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Penname: The Lovely MrsS [ Contact]
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Member Since: December 10, 2008
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I work and have a husband and two kids (yes, I am an adult who has a crush on a fictional vampire) and I write in my spare time. Usually I write my own things but I am so infatuated with everything Twilight that I decided to "borrow" my favorite characters for a while.
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Summary: 
AU Post-New Moon.
Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?
Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.
Bella Swan is slipping under...
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010
Reviewer: The Lovely MrsS Signed
Date: December 12, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Race Against Time
Love your story, can't wait for more! Summary possibility? Six years have passed since Edward left Bella in Forks and she's made futile attempts to move on with her life. Teaching in Rochester, New York she goes through the mundane tasks of day to day life, still haunted by the memory of events that changed her life forever. As she tries to supress the grief from losing her love and the guilt over a terrible incident, her life is upended when a familiar face enrolls in her class. Feel free to use as is or make changes. Cheers!
Reviewer: The Lovely MrsS Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Leader
So glad to see you have updated!
Summary: Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012
Reviewer: The Lovely MrsS Signed
Date: January 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: February 29, 2008
Your story is absolutely enthralling! This is hands down the best story I've read that uses the characters in AH/AU. I can't wait till the next chapter is up. Soon please?!?!? Author's Response: Monday or Tuesday for the chapter. :)
thanks!
Summary: Edward seeks out the counsel of his father and brothers after agreeing to be with Bella after their wedding. What will Edward do with that advise and how will he and Bella prepare for their upcoming wedding night.
Thanks to Anne Cullen for this beautiful banner.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes
Word count: 132792
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2008 Updated: March 17, 2010
Reviewer: The Lovely MrsS Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Wow, Eki, it's so difficult writing things from Edward's perspective but you do it beautifully.
Poor Edward! Imagining the dirt as Bella~ Ugh, he must be so distraught! I can't wait to see how you portray the first night on Isle Esme, especially when he realizes that he bruised her!
Great job... can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Thank you. :)
I'm trying to figure out where exactly to end this. I hadn't planned on going past the wedding night but I would like to explore the morning after. Decisions, decisions.
Reviewer: The Lovely MrsS Signed
Date: March 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Hey Eki!
I love how this story just seems to fall right out of the book! It stays so true to the characters.
This concept really is intriguing. Surely between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn, Bella and Edward had to practice for their honeymoon, right?
Am loving to see more of the passion between my two favorite characters! Keep up the great work!
xoxoxo,
Lauren Author's Response: Thanks Lauren. :)
At the begining of BD they do mention practice but never go into any detail. I love filling in those blanks.
Summary: Edward couldn't bear to watch his beloved Bella being torn apart from the inside by his baby… so how might things have turned out for our favourite couple if he had taken the steps to ensure Bella’s survival, rather than let his spawn kill her. Very dark, Angsty little 'what if' story.
A HUGE thankyou to Emerald-Rosalie for the amazing banner. I love it!
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 85602
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2009
Reviewer: The Lovely MrsS Signed
Date: April 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Surprise
Hi Bec,
After last night's chat I had to take a peek at your story and I think it's amazing. The concept, while heartbreaking, is original. Can't wait to see where this goes. Good luck with the award nomination. Author's Response: Thankyou hon... i'm so glad you came to check it out. I know it's not an easy read, but i am striving for a happy ending. :)
*hugs* Becca
Summary: 
What if time itself ceased to have meaning to you? In this story Jasper must make many different decisions. Should he stay in the life he has had though it may be miserable or should he leave the known in search for something better? Rated M for future.
Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 9510
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2009 Updated: July 26, 2009
Reviewer: The Lovely MrsS Signed
Date: July 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: NewBorns
Yay, you got validated! You know how I feel about the story so I'll just say congratulations on your first fic on Twilighted! Get me another chapter to beta, fast!
(H)
Author's Response: Thanks Mrs S for your confidence in me and also you efforts as my beta
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