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Penname: Shelljayz [Contact]
Real name: Shelly Zabawa
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Member Since: August 12, 2009
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Summary: Feature

 

While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse.  When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help.  But of course, fate has plans for this man.  Canon Couples.  AU.  DARK Themes.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: The Vision

I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love this story and have been waiting for an update on bated breath, so thank you.  I hope they keep coming.  And Happy Anniversary on the story :)

 
Guarding Edward by katmom Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1579]
Summary:

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is hunting him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  She's also a 110 year old vampire.

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  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes Word count: 200265
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

I absolutely loved the part where Edward threw Emmett, I laughed so hard, I started to cry.  That was just the best part for me. :)  I love this story too by the way, you have written it so very well.



Author's Response:

I am so happy that you enjoyed that part!  I loved when Emmett threw EDWARD...LOL

Thanks, so much, for reading AND reviewing!

Kathie

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010


Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

OMG!!!  This chapter absolutely tore me up, I just balled!!! 



Author's Response:

Aw!  I know it's tough.  I'm so sorry!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Oh dear lord!!!  Shirtless Daddyward was so incredibly sexy and sad at the same time.  So don't keep us hanging for too long, please!!!



Author's Response:

Shirtless Daddyward definitely makes all things better!  I have already submitted the next chapter.

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2410]
Summary:

We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

Fractured Hearts

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Reality Check

This was absolutely priceless!  I loved the part where he fell out of the tree, just too awesome for words.  Thanks for writing it!



Author's Response:

I have to admit that Edward falling out of the tree is still one of my favorite parts. I laugh every time I picture the look of shock on his face. Thank you so much for reading it and letting me know you liked it. I appreciate it so much.

~Lisa

 
Fragile Summer by muchamas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

FragileSummer

 

Edward Cullen is a somewhat lonely boy who only associates with the people he loves and trusts. He refers to these people as his family, and he doesn’t just count blood as a relation.

He’s almost perfectly content to remain the sort of seventh wheel in his family, but the summer before his Senior year at Forks High begins, he meets Bella Swan. Bella is a loner, too, but she’s also completely different from Edward and anyone he’s ever met.

So what happens when Edward meets this beautiful young woman during his last childhood summer? What will he learn, and what mistakes will he make? What mistakes will he allow her to make?

 

And, more importantly—can the connection they build last through the summer?

 


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 12571
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: August 20, 2009


Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Three - Insomnia & Night Drives.

Just curious if you are planning on continuing with this story.  I want to know what happens.  :)



Author's Response: I absolutely am, yes. I know it's been a really lonnnnng time since I last updated... I'm disappointed that I couldn't produce more in the past few months, because I'm really passionate about this story. As soon as I get RL in order, FS is my top priority. Thanks for remaining interested in spite of my lack of updates... It means a lot to me :)

 
Summary:



Once upon a time... for that is how all good stories begin...


In a time when legends are more than just stories, and monsters are more than just figments of the imagination, can love truly conquer all?  Amidst curses, monsters, pain, betrayal, and a mysterious legend of a once noble family, two souls will find each other in the dark of Swan Forest...

And nothing will be the same again.

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 36150
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2009 Updated: October 04, 2009


Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Truth in Love

I hope you are planning to continue this story, it is very good.  Twilight is my favorite story and Beauty and the Beast is one of my favorite disney movies/fairy tales.  I love it combined together, it's awesome. 



Author's Response:

Hey there!

I'm so sorry for not updating in awhile.  I'm actually almost exactly halfway through my first pregnancy!  LOL.  It has been sapping my creative juices big time.  I fully intend to continue and finish this story, however, but it may take some time.  Just keep it on your list and as soon as little Alex decides I can think again, I'll have new chapters!

Thank you for your patience.  =)

 
Vegas, Baby! by jslack0816 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3194]
Summary:

Bella takes a trip to Vegas with her roommates Alice and Rosalie. After one wild night, Bella's life is turned upside down. A marriage certificate, a pregnancy, and a best friend in ICU send Bella and her friends into a whirlwind of emotions. Canon pairings and future LEMONS!

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Vegas baby banner

project team beta banner

Much thanks to readergoof and annamorphos (respectively) for the awesome banners!  Also, to Project Team Beta for taking this story on!  You all are the best!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 206944
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2011


Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 I Want This

Happy Birthday tomorrow!!! 

Love this story and where it is going.  I can't wait for updates.  How long do you think you are going to make this story?



Author's Response:

Hey babe!  Thanks so much for the birthday wishes.  I'm not really sure how long it'll be.  I am literally flying by the seat of my pants.  Completely trashed my outline...  I do know how it will end, but not sure how many chapters I'll need to get there.

xoxo,

Jen

 
Summary:

What was Edward feeling when he whispered "Forever" on Isle Esme? Follows the events of BD pgs 81-108 from Edward's perpective.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10567
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2009 Updated: September 04, 2009


Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I absolutely loved your bruises theory, and I completely agree.  It makes perfect sense.  I loved your story and it is exactly the scenes that were missing for me in that part of the book.  Thanks for sharing.  Oh and I am not really sure how the rating system works, but I give you the highest score, whether that is a 1 or a 10 I don't know (so I am leaving that part blank)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! There are lots of stories that tell this part of the book as well, but I thought mine was a little different, so I'm glad you liked it. Also, in terms of rating, a 10 is the highest, so feel free to go back and give me a 10 review! :)

 
Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I absolutely loved your bruises theory, and I completely agree.  It makes perfect sense.  I loved your story and it is exactly the scenes that were missing for me in that part of the book.  Thanks for sharing.  Oh and I am not really sure how the rating system works, but I give you the highest score, whether that is a 1 or a 10 I don't know (so I am leaving that part blank)

 
Summary:

Even the purest of wishes don’t often come true. This is the story of one that did. Entry for the Once Upon a Twilight Contest.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7635
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2009 Updated: September 12, 2009


Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

WOW!!!  That was fricking amazing!!  That was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read, thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work. 

 
Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

WOW!!!  That was fricking amazing!!  That was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read, thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work. 

 
Summary:

Isabella is a handmaid to Princess Jessica, Daughter of King Aro. When a knight from a neighboring kingdom wins his choice of bride, Sir Edward bypasses the princess and claims the handmaid instead. Isabella suddenly finds herself married to a man she does not know, and is tossed into the middle of political plots and scheming nobles. Her life is further turned upside down when she is unable to give her husband the one thing he must have.

"This is the hour of Forks' revenge. Volterra will fall to us for Aro's actions against your Queen, and no one – no one – who fights for Volterra will survive. We will not stop until every wall, every tower, every single structure in all of Volterra has been razed."

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 229617
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2010 Updated: December 02, 2011


Reviewer: Shelljayz Signed
Date: September 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Gracefully Endure

I would just love to say that I truly enjoy your writing.  This story in particular is amazing.  I would like to share my theory though on why I believe that Isabella has not conceived yet... I believe that Jane is a traitor, working for Aro and poisoning her with her morning tea and will try to do the same with Angela so that Edward will have no choice but to end up with Jessica.  

Thank you so much for entertaining your readers.  I am very anxious for the continuation. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind words, and for reviewing!  I apprecaite it!





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