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Penname: ecandme [Contact]
Real name: Lonna Smith
Status: Member
Member Since: August 13, 2009
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I'm a 32 year old mother of 1 son (8). Married to my hubby for 11 years. I joke that he's my human love, but that Edward will forever be my fictional boyfriend.  My son jokingly tells me "Mom you can be a vampire all you want, but me and dad are normal" :)  - Gotta love that!


I've always had an interest in writing, and finally decided to throw caution to the wind and give it a shot. So I'm working on my first Y.A. Novel now as well as playing with Steph M's characters here.


 


 


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Reviews by ecandme
 
Summary: Feature

Carlisle has had it with his children's constant bickering, so he sends the Cullens to Family therapy. Suicidal Edward, Bella's fear of committment, Alice addicted to shopping, Rosalie's hostility, emmett and Jasper's gambling... who will survive?


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 65189
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2008 Updated: May 29, 2008


Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Boy Talk

WOW!!!! That was something else - LOL :P

I was literally buckled over in laughter.. amazing job.. I love when Jasper pulled out the Bandana.. I nearly pee'd my pants laughing at the visual of him all patriotic, and then again when Edward smacks them because of the "voices"...

Amazingly entertaining!!!

 
Summary: Feature

 

Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.

Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

 Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: January 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 29: Go

Well I'm still around... I've left you in my favorites all along...just waiting.

Love the story, love the characters, and so glad to know you'll be finishing it.

Lonna (ecandme - Crooked Halo's & Ink Junkies)

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Coffee and Severing Ties

Love it... can't wait to see how he wins her back!!! Jayce sounds cool and all but he's gotta go...  :P

 
Summary: Feature

 

Bella begins working for the elusive and distant Edward Cullen who she discovers is hiding behind an elaborate charade to maintain his secret lifestyle. Bella is determined to find out the mysteries of Edward Cullen but with what results? AU. Mystery/Humor/Angst


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 173201
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: ecandme Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

LOVE LOVE LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!! ESPECIALLY THE END.. WOW, I NEVER SAW THAT COMING.. AND I TOTALLY GOT THE VISUAL OF HIM SNAPPING HER NECK AND HER CRUMPLING TO THE FLOOR.... AWESOME JOB!!!  I'M A LITTLE SADDENED THAT THIS STORY WILL BE ENDING SO SOON, BUT ALSO ENTHRALLED TO KNOW HOW YOU'RE GOING TO FINISH IT!

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

RL pressures and all, I think you're doing a fabulous job!!! Keep it up, and I'll be here whenever the pressure slacks and you have time to update... you haven't lost me :D

 

 
Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2250]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

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Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: September 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Playoff Hockey

Another great chapter. I was pleasantly surprised to notice how many local "standouts" that Edward and Bella visited. I've actually been to many of those places myself and you described them really well. Echo Lake was one of the most beautiful places I've ever been, and I had the same reaction to the perma-frost that Bella did at a few places we visited. Anyway, just thought that was really cool to recognize and TRULY get the visual of them visitng those awesome places. Can't wait for your next installment!

Lonna (ecandme - Crooked Halo's & Ink Junkies)

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - A Center Ice Finale (V)

PERFECT ENDING!!! COULDN'T HAVE ASKED FOR MORE :)

ecandme (Crooked Halo's & Ink Junkies)

 
Summary:

 

Bella is soul-searching at a quiet lodge in Forks and she meets the secretive, tormented Edward Masen. Just as their relationship transcends friendship, Edward’s past comes back to haunt him in the most brutal way. B&E are human, but oh…there will be vampires. AU.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 291742
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2011


Reviewer: ecandme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Difference a Day Makes

I've loved your story since Ch 1, and I'm in for the long haul, even when R.L. causes lulls and lags... we all know that it happens. Love the characters you've created and the direction that this is all going. Keep inspired, and motivated, because there are those of us out here who are still very intrigued with your imagination :D

And in between your brilliance here, I would be thoroughly honored if you'd check out my story and give me your thoughts, and any pointers :) It's titled: Crooked Halo's and Ink Junkies.

Love it, and keep up the great work!

Lonna

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Black Magic & Blackout

Oh.. I'm so glad your back. I was starting to worry ;) I love your story and your characters are so believeable. Don't keep us waiting too long for more.

Awesome Chapter!

Lonna (ecandme - Crooked Halo's & Ink Junkies)

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Eggshells & Grand Scales Pt. 1

As usual... an amazing Chapter. I'm addicted to the way you toy with my emotions thru Bella :)

Can't wait to read the next part!!!

 
Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2410]
Summary:

We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

Fractured Hearts

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Revelations

Great Chapter! Can't wait for more :D



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm already started on the next chapter and it will turn around much more quickly than the last several. Thanks for hanging in there with me. As always, I appreciate the read and review. =)

~Lisa

 
Summary:

Bella Swan had big dreams.  You know what they say, the bigger they are the harder they fall.  When her life takes a sad turn she is forced to do whatever she can just to keep her head above water.  Edward Cullen's life is perfect.  Well, almost.  Perhaps these two can help each other out in an unorthodox way.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Completed: No Word count: 326924
[Report This] Published: July 07, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2011


Reviewer: ecandme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Reconciliation in Three Acts

You are fabulous!!! Love this story... As usual can't wait for more!

 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for letting me know!

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Drunken Tramps and Sadie Hawkins

Ok... a friend told me about your story... I love it!!! It's funny and serious, there's angst, and mushy moments... it's everything that you loved to read in a story like this. Keep up the great work. I can't wait till Bella really realizes that Edward has truly fallen for her.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Thank your friend as well for me!  I appreciate your comments and hope you continue to enjoy the story.

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Thank you for Tonight

Really cool chapter... I liked the game they played even though it pissed Edward off, because it's forcing him to show his true colors... I don't think he'll make it through the weekend without letting Bella know that he's for real about her... but not before Jessica stirs up some mess :)

Can't wait for the next Chapter, please update soon :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  Yeah, the game really made Edward see red.  He kissed her in the room to help him 'erase' the image of the other kisses from his mind.  Poor guy.  Hasn't had genuine feeling for a girl in ten years and now this happens.

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: What Jessica Did

OMG... you're killing me here... I can't wait for her to realize that he really loves her... but I know it's not going to be a quick road.

You're brilliant at making me crazy to know what happens next... (that's a compliment by the way :P)

Update soon... can't wait!!! But I will :D



Author's Response:

Next chapter has already been submitted to Twilighted for validation.  :)  Thanks for letting me know you're a fan!

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Killer

As usual loving it!! Keep up the great work!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you're still enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Giving Thanks

I just want you to know that I think you have a really good story here, and I don't think you get near enough reviews!!! I'm guilty of it myself, having gotten caught up in the story and forgetting to review each chapter, but I wanted to stop by and let you know that I'm seriously loving it!!

Keep up the great work!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  That means a lot to me.  :)

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: January, February, March...

Ummm okay... I LOVE LOVE LOVE your story... but have to admit that I thought it ended in a weird spot... not really a cliffie, not really closure... just kind of in the middle there.

I loved the time line, and how you progressed the situations, it was very believable... and wth? Is Kathleen living with Edward now? I'm a little confused? It just says they're dating, not that she's moved in... would she be spending the night to where he could "jostle" her if she weren't living with him.

Seriously can't wait for the next chapter to clear some things up for me :)

 



Author's Response:

You are not the only person to notice this.  The chapter originally had three more scenes in it, but was getting unwieldy so I cut it off where it wasn't supposed to end.  I think that's why you're getting that sence.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 
Summary:

 

The summer before her junior year in college, Bella moves to be closer to her father. All the while adding some much needed space from her crazed frat-boy ex-boyfriend. Being there for her father comes with the fresh start she needs. (One without men to complicate it) Until, one evening after her shift the most gorgeous man she has ever laid eyes on...comes to her aid. He causes Bella to almost forget the vow she's taken against the opposite sex. Almost. That is until the realization that he's a frat boy and she's never going there again. No matter how those intense green eyes make her feel.

What will happen when Bella transfers to the University of Washington and meets a handsome coed, Edward? Will she find peace from her past or be stuck playing the part?

 

(thanks to ekimmuh for her help with the summary)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 177757
[Report This] Published: August 03, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2010


Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Building Rage

Ok I could be waaay off here.. but I'm thinking the ?POV stalker isn't out for Bella.... I was thinking it could be one of Edward's prior conquests that wanted more from him, and now Bella's in the way... so the only reason to stalk her would be to get rid of her so that Edward is once again available and undistracted.

Could be completely wrong, but that's the vibe I'm getting...

Love, Love, Love and Hate, Hate, Hate - how careful you are as not to give away the Gender of the ?POV stalker...

I'm also kinda creeped out with the Cop... he has way too much interest in Bella... just weird.

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Valentine's Melee part2

IT'S THE CREEPY EFFIN' COP... WOO HOO... I KNEW IT :D

Well I think I do... crap, now I have to wait till next chapter to know why he would be diving at Bella ... Hurry! Write! POST!

J/K - Great Chapter... poor Alice though... her proposal getting ruined :(

 
Summary:

 

She was standing by the bar looking beautiful. I hadn't seen her in two years. She smiled at me and tried to say hi. I couldn't say anything to her. Memories were racing through my mind, of a time when we were happy...

banner by heatherdawnc! Thanks hearther!

http://twi-ficpromotions.blogspot.com/2010/04/sometimes-it-is-not-enough.html


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 112640
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2010


Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18- Comfort

Great chapter. I think you nailed it!

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 16 - The Whole Truth

Loved It!... Can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

You greedy girl... At least give me afew days..LOL! Glad you liked it. Thank you.

 
On a Lonesome Road by valeri29 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 503]
Summary: Feature

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Thanks to RavynNightstorm for the fantastic banner.

 

During her freshman year, Bella Swan's mother forces her to join the Forks High band.  Instead of the torture Bella was expecting, she actually meets the five people who will become the best friends of her life.  But amid the flirting, jokes, and pranks, something unexpected happens to Bella.  She finds herself unable to escape one devastating mistake and fears her life is over forever...at the age of fifteen. AU/AH.  

One is not free to make mistakes in a small town like Forks.  The tiniest misstep, the smallest indiscretion is fair game for the gossip mill for years.  And the mistake I had made was certainly not a small one.  I would never be able to escape the shadow of what I had done; and worst of all, absolutely everyone knew about it.

There will be no teen pregnancy or illegal drug use in this story.  Anything else that could realistically happen in a high school setting is a possibility.

Finalist for Best Secondary Characterization and Best Action or Drama Story:

Indie TwiFic Awards


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 177490
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: August 20, 2010


Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Confrontations

Okay... *ducking behind my chair, so I don't get smacked*.. but... is it just me or does this all seem a little too adult for a group of 16 yr olds? Admittedly it's been a while since I was 16...(I'm 31 btw) ... I'm thinking to Tanya's attack in the library when she tells Bella "how long have you been effing him?" or something like that... my first thought was whoa... seriously?... I LOVE LOVE LOVE the story, and where it's going... I just found it a little unrealistic... but maybe the times have just changed that much...

I guess all 16/17 even 18 yrs olds think they are so adult... until you get 31 and look back over your life and think... damn I was just a kid!

Okay... so I officially feel like an old fogie... but nevertheless, I love the story. Keep up the good work.

 
Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Hangovers and Hang Ups

Still loving the story, but honestly getting a little bored with the Felix/Bella drama...  It's all kind of unecessary in a way (unless you've got some tricky scheme going down that isn't obvious right now). I mean if she's gonna break Edward's heart she could just do it and get it over with, she doesn't have to be whoring around... but it's your baby and I'm just along for the ride, so I'm hanging on to see where it goes...

I mean all of that with complete love by the way... ;)  I think I'm just frustrated for Edward... he doesn't deserve what she's doing... lol :D

Keep up the good work!

 
Blind Date from Hell by bebe86 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 453]
Summary:

Bella is unlucky in love and has been set up on one bad blind date after another by Alice and Rose. She finally agrees to one last blind date with Edward Cullen, but is this going to be the worst blind date yet? Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.

Thank you to ms_ambrosia for the amazing banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 100611
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2009 Updated: February 21, 2010


Reviewer: ecandme Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - A Good Year

Loved It!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 




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