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Love to read Twilight fan fic, but sadly, I'm not a writer. You all are amazing! You keep my addiction fed.


 Married, mother of four. 


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Reviews by twogoods
 
Summary:

Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sweet chapter. I'm glad you're updating because this is too good of a story to now read regularly! I have so many ideas about how this could work, but I'm not sure how they're going to go. Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: May 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awesome. I'm so intrigued about Chris' abilities. This was a moving chapter. Thanks for updating!

 
Summary:

Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011


Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Assignments & Introductions

AWESOME! Oh my God, I'm dying laughing over here. My kids think I'm crazy.

This is going to be good!

 

 

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Torture 101

I'm so into this already. I like "fiesty" Bella! Great writing!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it.  Enjoy the rest and thanks for reviewing.  I love reviews

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: The Line

HOT! I'm giggling like a school girl reading this. Love it.

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Gym

This is so friggen hot!

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Lunch and an Enemy

Hmmm....Jacob. We'll see where this leads. You did say he was engaged, right? No triangles. Love it.

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Round Two

I really appreciate the long chapters. You're really doing a great job with this!

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Our Song

Best fanfic I've read in months. Good job. I'm totally hooked, although I'm sad it's almost to the end. You have to update. I won't be able to go a day without this story.

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Margarita Monday

Take advantage! Take advantage! Take advantage! Pleeeeeeaase.

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: In Her Room

Okay, I'm beginning to feel a little cockblocked. I'm happy, but frustrated

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Wanking Wednesday

Now THAT's what I'm talking about. HOT! I love this back and forth between them.

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Dinner Divine

I'm wondering now if this is actually possible. Must ask my husband to try the next time we eat out. Hmmm

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Touchdown Thursday

I just love how you pack so much into a chapter! Awesome

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Sensual Saturday

What an update! I've been waiting for what seems like forever, as this IS my favorite story right now. Great job. So well written. And SEXY TIMES! Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: I Need You

Damn! That was friggen hot. Yes, you're right about the angst. Too much right now. The Submissive is in heartfail, so is Wide Awake, so a little fluff and smut never hurt anyone! Although, I see angst on the horizon in Beautiful HItchhiker, but I hope the next chapter about the sleeping bags will be fluffy:)

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Triste

Awesome!!! I saw it coming. I love the way he propsed. Not cliche, so perfect. As much as I love this...I know the angst is coming, but I think it's time she tells him the truth.

 
Not Her by Heavens Immortal Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

What if Edward didn't get to Bella before Tyler's van hit her...what if he responded to her blood...? What if he bit her? Where would they be, how would their lives change...a view into an alternate Twilight.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, James, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 57901
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2008 Updated: June 16, 2009


Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Ashes

Loving it so far. Please cpntinue!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! More will be up after the holidays... maybe that will be my chrismas present to all you!!

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Emotions

I just love this story sooo much. It's probably my favorite right now that I'm reading, and I read ALOT of fanfic (more than I should) Please continue to update regularly. Great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!  I'm glad that you like it!!

And its your favorite?  Awwww thats inspirational!!

Updates are coming!

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 -Ager and Rocks

I. Love. This. Story! I also love it when people update with nice, long chapters. Does anyone else look over to the right of the screen to see how much longer the page is by the size of the page bar and where it is on the page and squeal when there's still more to go..? Just me then?

I can't wait to see where this goes.

Thanks for writing this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

I do that when I'm reading a great fic... sadly my fic doesn't deserve that kind of attention but thank you for your praise!

I'm glad that your liking it for what it is...

And don't thank me, thank yourself and all the other reviewers out there who keeps me going.  Without you all, this wouldn't be real.  So for that I thank you.

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: March 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Declarations

Great job, Ally. I've missed this story. I like the idea that Bella is so powerful that she can "borrow" others' powers. That is a twist that I haven't read yet. I hope you'll update sooner cause you have a great story on your hands here!



Author's Response:

Thank you twogoods :)  I'm glad that you liked it!

And I'll try to update faster... but I can't make any promises...  I'm glad you liked it and there will be more information on her second power soon :)

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Emmett

Awww I love Emmett. This was such a sweet chapter, and it was really needed for Bella to truly move on. I sensed that she was really holding on to her family. Thanks for writing for us!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review twogoods!!! Glad you liked this chapter!!!  I think Bella needed it to :)  Glad you liked my Emmett, means alot to lil'o'me!!

 
Summary:

Who knew that three minutes in a closet could change your life? Bella Swan is dragged into a game of Spin the Bottle at a party and ends up in the basement closet with a complete stranger.

Will she find out who was her mystery man is? And after, what battles will they have to conquer to realize their love?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 45873
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2008 Updated: July 08, 2009


Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Spin the Bottle

WOW! One of the best 1st chapters I've ever read. Totally hooked! 



Author's Response:

Good. Getting hooked is very good. ;) Thanks!!!

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Love Is A Dangerous Thing

I never get tired of them. Never. Very well written.

 
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: You and Me

Lovely! I love boats. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Boats? Meaning big, white, yatchts? Or little blue sailboats? (you don't have to answer that...) And I am posting the next chatper after I finish with reviews :)

Thanks!

 




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