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Penname: twogoods [ Contact]
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Love to read Twilight fan fic, but sadly, I'm not a writer. You all are amazing! You keep my addiction fed.
Married, mother of four.
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Summary: Who knew that three minutes in a closet could change your life? Bella Swan is dragged into a game of Spin the Bottle at a party and ends up in the basement closet with a complete stranger.
Will she find out who was her mystery man is? And after, what battles will they have to conquer to realize their love?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Word count: 45873
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2008 Updated: July 08, 2009
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Ten Million Years
Yes! Happy, happy happy! Lovely reunion! Now how about some makeup lovin! hahahahah
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: March 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Your Arms Feel Like Home
I've missed this story! Don't stay away so long from us again. :) Can't wait to read more.
Summary: Bella, an outgoing advertising executive, finds herself in a compromising position with a sexy man as the elevator in her office building breaks down. As she fears death, will this be the final chapter of her life, or will they save each other?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 55785
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2008 Updated: April 19, 2009
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Getting to know you
Man! Bella always talking in her sleep. Hot, nonetheless!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Confessions
Cliffie! You simply must update!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- The Perfect Date
I love fluff! Don't think you have to add angst..I've been reading so much angsty stuff lately, a little light hearted fluff goes a long way. Throw in a couple of hot lemons and you've got the makings of an awesome story! Keep going!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-All Cullen
Awww that was sweet and the lime was hot! Sydney is a sweetheart! I hope she can become part of this family!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: March 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Going home and letting go
Amazing chapter. The love they feel for one another is really starting to blossom. I think true love only comes after some adversity or trial.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: March 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Grand Gestures
I just really love this story. It's just a simple, beautiful love story. Now that I've said that, I'm sure there's going be angst ahead, but for now, I'm loving the fluff.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Thanks so much for writing this. My sister is Bi-polar (I'm also a Social Worker) so I see this pain every day. I'm glad that Bella learned the truth.
Summary: Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up. 
NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present
OOOOh this is going to be good! Can't wait to read what happens next.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: James and Close Encounters of the Sexy Kind
Alice, a lesbian? Nice twist! I have a thing for Bella and Jasper, but always feel guilty because I love Alice too...this solves that problem perfectly. I mean, don't get me wrong, I'm a total BxE shipper, but a little BxJ never hurt anyway, right? I have a feeling I'm going to love this story!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Confrontations and Conversations
This is sooooo hot. Jasper is the shit.
Summary: Alice brings Bella home for Thanksgiving break to forget about her ex. After some drunken clubbing with the fam, Edward and Bella have a one night stand. Hilarity and drama ensue. AU, AH. Rated NC-17 for language and sexual themes.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Word count: 47715
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: July 17, 2009
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: July 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Favorite Mistakes (S)
Nice ending! Loved this story! Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: The time had come for us to relocate. Again. I’d caught a few stray thoughts from several of the wary, yet still exceptionally unobservant humans, who seemed to find it odd that in the seven years of living here we seemed to lack the aging gene.
15 years have passed since Renesmee was born, and now the Cullens are relocating. Renesmee, Jacob and Bella experience the high school charade for the first time with the rest of the family. But what happens when Jacob wants to start a little bet?
Edward's POV at first, though it might change in later chapters. First Twilight fanfiction, so please read and review.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 21887
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: December 27, 2008
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Preparations
Great first chapter! Looking forward to reading more!
Summary: The trauma suffered by Bella for three years has left lasting mental scars. Esme and Carlisle are finally offered the chance to be true parents to a teenager that needs them. Surrounded by the support and love of the Cullen family, Bella begins to grow and finds out there is more to life than simply surviving.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 91654
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: August 19, 2009
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I just read this whole thing in one shot (pizza for dinner, kids!) and I have to say it's one of the best fanfics I've ever read, and sadly, I read tooooo much. Your writing tone, style, diction, everything created a world in which heart wrenching sadness is palpable, yet the will to survive and hope is right below the surface. I also love the third person POV, as it really works in this story to get an almost 360 degree snap shot of how this is affecting everyone. It would be hard to jump from person to person and have the story flow so well.
I have to be honest and say that it reminds me very much of Stephanie's writing, in that as I read your words, the world around me ceases to exists and I'm thrown into another world. Most of the time when I read fanfic, it's like surface deep. Some of it is good, but you know you're reading an amatuer writer, albeit with the very best of intentions. This story and a few others I've read could (and should) be published, for the writing equals or surpasses many popular authors of the day. You are that good, my dear. Please update soon, for I will wait with baited breath until I can read more. I will also be dreading each chapter, for I know it will bring us a step closer to the story being over, and that will be a sad day.
Well done. Author's Response: Wow. Words can't describe how much what you've said means to me. I have been kicking around the idea of transforming this story into a true work of fiction and seeing how I fare, and I'll remember your words for encouragement.
Oddly enough, I too had pizza for dinner. Hopefully your children enjoyed theirs as much as I did mine. :)
Thanks for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Okay, all you, we need to pitch in and help Lady Saffir with whatever she has going on in her life, because I don't think I can take bi-weekly updates to this story because it's too good. Another amazing update. I was waiting for this with pregnant anticipation, and I read it too quickly, now it's over:( Author's Response: If it helps, I think the next chapter will be a little longer, since I'm basically covering her entire day. And I've got three pages down in less than an hour, so maybe it won't be two weeks. But if you'd like to come clean my house you're more than welcome. ^_~ Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Another stellar chapter! I can't get over your writing. Througout the chapter, you conveyed a building of tension so well, and the final release was heartwrenching. What it must be like for her, I can't imagine, but I'm glad she has her family with her. I just love this story so much. It's very different, but yet, our favorite characters retain their vital instincts, and mannerisms. Can't wait until the next update! Author's Response: I was actually afraid I hadn't built the tension enough, glad to hear otherwise. Thanks!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 (V)
I was just thinking of this story today wondering when you were going to update. Another solid chapter. I love how she's progressing. I wonder, why she frowned when Edward told her he'd show her some tips? Author's Response: She frowned because she realized Emmett had been holding out. :) No wonder she could never beat him. The next chapter might be a little delayed as well, but after that I hope to be back to my weekly updates. Thanks!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Another good chapter. Please keep at it. I was actually going to PM you and ask if you were continuing the story. It's so good, I always want an update!
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008
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Date: January 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hooooooly Shit! Read this on a rec from the Perv Pack and I'm not disappointed! Such a build up, and the payoff was amazing. You are very talented. I'm going to read your other story as well now. Amazing one shot, and very original idea!
Summary: 
So Nessie is a hormone-charged teenager who happens to notice the hotness that is Jacob Black. But then, (because life just sucks that way) a shady vampire enters the picture, determined to make Nessie his. So in summary: constant sexually charged banter between Ness and Jacob, Daddy-Edward on the fritz, sexy vamp stalker, and Nahuel squaring off with Jake. Around chapter six or so, the pace picks up very quickly. So read on!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Nessie, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 65711
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Pursue and Embrace
This is very exciting. I'm loving this story.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Snow and Sky
Hmmm, I'm intrigued by Olivier. Must be that badboy concept. One thing I would have liked is a detailed description of him. Did I miss that? I'll have to go back and read again. Kids were distracting me.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Lunch Break
I liked the other one better. Both were good, though.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Movie Time
I don't know, but I like Olivier...but I like bad boys..sadly. That's why I liked Jake in the books. He was the underdog, the rogue (breaking from Sam's pack). Well see where this goes.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Eyes on the Prize
This is so exciting! Mildly sexy, yet exciting. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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