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Penname: ColfaxBella [Contact]
Real name: Jen Garner
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Member Since: August 14, 2009
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Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2242]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

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Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: ColfaxBella Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start

I'm so glad I came across this story....especially since I've been an Avs fan since they came to Colorado. This is a really unique take. I love the bit about Bella's toy. My best friend had quite the experience at DIA when hers started to buzz going through security. She now travels with the batteries separate!

 
Summary: Feature

AU AH OOC Canon pairings.

"One choice is sometimes all people can see about you, all they define you as.

This is why I don't cover my wrists. They always provide a way out of surface conversation. When people know you've contemplated your mortality in a real way that is evident on your skin they are less likely to make filler conversation."

Bella was left in Forks to be raised by Charlie. After surviving an eighteen month prior suicide attempt, Bella has a new outlook on life and begins to take hold of the power of her personal choices to shape who she is becoming.

 

In the midst of this paradigm shift, she meets Edward Cullen, who offers her a whole new life path to consider.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 33874
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2009 Updated: November 06, 2009


Reviewer: ColfaxBella Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Dirt on Your New Shoes

I've really enjoyed reading this so far. This is very creative and beautifully written. I am really looking forward to where you take this. Thank you!

 
Serendipity by FanpireMama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1215]
Summary:

Bella's life is turned upside down when her best friend's family moves away and her parents are killed in a car accident. What happens when Bella's life is again intertwined with the Cullen's?

 

Thanks to LoisBlue for the AMAZING banner!

Nominated for an Indie TwiFic Award in the category of: Most Romantic Moment !!!!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Phil, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 85507
[Report This] Published: May 20, 2009 Updated: August 15, 2009


Reviewer: ColfaxBella Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Girls Night Out

Strawberry-Bitchcake cracks me up beyond belief. Great chapter. I'm really digging this story!!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a hot, bad, gangsta fella who is a new kid in the Chicago underworld. But refusing to pay his respects to the big, ruling Godfather, his arrival is not welcomed. Bella is said Godfather’s estranged daughter who fled his father’s world in an attempt at a normal life.

Both men keep clashing and bumping heads, Edward’s power grows rapidly, men are tired of the old regime, and so a sort of gangster war ensues. Bella is caught in the mayhem when she becomes a prisoner in the hands of her father’s most hated enemy and rival. With Bella as a prisioner, Edward knows her father will have no choice but to do as he is told.

But does Edward have other motives to capture Bella?

**There is rape involved in one of the later chapters. If that topic offends you, please do not read** 

 

Thanks to the awesome Caius for my banner! I absolutely love it!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 56590
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: June 14, 2010


Reviewer: ColfaxBella Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Trapped

The Fountainhead has been my favorite book since I first read it almost 20 years ago. Every time I read it, I'm always torn by Dominique's rape. In this chapter, I thought you handled the scene well, and I'm interested to see where you're going with this.

 
Summary: Feature

Note from Admin: The blue ribbon awarded to this story means that it is a "featured" piece, recognized for excellence in content. It is one of the most culturally relevant, seriously deep, moving, unique, and important pieces of fanfiction that I have ever read.  -Roo, Validation Beta 

Bella Swan is homeless in one of the worst winters Seattle has ever seen. When trouble arises, she is saved by a knight in shining armor.

In his endeavor to help her, will he simplify her life, or complicate it beyond anything she could have ever foreseen.

Pairings are all part of the mystery . . .

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Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 61244
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2009 Updated: March 16, 2010


Reviewer: ColfaxBella Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Strange New friend

This is beautifully written, incredibly creative and very unique. I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop this. Thank you for writing it.



Author's Response:

Thank you, for both the compliments and the review :)

 
Summary:

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? AU/AH/OOC/adult language and lemons ensue!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 131791
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2010 Updated: July 06, 2011


Reviewer: ColfaxBella Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Misunderstanding

I really like where you're going with this. I love the plot and the characterizations so far. Cheers!

Author's Response: thank you so much for the review! glad you are enjoying. ;)

 
Summary:

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A NYC barman views his mind reading as an isolating cancer, until he meets the lonely 28yr old trying to escape her heartbreaking reality.  Edward has had a life full of harsh lessons.  He trusts nobody.  Bella is faced with an uphill battle in her day-to-day existence.  She never complains about the hand life has dealt her, including when a beautiful boy treats her badly, because she doesn't believe she deserves anything better.  AH ExB

 

Here is the amazing banner made for me by Orrington_Rose.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 173858
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2011 Updated: July 28, 2012


Reviewer: ColfaxBella Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: The Incredible Journey

Delightful story. Thank you for writing it and sharing it. Cheers!





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