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Penname: Melsie [Contact]
Real name: Melsie
Status: Member
Member Since: December 07, 2008
Website: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1803346/
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Reviews by Melsie
 
Summary:

 

 

 

After weeks of Emmett teasing Bella, she plans to give him back a little of what he's been dishing out.  This time, Emmett may have bitten off more than he can chew.

 

 

Family humour.  Various POVs. 

 

 

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Thank you, Blondie, for the awesome banner . . . and the instructions on how to use it!

 

 

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 31879
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Plan

Brazilliant! I can't wait to have it play out! lol it's gonna be good =)

 
Summary:

 

When Charlie catches Bella and Edward in a compromising position how will he react?

What tactics will Edward and Bella have to resort to in order to get time alone together again?

 

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 134267
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2009


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: You Have Got to Be Kidding Me!

lol Brazilliant - I adore me some Em!



Author's Response:

I do adore Emmett also so more from him will be sprinkled in throughout the story.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: February 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: A Vampire and a Werewolf Walk Into a Bar

lol so funny, I literally spat our my super yummers diet vanilla pepsi (seriously i'm addicted, hello my name is Melsie and i'm a diet vanilla pepsi-a-holic) when Em mentioned the badger at the zoo! =)

It was odd having Bella be genuinely mad at Em, I don't think I have EVER read that happening before! Kudos on the ground breaking event =P

 
Cloven by McQueen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 381]
Summary:

Bella never thought things would get this way. It had never crossed her mind. The hurt and betrayal from all parties stung like constant bee stings, but something more important is at stake.

 

**Rated for violence and rape and takes place between New Moon and Eclipse.**


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 39771
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2008 Updated: July 29, 2009


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Black as Midnight

I am beyond curious as to what Rosalie is thinking/feeling right now! Please satisfy my curiosity with an update soon =)



Author's Response:

All in due time my dear.

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Black as Midnight

Oh. My. GAWD!

 
Mind Over Matter by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1378]
Summary:

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Bella challenges Edward's limits of self control by insisting that he build up his tolerance level to intimacy.

Set in the 6 week 'blank period' at the end of Eclipse / beginning of Breaking Dawn, between the battle, and the wedding.  Bella and Edward expand and deepen their physical relationship in preparation for their impending marriage.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 70976
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2009


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Mind Over Matter

my oh my! your quite a saucy one aren't ya? =) very very nice chapter



Author's Response:

lemon sauce = my fave!  ~wink~

 
The Freshmen by rectangle_curve Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

Introverted, misanthropic Edward has never shown any interest in having friends.  However, when he encounters a group of beautiful, magnificent students at his new school, he cannot help but feel intrigued and drawn to them.  When simple infractions of the law evolve into dangerous and life-threatening scandal, Edward involves himself in something well beyond anything he's ever experienced.  How far is he willing to go to prove himself to them?

AU-AH with some OOC, some not canon pairings with some eventual canon pairings, addition of some new (made-up) characters, written primarily in Edward's POV.

Rated for language, underage drinking, and some graphic and sexual themes. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 17237
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2008 Updated: March 03, 2009


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: February 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Hurricane (v)

Ohh somehow I forgot our Bella was a coke head - I was like....wha wha what?? lol I had to refresh my tired ass brain!

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5322]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Arriving

Yummy chapter! =)

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Coming Clean

YAY! new chapter!! So so good.....ahhh Edward, tub, candles.....yep that'll do!

 
Can't Let Go by madeleinejade Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 589]
Summary:

Bella ruins her friendship with Edward by confessing her feelings to him which he doesn't return. She goes back to Arizona for college but returns to Washington after graduation due to Charlie's illness. Can she and Edward be friends again?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 112590
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: March 24, 2009


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Fantasy

Hummina Hummina Hummina - Edward as Han? c'mon totally HAWT! =)

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: March 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: CHA-CHING!

You know I really was freaking out at the idea of Edward AND Jasper losing their hair! seriously, the two of them have the sexiest hair EVER! =)

Melsie!

 
Summary:

Bella has never had luck at finding friends, and now that she has exiled herself to one of the most prestigious schools in the country, it doesn’t look like that luck is going to change. But what happens when Bella, with some help from the incredibly hot new guy, decides to finally stop being Miss Invisible? Canon Pairings

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 27072
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I look forward to your next chapter!......you did mention Edward was showing up right? =) *happy*

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: February 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

aaawww poor Bella! so many cringe worthy moments! I have a feeling that Jasper has/will set some things straight for our girl - 'cause he's awesome like that =)

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

ooohh i'm so excited to see this play out! I hope you play out the shopping trip, normally I groan at written shopping montages but in this case I have a feeling it would be key to Alice and Bella's blossoming friendship!

Can't wait for more!

 
Summary:

Edward,Bella, and Jacob are childhood friends who are now college roommates.  Edward, who only seems to care about one-night stands and his band with Emmett and Jasper, and Bella, who has always been studious and responsible, are constantly at odds with each other.  But everything is not always as it seems...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 85140
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Hey Jealousy

Great chapter!

I didn't realise how much I loved this story until I saw it updated and I squealed with happy happy joy joy!

=)

 
Summary:

Isabella Swan is orphaned and stuck at an elite boarding school on a request from her mothers ex-boyfriend and her guardian Phillip Dwyer. She was prepared for the spoilt rich snobs but what she wasn’t prepared for was Edward Cullen, AU-HUMAN


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Irina, Jacob, James, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8405
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2008 Updated: April 22, 2009


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: December 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Where No One Knows My Name

Great start! I can't wait to read more!!

 
Misdialed by kissesblow Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 321]
Summary:

It's just a normal day in the life of me, Bella Swan, until I get fired from my waitressing job, so – of course – I called my best friend, Alice, to tell her the news, except it turns out that I didn't actually call Alice – I accidentally dialed the wrong number, and ended up talking to this mysterious stranger with a deep, rich voice who just happens to want to be my anonymous phone friend.

Yeah. Just a completely normal day. Right.

Edward/Bella-centric, with dashes of Alice/Jasper and Emmett/Rosalie.

Excerpt:

I froze, my spine straightening against the bench as I shot up against its back. “Um, who is this?”

There was silence, and then the man chuckled. "Shouldn't I be asking you that question?"


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 37853
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2008 Updated: February 21, 2009


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Bookshelves

Love it! It's really engaging! I really like the way you've written Bella/Edward & Alice. I hope we get to meet Jas/Rose & Em!........a lot of Em I hope! seriously, who doesn't love them some Emmett? =)

 
Eight Years Later by jmeyer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1243]
Summary:

It has been 8 long years since Edward left Bella on their wedding day. Bella has finally come back to Forks to visit Charlie, only to find that Edward has also returned, and he has been keeping a big secret from her.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 115303
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: December 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG!! thats all I can say.......seriously captivating!



Author's Response:

HI-

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it and find it captivating. I love writing this story.

The next chapter should be up soon, it is currently awaiting validation.

Thanks again!

--Jess

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I SOOO do not like Pete!! i'm sorry I think i'm suppose to but I just don't! He's ALL KINDS of wrong for Bella. He seems nice and all, but he's so very vanilla - and we all know that Edward is chocolate mint chip with whipped cream and cherries! sorry - no comparison =)

Bella will need her choco mint chip soon........right? =)



Author's Response:

Hi

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ideally, I would love for everyone to like Pete. But I'm also realistic. I know that anyone that threatens the institution that is Edward and Bella, kind of has it coming. :)

Bella will enjoy some nice chocolate mint chip ice cream REALLY soon. :)

Jess

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh my gosh is it weird that I was feeling jealous when Edward was talking about Emily & Jessica? LOL me thinks I may be too invested in your fic =)



Author's Response:

Hi

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I started laughing when I read your review. I don't think it is weird to be jealous when Edward was talking about other girls, but don't worry. You'll know what happened with those two soon. :)

Jess

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm wondering the same thing........is Edward still a virgin?......I really hope that he is - that he waited for Bella!! aww that would be sweet =)



Author's Response:

Hi

Thanks for reading and reviewing. You will learn the answer to that question in a few chapters. Before any lemons take place, Edward and Bell are going to have a talk.... the sex talk. :)

Jess

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

YAY! I wasn't able to login for a few days due to RL craptacularness and I get 7 new chapters!!!! me so happy!

you completely blew me away, love love love the story. I am divinely engrossed in your world! =)

Also, how awesome is Papa Em? love me so Em!



Author's Response:

Hi

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm sorry about the RL craptacularness but glad that you like the story. I loved writing Emmett. He's great.

Check out the thread if you want a sneak peak of chapter 18. It is the AU forum. Thanks again!

Jess

 
Summary:

Bella Swan changed her life and ideals for a guy . . . who then dumped her in the middle of a mall. Even if she's happier now and her life is back on track, she still needs to realize that the past is the past.

Enter Edward Cullen, devastatingly handsome and hopelessly in love with Bella after knowing her for only a short time. Can he prove to Bella that she's not the type who should be loved and left? Can he help her get over her past and put her self doubts behind her?

 Rated M for later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 84444
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2013


Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

WOW you must seriously love reviews to claim they're better then a Espresso Truffle, I mean seriously it's all coffee and chocolately goodness in one cup!.......deliciousness.

Oh and the fic rocks, i'm already hooked and can't wait for an update! My obsessing begins........now!



Author's Response:

LOL.  i know!! i mean, espresso truffles keep me in the mode for writing, but reviews inspire me and make me feel like writing MORE.  they honestly make me feel like i'm doing more than just being an obsessive dork. hee.

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: January 23, 2009 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

ahhh, I never liked that ass-monkey Mike!

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

hee!  he *is* an ass-monkey.  thanks for reading, and for the review!

 
Reviewer: Melsie Signed
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

Ya gotta love Sundays! =)

I ADORE your Edward, he's so adorable!! Hopefully we will get some Em hilarity at his b'day party! I just adore me some Em!

Melsie!



Author's Response:

sundays are heavenly (no pun intended!)...especially if monday's a holiday. lol!  there will definitely be hilarity a la emmett in the next chapter, and a fun surprise.  thanks for reading & reviewing!  there will be lemony goodness in your inbox by the end of the day.  :)

 




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