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Lost and Found by gemmabobella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 775]
Summary:

Bella Swan is now a teacher at Forks High school. She's been gone for six years, and now she's back.  What old and new friends will she find? What happens when she is reunited with an old crush? A realistic look of life, love, and the pursuit of happiness. Is true love only found in fairytales? Find out!  Special thanks to Manyafandom for the Banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 216661
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2008 Updated: September 19, 2009


Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - That Feeling (Twilighted Beta - vjgm)

WTF?? No, no, you can't fix that kind of betrayal in 3 chapters....What a tool....He can't be that cruel...maybe Lauren was in trouble, maybe she's involved with the mob...maybe she's his long lost sister.....maybe....maybe...Please not that!

I have to say bravo to you for an amazing story.....update soon!

 

 
Summary: A side shot to go with my story Lost and Found. Takes place during chapter 6. Jasper introduces his sister, Rosalie to the crew. And let's just say that Emmett appears to have finally met his match. Enjoy!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3483
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2008


Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Too Funny, just finished L&F and needed something light.....LOVE your writing...keep it up!

 
Summary:

This is a companion story to Lost and Found.  Lost and Found is Bella’s POV, and this story is Edward’s POV as they both struggle to learn what it means to find love and happiness.  Follow Edward as he struggles to deal with his past, and learn to live again.  Will Bella be what he needs to heal and learn to love again?  

 

Amazing Grace Banner


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 56193
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2009 Updated: April 23, 2010


Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, he has absoulutely no trust in humanity... Poor Bella she's gotten herself into something deep!!

Great to read his perspective.....

 
Summary: Feature

Bella is married...for now...and starts a new job at a local bank. Edward Cullen is a ruthless overachiever that will stop at nothing to get what he wants. Their two worlds collide...will she be able to soften his hardened heart? Eventual Canon couples...AH!!! A bit OOC.

Edward and Bella--Devil In Disguise


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 26584
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2010


Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell

Okay wow, this is the first time I have felt compelled to write a review.  Where is your little blue ribbon? 

What a complete tool Assward is, however I can understand that he is just hiding behind a wall of pain.  Seriously can't wait for Bella to kick his ass.  Love the story and your writing style.  Bravo to you....update soon please.

-Happily married mother needing Edward/ Robert fix!

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell

Sorry, I see now you already have a blue ribbon- my bad.  I say you now deserve two!



Author's Response:

Ya..my beta said she put a blue ribbon on it. I feel proud that you decided to review my story. This one is a labor of love...unfortunately it is mirroring my life...sigh! They say the best stories come from your experiences.

Please check out my other two stories..."These Dreams" and "Another One's Arms" I think you will like them too. Let me know what you think.

 
Summary:

Bella's elevator ride with a gorgeous stranger becomes charged when the lift breaks down.  Things become more complicated when she discovers the stranger is her to-be boss, Edward Cullen.

ESS

Thanks to katmom for the great banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 73337
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Creepy!

 
Help Wanted by jaxon 22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3037]
Summary:

Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.

Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?

A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.

A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2011


Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: The Swan

You crack me up!  This Edward is brilliant.  Definetly one of my favorite ff.

Update soon, please!

 
Desiderata by kimpy0464 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 618]
Summary:

A special thanks to NaughtySparkle for the banner!

HE'S SMIRKY. SHE'S SNARKY. AND THEY'RE FLOATING DOWN THE RIVER OF DeNIAL TOGETHER!

Edward Cullen is a well-known director for an independent film company, Masen Masterworks. He is filming his latest project in the town of Forks, Washington. Bella Swan is a baker for her best friend Alice at Alice's Wonderland Cafe and Mad Tea Party, also located in Forks. Desiderata is latin for “desired things or something that is needed, wanted.” This story is meant to represent that state of feeling for both Bella and Edward. What happens when their pig-headed stubbornness gets in the way of true love and happiness? Based upon the Desiderata of Happiness by Max Ehrmann and Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 151974
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: November 26, 2009


Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: OUTTAKE: SPECIAL DELIVERY

Holy hell women, i thought it could not get any better! Well, apparently i was mistaken. There are no words, really. The way you brought them full circle! Amazing- loved the lemons, the the realistic birth scene, loved the Alice, but mostly loved the Pretty! Keep it up Chicky! Enjoy tonight, saw it again yesterday...:)

Author's Response:

Really? It got better? YAY! That just makes me all kinds of happy! It felt right to bring them full circle, you know? They deserved that ending, I think. And dude, how could I not throw lemons in there? She was a horny pregnant woman, even before she knew for sure she was a horny pregnant woman! Is that not all kinds of win right there?

Ah yes, the Pretty. SO pretty. That's one of the best things about creating a character in your head, he can follow me around wherever I go and say witty, beautiful things. You just gotta love fiction. 

I enjoyed every minute of seeing the pretty in HD on the big screen tonight, but my baby sister officially switched teams to Jacob. It is sad, but I have to disown her now. ;)

 

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: PERCEPTIONS AND PERSPECTIVES

Very Mr. Darcy and Ms. Elizabeth....LOVE IT!  Can't wait for the update...



Author's Response:

That's how I mean it to be...just wait until ch. 18. Srsly, it's gonna be epic.

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: FOOT IN MOUTH DISEASE

hey- just read the next chapters on ff. Totally awesome... So cool you're in the PICU.  I am a NICU nurse who totally shares your obsession with all things Twilight and RPatz.. He's just to fine....

I'm fairly new to this and just want to know why ff gets chapters out sooner?

Thanks again for you amazing story, i'm hooked :)



Author's Response:

Hey landslide, I did my final internship in the NICU, so I totes understand your world. I just wanted a little more diversity in cases than I saw there. But, I will always love the NICU, no doubt! 

Oh my, I do have a terrible little obsession, don't I? While lots of my colleagues love Twi as much as I do, they feel I've gone to the "dark side" when I started writing my own stories. Meh, I'm okay with that. It's fun.

Why does FF update sooner? There isn't a requisite beta process there, so you can essentially post anything you want to, regardless of how many errors there are or whether it's poor quality writing. There is no screening process. On Twilighted, you need to submit your story for approval, and then go through a Twilighted beta process to get approval to post each chapter. Because of that, it can take a little bit longer for chapters to post here than on FF. When I first wrote the story, I had no idea if it would be approved over here or not, which is why I posted it over there. I'm nearly caught up over here; I just posted chapter 20 on FF today. 

I'm delighted that your hooked on my story; it is all part of my ebil plan to suck you into my world. Mwhahahaha!! I'll get to posting the next chappie over here, STAT!!

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: HOME FIELD ADVANTAGE

Okay, NICU girl back again-  Can I just say amazing....!  I mean really.....I love my husband, I really do but...

WET Robert/Edward.....please you're killing me. OH NO, who will take care of the babies....so glad to have found someone to share this "sick" obsession.

i was starting to think there is something very wrong with me, but if this is "wrong" I don't ever want to be right! lol

CB



Author's Response:

I'm sitting here giggling at your response to the chappie...honey, they haven't even gotten going yet. Just you wait!!

How could I NOT put wet Edward in here somewhere? I was staring at pictures of wet RPattz for "guidance."

You presume that I will let you borrow my wet Edward, but I'm not very good at sharing. Just saying....

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: SPOONING LEADS TO FORKING

hey, smuterella here! Loved it.....all versions.....:)

You take the Cake, i mean sweet BUNS.......BTW, I will never look at the kitchen in the same light.

You're truly Smutrific!!!!!!

Looking forward to getting back and the next chapter.

CB



Author's Response:

My dear sister in smut...glad all the versions were acceptable to you!! Didn't mean to ruin the kitchen for you, but wasn't it just begging for a sex scene? I mean, come on, frosting, goodies, Jasper, it all fits, right??

Yep, I truly am a smutty h00r. Can't help myself. The next chappie will be waiting for you when you return!!

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: OPENING NIGHT

Holy, Holy, Holy.....just back from my awesome adventure and to receive not only one but two AMAZING chapters!!!!

Had raclette in the Swiss Alps...did you write that part just for me? :)

I'm really gonna miss these two, but can't wait for the nurse/doctor smutty goodness.  Your writing doesn't disappointed.....Ever!

You my dear, bring me closer to God! (wink wink)

Smutine



Author's Response:

w00t! Smutine has returned!! And you had the two best chapters waiting for you, now didn't you??

I think it is hilarious that you ate raclette and I wrote about it. I haven't had it in years, but I love it. It seemed like a cool little cultured thing Edward could teach Bella. 

So glad my writing didn't disappoint--I was a little angsty over making this work for Edward and Bella in just the right way.

Thanks for the comments, lovely. I so appreciate them!!

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: KARMA POLICE (ARREST THIS MAN)

Brilliant! Glad I waited!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, my dear! I'm glad it was worth waiting for! You know how much your approval means to me, love. I appreciate it all. :)

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: PREMIERE ATTRACTION

Well hello there!

So sweet and good,  like her buns!  Sorry it's almost over....

Hope all is well with you!

Smutty



Author's Response:

Smuttine, so glad you enjoyed...as always. OF COURSE we had to have a Bella's Buns ending! Sweet all the way through.

Epilogue is coming soon!!

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: EPILOGUE: THE UNIVERSE UNFOLDS AS IT SHOULD

Oh kimpy, so perfect! Great ending to an awesome story. I have so enjoyed this fic but mostly meeting and getting to know its fabulous writer! What a pleasure it has been. Now onto Dr/Nurse....Can't wait!
Have a great time on the 19/20th...I know i will!

Fondly -Smutine

Author's Response:

Oh Smutine, I'm so glad you enjoyed the ending! It makes me happy in my pants! I really wanted to end this bugger well, on a high note, where everyone gets what they deserve.

I've got pages full of notes for Dr. Cullen and Nurse Swan. Oh, they are SO naughty! ;)

 
Summary:

 Bella Swan is a talented chef who is trapped in her mediocre life. Edward Cullen is a successful lawyer trapped in an engagement he wants out of.

 Their worlds collide when Edward and his family take a cruise through the Indian Ocean. Edward is the impossible guest in Cabin 481 that becomes the thorn in Bella’s side. A heated argument on the ship’s stern one night takes Bella and Edward overboard, forcing them to get along in order to survive on an island in the middle of nowhere. They find themselves caught up in the beauty and passion of the island. It’s not enough to keep them together when they must return to the real world after being rescued.

 When tragedy strikes a year later, will the twosome be able to come to terms with their past or will they allow the storms they face to destroy their only chance at true happiness?

 

tropical storm of passion


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 65639
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: May 23, 2010


Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Confrontations & Confessions

THANK GOD YOU'RE BACK!   ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY, LOVING E AS BABYDADDY....KEEP GOING PLEASE!

 
Continuance by punchanella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 818]
Summary:

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Edward Cullen is a hot shot associate in the D.A.'s office.  Bella Swan is at the top of her game as a defense attorney for the most prestigious law firm in Seattle.  In the courtroom they are arch rivals but outside the halls of justice they are wildly attracted to each other.  Will they give into their desires or will arrogance and stubborness keep them apart?

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banners inspired by msrebarose- thanks so much!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Mike
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 91100
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2009


Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred

Okay, so glad you pointed me in the right direction for chapter 5.  This story and your writing is amazing.  I am addicted to The Office but after reading more of your story I am conflicted.  Fortunately, i can have both. 

Btw, I failed to mention that you are also too funny...hooker clown..lmao

Please continue to update.  You have a real talent.  CB

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)

WOW, so sweet- loved it.....

Can't wait for you next story.

Amazing!

 
Summary:

 

 

When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins.  He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own.  This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction.  Can they find their way back to each other?  And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?

HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012


Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 1997-New kid

I'm hooked, please keep it coming!



Author's Response:

:::: happy dance ::: We'll have more out next week!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Stolen Away

God, you guys are killing me....Ah, the angst!!

This story is amazing- what, did he think she would just runback  into his hot ass arms?  Come on Eddie..hehe :)

CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT!  Oh,btw did I mention I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!



Author's Response:

Edward has a bit of a clueless thing going on, but granted he hasn't seen or heard from her in eight years where Jasper does know what is gong on and how she is.  Thank Goodness Jasper called him out!  The next update will be early next week and it is AMAZING!

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Cry

Wow, he got some serious issues to attend to!  Update soon, please.



Author's Response:

They both have a ton of things to work through.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Drop in the Ocean

Somebody call 911, I'm dying here!  So heartwrenching... You guys are awesome writers.  Please update soon!



Author's Response:

We're awesome for almost killing you?  We feel bad!

Seriously, thanks so much for the compliments and the review.

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Closer

WOW, I'M DYING INSIDE FOR THE BOTH OF THEM! Great, great, great chapter!

Author's Response:

They are both so broken, just in different ways.  Lots of healing that needs to happen.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: landslide Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: I'll Be There for You

NOOOOO! You didn't!   :)



Author's Response:

Yup, I did.  Bad me.

 




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