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Penname: twogoods [ Contact]
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Love to read Twilight fan fic, but sadly, I'm not a writer. You all are amazing! You keep my addiction fed.
Married, mother of four.
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Summary:
Bella Swan is accident prone and always in need of rescuing. Sexy neighbour Edward Masen is an EMT and more than willing to handle the job.
THANKS TO FALCONCRANELOVE FOR THE WONDERFUL BANNERS!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No
Word count: 100511
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2009
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Thanks for the update Tammy! I would have died with embarassment if I was Bella. Looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Hot update! I wonder how this knowledge that Edward is a millionnaire will change their relationship? Hmmm
Summary: A game children use to play that Professor Masen now wants to play with Bella. Call this "Teaching A Lesson" part two.
Part of my series, "Smut, Please". Enjoy.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Smut, Please.
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3286
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2008
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: December 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: May I
HOTTTTTTT! Nice one shot on a slow Sunday. Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!
Summary: "Sex without love is an empty experience, but as empty experiences go it's one of the best." —Woody Allen
So this starts with a dirty James/Bella lemon, but the question is: Why? Why did Bella drop her fiancee, and why does she dream of green eyes?
Bella wrestles with heartache in her own uncivilized way.
So: EXB, JamesXB, JakeXB. Adult content, so adults only. As far as the citrus goes, it's going to be a fruitbasket. Strangely, tongue-in-cheek funny too. Strangely.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Word count: 20244
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: February 05, 2009
Reviewer: twogoods Signed 
Date: February 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chx2
Oh. My. God. That was one of the most powerful chapters I've ever read in fanfic. I'm totally hooked. Now that's Edward and Bella. I've been reading so many OOC's lately that I just miss them so much.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chx3
Hypnotic. I've totally been in this hell and used the same "distraction" to get out of it. It worked, but somehow the distraction turned into the real deal, and am now blissfully happy. I can only hope this story doesn't turn out the same way because that would mean Bella would end up with James, and who wants that?
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chx5
Amazing writing. Like mindblowing. The lemons are sick hot and the emotions are so real. How have I not discovered this before? I'm glad I finally did today.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chx6
MORE! MORE! I can't wait.
Summary:  "Once upon a time, there was girl that just wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. And with texting no less."
A fictional tale of Rob and Kristen realizing their feelings for each other and getting their signals crossed.
Thanks to falconcranelove for the banner!
Sequel: Behind the Lens http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=11639
Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193022
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2010
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Nice update. I'm glad you continued this. I think you're capturing the feelings like how they would be, or at least how I imagine them to be. The uncertainty, the expectations of how others will react. Can't wait to read more, so I'm also glad Tech week is done too! Now get updating:) Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad I continued too. I always hope I'm capturing them and the right emotions. Yup, tech week is done and I have some sanity left so I wrote the other day and have submitted for validation! Hope you like it!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: January 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like it. I'm a sucker for RxK so I'd like to see where it goes. Added to favorites! Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I'm a sucker for them too! It's just something about them, isn't it? I'm so happy you added it to your favorites! Yay!! The next chapter should be up soon. I submitted it today for validation. I hope you like it! Thanks for reading this one and leaving a review.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Thud. Are you sure that was your first lemon because that shit was HOTTTTTT! Amazing actually. I love this little story and admit I have a weak spot for Rpatz and Kstew. I say continue. I'd like to see some RL ramifications for these lovebirds. What happens when the tabloids find out and how do they deal with that? How does shooting go? What do the other castmates think? I'd love to hear what Taylor thinks. So I say YES! Please continue! Good job Author's Response: Yes. Yes, it was my first lemon. Really? Soooo glad you like it. I have a big weak spot for them too. RL is coming at them in a few chapters. I have one chapter waiting to be validated and another *gasp* lemon, then RL. You gave me some good thoughts to ponder while writing too, thanks for that! And Taylor? Yeah...just wait for that!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I really love this fic. It seems very realistic, as much as we can imagine it would be.
Summary: Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes
Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: March 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is a twist. Bella pining after Jacob. She's breaking my heart though with the unrequited love. Someone will just have to break her out of this..wonder who it could be???? Loving this. Added to favorties.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: March 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 (K)
That's evil. Poor, unadulterated evil! Ha! Glad I don't have to wait. I feel guilty I haven't been reviewing after every chapter...I've been reading this straight through since yesterday, but I've got to say I'm loving this little fic you've got here! Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I take it you haven't read up to chapter 20 yet though.....*insert evil maniacal laughter here*
Summary: Alternate Universe with vampires. Bella and Edward meet under different circumstances. With nothing to stop him from taking what he wants, will he find the strength to overcome his bloodlust and fall in love?
Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 8297
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2009
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Leave
MAN! I love this setup, and Stalkerward is friggen HOT! Reading your response to another reviewers review, makes this one of the most anticipated story lines that I<m reading....update sooner please!!
Summary: Edward is a lonely vampire who has been waiting for over eighty years to find his soul mate. His sister Alice has never been able to see his true love, but for good reason--she hadn't been born yet. When Alice finally sees her, plans are made to finally make Edward's dream come true.
This is a different version of Twilight, and it's told from Edward's point of view.
A little lemony, but not too graphic. Rated NC-17 for mature themes and language, and possibly for violence in later chapters.
Thanks to Evilangel6714 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 157222
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Glimpses
I've seen this story kicking around for a while, but always read other things. Glad I'm giving it a shot now, as the first chapter was kick ass! I love alternative versions of Twilight, and so far, this is one of my favorite beginnings. IVO is probably my favorite, but this is also very interesting! Great writing! Author's Response: I love IVO! It's incredible. Thanks for giving my story a chance.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
I looooved that chapter!!! So sweet and kinda hot. I love the 17 year old side of Edward. That's something I think that was so missing in the books. Author's Response: Edward and Bella were both way too angsty--to an unhealthy degree--in the books. Glad you like my take on this. Thanks for reading, and try out my other stories.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Loved it! Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Dah! You can't leave us like that!?!?!! I'm so into this story. I love the way Edward is acting, so teenlike and horny:) He should tell her NOW. Can't wait for more. Please update soon! Author's Response: I take it that this is for chapter 13? She already knows--therein lies the problem. Chapter 14 will explain everything soon. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Making Up
Hmmm. I'm being honest and hot sure how I feel about this change in story tone. I'm no smut hound (okay, I am) but one of the things I liked about this story was the fact that Edward, while still being a vamp, was a typical teenager. I iked the fact that he lusts after Bella. I'll keep reading, but I have to be honest and say that this changes the story completly for me. Thank you for being true to yourself, though. That's very important. Author's Response: They still act on their lust--I just don't spell out all the details. I'm just more comfortable that way. I hope you keep reading. Sorry it changes the story for you. Thanks for giving it a chance.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Whoa! I totally did not see that coming. I was like "WHAT!?!?!" Can't wait for more!! Author's Response: Good. I'm glad I surprised you. Thanks for reading, twogoods.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Road Trippin'
Did I miss something? How could Bella be pregnant? I thought they just made out in the car...? I'll have to go back and read..oh wait. I think you re-wrote that chapter. Shoot. Update soon! Author's Response: You did miss something. She's not pregnant. Thanks for reading twogoods.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: February 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Snow Angel
I like fluff as much as the next girl, but this secret is really weighing over them at the moment and I can't wait to find out what it is. I'm wondering if it has something to do with the kissing? She didn't want to kiss him because of his venom...?
Can't wait to learn more. Author's Response: Hmmm...wait and find out. Thanks for reading, twogoods!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: March 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
What's happening? Oh man, is she changing? I'm happy about that, but how? Was the kiss too deep. Did she swallow some venom? Cant wait for more!!
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: March 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Changes
Awesome! WOW, we didn't have to wait too long for an explanation. Thanks for updating so quickly. I think the explanation is totally believable, and exciting really. I just wonder if people will start to notice. How could they not? Can't wait for more!!!! Author's Response: Yeah--it's slightly noticeable. Wait until you hear Lauren's reaction! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: twogoods Signed
Date: March 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Resolutions
I love fluff! Beautiful. I love the exploration of Edward's feelings. Any chance we might get a peek at Bella's? I just wonder how she's taking the physical changes and what they must feel like. I know you've pretty much kept this EPOV, but maybe you can have him ask her how she's feelings just so we know. Awesome story! Author's Response: Nope. Unless I pull a Midnight Sun and write the whole story from Bella's perspective, we won't hear her thoughts on anything. The thought has crossed my mind. It would be a great writing exercise. Thanks for reading and for the review, twogoods.
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