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Penname: starsplash [Contact]
Real name: Katy
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Member Since: December 09, 2008
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I'm 25 years old living in Texas. Like most here I LOVE the Twilight series.


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Reviews by starsplash
 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: August 1 - September 4, 2008

TEAR!!! NNNOOO!!!! I mean I can see why she would leave I even had a feeling you were going to take it this direction but still!!! WWAAAHHH!!!! Is it Sunday yet? hahaha I can't wait till then!!!

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Yeah! I thought you had forgotten about this story! I'm happy she is more determined now! It's nice to see her grow :) I hope they will end up together after the trial and everything! Will Alice have her baby next chapter? I can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Alice's baby is coming quite soon, but you'll need to read the next chapter to find out. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: June 20 - June 24, 2008

Woohoo! Thanks for the recap at the beginning! Holy Cow! They finally did it! haha I can't wait to see what happens next! I had forgotten about the Occhi people will they be in the next chapter? I love your writing and can't wait for the next update! :) Hope you are having a good week!

 
Up to Speed by emarroquin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 851]
Summary:

Race car driver Edward Cullen has wrecked another car.  He's losing all his sponsors and funding.  His only hope is the incredibly sexy but stubborn Isabella Swan a brilliant engineer.  He can't get enough of her and she's keeping a secret that will change his life forever.

Banner by: dazzlemebetch-Thanks!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 140390
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2008 Updated: November 20, 2009


Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: April 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 So Much

YYEEAAAHH!!! You updated!! Wee!! This was an awesome chapter! Very fluffy like you said and it made me cry as well :) You are a fantastic writer! I can't wait for you to update again!! I can't wait to read the descriptions of the babies!! hehe Hope you are having a great weekend! :)

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Little Hands and Little Feet

EEHH!!! I was soo happy to see this email in my inbox!! I was starting to think you left us! haha Yea that the babies are here! I can't wait for the island scene!! Hope you update soon!! :)

 
Fame and Fate by emarroquin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 477]
Summary:

Isabella Swan is a famous best-selling author and actress.  One of her books is going be a movie and she is forced to play the lead role.  Edward Cullen is the sexy up and coming actor playing her love interest on and off the screen.  Love in the spotlight is hard and there is threat that ties with her past that will threaten all those she loves. 

banner by dazzlemebetch-thanks!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 95180
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2008 Updated: August 11, 2009


Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: April 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 My Betrayal For Her

AAHH!! YES!! you updated!! woohoo!! This was an awesome chapter! Interesting that James claims he loves Bella... I can't wait for the next chapter!! :) Update soon! :)

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Sacrifice

::sniffle:: ::sniffle:: Sad Jasper had to die but your explanation helps I can tell why this was a hard chapter to write you did a wonderful job! I hope the next chapter will be a little happier :) At least all the babies are safe if you had killed Emma I would have been really upset haha I can't wait for you to update! You are a wonderful writer! I get sucked in to the story and everything else fades its wonderful :)

 
Summary:

The trauma suffered by Bella for three years has left lasting mental scars.  Esme and Carlisle are finally offered the chance to be true parents to a teenager that needs them.  Surrounded by the support and love of the Cullen family, Bella begins to grow and finds out there is more to life than simply surviving.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 91654
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: August 19, 2009


Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I LOVE THIS STORY!! The emotion you put into this story is simple amazing! I was on pins and needles the entire time I was reading this story wanting to know what would happen next! I hope and pray that you will update soon! I want to see the relationship between the family and Bella grow... especially Edward and Bella hehe :)



Author's Response:

Awww...thanks so much!  I'll hopefully be able to update next Monday, but that's kind of iffy.  Thanks for taking the time to review!

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Holy Cow!! I love this story! You have captured the essence of these characters that Stephenie created. I can't wait to see the relationship between Edward and Bella as well as everyone else blossom. Hope you update soon! :)

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

haha I love that Alice took all her clothes! That is priceless!! You have captured the essence of the characters so well! :)  This was a wonderful chapter full of ups and downs I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon! :) Are the vamps from Alasaka coming to play? hehe

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I have sympathy pains for Bella I have the worst cramps! Something you might want to add in the story is that if you take birth control you can skip your periods that might be interesting since then Edward and Jasper wouldn't have to worry about their reactions :) I can't wait to find out what caught Emmett's eye! I hope you update soon!! :)



Author's Response:

I know that is possible.  It's just something Carlisle hadn't really considered yet.  He didn't really think about the stress of having a female human in the house.  I promise its on his mind now, though.  Glad you're enjoying and thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

AAHH!! NO!!! You are EEVVVIIILLL!!!! I hope you update soon! Is this the part where Tyler almost hits her!!?? ggrr!!! ... This was a good chapter though!! I'm glad you didn't forget about us! :) I can't wait for you to update again! Hope it is soon!! :)



Author's Response:

I'm working on my PhD in Evil.  It's hard, but I'm giving it my best shot. ^_~  Of course I didnt' forget about you!  I just had RL demand a bit more of my attention and delayed my writing.  Glad you're enjoying!

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh! How COULD you!!!!??? I want to know what happens next!! PPLLEEAASSEEE update soon!! :-D I can't wait to see what happens next!!! I love the relationship Bella has been able to create with each family member! I love Rosalie's feelings toward her "And understand if you hurt her you’re dead" They are just a bunch of mother hens! :) Update soon!! :)

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has been a vampire for almost 100 years, and she has an extraordinary gift-one which opens the world to her yet makes her feel all the more lonely, even among her own kind. When she starts over again in the small town of Forks and discovers another coven living there-a coven who also survives on the bloods of animals, can another lonely vampire-a vampire named Edward whose ability doesn't work on her and vice versa-change her life?


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 4765
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: August 02, 2009


Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

This is a really interesting story! You write really well I get wrapped up in the story and forget where I am. I can see it happening like its a movie! I can't wait to find out more specifics on Bella's power! :)

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 (vjgm)

I had to start over from the beginning to remember what this story was about... This chapter was awesome! I think it's really cool how you made Bella be able to tell the future differently from Alice. And why hasn't Edward told Bella he can't hear her thoughts as well? I can't wait to read your next chapter! I do hope it won't be another 7 months though haha This is a nice twist to Stephenie's version.

 
Summary: Feature


He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
Banner by FatApolloLove


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Dazed and Invited

HAHA I loved this chapter! The ending was hilarious!! I'm glad I found this story its really interesting. A little slow to begin but got a lot better as you continued. I love the interaction between the characters. Keep up the good work! Hope you update soon! By the way what was the name of the song that Bella and Rose sang/played?

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: May 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Nocturnal Prelude

Aw yea what a nice chapter! Nice that Edward will be able to remember this time ;) I hope we get to find out who drugged everyone! I want them to get what's comin to them! hehe Hope you update soon!! My fav flavor has to be Ben & Jerry's Fish Food or Karmal Sutra!! :)

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: May 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Mindless

EEHH!!! YES! She got even!! Woohoo!! I loved this chapter! hmm lunch today... I had Whataburger! :) Yea for fast food on a road trip! :)

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Aisle C

Wow! Awesome chapter! :) I'm so happy she sang!! hehe Hopefully they will go on a date next chapter!? :-D I can't wait for the next chapter!! Hope you are having a good weekend! :) Weather here is sunny hot & humid

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Patience

AAAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! I KNEW IT!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! I love it!! Three manila envelopes! hahaha I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Please update soon!! I'm afraid of bugs and spiders :(

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: The Goods

Yeah! Dinner!! Woohoo!! I can't wait to see how that plays out... but I htought they were going for ice cream first? I can't wait for the next update so hurry up!! hehe Will the festival be in the next chapter?

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Hunting

YEAH!!! They finally know!!! This was an awesome chapter!!! I liked that it was Bella's POV... i've been skulking in the background but wanted to say you are doing a fantastic job!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! My favorite leftovers Chinese!!!

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Seeking

Holy Cow! I hope they do break the rules and have her sing with them!!! This was an amazing chapter! I loved the end when she finally wrote something! I hope the jacket does give her confidence! :) I can't wait for the next update!!! Keep up the good (scratch that FANTASTIC is a better word!) work!!

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Hidden

WHAT!!! HOW COULD YOU BE SO EVIL AND LEAVE US LIKE THAT!!!??? AAHHH!!! You better update soon!!! Like TOMORROW!!! AAHH!!! I will be counting down the hours until the next chapter!!! This was fantastic! I'm so glad they finally got James!! And I can't wait till they get Victoria!! Woohoo!!! I hpoe you update soon!!!!

 
Reviewer: starsplash Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Overture

AAAHH!!! I KNEW IT!!!!!!!! GGRRR!!!! What will happen to Victoria now!!??? Huh huh huh!!?? I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I want to see them all perform and steal the show and get a record deal and everyone live happily ever after!!! Although the happily ever after will be far away with you writing it won't it? hahaha This was an amazing story again I was sucked in! Didn't even realize it was close to 11 here and I needed to eat hahaha I hope you update again soon!! Like maybe tomorrow ;) hehehe I'm on pins and needles till then!! :)

 




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