Emmett talking to Mike had me LOL!!!!!!!

Ok first let me say thanks soooo much for updating..

Then I want to say that my daughter thinks I'm insane yelling at my computer screen cause everytime Edward "assumes" Bella is just having a gay ol time back in Forks without him I scream "no she's not!" "She is horrible, broken, crushed!" "Idiot!" "Go back!" "Your being a ass!" "she would have been better off if you had eaten her then left her!"  or someother variation.

I think Edward in a lot of ways is more comfortable being miserable then being happy.  I know he has a lot of years of practice but, it is a very "human" quality that he practices the whole "I will hurt myself before I let someone else do it" He has serious control issues and when it comes to Bella he discovers that he has lost a huge amount of control.  The overwelming thirst for her blood, he can't hear her thoughts, when he thinks he knows how she will react to something he is often wrong and often when she has a different opinion "his" family sides with her.  So he comes up with all these "rules" to regain the control he lost like not wanting to turn her, or the sexual boundaries. As mature & worldly as he seems at heart he is still a scared 17 yr old boy that is afraid of regection.

I enjoy your story and feel you get his "misery" just right.  Also loved how you put the "I'm not a superhero" in there.  I also wondered in NM why Alice did not have a vision come to her (on their own) regarding Bella before the clift jump, god knows there were enough opportunites.  I can't wait till the next update and sorry if this review went on too long.

I'm hoping Bella appears in the next chapter.  I'm glad you updated, and I enjoyed the youtube videos.  I hope you update again soon

I loved this story. It is well written you really got inside the characters head and stayed true to them. It was hard in places to tell where Stephanie started and you began. I enjoyed reading it very much! Thank You

This is soooo good and sweet...please update ASAP!!

I was soooo excited to see you had updated its like waking up and my coffee is already ready and I'm having ice cream for breakfast ;-)

I was a little (very little) disappointed Jasper didn't rip Needy limb from limb, but I understand Bella's point of view about them always having to be on the run.  Needy better thank that guardian angel he has.

I since a lemon coming on on ???

Update soon

Wow poor Bella...With all the emence guilt she is capable of feeling at any given moment, to learn from Victoria that she had killed her parents out of revenge was awful.  i loved the Goldilocks part.  Jasper is going to flip out and where is Jacob?  Is Jasper going to get Edward and Alice to help get Bella back?  Oh I can't wait please update soon

I have gone back in forth on this story since I started reading it at Christmas, first I wanted Edward back cause I couldn't believe that Jasper could replace him, then I didn't cause I loved your Bella & Jasper together, now I want Edward back to realize what he lost.  The next chapter we should know who is at Bella's door right?  I hope its Edward and you do talk about the cullen's a lot in this chapter so maybe???  But I don't think you will go there, its Jacob right?

Sure and I'm sure thats what the butcher says right before he makes lamb chops.....Update soon

Thats what I'm saying!  Jasper make them all feel it and get Bella the hell out of there,  Sorry I think I got alittle caught up in the intensity.  Please hurry and update soon!!! Any other Cullens coming???

So glad you updated.  But I'm dying to see if anymore of the Cullens will appear.  I hope Aro lets Jasper change her on his own.  I also hope they burn Victoria

perfect

Oh I can't believe someone like him would survive to come home with a purple heart and pick up where he left off......I'm glad Esme left

Good job can't wait for more