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With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5907]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: hunterhunting Signed
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, all my ladies over on Twitter are talking about this story, AG is talking about this story and now I can see why. You write with such poingent emotion. My hand was at my mouth for the entire chapter. I was nauseous, fearful, desperate and painfully sad for the Edward that you have created. I can't wait to see where you go from here. Fabulous story so far. Thank you for sharing.

 
Reviewer: hunterhunting Signed
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am drawn in and can't wait to move forward. Thank you for sharing.

 
Reviewer: hunterhunting Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love the slow build, the way you are setting up the characters--and the use of Seth, the depth you have created thus far. Now I want to know what is going on in Edward's head. :)

 
Reviewer: hunterhunting Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Again, love the progression, how the haze of rehab makes it hard to remember things, how indifferent he's been to living up until now. Looking forward to moving on.

 
Reviewer: hunterhunting Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

One step forward and two steps back. It's the only way, I guess. Well executed.

 
Reviewer: hunterhunting Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love Jasper.

Also, I love that he opened up at the AA meeting, that we could feel his pain, the anguish, the desperation to be rid of the memories of the things he has done. It seems like a step toward healing.

 
Reviewer: hunterhunting Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm all chewing on my fingers, smiling like an idiot reading this chapter. I'm so excited about fictional characters going on a date. I'm invested in these two, thanks for making them feel real and awkward and normal in their abnormality.

 
Reviewer: hunterhunting Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh you are breaking my heart with Awkward and Tentativella.



Author's Response:

Awkward and Tentativella? Ha! Priceless. I'm renaming the story "The Angsty, Blue-Balling Adventures of Awkward and Tentativella."

 
Reviewer: hunterhunting Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ah yes, looking for a little release for all the pent up tension. I can only imagine.

 
Reviewer: hunterhunting Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

How much do I love Awkward? GAH. This is suck a wonderful and real story. Thank you for sharing.

 
Reviewer: hunterhunting Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I feel the foreboding at the end of this chapter, and I'm not sure my heart can take it, but I'll move forward anyway, because I'm hooked like a meth addict. Fortunately, I won't lose my teeth if I keep reading.





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