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Penname: saphire1113 [Contact]
Real name: Elizabeth
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Member Since: December 10, 2008
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Summary:

After Edward left, the Volturi came to visit the Cullens at Aro's request. They are shocked to find them gone and Bella fully aware of their world. What will happen once the Cullens find out Bella has been taken? Before Jacob. B/E

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 60849
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2009


Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: March 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Multiple Personalities

Dr Jekyll Mr Hyde is right...Come on Felix..pick a side!

If you have 13 chapters already where are they????  ;-)

 
Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: March 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Death Sentence

Hey is this a EXB story or a EXF story?  Update soon

 
Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: March 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Burning Revelations

Oh i pissed I with Alice I hope she rips them all a new one.  Ok I have no patience whats so ever so I will make the sacrifice and offer just for you to read all that you have written  so far, so we both will suffer no more.  No need to thank me it is the least I could do for you.  ;-)

 
Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Blood Lust

I'm so glad Bella didn't kill the girl, I was afraid you were goig to have her killing humans till the Cullens showed up to save her.  Edward needs to get a clue and hopefully all will go well when Felix & Edward meet up.  Good job.

Update soon

 
Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: March 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Grief, Bugs and Noel

Your right although I could see that the chapter was ending as I scrolled down I still was holding my breath that Edward would walk into that room and Bella would be there waiting for him or when you switched to Bella's POV she would say that Aro had requested her presence and she was bored and didn't see why he wanted her but hoped it was not another human to tempt her and then Edward would walk in...but you didn't so I exhaled...update soon



Author's Response:

Don't worry, it's already waiting to be validated.

 
Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: March 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Movie

I was wondering if reading your reviews felt like watching a old Batman & robin show to you...you know all the aaack, wow, pow, ohhh, uhn, ooow, & eee 's you get.  Just a observation.  it may just be me ;-)



Author's Response:

OMG that just made my day.  seriously

 
Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: April 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: The Meeting

Yeah!!! Go Emmett!  he should have added and fight for her means drag your sorry ass out of your self loathing I'm worthless mantra and tell her you love her want her and are sorry and although you can't take it back you will spend everyday of forever making each day better than the last.

Awesome chapter!!!  Well Bella leave with the Cullens?  What will Felix do?

 
Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Immortal Fantasy

Well that reunion did not go as planned actually it was pretty bad.  Felix is sweet and caring and great, but he is no Edward (yes we love the guy that canbe a ass) Can't they go home and Felix & Elle go with them.  You know all rainbows, kittens and fluffy clouds? no? Not yet?  Ok :-(  Update soon!

 
Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: April 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Blood On My Hands

More angst!  Edward realizing he needs to suck it up and fight for Bella and Felix wanting her to be his.  Guess Felix snapping the poor mans neck was not his best idea.

 
Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: April 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Nerve To Adore You

I'm loving this story.  Bella throwing the booka & bookcase was perfect.  Update soon

 
Summary:

Emmett takes his time to walk us through Emmett's Guide to Sex as originally seen in Shotgun Charlie.  He will break down all the important chapters and give us some valuable pointers.

You may want to read Shotgun Charlie to fully appreciate how this story came to be!


Categories: Crackfic Characters: Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 5176
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: April 02, 2009


Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: March 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Hello and Welcome!

I can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you.  More has posted and more coming soon afterwards.  Thank you for taking the time to review.

 
Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Slippery Snake

I have a suggestion.  Massage oil, slithering snake and lay on a vinyl shower curtain liner.  BE careful with the amount of oil you use and when standing.

 
Reviewer: saphire1113 Signed
Date: April 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Slapping Beaver - VJGM

Thanks for the shout out and you can watch me anytime ;-)

Loved the chapter and will try this one out.

I think Edward and Bella testing "the water" for us would be great and maybe if you tell him at one time or another all of us have not been so experienced so its ok.

Also thought you and Rose may want to try what I call "The Praying Mantis". Rose would be on all 4's (I know calm down) you of course would enter her from behind and after she has the big O and BEFORE you have yours she turns around and (lets say finishes you off). Now the Praying Mantis is known for biting the head of its mate after mating and sometimes during.  HOWEVER I'm sure everyone can gather biting any males member will quickly end not only your current fun but any future, so suck it, lick it, use your hands DO NOT BITE.  Sorry I thought I needed to explain that for readers and well to be honest Rosalie looks like a biter. Enjoy!

 




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