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Real name: corrina
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I am a stay at home mom of one with one on the way!!


 


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Reviews by corrina318
 
Summary:

Four years after Edward left Bella in the forest; Bella is finally moving forward with her life but it is someone from her past that helps her truly heal and obtain the future that she was always meant to have.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Completed: Yes Word count: 167857
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2009


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I truly injoyed your story.  I am glad it worked out for Bella and Jasper.

Are you going to write a second part to this story. Jasper's and Bella's 10 years in Italy.

I would enjoy reading that.

 

Thanks for sharing.

Corrina

 
Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3032]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Ghosts

I do like this chapter.

I am hoping that Bella will go back to her job and that is when Edward will start his plan to get Bella back.

 
Summary:

I was too disappointed with Breaking Dawn to move on, so decided to make the finale more action packed!  I wanted a real fight, and decided to write my own!  Starts in chapter 38 from the book.


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4351
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2008 Updated: September 03, 2008


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 38 Power

I love it.

Finally a story where the volturi lose all!!!

 



Author's Response:

Trust me.  They so deserve it.  THanks for the review.

 
Mind Over Matter by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1378]
Summary:

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Bella challenges Edward's limits of self control by insisting that he build up his tolerance level to intimacy.

Set in the 6 week 'blank period' at the end of Eclipse / beginning of Breaking Dawn, between the battle, and the wedding.  Bella and Edward expand and deepen their physical relationship in preparation for their impending marriage.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 70976
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2009


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Breakfast, and some light reading

Wow!! I am blushing just reading this!!!



Author's Response:

woo hoo! 

 
Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: At Last

Wow, I just found your story today. I read it all in one day because I just could not stop. I love the photo albums, that was a great idea and a nice gift to have for ever.

I loved the tattoo idea too. The music note, wow that is so cool.

I felt for the most part that you captured the really Bella and Edward.

 

Thanks for much for sharing you story line

Corrina

 

 
Eternal Dawn by Lizbit Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1322]
Summary:

For so long, Edward has maintained control of the monster within him. When Bella finally entices Edward to bed, the control is lost. Can Edward forgive himself for his weakness and mistake? And more importantly, will the newborn Bella, enraged and utterly lost, forgive him, or turn instead to Jacob who lurks in the shadows?

~A BREAKING DAWN ALTERNATE~

 

 

Eternity without your soul mate feels even longer...


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Marcus, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Completed: Yes Word count: 133063
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2008 Updated: March 28, 2009


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: 26. Verdict

What a surprise, at first I thought Jacob, them no maybe Bella, but Edward.

This is going to be interesting

 
Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 51: 51. Promise

I liked the Aro in this story and of course it is always nice when Jane dies.

I enjoyed reading your story thanks for keeping me intertained for the last few days.

 
Summary:

A Breaking Dawn alternative story.  Edward and Bella marry and go on a very romantic honeymoon.  Complications interrupt and they return to Forks.  Decisions must be made and the family has to move quickly.  This story is an A/U from BD.  There is no pregnancy and no more love triangle.  It is about how Edward and Bella were meant to be together and then must stand together against all odds.

Canon Pairings.  Lots of romantic lemons.  AU because some story lines from Breaking Dawn were completely abandoned in place of ones that I like better! Rated NC-17 for the lemons and for possible future violence and occasional language when the characters get really stressed out and stuff!


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 193651
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

What a wonderful version of the store!

Thanks for sharing it



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading it and reviewing!

 
Summary:

What if Alice had met Bella first?


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 7833
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: December 19, 2008


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Cracked-Up Pixie

I love it! a pixie on crack!!

Very Cute story

 
Eight Years Later by jmeyer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1241]
Summary:

It has been 8 long years since Edward left Bella on their wedding day. Bella has finally come back to Forks to visit Charlie, only to find that Edward has also returned, and he has been keeping a big secret from her.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 115303
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue

Wow, When I first started reading this story I had not idea what I was really in for.

I was taking by suprise when I read Edward was human, and then made at you for making him a vampire again. But I understood the need for a conflited and boy was that a hard one. I was crying so much I could not even read the words.

I truely understand your epiloge, the story can go on for ever.

I was heartwarming to find that they all made it though and had a happy human life together.

It was sad to read of the deaths but it had to happen.

Thanks so much for sharing the story.

 

Corrina

 
Incubus by EJ Santry Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 430]
Summary:

Incubus

Edward has been filling his thirst for blood with an insatiable appetite for flesh for the last 80 years. A new girl arrives at Forks High School that baffles him, and just might turn his world upside down and break him of his rapacious behavior.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 39573
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2009 Updated: March 19, 2009


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: New Beginnings

I really enjoyed the story. I read it from start to finish today.

I wished it was a little longer and there were more details here and there.

I love the Edward in this story. How he is so good to Bella. I hope that a second part is in the works I know I would love to read more.

 

 
Summary: Feature

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Bella is devastated by the loss of her mother and is forced to go live with Charlie, her Mom's best friend, when there is no one else to take her in. She gives up on living, too lost in her own anger to let anyone close to her. Enter Edward, the handsome teenage vampire, and the beginning of a complicated love-hate relationship. Neither can deny the connection between them, but can their love survive the fear that rules her and the secret he hides from her? AU and OOC, Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 292396
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Shift

I really like the end of the chapter, How Edward relized he loved Bella



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. It was one of my favourite moments in the story.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: February 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Choices

Thank you for sharing a wonderful story with us. I was hooked from the first chapter.

I thought there for a mintue we might lose Bella and I was sad.



Author's Response:

This story was a labour of love. It was my pleasure to share it. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for talking the time to read it and for leaving a review.

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight

I really enjoyed your story. I started reading it today and read everything you have posted so far.

I can' t wait until you update the next Chapter.

 

 
Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper

Well I hope James stays in jail this time.

Can't wait until the next update.

 
Summary:

Diseased Affair

When Charlie is diagnosed with cancer, Bella decides to move to Forks to help him through his treatment and recovery. What happens when the resentful son of the new cancer doctor meets up with the reason he was dragged to this small town? AH. E/B.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 99780
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Storm Brewing

This is a new take. I have read tons of fanfics and never have I read one where Charlie is sick. I can't wait to read the rest!!

 
Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Clinical Trials

I ment to post on the last chapter, but forgot to. I was surpised that the Cullen where human and Jasper and Rose lived next door.

 

Poor Bella, she never gets to be a normally teenager!

 
Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: September 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

I love the story. I was sad about Charlie, but in life nothing is as perfect as some of these fanfic seem to be.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! Being true to the disease, I couldn't give him more than 5 years, realistically. He got to refordge a relationship with Bella, make new friendships, and to see her happy and settled in life. In a way, it is as happy an ending as we could get.

 
Broken Doll by RowanMoon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1440]
Summary:

Young woman, back to us, walking into the forest.

 

Nominated for Best Supernatural in The Silent Tear Awards!

           Voting ends June 20.

 

Please check out the other stories and vote for your favorites;

http://silent-tear-awards.webs.com/vote.htm

 

~Nominated for Best AU in the Shimmers Snowflake Quarter 2010.~

 

Nine years has passed since Edward left her cold and alone on the forest floor. She has become familiar with the darkness and has relied upon Jacob to be her warmth and light.  After nearly a decade of living in the shadows of others, a crushed and broken Bella wanders off into the forest in search of the place where everything had gone wrong. 

She's known the cold bite of Ice.  She runs from Fire's all consuming intensity. What she finds on her jilted journey will change the way she remembers both forever. 

 

~summary by the fabulous Spaniard, talented author of Purgatory and North Star Rising.

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 101571
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2010


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Nope. I liked it alot. I bet Edward will fine the book in the cabin with his vamp skills.

 
Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: August 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow! I really like where this is going. It is different from from all the other fanfic I have read. I am really hating that it is midnight and I need to go to bed.  I will be reading the rest tomorrow as so as I get up.

 

Thanks so much for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks Corrina!  It's always such a treat to have a new reader discover the story and get to this twist of a chapter.  Thank you so much for taking a chance on the story and letting me know your thoughts.

Warmest Regards,

Mistress Moon

 

 
Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow. I really love this story. I will be reading the next on as well. I can't wait to sell

Bella as a vamp and what happenes after the GReat War.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Corrina!  I'm so glad to see you finished and enjoyed it.  More twists and turns in the sequel!

 

 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.

 

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All canon couples!


Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found

so I was going to wait and comment on your wonderful story until I had finished all of it, but after reading your chapter notes for this chapter I could no longer wait.  I love your style! I have read tons of these fan fic and yours is in my top ten favs. I love that all of them are themselfs except for Izzy and Tanya and them later Edward.  I can't wait to read the rest and then your sequal

 
Summary:

Emmett has teased Edward and Bella about their quiet sex life and framkly they have had enough. What do they young couple do to get Emmett to cringe and run screaming for the hills?

Bella is a vampire...Nessie does not exist.

 

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2179
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: June 08, 2009


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh my Goodness!!!

I loved it. I laught my butt off!!

 
Love Comes by stacylambert Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]
Summary:

The Cullens return to Forks to keep an eye on a new generation of Quileute shape-shifters. They find this new pack of wolves to be not only large, but led by the impulsive Jacob Black. When Edward falls for Bella Swan, who just happens to be Jacob's girlfriend,what will happen between the Quileuetes and the Cullens ?

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Aro
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 79824
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2010


Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: August 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Peace Offering

review for ch 5.

So far I like your twist.

I hate the Volturi, so I am glad they are not in your story.

 

Thanks For sharing

Corrina



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: corrina318 Signed
Date: August 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Family Matters

no short chapters for me please!!



Author's Response:

Sorry! I try to keep them longer, but sometimes there's just a natural break. I'm averaging 3600 per chapter, so that's not too bad.

 




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