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Summary:

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Bella didn't like surprises. Her life was safe, predictable and she knew what to expect.... until fate brought her breast cancer and everything changed. This is not a tragedy; it's a story about love and hope because that's what life is all about.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 62697
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2012 Updated: July 02, 2012


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: February 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen. Then.

Good Chapter......



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: February 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen. Now.

 Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: January 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten. Then.

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you!

And thank you for reading and reviewing!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: February 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty One. Now.

Good Chapter......



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: February 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen. Now.

Good Chapter......



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: January 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve. Then.

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward had a seemingly perfect relationship. Although they were both successful in their work forces, Bella couldn’t help but think that there was something she needed…something that would fill a void in her life that had been nagging at her. She finds out she’s pregnant and is elated. Can Edward keep up with Bella, a baby, and his work life? Will James, Bella’s ex-fiancé, get the better of their relationship?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 5737
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2012 Updated: April 05, 2012


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: April 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Good Chapter........



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Summary:

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him?  AH/OOC/18 and over please.  Banner made by SoapyMayhem FanFiction


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 324629
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2012 Updated: November 25, 2012


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: New Home, New School, New Start

good chapter.....



Author's Response:

I am very sorry for the lag the chapter was updated to the posting beta tonight, and I am very sorry for the lag.  Real life has been difficult to say the least.  The next chapter is really great and I hope you enjoy it. sorry again for the wait.  Kasi and (Nikky)


 

I watch her as she ensures that everyone has their drinks before she sits me in the middle of the group. Seth and Leah come up to me first.  Seth hands me a small box, and Leah hands me two envelopes.  I decide to open the envelopes before the box.  The first envelope contains a certificate for being the ‘best dad,’ signed by both Seth and Leah.  The second envelope holds a homemade birthday card from them.  I whisper out an emotional thank you to them in their ears, before opening the box that Seth gave me.

When I open the box, I see that it contains a platinum necklace with dog-tag like disks of metal hanging from it.  The first tag says ‘Dad.’  I look at the next one, which says ‘Seth Masen’ on it. As I turn it over, I see that the other side has his date of birth.  The next dog-tag has ‘Leah Masen’ written on it, and again, the back has her date of birth.  The last tag is blank, and I look up questioningly.

“It’s for when Bean’s born.”  I look up at Seth and Leah, and pull them both in for a hug before kissing their heads.

“Thank you, Little Man and Princess.” I watch as they go back at sit down after we’ve shared a few more hugs.

Emmett hands me a really old bottle of whiskey for his present.  Carlisle and Esme hand me a card that has tickets for the opera house enclosed.  I look and see that the tickets are for The Phantom of the Opera. It’s one of my favorite productions, and it’s coming this fall.  Aro and Zafrina give me a book all about the Kama Sutra, and a gift voucher for an adult shop.  I raise my eyebrows at them, and Aro points to his mother as she rolls her eyes at me.  Jasper and Alice were next. They hand me some CDs and movies.  I smile at everyone and thank them.

“This is from me,” Bella says, handing me a large package.  I open it and see that she’s given me another sketchbook.  The front page says ‘My Firsts’ in very decorative lettering, and when I flip the page, I smile as I fight to hold back my tears.  Inside are hand-drawn charcoal pictures of Seth and Leah.  The entire book is filled with colorful pictures of their firsts, along with the dates they did them.  It has everything from their first times rolling over and holding their heads up, to their first day of school.  There is also a written memory on each page, describing the way they did each thing.  I loved the page about their first words, and I smiled when I saw the picture of Leah’s first steps as she was holding her brother’s hand.

 

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Where Do We Go From Here?

Good chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Don’t forget to go read the BPOV chapter posted under the title Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of things have taken place over the past few chapters, and there is much more drama to come.  I know some of you are mad that we let Paul get away with her, but we were sure to not let him get too far.  And as for Sue, she sure is one sneaky problem, isn’t she?  Well we haven’t seen the end of her yet, and wait until the next chapter... insert evil laugh.  I will tell you this much there is lots of involvement from the fire department in the next chapter.  A lot of you want the kids names changed, it is like you can partially read our minds, you will be seeing a conversation about that in the next chapter.  Some are speculating about the Jess2002 induced surprise that is coming, but we have not hinted on it at all in either teaser, it will have to be a surprise.  Speaking of teasers, after Monday when Fictionators posts their teaser, I am guessing that the Facebook group will be on a posting frenzy, because well damn that Sue is making yet another appearance in that teaser, be sure to check it out.  There is so much going on in the story that even I am on the edge of my seat.  I loved reading the ideas people have posted for torturing Sue.  She is a piece of work, but writing her kind of crazy is seriously fun.  I want to say a special thanks to all of those posts we have been getting about hot and juicy the lemons are.  Nikky whole heartedly passes off the lemon writing to me... and I love writing them.   There will be a couple really great lemony scenes coming up yet in the book, I am currently writing a really great one for chapter 31.  Well not many questions for you all, so we will wrap this up.  See ya next week, Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 29 Teaser, subject to changes in full beta process...

Seth and Leah have just gone to sleep for the night.  I’m cleaning up the kitchen when Bella walks in.  “Hey, baby. I’m almost done.”

She gives me a little smile, but it’s strained. “I’m worried about Seth and Leah. They seemed quieter tonight than usual.”

I put down the dish towel and wrap my arms around her.  “We’ll be fine, baby. They’ll be fine.”  I hold her face and make her look me right in the eye.  “I will NEVER let her hurt any of you.  The three of you are my life now, and I love you all so much.” Bella nods her head and steps back, taking my hand in hers.  Her eyes travel down to my watch, and she trails her fingers across the band. 

“Baby, what’s wrong?”

She looks up at me and frowns.  “I was just thinking about my past.  There was this one time that I saw one of mo... her friends when I was at the park.”  Bella stops, and I know what’s coming, but I wait for her to say it.  “I had fallen down when a boy on his bike knocked into me.  Her friend... he gave me a muffin.”  Bella’s eyes meet mine, and I know what she’s trying to say, yet I give her the time I know she needs to gather her thoughts.  “I think that friend was you. I mean... was it you?” 

My hand moves to her face, and I caress her cheek as I nod my head.  “Yes, baby, it was me.  I am so sorry. I should’ve saved you that day.”

Bella shakes her head at me.  “I wanted you to save me. Even though I didn’t know you, I wanted to go home with you.  I wanted you to come back and take me with you.  At night, I used to dream about you, but I could never see your face – just the watch.  If you had saved me then though, Seth and Leah wouldn’t be here.  They are worth everything I went through and so much more.”

I pull her toward me, hugging her tightly.  “I still wish that I had saved you from her... from all of them.  I will not fail you or my children again.”

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: July 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises

Good chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View and being such a wonderful part of our success in writing this story.  We both put a lot of time into this story and we are very grateful to have the following that we have gathered.  A lot of you are asking about Sue and when her return will come.  We have made no secret that she will make an appearance, but before she does there are a few other things that will happen.  At this point her return will not be for a few chapters yet.  There are a lot of comments about Rose and there isn’t much about her in the next chapter, but after that there will be some things coming up.  As we have said other times there are approximately 30-35 chapters within this story, and there will be around 6-8 Out-Takes posting...The Out-Takes will post under the name ‘Enduring His Cimmerian View’.  There were not a lot of questions, and we have covered most of the comments concerns or worries, but if you have more questions you can always find us on Facebook under TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  There are always people leaving comments and their theories there, come join the conversations.  Kasi &(Nikky)

 

Chapter 22 Teaser...subject to changes during BETA process.

We spent most of our day watching Christmas movies, and for supper we had a huge spread of really fattening foods.  I had Eric prepare for me several wonderful dishes.  I had wanted something easy for today - something that wouldn’t take away from our family day.  The dishes he made only needed to be warmed up before serving.  The kids loved it, but then again, we had some great things to choose from.  Bella really loved the extra cheesy enchiladas and the lobster bisque.  There were so many things to choose from that we had enough leftovers to last us for the next few days.  After we ate, we cleaned up the kitchen together. 

We all settled down in the living room after the clean-up was done for our new tradition.  After we were all settled in, I passed out a few gifts to each person in the room.  “Okay, here are a few gifts that you get to open before we go to mass tonight.”  I made sure to pass out the gift bags that held our new matching clothing that Esme had chosen for our first Christmas mass together.  I had asked Esme to help, and she did, but then refused to let me pay her back for the gifts.  Esme said that the new outfits were from her, and that she was happy that I and my new family were going to attend services together.  

“Edward, we can wait and open these gifts tomorrow, can’t we?”  Bella asks.

“No, Baby; these gifts are for tonight for our church service together.  This is our first Christmas mass we get to spend together and these gifts will help make it more special.  They are from Esme, who wanted to help make this special.  There are gift bags for each of us.  Okay everyone, open them up and let’s see what we have.”

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: July 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights

Good chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 22 of His Cimmerian View.  There aren’t a lot of questions about things going on, other than the arrival of Uncle Harry and of course Sue’s return.  The story only has roughly 10 to 12 chapters left and through 26 are written and 27 is more than half way completed.  BPOV out-take is coming along nicely but man alive is it HUGE over 22K word count right now and it is for sure a tissue warning.  As for the few questions we have gotten, we have answers... We want to be clear that Emmett filed a paper that is giving Bella custody until the court hearing so right now no one can take the twins away from her, without first going to court.  The next chapter is ready to go...  If you haven’t joined us on Facebook, please do so there are lots of fun discussions and of course sometimes extra teasers and info too.  Just search for TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us.  Thanks everyone have a great week.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 23: teaser subject to changes during beta process…

It’s New Year Eve and the twin’s eighth birthday.  Seth and Leah shared a party yesterday at Chuck E. Cheese and they loved it.  Esme, Chas, and Angela all took the day off and came to help out at the party.  Aro brought Sulpicia and their son, Sammy, who is ten.  Sammy seemed to have taken a liking to Leah, as he stayed mainly with her the entire time. Esme and Zafrina both said it was cute and sweet, but all I wanted to do was kill the kid.  Bella even laughed at me and gave me a look when I let out a growl at little Sammy when he pulled Leah away while she was talking to us. I looked back at Bella and shrugged my shoulders, because I wasn’t really sure where the over-protectiveness came from.

Then there were the moms or whores as I call them.  I got hit on a lot.  Almost every mother of a child that had been invited was dressed like they were having a night out on the town, not taking their child to a classmate’s birthday party.  Some even said that I was really nice to help Bella and her kids out like I have been.  I felt like I was going to lose it as they made her sound so beneath them and that she was simply a charity case.  Thankfully, Bella kept me calm and stopped me from screaming at them.  As soon as school is back in session, I’ll be making it very clear to everyone what Bella and I are to each other. The fact that this was a place for children, and that it was Seth and Leah’s first real birthday party, stopped me from performing a very hot, public display of affection with Bella.  I know for a fact I would have enjoyed it, and I’m sure I would have made Bella enjoy it, too.

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: She Devil

Good chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Don’t forget to go read the BPOV chapter posted under the title Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of things have taken place over the past few chapters, and there is much more drama to come.  I know some of you are mad that we let Paul get away with her, but we were sure to not let him get too far.  And as for Sue, she sure is one sneaky problem, isn’t she?  Well we haven’t seen the end of her yet, and wait until the next chapter... insert evil laugh.  I will tell you this much there is lots of involvement from the fire department in the next chapter.  A lot of you want the kids names changed, it is like you can partially read our minds, you will be seeing a conversation about that in the next chapter.  Some are speculating about the Jess2002 induced surprise that is coming, but we have not hinted on it at all in either teaser, it will have to be a surprise.  Speaking of teasers, after Monday when Fictionators posts their teaser, I am guessing that the Facebook group will be on a posting frenzy, because well damn that Sue is making yet another appearance in that teaser, be sure to check it out.  There is so much going on in the story that even I am on the edge of my seat.  I loved reading the ideas people have posted for torturing Sue.  She is a piece of work, but writing her kind of crazy is seriously fun.  I want to say a special thanks to all of those posts we have been getting about hot and juicy the lemons are.  Nikky whole heartedly passes off the lemon writing to me... and I love writing them.   There will be a couple really great lemony scenes coming up yet in the book, I am currently writing a really great one for chapter 31.  Well not many questions for you all, so we will wrap this up.  See ya next week, Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 29 Teaser, subject to changes in full beta process...

Seth and Leah have just gone to sleep for the night.  I’m cleaning up the kitchen when Bella walks in.  “Hey, baby. I’m almost done.”

She gives me a little smile, but it’s strained. “I’m worried about Seth and Leah. They seemed quieter tonight than usual.”

I put down the dish towel and wrap my arms around her.  “We’ll be fine, baby. They’ll be fine.”  I hold her face and make her look me right in the eye.  “I will NEVER let her hurt any of you.  The three of you are my life now, and I love you all so much.” Bella nods her head and steps back, taking my hand in hers.  Her eyes travel down to my watch, and she trails her fingers across the band. 

“Baby, what’s wrong?”

She looks up at me and frowns.  “I was just thinking about my past.  There was this one time that I saw one of mo... her friends when I was at the park.”  Bella stops, and I know what’s coming, but I wait for her to say it.  “I had fallen down when a boy on his bike knocked into me.  Her friend... he gave me a muffin.”  Bella’s eyes meet mine, and I know what she’s trying to say, yet I give her the time I know she needs to gather her thoughts.  “I think that friend was you. I mean... was it you?” 

My hand moves to her face, and I caress her cheek as I nod my head.  “Yes, baby, it was me.  I am so sorry. I should’ve saved you that day.”

Bella shakes her head at me.  “I wanted you to save me. Even though I didn’t know you, I wanted to go home with you.  I wanted you to come back and take me with you.  At night, I used to dream about you, but I could never see your face – just the watch.  If you had saved me then though, Seth and Leah wouldn’t be here.  They are worth everything I went through and so much more.”

I pull her toward me, hugging her tightly.  “I still wish that I had saved you from her... from all of them.  I will not fail you or my children again.”

 
The Loving Kind by thimbles Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 120]
Summary:

 

 

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There were nine words on the square of paper.

Nine simple words that I have waited over a year to hear: "I was wrong. I miss you. I love you."

 

My biggest mistake was falling in love with Bella. My second was telling her.

 

Please be advised: this story contains language, sex and will deal with themes of severe depression and suicide.

 

My stunning banner was made by the amazing Frozen Soldier!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 76253
[Report This] Published: March 27, 2012 Updated: September 03, 2012


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: April 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Lay Me Down

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

 
Royal Duty by LiveInDakota Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 175]
Summary:

 

Life as a princess isn’t a fairytale like they would lead you to believe. Sometimes decisions are made you don’t like. Sometimes you don’t have a choice at all.

 

Barely out of school, it seems Bella’s future has already been decided, with a marriage she doesn’t want and a nation she doesn’t know how to rule, but not everything is at it seems, and Edward Masen is no exception.

 

E/B. Rated M for language and lemons. Slightly different for me, not too much angst :)

 

Banner made by the awesome FrozenSoldier :D


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 52782
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2012 Updated: April 12, 2013


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: The Engagement Party

Good chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

There's a teaser up on the blog - www . liveindakota . blogspot . com - if you want to check it out :D The next chapter should be up on Sunday :D

Sarah x

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: July 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Fears and Fittings

Good chapter....?

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: July 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: A Royal Engagament

Good chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

There's a teaser up on my blog if you want to check it out! The next chapter will be up as soon as it's validated :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, as always!

Sarah x

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: July 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Our Story

Good Chapter....

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: First Dance

Good Chapter.......

 
Summary:

He's a Rodeo Cowboy and she is a local girl. Can they fall in love at the Greatest Outdoor Show on Earth?

Bella Swan knows there is one distinct advantage to living in the city of Calgary Alberta. That advantage is the Calgary Stampede; a summer event that brings her city to life for eleven days every July. With hundreds of things to do it was never boring. You could watch cowboys and cowgirls at the rodeo, ride the rides of the midway, test your skills at the games booths, or watch a spectacular fireworks display. At the Stampede there is something for everyone. This year, Bella’s something comes in the surprising form of rodeo cowboy Edward Cullen. Edward has travelled to Calgary for one purpose – to win the “Richest Ride in Rodeo”, but this year he is about to win something even better.

Neither was looking for the other, but if the timing is just right, the midway can be magical.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 82055
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2012 Updated: October 23, 2012


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Old Friends

Good Chapter.....

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Rough Times at the Rodeo

Good chapter......

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Altercations

Good CHapter.....

 
Stone Cold by nikkipattinson Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Sequel to TURN TO STONE!

 

 

 

 

Edward and Bella have their HEA, but life isn't a fairy tale... especially for the sons of Edward Masen, Sr. Can Edward and Bella's love survive when Edward is pulled back into a life he thought that he'd left behind? Will they get out of this with their lives... or their sanity?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 22595
[Report This] Published: July 21, 2012 Updated: November 21, 2012


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good chapter.....



Author's Response:

Turn to Stone has been nominated for top ten favourite fics for July at twifanfictionrecs . com. Please Vote!

http://twifanfictionrecs.com/category/top-ten-fics/top-ten-favourite-fics-jul-2012/

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: July 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So interested can not wait to find out what happens next 

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter.....

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good chapter.....

 




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