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Summary:  
This is Edward's side of the bedroom reunion scene in eclipse (Chapter 8: Temper, pages 185-195). Many thanks to psymom and MarcyJ for very thorough and extremely helpful betas - they're amazing! As usual, all the regular disclaimers apply: Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight; no money is being made from this work; and absolutely no copyright infringement is intended. The dialog from eclipse here is copied only for clarity. Thanks to Stephenie for creating such wonderful characters! One other note: I am a member of team Switzerland - I do not dislike Jacob, so don't be upset with me. Edward, on the other hand, has his own opinions... In Edward's words...
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Totality
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7339
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2008 Updated: April 18, 2008
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: June 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
This was a very nice companion to that portion of Eclipse. You captured Edward beautifully.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Did I see you on fanfiction? 8-)
blondie
Summary: Ten years ago, circumstance interrupted their destiny. Now it's time for everyone to go back to Forks for their 10 year high school reunion to face their past with hesitation, hope and maybe even regret. Can they reclaim what was lost? All human.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 166805
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2010
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: You Can Leave Your Hat On
This fiction is so well-written it is delicious. I have thoroughly enjoyed all of the chapters. It love its feel good vibe.
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: September 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 16: Waiting for You
This chapter was warm and fuzzy and happy and beautifully written. I loved it.
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: Precious
I look forward to your updates. This was another good chapter. And yes, that was about what I expected from James.
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: August 26, 2008
Title: Chapter 15: Everything
Nice chapter. I enjoy your writing.
Summary: AU, all human. Edward and Emmett are attorneys in Carlisle's law firm, Cullen Law Offices, PSC. They have had really bad luck trying to find a paralegal to work with, and finally take matters into their own hands and call a temp agency. Alice and Rose run a temp to hire agency and recommend their friend Bella for the position when Emmett calls. Bella is a recent graduate and is having a hard time finding a position because of her lack of experience.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 46395
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2008 Updated: May 21, 2009
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
This story is delicious. I love the fluff. You are doing such a good job with your Bella and Edward, and I am really looking forward to the updates!
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: August 20, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Oh, there was almost library lovin'.... but I bet it will be better in bed.
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: August 20, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Best plot device ever = Jacob being Charlie's obnoxious dog. I laughed and laughed. And very steamy lemonade for Bella & Edward. Nice job.
Summary: 
Edward/Bella, Implied Jacob/Bella. Imagine that the Cullens were late in returning to Forks. Bella arrived on schedule, but her life proceeded normally. She and Jacob become the best of friends and with no vampires to awaken them, the wolves don't mature. When he turns 18, Jake and his friends enlist, going to look for adventure in Iraq. He proposes, and Bella can't imagine ever loving someone more than she does her best friend. They quickly marry and he leaves for war. Two months later she gets some news that will turn her life upside down. And on that same day, a beautiful, dangerous stranger appears. From the moment their eyes meet, Bella begins to question those solemn vows she made. Will Bella Black do the right thing? Banner art and banner by Seisei Disclaimer: Twilight and all associated characters and concepts are the property of Stephenie Meyer. I'm just borrowing them and wreaking mild havoc~
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Word count: 37104
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2008 Updated: September 21, 2008
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 10, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: Lancelot's Curse
This is... intense. You actually managed to make Bella and Edward even more star-crossed than they are in the books. I'm simultaneously intrigued by this story and nervous about continuing to read it. I'm not sure how all these ends can tie together to make an ending that isn't too angsty. How could the vampires possibly raise a baby (a baby who might become a werewolf, no less)? If Bella stayed with Edward, would she have to give up her baby? So much of being a mom is fiercely human. You write Edward exceedingly well.
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 14, 2008
Title: Chapter 15: Bedrock of the Soul
This is so compelling, yet tragic at the same time. I wonder how long they can live in the moment together? And I find it interesting that Edward didn't see the need to clarify for Bella that the wolves weren't actually trying to hurt her (or did he clarify that earlier? my memory fails me). Looking forward to the next chapter. Author's Response: That's a good point. Although, I don't know that he feels the need for clarity. As far as he's concerned, the wolves are dangerous and should be kept as far away from Bella as possible.
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: September 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 16: Rose Garden Grudge Match
I have sincerely missed this story. It is so nice to see another chapter!
Summary: 
AU Post-New Moon.
Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?
Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.
Bella Swan is slipping under...
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 03, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Siberia
I wasn't sure about this storyline, so I am only just now checking it out. You're doing a wonderful job with it, and I will be definitely checking for updates.
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 07, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Lullabies
This is your best chapter yet. So well-written, so heart-tugging, so full of angst. I could just eat it with a spoon. Please don't draw out the angst too long. Edward has to talk to her sometime. Author's Response: Thankyou! It's my favourite too :)
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Fear
Loved the appearance of Emmet. Looking forward to Edward and Bella finally talking to each other.
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Motorbikes
"gormless as a lemon" -- I love it. :) Very nice chapter, one of your best. Author's Response: Lol that was the only line in that chapter that actually made me giggle out loud. You know it's bad when you're laughing at your own story! & thankyou very much, that means a lot :)
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Innuendo
I will read BD when it comes out. Then the week after, I'll be reading fanfic again. I can't imagine I'll be the only one. It would be a shame if you didn't finish your story.
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: August 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Bloody Hands
What a cliff you've left us on! The writing in this story is beautiful, as always. I particularly love that Bella has finally matured at least enough to get over the Cullens taking joy in giving her things.
Summary: 
Bella married Edward and is gone. Does Jake have any chance at happiness? Rated for future chapters
Twilighted beta: vjgm
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Jacob, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 10394
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2008 Updated: July 29, 2008
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: August 08, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Outta here
I'm not a big Jacob fan by any means, but you really have his voice nailed (and I can say that, since I've already read BD).
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: August 08, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Breathing
Loved it -- "Do you think you;re a snowflake, that your pain is unique?" On a side note, I think I read somewhere recently that they discovered that not all snowflakes are unique.
Summary: After college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice have a run-in with their past. . .and maybe their future? A farcical, romantic comedy with a healthy dose of angst. Nominated for Best Romance & Best Edward Characterization (Incomplete) at the Twilight Awards.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 144638
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: December 29, 2008
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
This chapter was just enough to whet my appetite for more. Tell me the next chapter is coming soon...
Author's Response: its written and pending approval :) I love delivering good news!
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Great chapter. This is getting good. Now, did Edward come to Bella on his own, or did he come to Bella because she had Lucy dredge up his contact info?
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: August 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Another good chapter. Poor Rose and poor Emmett. And hello to a hot Edward and Bella. Still not sure what to make of Jasper yet.
Author's Response: hehehe thanks! I think I must be really mean, to torture Em and Rose this way. I honestly don't know how much longer Jasper is going to be able to hold out . . .
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: August 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
You were in fine form for this chapter. I knew the guys were going to see the girls dancing, but it still made me giggle when they did. I can't believe they just walked into their townhouse, though! Author's Response: what can I say? they're obsessive stalkers.
Summary: Bella is a graduate student in Seattle when she runs into Edward, who teaches at the same college. What will she do when she hits it off with Edward, only to have a former love come back into her life? All-Human. Usual pairings. NC-17 for future chapters. 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 46511
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2008 Updated: April 01, 2009
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Surprise
LOL, I am glad you acknowledged the GG coffee shop reference... I was just about to call you on it. Season 1, Lorelei and Max, when Lorelei was all about not dating Rory's teacher. I am enjoying following this story. Author's Response: I knew there were other GG fans out there, so I decided to use the reference for my own gain. :)
Reviewer: limona Signed
Date: July 17, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Meet
Edward is so cute chasing Bella. Personally, I'm not big on reading the same thing from someone else's POV, either. I prefer people pick the point of view that is most interesting for the chapter and only go through the actions once. I know other people like to read it all, though... maybe you could put out some extras separately? Or just note that no key plot points will happen? Author's Response: That's what I'm going to do. I'm just going to post Bella's POV of the 'cute meet' seperately and then move the story forward with the next chapter.
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