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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3033]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Control

Okay, First I want to say your writing and story telling is by far my favorite of what I have read so far, it rivals the origional and in some instances surpasses.  You have real talent!  I check almost daily for new chapters, keep up the superior work!!!!!

 
Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5438]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 58: Discovered: Jacob's POV

Great writing, please keep the chapters coming, I'm completely addicted, have always been team Edward but in this story, I'm not sure or dont care because I have all the confidence in your ability to tell your story authentically.  I like not really kwowing what to expect next.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 60: Panic: Jacob's POV

wow! This was completely intense! The only thing left to  say is you are probably the best writer that I've read any thing from in years. I do mean that.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summary:

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All told from Edward's POV, The Acclimation Diaries, chronicles Edward’s struggles with learning to control himself and taking things one step at a time as he acclimates himself to Bella sexually in preparation of their impending wedding night.  Can he keep his desire in check or will he snap?

 

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A companion story for my one-shot, “Show Me”

TAD Banner by: falconcranelove

Indie Banner by: AngstGoddess

 


Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 84817
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009


Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: The Transformation

wow, this is the way I will think of the ending of the saga from now on. Great Job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed!  *MWAH*MWAH*

 
Elysium by gothicfictionfan Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 608]
Summary:

This story begins almost six years after Bella became a vampire. Renesmee is almost an adult and has begun to attend an all-girls private school while the rest of her family begins classes at the nearby public school. She is unaware of Jacob's past feelings for her mother. On the first day of class, Edward and Bella encounter an unusual individual who begins to suspect something is wrong with the mysterious Cullen family. The story has shifting point-of-view.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 92540
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: August 13, 2010


Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Revelation - Edward

Very interesting story,  you do an excelent job at keeping characters in character, I 've read other stories that I love as well, but the Edward character felt a little different, could not quite put my finger on what it was, your writing however retains the feel of the characters from the origional stories beautifully.  I only rarely am inspired to comment, so your story and writing is tops!  Keep em coming!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Revelation - Bella

So excited for the update, this story is really good!

 
Reviewer: bunnysue Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Revelation - Renesmee

DAMN, this is so good!

 
Summary:

SEQUEL TO 'DANCING WITH DEATH'

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"But that was the joke. I was invisible. No one could neither see, nor hear me, if I didn't want them to. It just so happened, however, that I wanted nothing less from Bella. I wanted her to see me, just not yet."

 Do you ever get that tingling sentation going down the back of your spine? Making you feel paranoid, like there's someone watching you? The type that makes your heart rate quicken, your lungs stop working and makes you turn around quickly only to find that there's no one there? Well.... what if your pulse pounds, your breath hitches and your hair stands on end because there is someone there? What if you just can't see him? What if the predator lurking in the shadows was, in fact, invisible? What then?

 

Well, Bella, in the wake of everything else that's been happening to her, is about to find out.....

 

*WARNING: CONTAINS DARK THEMES*


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 44351
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2009 Updated: January 17, 2010


Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The After-Effects

very interesting, can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm so glad that you're finding it interesting! And even more glad that you're looking forward to the next chapter!.... I guess I better go back to writing it then. he he, ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll try and get the next chapter out as soon as possible.

 
Summary:

Bella & Edward’s first time – or How Bella woke up bruised and covered in feathers.

Takes place during the page break on page 85 of Breaking Dawn -- after Bella joins Edward on the beach, and before she wakes up the next morning.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4251
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2009 Updated: September 13, 2009


Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bruises (Purple & Black)

wow

 
All of Me by flibbins Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3592]
Summary:

Bella lives to serve her Master. It can be tedious at times, titillating at others, but always, her world revolves around his. Come take a peek at the trials and triumphs in the life of a 24/7 consensual slave and find what happens when outside forces threaten to expose her lifestyle.

 

All of Me

 

Please note that this story contains graphic language, graphic sexual situations and is only intended for a mature audience. The BDSM relationship described herein is entirely consensual, but may be offensive to some readers. Read with caution. OOC, AU/AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 109463
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: June 29, 2010


Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lol-holy fuck!

 
Full Dark by Gina-bean Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 424]
Summary:

If Here the villains often win and heroes play the fool

If Here reward feels random and friendship just a tool -

If There two lovers, star-crossed, can take each other's hand

And when worlds fall around them, they make an honest stand -

 

If Here mercy is fairy tales and faith's a funny joke

And kindness Never Never Land and poets all are broke -

If There the fight is worth it and family never dies

And sunlight shines down on you from gray and rainy skies -

 

If Here is what there really is and There's mere fantasy,

Then sometimes I'll abide There. Come, friend; abide with me.

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 73258
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2010


Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Glory

WOW!, I'm truly at a loss of what to say so here goes nothing. First I can't believe this story has not caught fire yet (250 something reviews--really?) I have read quiet a few AU nonhuman fics and I can only think of 1 maybe 2 that even come close and one of them will probly never even complete which is where alot of them kind of weaken, afflicted with the same ole same ole lack of origionality to end on even thought the initial story might be good. You however have managed to climb out of that hole. This story has so much imagination and heart (and quality) that I am truly blown away and this is the only story that I have ever planned to reread (with the exception of SM's origionals). That being said I am going to do something I have never done in a review and it is to give a constructive (not really criticism) suggestion. You have such a gem here which is why I implore you to fix the few typing errors. There are but afew and I hope this doesn't ruin my positive review for you. Usually when I review a story I only give + feedback because I'm just appreciative of being entertained and of the writters efforts, but this story I really care about it (it is so close to perfection) and it ellicits strong feelings much like the origional so be prepared for your numbers to increase as I am thankful for finding the rec. I will be recomending it every chance I get.                                                      Much Love, Donna 



Author's Response:

I'll need page and paragraph numbers there, kitten. I've edited this thing to death, so if there are errors, I literally can't see them anymore.

 
Hide and Drink by Savage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7576]
Summary:

Now Complete!

Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored.  In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side.  While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor.  EPOV.

Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.

Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.

Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!

Thank you Lace for the Banner!

“There was no other blood like this.  Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp.  But if I stopped now, she would heal.  Her body would make more.  The blood would replenish.  I could drink again.  The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010


Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue: Love and Live

I like the HEA ending so much better. You really did a great job with the balance of how to give them there happy life without it becoming all syrupe and honey and no sacrifices. Great job. I am looking forward to reading other stories by you

 
Reviewer: bunnysue Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Choose and Lose

 

If you don't put the next chap up soon I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN! **regains composure**



Author's Response:

Agh!!!  I'm working on it!!!  Thanks a lot for reviewing!





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