even practically stand her holding hands with someone, without them being gay, or what? I sure hope that she'll keep her legs shut for a while, because they did that way too early. Like Bella said, after 7 years you deserve answers (in this case she needed to know, because like she said, it was what was best for him).
Sonofa...
Spikey
Summary: WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN
After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?
NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.
Winning Summary:
"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight." With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can. The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption. That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope. The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister. What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative? Will Bella's hopes be destroyed? What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?
Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"
Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!
Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No
Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: September 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Halloween
we weren’t attending the Halloween bash at Volturi – the only club we went to – at my
How come the club name, or that's what I suspect it was, changed from Voultri to Volturi?
Summary: 
For True Edward Fans. An in-depth, accurate portrayal of the heart, mind, and soul of the beloved Edward Cullen as he deals with the complex themes and events taking place during Eclipse. RATED T FOR TEEN, ALTHOUGH CHAPTER 8 CONTAINS SENSUALITY. CANON. EPOV.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 64609
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2008
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: August 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Theme from Chapter 22 - Fire and Ice - Part Three
Updated: December 18, 2008
Argh, I can't believe you haven't updated this story since then (if I'm reading this correctly)! I mean, chapter 22 of Eclipse was indeed a very fun one, but so is chapter 23, so assuming you had a blast writing chapter 22, it'll be the same for 23!
I'm very new to reading Twilight fics, like in a few days ago, but I'm enjoying this one very much! So please continue.
Spikey
Summary: Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.
banner done by achelle131
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes
Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: December 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Left Behind
Hey there,
I'm just skimming through your story a bit, and I must quickly, for now, just say one thing, because it's way past my bed time, as it usually is:
“Is Nessie, with you?” Bella asked.
“No, Bella she’s not. You need to call her. She’s with, Alice."
Has anyone ever told you you have the most /amazing/ use of a comma? You sometimes manage to neglect them where they actually need to be (but then again, most people on Twilighted forget them there), but you manage to put some in where they totally don't need to be. It's curious, really...
I'm simply... speechless.
You do, however, have some wonderful stories going on. I went to check your profile page, and I know of one other story of yours that I've gone through, Training the Swan, which also has a cool concept. I really hope that I'll find the time to go through both stories from the beginning till the end, and leave some good comment behind, because your ideas definitely deserve it. Never forget that. :-)
Have a wonderful end of year.
Spikey Author's Response: Yeah, I know. I'm currently in the process of editing. Its just so time consuming. I haven't started this one, I'm working still on older things. The new chapters are edited and we still miss things here and there but they aren't as bad as these. I'm working on it. Thanks for being patient about it. I know it can be hard to get through it.
Erica
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Wanking Wednesday
Muahahahaha, fingering her during dinner indeed. I can't wait to read what the others think about that, I mean, if they're going to notice.
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: That Feeling
Loved that bit about the phone sex, right at the end.
Since I just finished reading up to the last chapter, I thought I had to drop a note on that.
I think I told you once you had several great ideas.
Hmm, perhaps a question. I saw a poll at FF, but I don't know how old it is anymore. You asked for people to decide which fic to end first/work on most? Did you decide to work with the decision? I think Training the Swan is the one they want more? It's just that this story is soooo long already, so many words, it would be a pity to first finish up a shorter one... Though of course I can't really judge that since I don't know what else you've planned for that one. So, what exactly have you decided working on?
Oh, there's outtakes for this story? Must go read them, too. :D
Now, I wish you all the health a person could have, for the New Year. Take care of yourself.
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: February 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Time Away
Fuck indeed! Lol.
Loved the update, and I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapters!
See ya soon!
Bedtime for me, as it's 2.30 again... :P
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: March 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 36: Name Games
I want to say that I hope pretty soon we'll be seeing that vision of them on the beach with their 2 children, but then again, when we do, it'll be the ending, right?
Still, looking forward to more.
Thank you so much for writing.
Spikey
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed 
Date: September 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Music
Oh my, I don't think I'll ever quite look at that piano the same way again.
On to moar...
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: October 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I. Want. Them.
LOL!
I love this story so much!
Spikey
Summary: Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes
Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: October 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ouch, poor Bella!
*Goes to read on*
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: October 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 (K)
LOL @ the Jasper/Bella hug on the first meet.
I really like what I'm reading!
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: October 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 (k)
I have this old t-shirt that my parents brought me from the coast on the same day that I went on a school trip with the same train they used. I think I was 10 or 11 back then. It's white with a print of a kid on it, sunglasses on, perhaps there's a hat, and then he has one arm bend, hand behind his head, and with the other hand he makes the fu gesture. It's something I just can't get rid of, and I'm 27 now. I loved that shirt, and I have a picture of me with it on a vacation where I have the same pose, of course.
I have the same problem in the length-department. It was so big when I got it, till like half way my thighs, and I haven't a clue if it still fits now.
Silly old things that people can't get rid of...
Just saying that I totally understand those kind of sentiments. Speaking of which, I understand another one. I saw your next chapter includes glutes exercises for Bella and Jessica. I did some on Monday, and today is Thursday night, Friday already, really, and those suckers still hurt very much! :P
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: October 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Lucky Chapter 13
"I can't take your leftovers Alice."
"Don't argue with me. Resistance is futile. I'll see you tomorrow."
I am Borg, lol!
Just wanted to say again how I'm enjoying this fiction, and I want you to be proud of/happy with the fact that I'm NOT just skimming through this, or going ahead to see them get together and all the other stuff I'm waiting to see happening, but actually reading everything, in the proper order, word per word. Heh.
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: October 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
*Seriously hopes that Edward isn't going to break his hand on Jacob's face some day...*
Spikey
Summary: 
Edward reveals a secret from his human time which leaves Bella shocked and wondering just how well she knows the man she is about to marry.
This is very much an Edward and Bella love story.
Thank you angel-gidget for the banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 256624
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: June 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I Really Didn't See That Coming
Ellow! I've put the story up in a tab yesterday, and finally started reading today. I won't read the entire story in a day or two, but will come here for hopefully a few chapters a day, we'll see!
Now, I *told* you way in advance I was going to do this:
"Is she still alive?"
He shook his head. "No. She died in 1982."
That's my birth year!
Most shocking first chapter of a story I've ever seen, I think. I remember that I was either so pissed, or so close to tears when I first read this, but I couldn't continue reading without something giving, and I was sitting downstairs behind my laptop in a room that had my mother watching tv? So, yeah...
Spikey/Goster Author's Response: Hi Goster! Thanks for the reviews. I hope you'll get past the shocking firs chapter 1 (have to say, that description made me smile) - the story really does get fluffier as you go along. Cheers.
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: June 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Where Do We Go From Here?
There was a copy of George Rigby's birth certificate, naming a Jonathan Rigby as his father. The date was 2 February 1919.
And that was the rest of my birthday... *mutters* That bitch...
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: June 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Lucy's Diary
Guh, that bitch, practically raping Edward...
Oh my ... was he wearing a Snoopy t-shirt? My mouth was hanging open, completely and totally engrossed in the pictures before me. So engrossed, in fact, that I almost fell off the chair when I heard his amused voice behind me.
"Bella? Are you Googling me?"
Edward's Snoopy t-shirt comes from there? Lol!
Loving it. Although, 'loving' reading Edward getting molested... You know what I mean.
Spikey Author's Response: Yep, that's where Snoopy came from. It was going to be a one-off mention, and then somehow it just worked its way into the story. Glad you're loving it, thanks :)
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: June 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: All About Edward
I felt sleep start to take me and suddenly a giggle escaped my lips.
"What are you laughing at?" he whispered.
"Snoopy." I fell asleep listening to Edward groan..
Hehehehe.
That'll haunt him for the rest of his life. *grin*
"I thought about sketching you once, though." I could feel my skin tingle under his touch. "But I didn't think you'd like it. I thought it would make you feel awkward, being focused on like that."
Like Angelus did with Buffy in season 2... Spooky.
"Have you thought about it?" I asked quietly, focusing on his hand in mine. His thumb stroked across my skin.
"I have. I thought about it last night while you were sleeping," he gave a smile, "before you started talking about Snoopy wearing flowers in his ears."
Snoopy... flowers... Hahahaha! Well, Bella's dreaming time is limited, so it might just as well have been Snoopies in her dream. Bummer she can't take those with her. Oh, she should write things down already!
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: June 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: George
Hi again,
A new day of reading, after warming up the muscles at the physio.
"Let me show you how it's done," she said. The smirk was still splashed across her face as she laid down next to Edward and pressed herself firmly against his body. He didn't pull away. The dream faded as Lucy began to moan his name.
What a nightmare to have. Poor Bella. Poor my eyes.
"How are you feeling?" I asked him, realising he had just laid eyes on his great granddaughter.
Poor Edward too, lol. If he stuck to the rules of 1918, no touching oneself, he's now faced with his great-granddaughter before he had like his first orgasm... Hehe. Been stuck in my head since yesterday. ^^
I take it the outtake comes next, and then chapter 6?
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: June 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: What Edward Heard
"But I do share a common interest with George and Edward. I also enjoy music." He swallowed. "I've played the piano since I was a child."
"And he plays the guitar," I added on impulse. Edward looked at me, one corner of his mouth twitching.
"And the guitar," he confirmed.
Lol, should have just mumbled 'Snoopy'. *grin* Can't wait until I get to his Snoopy pjs! We need pictures of that, seriously!
"I know we won't have children, Bella, and I don't think you know how much I wish I could give that to you."
Oh, remember that one, Edward, remember that one, for when you do knock her up.
But let's not get ahead of ourselves. Deciding to go back to George comes next?
I'm glad the meeting of went so well.
Spikey Author's Response: Thanks! Like your "should have mumbled Snoopy" comment - that would have worked well! About pictures...somebody actually found a picture of the exact Snoopy t-shirts I had in mind and sent them to me. Of course, they weren't being worn by Edward, but the pictures were exactly right and gave me a buzz!
Reviewer: GoSpikey Signed
Date: June 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Dancing and Decisions
Ah, the return of Snoopy. Or is that the Snoopy 2.0 files? :P
I'm happy he likes them. Or more precisely, that he wants to wear them for her, because she bought them.
There aren't many chapters left now, but there are still a few twists and surprises. I hope you'll stick with me.
Not many chapters left? Lol. There's 3.5 times more yet, silly girl. :P
Did Edward make you eat your planning?
Spikey
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